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Home»Star Plus»Dil Bole Oberoi»OBEROIS KI SHAADI- AN IB ND DBO FF-PART 1 (LOVE-MAKING)
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OBEROIS KI SHAADI- AN IB ND DBO FF-PART 1 (LOVE-MAKING)

saloBy saloMarch 14, 201723 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hi guys this salo back wid my BRAND NEW FF…I hav decided that I would post both the ffs alternately..Thnks fr ur support…fr d time being i am posting tge first obe first..here it goes:

AUTHOR’S POV
SHIVIKA?
All the oberoi mansion was decorated like a new bride…lights were twinkling like stars in a beautiful dark night..there was a lot of hustle and bustle here n there…all d servants wete deeply engrissed in their work…
There cones our tge too bright Pinkys mom as usual shouting.
Pinky:Hurr ups..everything shud b perfects…understands(oh her language is making me sick frm now only n this damn auto-correct is driving me mad)
Jhanvi :don’t take too much stress
Pinky :How could I this is oberoi weddings
Jhanvi :calm do…
She was interrupted by someine who came down through d stairs
It was our beloved Anika
Anika:Jhanvi aunty is right don’t take stress..eventually thing would b fine pinky aunty
Pinky : Auntys?? Call me moms..understands??
Anika :but..
Pinky :beta I am srry fr d past events.
Anika : aunty need not to feel Srry..let’s forget it n let’s start afresh..
Anika was beautifully dressed in white n purple suit with golden earrings..N classy footwear and accessories
Just then shivaye arrived
Shivaye: ya mom let’s forget all those things..

He then started checking out anika frm top to bottom…nd said beautifu still lost in a third world.
Anika: Yes?(smirking )
Shivaye:the arrangements aren’t they beautiful ?..u thought twoh…Wohhh.hat was a compliment fr u?
Jhanvi: bas karo shivaye hum bhi tumhare mom hai
Shivaye smirked n anika blushed at this statement
Shivaye: lul mom that part is Luking a bit shabby..don’t u think so?
Pinky :is it so? Jethani ji let’s go n check it…
Shivaye be fooled his mom easily but not his badi mom..badi mom luked back smiling n whispered: ENJOY!!
Leaving Anika blushing badly…
Shivaye pulled the blushing anika to a corner and locked her between his hands..
Shivaye:so my to be wife..u want to kill me?
Anika (confused ): how?
Shivaye :by ur eyes..by ur lips …(at this he got lost in her)
He slowly started to move towards her closing the distance between..as a reflex..anika closed her eyes nd was breathing heavily..
Rudra: ahem ahem!!
Shivaye anika pulled out..embarrassed n anika ran back to her room
Rudra:I think fr dis purpose u have ur room
Shivaye : beta kabhi tera bhi time aayega tab mein tuje dekh lunga…u spoiled everythung
Rudra started to laugh but was stopped when shivaye gave him an angry stare

RUMAYA?

Rudra was still laughing when.a pair of familiar hands touched her..rudra turned back to see someone who really shocked him.It was none other than our CUTE SAUMYA.
She had dressed beautifully in a pink suit nd dark black kajal in her eyes
Her asked questioned him: Why r u laughing ?
Getting no reply he shaked him
Saumya :Why r u laughing like a demon
Rudra : hun..hunn ohhh..I.I…let it go Naa because i would make u see the reason
Saumya : how?
Rudra pulled her and pinned her to d wall:
LIKE THIS…
He said coming closer to her…saumya started breathing heavily..N blushing heavily wid closed eyes
But suddenly a pair of hands came upon his shoulders
Rudra : wait, I am up to something very important…
Pinky : oh my matas
Pinky exclaimed pulking his ears…
Rudra : ouch choti naa it’s paining …pls leave me..otherwise my ears will come out
Seeing his to b mom in laws SAUMYA rushed towards her room
Pinky : what were u doings..
Rudra : woh..woh..SAUMYA ke aankhon mein kachra chala gaya tha….
A voice came from behind
It was shivaye
Shivaye: kachra..u know na om garbage ….aankhon mein..chala gaya tha ..nothing else?
Rudra: Aur kya ho sakta hao??
Om : oh we thought u were..
Rudra : what u thought..gandi soch wale…
Om: nothing mote but we just thought that u both were going to kiss
Rudra was shocked at that nd both the moms were greatly embarrased…they both turned back to leave…last time pulling rudra’s ears..
Shivaye : u hav a room for dat rudra..don’t u ??
Rudra : shivaye bhaiya aap ka raaz bata dun o ko…o pata hai
Shivaye: shut up jus.jusst shut upp…
Rudra :aur om kabhi aapki bhi baari aayegi tab mein aapko dekh lunga..
Nd he marches out frm dere …after sometime shivaye nd om also left from there…

Gaukara?

Om reaches his room to find gauri. Sitting their..omkara calls lout to her
O :what hapoened gauri ?
Gauri turns back with a photo in her hands.She was beautifully dressed in white suit nd matching accessories nd kajal..
Gauri : I just wanted to give u this photo of ours..u know as a pte wedding goft
Om Luks at d photos nd says beautifu nd luking after luking into her eyes he said with a smirk
SOMEONE IS VERY ROMANTIC TODAY..
Gauri (confuse): who
Om pushes her to wall and pinned her between his two hands..obviously u…
Gauri realised what he is up to nd closed her eyes nd started breathing heavilt..
But suddenly came d voice of our rudra
Ru:om!! Aap bhi…lagta hai Aaj romantic day hai..
At this om pulled out nd gauri rused blushing towards her room
Om:what the hell r u doing here
Rudra: mein to sirf aapse headphones nangne aaya thi kyunki mere kharab ho Gaye the par Aur mujhe ek trailer dekhna tha par mujhe kya pata tha yahan to puri film Chal rahi thi..waise iss film ka naam kya hai??
Om:tu Jo subhah shoot kar raha tha na bas usika hi second paert hai..
Rudy: it was all started by shivaye bhaiya
Just then shivaye came
Shivaye : what did I do
Rudra : u…
But he was interrupted by O
Om : guys stop fighting..
Shivaye : but when were we fighting??
Om: ya but no ya no I mean ya..
Rudra : lost it?This was d last straw nd an irked om went out d room
A confused shivaye also followed him…

AUTHOR ‘S NOTE:
sorry guys but I was unable to think a suitable track for Priveer..VERY SORRY PRIVEER FANS…So I will not b able write about them next part will be THE GRAND ENGAGEMENT N U ALL R INVITED…

A GREAT APOLOGY

BECAUSE THE NEXT PART WILL B UOLODED ON 29 APRIL

PLEASE DON’T BASH ME??

THIS IS SALO SIGNING OFF..HAVE A GREAT DAY AHEAD??

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    I am in luv wid writing n in luv wid ishqbaaz…i am also crazy ab8 K dramas lee ??

    23 Comments

    1. ally on March 14, 2017 9:13 pm

      Nice!….

      • salo on March 14, 2017 11:39 pm

        Thnks ally..

    2. shivika on March 14, 2017 9:16 pm

      Lovely……and gr8 9ne

      • salo on March 14, 2017 11:40 pm

        Thnks shivika…?

    3. Setu on March 14, 2017 9:19 pm

      Nice

      • salo on March 14, 2017 11:40 pm

        Thnks setu

    4. alekhika20 on March 14, 2017 9:22 pm

      Nyc

      • salo on March 14, 2017 11:41 pm

        Thnks alekhika

    5. b.k.maha on March 14, 2017 9:29 pm

      Super……

      • salo on March 14, 2017 11:41 pm

        Thnks maha

    6. Awestruck! on March 14, 2017 9:41 pm

      ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? … and i can go on and on and on but i think is should be apt. I absolutely loved your writing and hadnt read something this good in a while now. I seriously want to give you a tight hug and walk away by stealing a bit of humouristic sense from you. You seriously amaze me and i must say you made my day today.

      I want to be mad at you for saying you are going to upload the next chapter more than a month later but i just cant bring myself to do so… your writing has done such a captivating magic on me.!

      Well heres a truck full of love from this new turned fan of yours! 🙂 🙂
      —
      Awestruck!

      • salo on March 14, 2017 11:51 pm

        Ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ry ty ty ty …
        I couldn’t stop myself..but it wouldn’t b apt. (Don’t bash me fr copying…I swear I am not a cheater) ur comment really made me me feel energetic nd I got a new spirit to write it…dear I am really Srry but I wuld try to write soon …..pray that I get free last of this month..if dis happens then I would post d nxt before nxt month otherwise u know na….but give urself a tight hug frm me…I SERIOUSLY GOT A FAN!!! UNBELIEVABLE….love u dear…..Keep commenting….Nd stay safe(lol…it sounds like I am ur mom) …Nd happy ????????

    7. Charitha on March 14, 2017 9:51 pm

      Excellent

      • salo on March 14, 2017 11:52 pm

        Thnks

      • salo on March 14, 2017 11:53 pm

        Thnks to all…Thnks fr ur support???

    8. vincy on March 14, 2017 9:56 pm

      It was just awesome loved it

    9. shuklarashi on March 14, 2017 10:03 pm

      Awesome

    10. Shrutika on March 14, 2017 11:32 pm

      Awestruck by your episode.

    11. Bhavana on March 14, 2017 11:44 pm

      Superbbbbb

    12. nikitajai on March 15, 2017 6:07 am

      Nice one dear

    13. Lilly on March 15, 2017 10:33 am

      Superb

    14. Archisha on March 15, 2017 1:18 pm

      Just one word. Awesome and funny too ???

    15. Surbhi Sharma on March 15, 2017 5:13 pm

      Amazing .loved it.

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