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Home»Fan Fiction»Nothing For You DARLING but Still “I love You” (Episode 23)
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Nothing For You DARLING but Still “I love You” (Episode 23)

administratorBy administratorMarch 31, 201619 Comments5 Mins Read
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Guys do you watch a serial named “na aana is desh laado” on colors…if not then please search it online…listen its title song…I dnt know why but I always cry after listening this song (Angna main utre jaise dhup ki chidiya… akhiyo mein aise khile roop tera gudiya…
You come to my house like a sparrow in the first ray of sun….your beauty always bright in my eyes my doll
Saathi na sangi koi sakhi na saheli…kin sang khelegi tu laado akeli
No friend…no companion…with whom will you play alone here
yehi bheju sandesh meri laado….k tu na aana is desh meri laado

I sent you this message my doll…dnt come in this world my doll)

…. I always feel blessed after having a baby girl in my life….it sounds weird but maybe I am 16 when I dream to have only a baby girl child…no more….in our society a baby boy means a whole world to their family….dnt know why people do this….we can not take anything with us yaar everything leave behind….….let a girl live…don’t kill it please….give her a safe environment…a safe future…do your best……

actually I desperately want to write something on girl child…but as we can see….its full of love stories here…I dnt know…whether anyone like that ….. very much confused……sorry but little bit emotional……if I disappoint you….

Finally…they come out of washroom…..and lay down on bed…..sleep in each other’s arms peace fully….
Morning 3 am arjun’s phone ring…..
Arjun in deep sleep who the hell is going to disturb me at this time and even tonight….
He pick up the phone without checking the number..
Arjun(irritatingly): “whose there?”

Anu : “bhai come soon……..”
Arjun “anu… what happened?”
Anu “bhai its 3 am reach here before 4 coz I didn’t tell anyone about you and bhabhi…..there are few rituals which have to be completed before………………….”
Arjun “are you mad anu???”
Anu(in cracking voice) : “actually I come to know about that after you left from here…since then I tried to connect your phone but its switched off….and now after so many tries it connected…bhai please come back……all relatives are here if they come to know….it will be a big blunder”
Arjun “but……ahhhh…anu ok…we will be there as soon as we can…take care that no one comes to know about this all matter….and you will be gona die…..just wait”

Anu “ I am sorry bhai”
Arjun disconnect the call and turn towards radhika to wake her up…..”buton get up quickly….wear your clothes and get ready….”
Radhika in sleepy tone “what happened…why you are so tensed…?”
Arjun :”nothing just get ready fast I will tell u all on the way…”
Radhika nodded positively and within 10 minutes both of them are in the car to back home… arjun tell everything to radhika…she feels very very bad….she feels worried…..rituals must be completed before we constumate our marriage….she think this only….
They reached their home at 3:50 am….before entering home arjun hold both of her hands and ask her to dnt worry…we are husband wife and we dnt do it intentionally……just be cool……
Radhika somehow manage to hide her tension….anu come out and take both of them secretly to their rooms…arjun is in his room and Radhika is with anu in her room….

Radhika sit on the bed with a sad and upset face……
Anu : “bhabhi…I am very sorry…….i dnt know about that…”
RAdhika feel good for a single second with the word bhabhi but immediately she again become worried… “I knew anu….don’t blame yourself ….but I am worried it is ominous…”
Arjun also a bit upset….though he doesn’t believe in these things that much but when it includes radhika…he believe everything…after all he got his love after so much wait….
Both of them settle on the bed but unable to sleep…..its 6 am now…..anita come and knock on the door of anu’s room…radhika quickly get up and open the door…
Anita: “radhika beta go and take a bath and get ready we are going to temple….wher all of our ancestors used to go with newlywed…” she noticed tension on radhika’s face and ask “everything ok beta?”
Radhika “yes mom….just can’t sleep properly”
Anita “don’t worry….you are habitual to your room…..it will take some time but….everything will be fine…and yes beta please awake this kumbhkaran anu also…” and both of them laugh on seeing anu’s angry face who stand behind and listen their talk…
Anu : “mom…it’s not even a single day and you…… ”
Anita and radhika both hug her…..to console….and then the trio laughs together
Arjun also wake up and get ready in white kurta….as always this guys kill the chill……
Both of them come out of the room at the same time and stare each other…radhika look so elegant….a chirpy beauty….worry free bubbly girl now his lady….yes….. only and only his…..
Radhika also watch arjun staring her and feel shy….she just turn pink..blush blush blush….. finally anu cough to get them out of their dream world…”lets go bhai…bhabhi”
Arjun give her a(u just go from here look) “ wait outside…we will be there in two minutes…
Anu “okk”

Arjun come close to radhika hold her face with both of his hands and say “please my darling wife dnt blush like this everytime….it makes me mad for you and you knew it very well”
Radhika smile a little “ok let me go now…mom will come otherwise”
Arjun hold her hand and say “don’t behave like a typical wife please….i dnt want you to change yourself……no no no….be always like that naughty button….”
Radhika turn…hug him..when he try to make the hug tight she quickly kiss on his cheek and raan from there….when she open the door…find anu waiting outside…she feel shy….watching her smile… arjun also joined them now
”lets go anu”

Anu “ya lets go….when did I stop you?”

All of them laughed now

How is it….tell me please……

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19 Comments

  1. rosie on March 31, 2016 5:52 pm

    Yeah…u v a very good thought maandey dear…today my respect increased for u …after hearing ur thoughts about girls…even I want girls to be strong enough n more steps ahead of man….hats off to you dear…
    And ur story as usual rocking..awesome…update soon…luv u…tc? ?

  2. Dhara on March 31, 2016 6:00 pm

    Superb.. You know I have a daughter :).. She is so precious to our life.. As usual Arjun was so cool.. But short update..

  3. manju on March 31, 2016 6:03 pm

    very nice thought dear
    even i also like to have a baby girl in future dear

    very nice update also
    romantic dear

    how r u now????
    take care

  4. Gauri on March 31, 2016 6:03 pm

    Please Maandey share your story on the girl child soon…would love to read that….I use to love this title track it was well written composed and very well sung….and now the update good one but short…next one pls make it long 🙂

  5. Bhabya on March 31, 2016 6:12 pm

    Nice epi please do write

  6. Shree on March 31, 2016 6:26 pm

    Hello!! You just donno how happy I am… I loved that serial.. And the title track.. Oof.. Had a lot of emotions in it… Please do share it soon..

    I loved thehe episode.. Lol.. Post soon..

    Love you ??

  7. Nandini on March 31, 2016 6:30 pm

    Hello maandey i am silent reader but today i am telling u u r the best writer i like ur ff very much plz keep update regularly god bless u

  8. Nandini on March 31, 2016 6:33 pm

    Oh i forgot asking u how r u and ur baby girl i also love baby girls

  9. Sathya on March 31, 2016 6:39 pm

    Hi Maanu…Very nice episode yar.. i love it. You really have a great thoughts and we should really proud being a girl. We are the ones who plays all sorts of roles in our life and giving happiness to each and everyone who surrounded us. Without Women power nothing will work in this world. Hats off to all of us yar 🙂 🙂 🙂 I am so happy reading ur ff dear. keep it up

  10. Brin on March 31, 2016 6:48 pm

    Awesome episode. I love your concept on girls even I think girls are a blessing.

  11. Hayathi on March 31, 2016 7:04 pm

    Nice

  12. Anwesha on March 31, 2016 10:11 pm

    Very very very nice one …. Short BT nice update…

  13. moni on March 31, 2016 10:51 pm

    nice thought. Share your story on girl child.

  14. Sasha on March 31, 2016 11:04 pm

    Wow maandey, u r one strong woman, im truly a feminist n i stick to my grounds always. Im jst too lazy to cmmnt bt i read evey post of urs. N we all feel emotional, it feels gud tht ubr sharing thoughts with us so no need to apologize.bye tc.

    Updt soon

  15. susi on April 1, 2016 6:50 am

    Really very nice update….

  16. maandey on April 1, 2016 9:49 am

    What is o say……thx to all of you lovely people….. Love you guys alottttttt

  17. Swetha on April 1, 2016 1:54 pm

    Simply superb

  18. sundari on April 1, 2016 4:30 pm

    awesome…………

  19. Roma on April 4, 2016 9:41 pm

    Awesome episode maandey my sweeeeeet friend. …very good. …used to watch that show laado….was really heart touching n the song always made me gloomy n reminds my mom……..plz share you story on girl child. …I’d love to read it. ….take care…love you loads

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