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Home»Fan Fiction»No matter what I do it’s never good enough because I always end up hurting u (A devakshi ff) part 5
Fan Fiction Kuch Rang Pyar Ke Aise Bhi

No matter what I do it’s never good enough because I always end up hurting u (A devakshi ff) part 5

rj12By rj12October 31, 201623 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hi guys, Rithika here,
Hope I’m on time if not sorry. Read it soon people
Let’s start…

Few days pass Sona calls Dev
Sona : Dev u can come today to take ur mother’s diet
Dev : Ok thanks I’ll be there in sometime
Sona : Ok bye
After half an hour Dev comes and sees Sona talking to someone
Dev : Sonakshi I’ll come or ur busy
Sona : Come Dev and this is no patient he’s my friend Rithwick he’s free so he came
Dev : Ok
Rithwick gets a call and leaves
Rithwick : Ok bye now I’m getting late
He leaves
Sona : Here is the diet ur mother has to follow this diet continuously for 3 months she’ll be fine after that
Dev : Thanks
Sona stares at him with love
Dev : Sonakshi r u alright
Sona comes to her senses
Sona : Um…… I’m fine
Dev leaves

Sona : Sona yeh tujhe kya ho gaya. Nandu se puch thi hoon
Sona goes to Nandani’s house
Nandani : Sona tu idhar andar aa
Sona : I need to tell u something
Nandani : Tell kya hua
Sona : See ur like my sister I can tell u but u won’t tell it to anyone
Nandani : Ok ab bata kya hua
Sona tells her what happened to her in front of Dev
Nandani : Oh toh yeh baat hai lagta hai tujhe use pyar ho gaya hai
Sona : Kya bakwas kar rahi hai pyar aur use who toh mera accha dost hai
Nandani : Tune mujhe problem bata diya meine bataya kya kar. Now u do what u want to do
Sona : Ok I’ll leave

At Sona’s home she sits on her bed and imagines Dev coming to her and proposing her then snaps out of it
Sona : Sona yeh tujhe kya ho gaya khule ankho se Dev ke sapne shayad Nandu sach kah rahi thi mujhe ho gaya ho gaya pyar Dev se
After few days
Sona : Come Dev can I help u
Dev : Yes now only u can
Sona : What happened
Dev : It’s my mother she will follow the diet but only if I’m there when I’m not there she won’t follow the diet
Sona : How can I help
Dev : I need u to leaves this job and work as my mother’s personal nutritionist
Sona : I can’t because this is my passion I can’t leave my job for one patient
Dev : Please I’ll give double the salary u get here please……
Sona : First I’m working because this is my job, Secondly if I’m working for money I wouldn’t be working in this hospital I would be working in some 5 star hospital
Dev : Ok it’s ur wish remember I can do anything for my mother
He leaves

Sona : I can’t do this just because I love him I can’t leave this job it was my dream
After 4-5 hours Dr. Sinha with a person comes to Sona’s cabin
Dr. Sinha : Sonakshi here ur leave application is approved this is Rohan he will work in ur place
Sona stares at Dr. Sinha with a blank face
Sona : But sir I didn’t apply for any leave
Dr. Sinha : I know Mr. Dixit applied it for u
Sona : Ok……I see I’ll come
She went to Dev’s office and barged in
Sona : How dare u
Dev : Oh u came
Sona : How can u do this to ur friend
Dev : I told u I can do anything for my mom may it be taking leave for u, and u can’t go for 3 months because there is a doctor working in ur place so think about it
She leaves from there Nandani calls her
Sona : Hi Nandu (She said in a crying tone)
Nandani : Tu ro rahi hai

She wipes her tears
Sona : Nahi kuch nahi
Nandani : Tu mujhe apna behn manti hai na to bata kya hua
Sona tells her what Dev did
Nandani : Dev….Dev ne kiya aisa ho nahi sakta
Sona : Toh mein kya manghadith(imaginary) kahani suna rahi hoon
Nandani : Woh bhi hai
Sona : Chal mein baad mein phone karti hoon
Nandani : Bye

After few days Sona goes to Dev’s office
Dev : U here. Hope u’ve thought about it
Sona : I’ve thought about it my answer is yes not because of double salary but only because it is my work and I can’t go also to my hospital so y not work there
Dev : Thanks….. thanks a lot
Sona : No need for thanks I’m doing it only because it is a part of my job
Dev smiles and she leaves
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Hope u all liked it
Comments please

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    23 Comments

    1. Princess on October 31, 2016 6:12 pm

      Awesome episode dear.plzz add some devakshi scenes ..

      • rj12 on October 31, 2016 8:07 pm

        Thanks princess

      • Princess on November 1, 2016 4:30 pm

        Plz post the next episode soon..

    2. AnShIta on October 31, 2016 6:32 pm

      Hey Rithika di!
      Well, this episode was amazing! The way you described each and every word made the story seem so realistic!
      I’m really excited to see what’s next now!
      Post soon!
      Love ya!???

      • rj12 on October 31, 2016 8:07 pm

        thanks a lot anshita

    3. Aaru on October 31, 2016 6:34 pm

      Liked!? Luvd it

      • rj12 on October 31, 2016 8:08 pm

        thank u so much aaru

    4. Bharti123456 on October 31, 2016 6:38 pm

      Amazing rithika post soon…..no very soon??

      • rj12 on October 31, 2016 8:08 pm

        thanks bharti will post soon

    5. Anu on October 31, 2016 7:44 pm

      It was awesome…

      • rj12 on October 31, 2016 8:32 pm

        Thanks anu

    6. Maleeha on October 31, 2016 8:29 pm

      Awesome and amazing…….?????❤?????????❤

      • rj12 on October 31, 2016 9:19 pm

        thanks a lot maleeha

    7. Nikki on October 31, 2016 11:58 pm

      AWSMMMMMMMMMM……….
      Plz jaldi sa nxt part ko post karooooo?????????………………

      • rj12 on November 1, 2016 1:30 am

        Thank u so much Nikki will post soon

    8. Manya on November 1, 2016 12:15 am

      Awesomeeeee❤?❤?

      • rj12 on November 1, 2016 1:30 am

        Thanks ayushi

    9. rockzzzzzz on November 1, 2016 5:43 pm

      A inch similar to mine…but fine…its better than mine….post soon

      • rj12 on November 1, 2016 5:55 pm

        Thanks a lot pari??

    10. erika on November 2, 2016 10:02 am

      awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee epi read all in 1 go fantastic writing skills update asap…

      • rj12 on November 2, 2016 4:31 pm

        Thanks Erika

    11. Rithu2089 on November 2, 2016 10:42 pm

      Hi Rithika
      I read all ur episodes in one go they all were amazing ?????
      U can call me rithu

      • rj12 on November 6, 2016 4:59 pm

        Thank u rithu

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