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Home»Fan Fiction»new competition| yeh hai mohhabatein’s grand ending
Fan Fiction Yeh Hai Mohabbatein

new competition| yeh hai mohhabatein’s grand ending

funclubsBy funclubsDecember 29, 20163 Comments12 Mins Read
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Raman: (shouts)ruhi tumne sohail ko concert ke liye haan kyun kahi(ruhi what did u do why did u say yes for concert to sohail)

Ruhi: (in a frightened voice)aapko kaise pata chala

Raman: sohail ne message bheji hai keh raha hai thank u ruhi for doing concert for me

Ruhi(shouts) how dare u aapne mere phone ko haath kyun lagaya

Ishitha: kya yahi sikaya tha maine khi bado se baath karo

Ruhi: ishima papa always doubt on me

Raman: let me come to the point tum sohail ke saath concert nahi karogi arre concert karne ki chodo tum uske saath bath bhi nahi karogi

Ruhi: mein uske saath concert karungi mein bhi dekh thi hu kaun mujhe rokhtha hai

Ishitha: ruhi try to understand papa ko yeh sab pasand nahi

Raman: tumari age sirf 17 hai mujhe yeh sab bardaash nahi hota

Ruhi: always u people doubt on me adi bhaiyya ko toh force kar rahe the make girlfriend and blah blah

Ishitha: adi ki baat alag hai

Ruhi: yah yah sabke baat sahi aur mein hi galat

Raman: oh stop it ruhi I don’t want u to be with sohail he is not good

He locks the the door

IN sohails house

Kriti: bhai mujhe bahut dar lag raha agar hum pakde gaye

Sohail: yeh business hum saalo se karte aah rahe hai

Kriti: lekin iss bar humne ruhi daughter of raman kumar bhalla ko target kiya hai

Sohail: tumara blood group kya hai

Kriti: B+ve

Sohail: so be positive

Ruhi calls sohail

Ruhi: I cant do concert for u I am sorry

Sohail act as crying

Sohail: its ok I will sell my company

Ruhi feels bad

He cuts the call

Kriti: what happened

Sohail: ruhi parents are not allowing to do concert

Kriti takes plate and starts to beat like a tabla

Sohail: sambhal ke bhul gayi yeh sab rent pe liya

Kriti: pata hai infact humari company toh hai hi nahi

Sohail: right hum toh sabko bakra banakar uhne kidnap karke unke parents se paise lete he

Kriti: jald he humari ek company hogi

Sohail: ruhi 10 crore ka bakra hai aur hot bhi

Kriti: now u don’t forget I am not u r sister bur u r girl friend

In ruhi room

Ruhi lies on bed weeping

Ruhi: I am sorry sohail I cant help u

Ruhi cries

Ruhi: idea I will go out by window and I will do concert and will come back and who will come to my room at night

She takes a bag and she opens window go down with the help of pipe

She takes a auto

IN sohails house

Kriti: do u think she will come

Sohail: let the count down begins

Kriti: confident

Sohail: start

Kriti: 5……..4……..3………2………

Sohail:1

Door bell rings

Kriti: u r genius

He opens the door

Sohail: ruhi why did u come here at night

Ruhi: lets do the concert now

Sohail: but u r parents

Ruhi: fast

Sohail: u should not cheat u r parents

Ruhi: they also cheated u

Kriti: how?????

Ruhi: sohail helped them in nisha case and when I want to do concert they are not letting me do ii

Kriti: oh

Ruhi: by the way sohail why u wore suit at this time

Kriti: vo…..

Sohail:vo……

Kriti: banati hu

Ruhi: what?

Kriti: batati hu actually sohail is going to sell his company

Ruhi: no need for that

Suddenly someone closes ruhis mouth from back

Sohail: leh chalo isse

They tie ruhi to a chair

Ruhi: why did u tie me

Sohail: we want 10 crores from u r dad

Ruhi: but what did my dad do

Sohail comes closer to ruhis face

Sohail: we just want money

He moves back

Ruhi: its my fault I believed strangers more than anyone

Kriti: u have think about that stupid cupid

In raman house

Ishitha: raman I think u should not do this

Raman: that’s why I wont share any thing with u

Ishitha: but its wrong u kept a gps chip on her watch

Raman: so what I am her father

Ishitha: if ruhi will come to know then………

Raman: always negative

Ishitha: I will go to ruhi room

Raman: don’t tell her

He catches her feet

Ishitha: I just want to know if she slept

Raman: actually I was not catching u r legs my 1 rupee coin fell down

He gets up

Ishitha: oh really

She goes to ruhis room

She finds ruhi is not there

Ishitha: raman……raman……

Raman cmes

Raman: what happened

Ishitha: ruhi is not there

Raman(shouts): sohail

Ishitha: check with gps find my ruhi

Raman: yah yah

They follow ruhi

In sohail’s house

Sohail: vaby bring some water for me

Kriti: sure darling

She goes

Ruhi: she is u r sister

Sohail: no darling

He comes closer to her and goes to kiss her .ruhi cries

Kriti: sohail what are u dng

Sohail: nothing baby

Ruhi cries

Raman reaches sohails house and breaks the door

Raman: sohai leave my daughter

Sohail takes knife and keeps on ruhi’s neck

Sohail: don’t try to be over smart

Ishitha: u cheater leave my daughter

Sohail: from earth

Just then police comes

Sohail: police?

Raman: we are smart

Police takes sohail and kriti to jail

Ruhi: thank u papa

She hugs him

Ruhi: how did u came to know about this

Ishitha: gps system

She tells the whole story

Ruhi moves back

Ruhi: what? Koi mera apna nahi hai

She breaks down

They go to their house

They are shocked to see Christmas decorations

All: happy Christmas

Ruhi goes

Raman and Ishitha dance on itni si hasi, itni khusi to make ruhi smile

Ruhi smiles

Romi brings bottle and takes cat takes sees here and there

Mihika comes

Mihika: what r u doing

She sees the bottle

Mihika: atleast don’t drink today

Romi sits down

Mihika: I am not singing I am shouting

Romi: arre it is juice bottle from france

Mihika: then why were u hiding

Romi: actually I was going to store for this bottle and I want to buy it I forgot the purse before I could come sanjay took and went so I kept empty bottle and took this bottle but I kept money and I got to know he came to our party

Mihika: romi sanjay came to give me fileand went

Romi get up

Romi: actually me yeh dekh raha tha khi me darte huhe kaisa lagta hoon

Mihika: bahane band karo

Romi:hello everyone lets cheers

He pours juice in glass and everyone take it

All: CHEERS

Raman: (shouts)ruhi tumne sohail ko concert ke liye haan kyun kahi(ruhi what did u do why did u say yes for concert to sohail)

Ruhi: (in a frightened voice)aapko kaise pata chala

Raman: sohail ne message bheji hai keh raha hai thank u ruhi for doing concert for me

Ruhi(shouts) how dare u aapne mere phone ko haath kyun lagaya

Ishitha: kya yahi sikaya tha maine khi bado se baath karo

Ruhi: ishima papa always doubt on me

Raman: let me come to the point tum sohail ke saath concert nahi karogi arre concert karne ki chodo tum uske saath bath bhi nahi karogi

Ruhi: mein uske saath concert karungi mein bhi dekh thi hu kaun mujhe rokhtha hai

Ishitha: ruhi try to understand papa ko yeh sab pasand nahi

Raman: tumari age sirf 17 hai mujhe yeh sab bardaash nahi hota

Ruhi: always u people doubt on me adi bhaiyya ko toh force kar rahe the make girlfriend and blah blah

Ishitha: adi ki baat alag hai

Ruhi: yah yah sabke baat sahi aur mein hi galat

Raman: oh stop it ruhi I don’t want u to be with sohail he is not good

He locks the the door

IN sohails house

Kriti: bhai mujhe bahut dar lag raha agar hum pakde gaye

Sohail: yeh business hum saalo se karte aah rahe hai

Kriti: lekin iss bar humne ruhi daughter of raman kumar bhalla ko target kiya hai

Sohail: tumara blood group kya hai

Kriti: B+ve

Sohail: so be positive

Ruhi calls sohail

Ruhi: I cant do concert for u I am sorry

Sohail act as crying

Sohail: its ok I will sell my company

Ruhi feels bad

He cuts the call

Kriti: what happened

Sohail: ruhi parents are not allowing to do concert

Kriti takes plate and starts to beat like a tabla

Sohail: sambhal ke bhul gayi yeh sab rent pe liya

Kriti: pata hai infact humari company toh hai hi nahi

Sohail: right hum toh sabko bakra banakar uhne kidnap karke unke parents se paise lete he

Kriti: jald he humari ek company hogi

Sohail: ruhi 10 crore ka bakra hai aur hot bhi

Kriti: now u don’t forget I am not u r sister bur u r girl friend

In ruhi room

Ruhi lies on bed weeping

Ruhi: I am sorry sohail I cant help u

Ruhi cries

Ruhi: idea I will go out by window and I will do concert and will come back and who will come to my room at night

She takes a bag and she opens window go down with the help of pipe

She takes a auto

IN sohails house

Kriti: do u think she will come

Sohail: let the count down begins

Kriti: confident

Sohail: start

Kriti: 5……..4……..3………2………

Sohail:1

Door bell rings

Kriti: u r genius

He opens the door

Sohail: ruhi why did u come here at night

Ruhi: lets do the concert now

Sohail: but u r parents

Ruhi: fast

Sohail: u should not cheat u r parents

Ruhi: they also cheated u

Kriti: how?????

Ruhi: sohail helped them in nisha case and when I want to do concert they are not letting me do ii

Kriti: oh

Ruhi: by the way sohail why u wore suit at this time

Kriti: vo…..

Sohail:vo……

Kriti: banati hu

Ruhi: what?

Kriti: batati hu actually sohail is going to sell his company

Ruhi: no need for that

Suddenly someone closes ruhis mouth from back

Sohail: leh chalo isse

They tie ruhi to a chair

Ruhi: why did u tie me

Sohail: we want 10 crores from u r dad

Ruhi: but what did my dad do

Sohail comes closer to ruhis face

Sohail: we just want money

He moves back

Ruhi: its my fault I believed strangers more than anyone

Kriti: u have think about that stupid cupid

In raman house

Ishitha: raman I think u should not do this

Raman: that’s why I wont share any thing with u

Ishitha: but its wrong u kept a gps chip on her watch

Raman: so what I am her father

Ishitha: if ruhi will come to know then………

Raman: always negative

Ishitha: I will go to ruhi room

Raman: don’t tell her

He catches her feet

Ishitha: I just want to know if she slept

Raman: actually I was not catching u r legs my 1 rupee coin fell down

He gets up

Ishitha: oh really

She goes to ruhis room

She finds ruhi is not there

Ishitha: raman……raman……

Raman cmes

Raman: what happened

Ishitha: ruhi is not there

Raman(shouts): sohail

Ishitha: check with gps find my ruhi

Raman: yah yah

They follow ruhi

In sohail’s house

Sohail: vaby bring some water for me

Kriti: sure darling

She goes

Ruhi: she is u r sister

Sohail: no darling

He comes closer to her and goes to kiss her .ruhi cries

Kriti: sohail what are u dng

Sohail: nothing baby

Ruhi cries

Raman reaches sohails house and breaks the door

Raman: sohai leave my daughter

Sohail takes knife and keeps on ruhi’s neck

Sohail: don’t try to be over smart

Ishitha: u cheater leave my daughter

Sohail: from earth

Just then police comes

Sohail: police?

Raman: we are smart

Police takes sohail and kriti to jail

Ruhi: thank u papa

She hugs him

Ruhi: how did u came to know about this

Ishitha: gps system

She tells the whole story

Ruhi moves back

Ruhi: what? Koi mera apna nahi hai

She breaks down

They go to their house

They are shocked to see Christmas decorations

All: happy Christmas

Ruhi goes

Raman and Ishitha dance on itni si hasi, itni khusi to make ruhi smile

Ruhi smiles

Romi brings bottle and takes cat takes sees here and there

Mihika comes

Mihika: what r u doing

She sees the bottle

Mihika: atleast don’t drink today

Romi sits down

Mihika: I am not singing I am shouting

Romi: arre it is juice bottle from france

Mihika: then why were u hiding

Romi: actually I was going to store for this bottle and I want to buy it I forgot the purse before I could come sanjay took and went so I kept empty bottle and took this bottle but I kept money and I got to know he came to our party

Mihika: romi sanjay came to give me fileand went

Romi get up

Romi: actually me yeh dekh raha tha khi me darte huhe kaisa lagta hoon

Mihika: bahane band karo

Romi:hello everyone lets cheers

He pours juice in glass and everyone take it

All: CHEERS

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