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Home»Fan Fiction»All are not so lucky (OS) by Divyanshri
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All are not so lucky (OS) by Divyanshri

DivyanshriBy DivyanshriMarch 9, 201727 Comments10 Mins Read
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Hello everyone…. This is just an os… I don’t know why am I writing this but hope it’s not worst….

No ma I want to marry him… I don’t care what ever u guys think… He may be poor but we love each other…. We will be happy In our small life.
These were her last words before leaving her parents house.

Swara gadodiya:Eldest Daughter of sumi and shekhar gadodiya…. Too stubborn to handle she do what she wants.

Sanskar Mehra:Only son of Ram and sujata mehra. Not so rich….He didn’t complete his studies so he is struggling in his career. Swara love him too much.

SWASAN STORY
Swasan live in same area not so near but they use to see each other always.
They were in same college. Sanskar was senior to Swara.
Swara was madly in love with him. While he was not so serious.
All were going well but one day swara’s parents came to know about their relationship.
They well hell angry as it was not good for their reputation as they were from a small town and relationships n all are not good in their point of view.
They tried to make her understand in all the ways…. Calmly… Beating too but she was stubborn not ready to listen anything.
At last shekar took his information n went to see him for his daughter happiness.
His fear came true as he was a useless as he thought. Depends on his father’s money. No future at all.
His family status was also not stable.
He reject their marriage.
Swara being swara didn’t listen to anyone and began to fight with them all. Without thinking anything….
Fadup of her behavior shekhar and sumi decide to get her married.
This news came like a bomb to swasan life.
Sanskar ego hurt while Swara’s heart broke.
They took a brutal step which changed everyone’s life.
They decide to run away and get married.
As planned on the date swara was read and was about to leave house when shemish caught her.
Sumi: *slap her*what u were trying to do… Stupid girl…. I will not let u to marry him… He is…. *cut*
Swara:No ma I want to marry him… I don’t care what ever u guys think… He may be poor but we love each other…. We will be happy In our small life.

By saying this she went from their.
Shemish were left heart broken as their eldest daughter gave this pain to them.

After that they get married. Sanskar parents agreed as they don’t have any other choice.

All were good sanskar get a small job and started to do that.
After 3 months of their marriage Swara’s parents too forgive seeing them happy.

Swara’s in-laws were not what they show they are. Directly not they indirectly used to torture her.
She used to do all the household works but still never say anything.
None help her and she even don’t ask as she feel her ego will hurt.
Another problem she never like to ask help.
She never said all this to anyone except one person who was always a question mark.

Days were passing…. N with the passage of time sanskar also started to change.
He used to be involve In work n other activities too much. He stop spending time with swara….
They started to fight on small things.
But then again ignore them and live happily
Like this 1 year passed.
All seems to be good but no it was not.
Day by day swara’s health was getting bad…. She ignore them many times. Even her parents specially sumi notice it and took her to doctor.
As it was a small town the facilities were not provided and so nothing was cleared.
Doctor asked them to take her to city for her checkup .
Shemish were not in a good state that they can take her so they asked her to tell sanskar. She assure them that she was fine and will be okay n went back to home.

Like this two more month went… She told about her health to sanskar but he said he have to arrange money and wait for some days.
She too agreed as she understands his situation.
Now it has become difficult to work for her.
She was not able to eat or sleep properly and due to this her health was badly effected.
All saw her pale and tired face but ignored it.
Like this month pass…. After 4months now she was just surviving in water…. Coz she vomit when ever she eat anything.

Seeing her condition her parents took her to their home after a heated argument with sanskar and his family.
But they just sued it away and asked them to leave.
Sanskar even didn’t see once towards swara.
Swara broke down seeing his such behavior.
She was taken to city hospital by her parents with much difficulty.
After test and checkups it was reveal that she is suffering from brain tumor and she was 2month pregnant.
Doctor said that she must be operated as soon as possible or it will create problems in future.
Shemish were scattered listening all this as now what they will do…..
They took her back home and inform this to sanskar.
He said he is out of town and will be back soon.

Continuation of part one….

Days passed swara stopped talking with anyone
Sanskar came twice to meet her and she just listen to his complains and problems as he was least bothered about her health

Shemish were arranging required money when one day swara blood vomit and faint.
They took her to hospital and they transfer her to city hospital

Doctors said she should be operated within two days or she will die
Swara woke up next day and saw her mother sitting beside her weeping
Swara:Maa what happen… Why are you crying… I will be fine don’t worry…. And did u inform sanskar he must be worried….
Sumi:shut up swara… At least now see his true colors beta…. He didn’t even come once to see u…. U r here from last 24 hours
Swara:He must be arranging money ma.. He is very tense about our baby’s future.
Sumi:Baby which baby swara…there is no baby now.
By saying this she started to cry…
Swara:*angry*what the hell you are talking maa… *Hold her belly*Here is my baby
Did u forget what doctor said… U have become old now..
Sumi:Your baby is dead swara… Yesterday u had a miscarriage.. For which u faint…
As baby was not getting proper care.. And because of your sickness it become too week that *cried*
Swara:NOOO….U are lying…. I know… *jerk her hand* I don’t believe you… Go from here.. My baby is with me..Call my sanskar he….he knows the truth call him now ….DOCTOR DOCTOR
She started to shout and throw things here and there when sanskar came near her.
She hold him and cried her heart out..
Swara:Sa..sanskar see na what maa is saying… She is saying.. That my… Our baby is… Noo…she is a lier… Tell me na she is lying right… I believe you…. She…
Sanskar jerk her and shoulders
Sanskar:YES …OUR BABY IS NO MORE…
MY BABY IS NO MORE…. You killed my baby….. You did it…. I hate you… Swara.. Mom was right you were never appropiate for me… You are just useless…
By saying this he push her with such a force that she was about to fall but shekar hold her on time
Shekhar:Sanskar…what’s wrong with you… Don’t you know her condition…. How can you be so heartless…. You failed to take care of my daughter and your unborn child and you are blaming her…. Such a coward u r
Sanskar was about to go from her when he heard a faint voice
Swara:*breathing heavily* Sa.. nsk.arr..believe me… I.. Didn’t.. kill my child… Don’t hate me… Please… Sans.. Kar..
He turn and saw her she was loosing her sense he rush out and call the Doctor
They said now they have to operate her it’s late already and took her away.

Shemish were praying to save their child while sanskar was trying to figure out what all is happening
How he spoke those harsh words to her.
He was sorry for that but he was hurt too

After 5 hours doctors come out of OT
Shemish and sanskar went near him and ask swara’s condition

Doctor:we are sorry Mr. & Mrs gadodiya Your daughter is no more
Yesterday due to her miscarriage she loss lots of blood and today she took too much stress and it feels she lost her hope in life too…. She didn’t respond to our treatment anymore I am sorry
By saying this he went away leaving three people In a broken state

Sumi lose her balance and fall down and cried holding shekhar
Both cried hugging each other
Losing their eldest daughter who was their pride and joy
Seeing the daughter dead body whom they thought will be their stick in old age
Is the most painful punishment for any parents

Other side sanskar become numb.. He don’t know what to say or react he was just silent
Swara’s body was taken out of OT wrapped in a white cloth
After a long struggle of nearly 1 year…she finally was free from all the pain and struggle
Sanskar look at her face and saw her eyes were open
He look towards the doctors
Sanskar:Doctor her eyes are open..you please check her properly.. There must be some mistake
Doctor:No Mr. Mehra… Your wife is no more…. Her eyes are open because she didn’t close them before dying and
But it is also said when people’s dreams and wishes didn’t fulfill before death they die with open eyes
(I don’t know it’s true or not….. No offense)
Shemish cried looking at her face…. Sumi caress her face and kiss her…. Ask her to get up but she was gone…. Too far to come back

Every story don’t have a happy ending
It’s not necessary that we will get our prince in the person we love.
Some People change with time remember that..
Everything has its limit……
Swara’s blind believe and mad love for sanskar is also a reason for her this condition…..
Our parents will never think bad for us……
They may be strict and rude. But at least try to listen to them when they say something to you and try to understand once….
If swara would have listened to her parents once then she may be alive…..
Love is not everything..Money matters.. I am not saying money is everything but.. Blind love is also a suicide
U may be saved or finished…….
We have man like sanskar mehra who never love his wife…..
We even have man like sanskar maheswari who can die for his wife …..
Think before taking any step…All are not so lucky to get Prince Charming in life.

That’s all
I wrote this story for someone very very close to my heart

HAPPY BIRTHDAY..
I LOVE YOU VERY MUCH..
HOPE YOU WILL BE SEEING ME..

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Divyanshri

    Hi guys... It's divyu.....dont know what to say.... I am a Swasan... Fan... Not only fan ac also ? ...n I am Swaragini fan too.... Not the serial bond but... I love Swaragini....

    27 Comments

    1. Sus on March 10, 2017 12:05 am

      NYC dear
      This is something amazing

    2. shruthis on March 10, 2017 12:15 am

      Bacha amazing no words simply suoerb???

    3. rj12 on March 10, 2017 12:32 am

      It was a touching OS
      And what u said is absolutely true our parents will never think bad of us and their decisions are always correct as they have already seen life and we haven’t
      And ur correct blind love is no less than suicide

    4. Alku on March 10, 2017 1:50 am

      Divyu???
      Amazing dear every word u said is so 1000000%correct not everyone are lucky blind love, blind trust ruin our lives?
      Keep it up my kiddo?

    5. Rosey on March 10, 2017 2:09 am

      What’s this yar you make me so much cry?????????????
      But still I like this and I like it’s lesson as our parents never do wrong with us

    6. Ria on March 10, 2017 6:24 am

      true dear 🙁

    7. praju on March 10, 2017 7:31 am

      It was really heart touching

    8. SHAN on March 10, 2017 7:35 am

      Awesome Divu…. Whatever u said is true…. Loved it

    9. Swarmayi on March 10, 2017 9:00 am

      Its really nice and heart touching, divyu..
      Loved it..
      Love u too.. ?

    10. SHIKZ on March 10, 2017 9:12 am

      so true!!

    11. rabia on March 10, 2017 11:11 am

      Whatever u saidd is absolutely correctt not all s soo luckyy ?????? awesome ?

    12. Tamil on March 10, 2017 11:20 am

      Awesome.. .dear it’s true….

    13. Anniya on March 10, 2017 11:48 am

      Still my eyes are moist
      It’s amazing

    14. scooby on March 10, 2017 12:38 pm

      Loved it stunning os.. U deserved it ????????
      Parents always think abt their children future… Ur correct…

    15. vyshu10 on March 10, 2017 1:40 pm

      ????? u r very bad BC…see how many ppl r crying. Whoever it is, convey wishes.

    16. Abdul hafiz(Uma) on March 10, 2017 2:55 pm

      It’s so emotional and heart touching os dear.. Loved it…Aaaaahannn,my doll???…You are right…Many boys in the world don’t value girls feeling…Our parents know what is good for us and what is bad…Keep writing like this dear..
      Take care
      Keep smiling?

    17. Moly on March 10, 2017 3:24 pm

      U r absolutely right. ………and said that we can sometimes get sanskar mehra in our life. …but sometimes we can get sanskar maheswari. ……they are very lucky who get sanskar maheswari. ….but I am unlucky that my bf was not like sanskar maheswari …..anyways …..this os was very close to me. ……nyc part

    18. Milestone on March 10, 2017 3:44 pm

      Nice….

    19. Seebu_s on March 10, 2017 3:47 pm

      i’m just crying….awesome os….loved it…

    20. anu on March 10, 2017 5:07 pm

      awesome.. loved it what ever u said is correct its heart touching one

    21. raina on March 10, 2017 8:33 pm

      my eyes are moist, this was mind blowing, beyond amazing. i am just speechless. great work

    22. Kakali on March 10, 2017 9:17 pm

      I needed some time after reading this …. huh..!! love it Divyuuuuuuuu..!! I don’t have much to say..!! Thnk u.. ;-*

    23. Simi on March 10, 2017 9:53 pm

      Its true… Everyone will not get their prince charming..
      A heart touching os..

    24. Shifa96 on March 10, 2017 11:41 pm

      Awesome and emotional os..
      Whatever you said is so true.

    25. Pramudi on March 10, 2017 11:48 pm

      Emotional os. There’s something to learn. Good work dear.

    26. Arshaanya on March 11, 2017 11:58 am

      Dun knw wat to say aftr reading dis..
      Hve no wrds…
      Dere r so many things i want to share bt i can’t…
      Loved ur concept n story

    27. kat on March 13, 2017 9:39 am

      Awesome dear

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