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Home»Fan Fiction»And we never returned again! @kaira
Fan Fiction Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai

And we never returned again! @kaira

Lasyashree.10By Lasyashree.10April 1, 201720 Comments7 Mins Read
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Karthik clasped Naira’s hand who was seated beside him in Volkswagen polo. It’s been five years since Karthik proposed her on their convocation day to which Naira happily resented. They were on their way back home after having a sumptuous brunch at a restaurant.
‘Shut up! You were so coy, you never dared to talk to me’, Naira said punching his shoulder playfully with the other hand.
‘So, you are telling me that I have flattered you even without talking to you?’ Karthik wondered.
‘Sort of, you had been a great secret admirer. You never confronted me with your feelings though we are in the same class until I caught you’.
‘Yeah, you made me so nervous that day when you asked all our classmates to write the same lines I had written to you’.
‘That was the only way to get you. Your face when you were caught, that was very funny. Nevertheless, your letters literally swept me off my feet. Even then it took eight days for you to propose me directly’.
Karthik looked away, blushing. They passed thirteenth milestone from Udaipur. When Naira was fishing for her phone in her hand bag, their engine stuttered and ceased to a halt.
‘What happened?’ Naira asked.
‘How would I know? Wait here, I’ll go and check’.
Karthik stepped out of the car, opened the bonnet and started working on it. After a substantial time of thirty minutes he gave up.
‘Naira, I couldn’t fix it, I think we need a mechanic ‘.
‘Now don’t tell me that you are going to fetch a mechanic leaving me here’
‘No baby, we are very far from Udaipur. You wait here, I’ll go get him’
‘Let’s not go to Udaipur then. Come we’ll go this way, we are very far from the outskirts now. There must be some village nearby.’ said Naira, pointing to other direction.
‘And also walking hand in hand with boyfriend on an empty road at this time, trust me it’ll be pretty romantic.’
After some hesitation, Karthik eventually agreed. After walking for half a mile, they crossed a board reading “Kuldhara”.
‘Just like I said, we have reached a village’ said Naira.
‘Thank god, I wish we could get a mechanic soon’

As he looked ahead, he could see a girl wobbling exactly on the middle of the road. He wondered where she could be going back from, for he could not find even a single general store anywhere nearby. They both jogged to the girl. The girl stopped on hearing them. Her hair was pitch black, looked like probably many days since it was properly combed and it covered half of her face. She was looking at her bare feet. Her clothes are patched at many places.
‘Excuse me, is there a mechanic here?’ Karthik asked after hesitating for a brief moment.
The girl looked at him over her shoulder from the corner of her eye and pointed towards the way she was walking.
Naira pulled him around her arm and dragged him towards her, thanked her with an overwhelming urgency to go away from her and they hurried off.
‘Yew! She was so strange. Did you notice how she smelt? She was stinking of…’ Naira trailed off unable to put her finger on what exactly she smelt like. ‘No, there is no bad odor. She might be mentally challenged’ Karthik said and looked back. The girl was nowhere seen. She is indeed strange! Karthik thought.
They walked until they reached an ancient, heavy pillared arch with different idols of men and animals carved on them. There was a big wooden gate just after a few meters from the arch. There were idols of two heavily built men draped in dhotis and mighty spears and shields in their hands. They looked like the protectors of the village behind that gate.
They walked to the gate. It was midday and his watch showed forty degrees Celsius. They opened the heavy gate with great effort and entered into the village. They could sense the temperature drop substantially. Karthik checked his watch again, thirty one degrees Celsius.’ This village is so scary’ said Naira holding Karthik.
‘Don’t worry baby, we’ll be out of this place as soon as we get a mechanic. Staying here a minute longer is the last thing I ever want’.

There was no sign of a single creature. The village seemed almost two hundred and fifty years old with buildings made of stone leaving them think that they were built at the time of India ruled by kings. There was a giant statue of a man on a horse with a hefty body and enormous jewelry with a sword in his hand pointing forward. Karthik, to reach it, jumped over a ditch, stumbled upon a rock and hit the ground. His hand was badly cut oozing blood out of it. Naira immediately tied her scarf to stop the blood.
‘You were always careless’, you’ll never learn walking’ chided Naira.
‘I am okay’, said Karthik as they reached the statue. “Sangram”, etched on a glittering marble stone below the statue.
‘He might have ruled this place’, guessed Karthik.
They sensed the rise in temperature again. This time his watch showed forty three.
‘What do we get by its history; all we need is a mechanic and get out of this place. Also this place is full of games exuding something awful.’ said an apprehensive Naira. They reached a house and knocked the door. Once…Twice…Thrice… No response. Considering the house was empty, they moved to another house. No response even here. Bewildered, they stood on the road thinking. Meanwhile, the cut on Karthik’s hand stopped oozing blood. Naira untied her scarf from Karthik’s hand to check the wound. Blood! It was then struck Naira.
‘The girl on the road was reeking of blood!’ exclaimed Naira.
‘Shut up Naira, don’t be stupid. I think this scary village is making you think so, I have already said there was no bad odor’.
Naira couldn’t understand a thing. She remained thoughtful, trying to remember if she had seen any wound or blood on the girl’s body to which her mind stubbornly said that she didn’t. This realization made her feel more uncomfortable.
As they were moving to the other house, they heard someone laughs loudly from a distance. They turned to that side to find no one. Naira’s face reddened with horror. Beads of sweat started to perspire making her under arms instantly wet. Her hands were cold and pale.
‘Let’s get out of here’, Naira hurried and they both turned towards the gate.
They heard the loud laugh once again, combined with more laughter this time which turned into a constant character. Long shadows of men and women started to form on the ground running everywhere. They were feeling as if they were made immobile with a force for a moment and started running towards the gate without turning back despite any obstacle in their way. They could hear the bleat coming near to them. As they were about to cross the gate, they felt someone holding their hands, legs and waist dragging them inside.
The distant character was dominated and the strange silence of that mysterious village echoed by their shrill cries for help as those gates in front of them closed, burying them behind those gates forever.
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Hey guys! Tried something like this! How is it? Did you like it?
Is that scary? No or yes?
Hope you liked it!
Thankyou!
This is lasya!
Stay tuned!
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Storyline credits to my Brother and Sister!

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    20 Comments

    1. Vinni05 on April 1, 2017 9:37 pm

      NYC one

      • Lasyashree.10 on April 2, 2017 7:11 pm

        tysm!

    2. fenil on April 1, 2017 9:45 pm

      OMG !!
      BFF Lasiii u scared me !!:,(:,(:,(
      i m shivering due your story line .
      Can’t wait for next….oye stupid fenil are still bagging for next u will die for sure when u read next chap…

      Pls spare me lasiii8)8)8)To Your dear bro and sissy Thanks

      • Lasyashree.10 on April 2, 2017 7:12 pm

        there is no next fenu! kaira are buried out there and this is an OS

        anyways thankyou!

    3. Vrushy on April 1, 2017 10:41 pm

      And seriously now, I am just stumped !!
      What are you eating babe ?!!
      So much creativity and soo many works and soo many post with different story’s.
      I have just become a bigger fan of yours.
      This was just too much scary. But yet loved it.

      Do post more and more updates and keep.on surprising us !!

      • Lasyashree.10 on April 2, 2017 7:14 pm

        thank you sooo much vrush!
        this really mean a lot to me!
        yes planning for more OS

    4. lovey on April 1, 2017 11:04 pm

      Main to mar gayi to scary and at ni8 nice

      • Lasyashree.10 on April 2, 2017 7:14 pm

        haha! thanks lovey

    5. Sanyuktha on April 2, 2017 9:08 am

      good one lasya as vrushy said one afterthe other new concepts! great and yes what is your secret man your writing is just amazing! you wrote 3One shots till now and they are mindblowing and this one what to say about this? it’s just amazing and no words
      ad thanks a lot toyour BROTHER please share him this one for such a wonderful creativity and all are very creative in your family? really you are blessed and the writing was superb and i really liked it a lot lasya and thanks to your brother too

      • Lasyashree.10 on April 2, 2017 7:15 pm

        thanks sanyktha !
        your comment means a lot to me!
        and yea i’ll definately convey your wishes

        waiting for yours too! whyyy are you not uploading?

    6. kairalove on April 2, 2017 9:15 am

      ohmy god it’s very scary1
      thank god i dint read it at ni8
      so storyline credits to your Brother and Sistr! cool very good creativity
      all the best to you your sister and your brother
      and please tell me the names of your other os and fanfic also if any!

      • Lasyashree.10 on April 2, 2017 7:16 pm

        thanks ah lot kairalove! yes i’ll surely wish them too!

    7. Vedanshidwivedi on April 2, 2017 9:38 am

      I read it at nite it is just scary yaar its soo good amazing just love it

      • Lasyashree.10 on April 2, 2017 7:17 pm

        thank you veda!

    8. Soumya85 on April 2, 2017 10:08 am

      Wow di..it was so scary??thank god i have not read this at night otherwise I can’t sleep..amazing story di..I wanted to know what happend with KaiRa??love ur all work

      • Lasyashree.10 on April 2, 2017 7:18 pm

        thankyou sumo! glad you liked it! and kaira they are buried inside the village as the title itself includes that!

      • Soumya85 on April 2, 2017 7:20 pm

        I know di I was just joking but di u can continue this I was thinking a story after this it will be great

      • Lasyashree.10 on April 3, 2017 11:07 am

        yea! but i don’t have anyplan of what’s next gonna happen
        if you say that you have planned something it really means a lot to me and sure you can continue this!

        i’m glad to know this and even more if you continue this!

    9. KøMàŁ on April 2, 2017 4:30 pm

      very scary…still interesting….update asap

      • Lasyashree.10 on April 2, 2017 7:18 pm

        thanks komal! but i’m sorry it’s just an OS

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