It was not my fault (IKRS) Episode 2

Hey guys, here goes the second one,

Vidhaa get out of their car but do not see each other, they go to the reception, but Viplav moves back and receives a call, and Dhaani takes the keys of her room and moves to the lift. Viplav says yes dad I have reached now taking the keys and going to my room… He cuts the call, takes the keys and moves forward to the lift, but till then Dhaani already left.. Dhaani enters her room and calls Dulaari and says she has reached safely… She opens her bag to take out clothes when she sees the photo and recalls, flashback:

One day a dance competition is conducted so the partners were chosen. Viplav was called on the stage and he says I want to chose Dhaani as my partner. Dhaani is overjoyed and jumps in excitement.

From next day the practice begins. Viplav and Dhaani practice their dance, Dhaani is about to fall when Viplav hold her and keeps his hands on her waist, They have an eyelock. Viplav is lost in her eyes, when Dhaani says Viplav.. he comes to his senses and makes her stand. Dhaani has butterflies in her stomach.. She thinks what is happening to me, why do I feel so good with him, Viplav also thinks the same and stares at her, Dhaani says can we practice? Viplav says yaa sure… They practice their dance..(Guys I know in a law college, there will not be a dance competition but still I added it for some fun, don’t laugh at me) After their practice, Viplav leaves Dhaani to her house, Dhaani on the way says I love.. Viplav asks what?! Dhaani says let me complete I love your company, please never leave me. Viplav is surprised and asks really? By the way I also love your company and don’t worry we will always be friends… Dhaani’s phone rings…
The flashback ends…

Dhaani comes back to her senses, with tears in her eyes.. She picks up the call, she wipes her tears and says hello sir, he says she has to come down for breakfast in one hour so freshen up till then. Dhaani says yes sir. She cuts the call and keeps the picture back and goes to take bath.
Here Viplav is in his room, he also receives a call saying to come for breakfast. He takes out his clothes and goes to take bath. He feels restless and thinks why am I feeling like this as if someone very close to my heart is here.. But who can it be? No no one can be there all my family is in Banaras whom I love the most… He recalls his dance practice with Dhaani,

Flashback starts:
Dhaani asks him to always be with her, and during the dance competition, they perform their dance on the song Dilliwali girlfriend from Yeh Jawani hai Deewani everyone clap for them, and the winner is declared it is non other than our Vidhaa, they go on the dance floor to receive their award. Both go holding each others arms… They take the award.. Viplav takes the mick and says its all because of Dhaani that we have won this competition so cheers for her, Dhaani smiles. Flashback ends,
Viplav says that was the day when I realised that I had fallen in love with her, she was my life and I could not live without her but… now I hate her…

All the lawyers go down for lunch, Viplav goes and takes his lunch and sits on the table with two other lawyers, he chit chats with them when Dhaani also comes, she hears him and thinks I am familiar with this voice… The scene freezes…

Precap: Suspense 😉

I hope you all are liking it, please drop your valuable comments…

  1. Maria as usualiy is great n as mahira said u maintain yr suspense n give bits of flashback??wish had come to know all in a day but i know dheere Dheere ka maja slag hai☺ lunch breskfast part confusing . All is too good?.

    1. Thank you so much renu di, aj hi sab bata dungi to kal maza nhi ayega Na ?? keep supporting 🙂

  2. Super!!!!!!!

    1. Thanks varsha 🙂

  3. Superb yaar
    Renu di said right you are giving us flashbacks in bits…and thats the best thing for a writer..well done..??

    1. Thank you so much arshdeep, keep supporting…

  4. Maria too good. Go on dear.

    1. Thank you princess 🙂

  5. Too good Maria. Keep it up.

    1. Thank you latha 🙂

  6. Superb Maria

    1. Thank you Porkodi 🙂

  7. Maria….superb….. waiting for the next one dear…….

    1. Thank you so much 🙂

  8. Maria….superb….. waiting for the next one dear……. 🙂

    1. Thank you so much 🙂

  9. Superb! Flashback was so good!! Badly want to know the reason of their hatred!

    1. Thank you so much 🙂 You will soon know the reason, keep reading 🙂

  10. Good going Maria! I am loving Viplav’s hatred too which is full of love for Dhani. Vidha pain implies their immense lovevfor each other. But pyar bahut jaldi ho gaya this time.I don’t have any problem btw whether its late or early. Interesting story with fb & current scenes simultaneously. Precap suspense haan!!! Good idea. Waiting for the suspense to unfold.god bless u!

    1. Thank you so much di and I love to write some pain and then happiness stories I mean from hatred to love… Thank you again 🙂

  11. maria just loved it… everyone i’m also eagerly waiting to know why they are enemies

    1. Thanks Lakshmi 🙂

  12. Superbbbb..I love ur suspense and ur ff..eagerly waiting for reason of their hatred….:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    1. Thank you midarshani 🙂

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