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Home»Fan Fiction»Naughty Billo(SwaSan ff) Epilogue by Marsuu
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Naughty Billo(SwaSan ff) Epilogue by Marsuu

MarsBy MarsSeptember 18, 201797 Comments11 Mins Read
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Hello guys!!! I was soo happy to see your overwhelming response on last part. So this epilogue is dedicated to all who commented on naughty billo. I can’t thank you enough for loving and supporting this story so plzzz for the last time read and leave your views.
Thank you so much for liking it.
Let’s begin:

NAUGHTY BILLO(SwaSan ff)
EPILOGUE:

After five years:
Maheshwari house(Morning)
Swasan room:
Sanskar is sleeping in the center and on his left side sanyara has place her head on his chest and on the right side is Swara hugging him tightly.
As the alarm rings sanskar off it and called swara
Sanskar: swara wake up.
Swara: plzz 5 mins
She mumble in sleepy voice.
Sanskar signed and thought to wake up sanyara first.
Sanskar (caress her hairs): sanu baby get up you have school
Sanu: plzz 5 mins.
Sanskar: okay then you both let me get up.
Swasanu: nooo
Sanskar: swara first you go.
Swara irritatingly opened her eyes and said
Swara: why u start in the early morning.
Sanskar: we have to make sanu also ready for school now go.
Swara make faces and went to washroom.
After half an hour:
Sanskar is sitting and sanu is lying in his lap.
Sanskar: why your mamma is taking so much time.
Sanu( whisper): I think she slept in the washroom.
Sanskar (laughs): yeah possible.
Then only swara came out and saw them whispering and giggling.
Swara: what you both are talking without me.
Sanskar: sanu was saying that….

His words left incomplete as sanu place her little hands on his mouth.
Sanu: papa u will not say otherwise I will not talk to you.
Swara(jump on bed): sanskar if you will not tell me then I will not talk to you.
Sanskar remove sanu’s hand and said
Sanskar: u both always blackmail me.
Swara:sanskar say
Sanuu: papa no
Sanskar(said in one go): sanu was saying that u slept in washroom that’s why u came late.
Swara looked at sanu with narrow eyes.
Sanu(instantly): but papa also said yes for that.
She said nodding innocently.
Sanskar tickles sanu
Sanskar: you clever little girl.
Sanu was laughing while swara laughs at them and went to dressing table to get ready.
Later, sanu was also ready for the school and swasanara went downstairs.

After a week:
Swasan room:
Sanskar is sitting on the edge of the bed holding his head.
Swara: Sanskar u will wear red shirt.
Sanu: papa u will wear blue shirt today.
They both are fighting that Sanskar should wear red shirt or blue for going to university.
Swara: Sanskar red
Sanu: papa blue
Swara: red red red
Sanu: blue blue blue.
Sanskar(shouted): keep quite both of you neither I will wear red nor blue.
Swara(shock): then u will go without shirt.

Swara and sanu place hands on their mouth shocked
Swasanu:ohhhhhhhhhh
Sanskar: I mean I will wear some other shirt.
Sanskar got up and went near cupboard and take out white shirt and started wearing.
Swara and sanu sit on bed and started their melodrama.
Swara: see sanu Sanskar don’t love us that’s why after rejecting our choice don’t know whose choice he is wearing.
Sanu place her head on swara’s shoulder and said sadly
Sanu: yes momsss
Sanskar signed seeing their drama. Its their daily routine.
Sanskar: ohhh drama queens for your kind information this white shirt you both had only choosed for me when we went to shopping last time.
Swara(smiles sheepishly): yes I forgot.
Swara kiss his cheek. Sanu stand on the bed to meet his height and kissed his other cheek.
Sanskar: so if my babies are Willing then may I go.
Swasanuu: sure.
Sanskar chuckles and went.

Afternoon:
Kitchen:
Sujata is preparing lunch and swara is helping her while sanu is sitting on shelf.
Whenever sanu has holiday from school they trio spend time with each other.
Sanu: moms dadi u know yesterday one boy ask me to be his friend.
Swara(excited): really and what u said?
Sanu: I said okay.
Swara: so he is your first boy as friend.
Sanu(blushes): yes.
Swara: awww mom when first boy was your friend??
Sujata:in college.
Swara: he was more handsome than dad.
Sujata(shyly): yes little.
Sanu: moms u also tell your.
Swara: I was in 5th standard that time my classmate asked me for friendship.
Sanu: so I m fast then you both bcoz I m in first class only.
Swara: yupp
Then they keep on talking bcoz trio are chatterbox so can’t keep quite.

Evening:
Swasan room:
Swara is anxiously standing at the door then only sanu came running and said
Sanu: pops is coming.
Swara: okay take your place.
Swara and sanu hide at the back of both door.
Sanskar enter inside and was little surprised as there was silence in the room which is contrary to the normal situation.
Sanskar enter inside the next moment
Swara and sanu came from back and shouted
Swasanu: wwwwwooooooooo
The books Sanskar was holding fell from his hand due to shock. Swara and sanu started laughing rolling on bed seeing him scared.
Sanu: ohh God papa you got scared from us.
Swara: seriously sanskar.
Sanskar came near them and said
Sanskar: yeah how can I forget when devils are in my room u both always prank on me I m not going to talk to you both.
Sanskar sit on bed with pout.
Swara and sanu look at each other and then started
Swara: sankuuuu
Sanu: popuuuu
Swara: u are best hubbyyyy
Sanu: u r best popyyyyy
Sanskar smiles.
Seeing him smiling swara tightly kissed his cheeks
Swara: I love you
Sanskar(kiss her forehead): love you too.
Sanu: you both forgot me.
Sanskar pull her in his lap and kiss her cheeks.
Sanskar: I love you my baby.
Sanuu: I also love you pops and moms.
Sanskar: from where you learn all these names pops poppy popuuu???
Sanuu: mom teach me.
Sanskar look at swara who was already showing her full teeth to him.
Sanskar: very creative swara.
Swara(shyly); thank you.
Sanskar laughs.

Night:
Swara was keeping clothes in the cupboard when sanskar back hug her.
Sanu is with her dadu as she everyday spent some time with ram and sujata also.
Swara smiles at him and he started kissing her neck.
Swara: sanskar what are u doing.
Sanskar didn’t said anything and turn her.
Sanskar: u are ignoring me now a days.
Swara: no
Sanskar: yes
Sanskar lean and kiss her lips tenderly. Swara also closed her eyes and her hands crawl in his hairs. They kissed each other passionately and broke when out of breathe.
Then only door opened and sanu came inside. Sanskar moved back and swara was blushing.
Sanu: why your cheeks are pink mom.
Swara(whisper): bcoz your papa kissed me.
Sanskar’s eyes widen like who tell all this to their children.
Sanu(confused): I don’t blush when pops kiss on my cheeks.
Swara: not on cheeks.
Sanskar: sanu baby your homework is done??(diverting)
Sanu:opps one is left.
Sanskar: then complete it.
Sanu: okay
Sanyara went to take her books and Sanskar went near swara.
Sanskar: stupid who tell all this to their kids??
Swara: sorry I forgot.
Sanskar: next time be careful.
Swara: I will try.
Sanskar signed and went to sanuu.

Sunday:
Today swasan are alone at home as sanu went with ramta to some relatives house. Swasan are sitting in the hall and watching movie and its raining outside.
Swara is lying on sanskar’s shoulder and his hands are wrapped around her waist.
Sanskar started caress her waist under her shirt.
Sanskar: swara
Swara: hmm
Sanskar: we are alone today at home.
Swara(confused): so what??
Sanskar felt like bagging his head at the wall that it’s almost 9 years of their marriage still she can’t understand his romantic mood.
Sanskar: nothing.
Swara(smiles): asha but i was thinking something.
Sanskar(uninterestingly): what???
Swara(lean towards him): that we didn’t made love from long time.
Sanskar looked at her with wide eyes like seriously she is saying this.
Swara: ohh hello where are you lost.
Sanskar: then what we are waiting for??(winks)
Swara blushes.
Sanskar smiles and picked her in his arms after switching off the tv.

(Ignore this part if you don’t want romance?????? but its of my level only you can read also???)

Swasan room:
Sanskar made swara lie on bed and kissed her forehead, nose tip cheeks and at last place his rough lips on her soft rosey petals. He sucks her lips and bite them making swara gasp. After getting breathless they broke the kiss.
Sanskar join his forehead with her mumbling I love you against her lips. Sanskar buried his face in her neck and started giving wet kisses on her milky skin. Swara’s hand fisted his hairs pulling him closer. Sanskar look at her and smiles as she has tightly closed her eyes. Sanskar held her hand and kiss her palm.
Sanskar: swara still you are feeling shy?
Swara nodded not opening her eyes.
Sanskar chuckles at her antics.
Soon both got busy in showing their love for each other which had not even faded little also after many years of their marriage instead has increased day by day.
Later, sanskar took her in his embrace and both slept for sometimes.
(Romance over u can open your eyes????)

Evening:
Sanu came back and is telling swasan what all she did and how she enjoyed with her dadi and dadu.
Swara: so u enjoyed alot sanu???
Sanu: yes and what u both did.
Swara: firstly we watched moving then
Sanu: then???
Sanskar was looking at swara’s expressions that what she is going to blubber now.
Swara: then we slept.
Sanuu: ohh
Swara: yes.
Sanskar signed in relief that she didn’t spoke anything rubbish.

After few days,
Sanskar is sitting on couch and working on laptop and sanu is beside him having one big physics guide in her lap. She is turning pages and looking at pictures. Swara is sitting on bed watching TV.
Sanu: papa
Sanskar: yes baby
Sanu: physics is easy!?
Sanskar( teases); I think you should ask this from your mom she knows better.
Swara looked at sanskar narrowing her eyes while he was suppressing his laugh.
Sanu: why mom know physics more??
Sanskar: tooo much when u will be big then u should study physics from your mommy she will teach u all the tactics to pass in physics.
Sanuu(innocently): okay.
Then only sanu remembered that sujata called her.
Sanuu: pops I have to go dadi had called me.
Sanskar: okay
Giving book to sanskar sanu ran out of the room.
Swara got up and stood in front of Sanskar keeping hands on her waist.
Swara: what were you saying Mr Maheshwari??
Sanskar(pull her on his lap): what??
Swara: don’t act innocent you were making fun of me.
Sanskar: ohh I was just teasing my little cute wife and what wrong I said like u married me to clear physics whenever I remember it I can’t stop laughing.
Swara: I was kid at that time.
Sanskar: at that time u are kid now also. BTW swara if someone will make movie on our love story what will be the title.??
Swara:may I tell.
Sanskar: yes
Swara: ” Physics ne bana di jodi”
They both started laughing at their own predictions.
Sanskar: I never thought also that I will fall for someone like anything.
Swara: me also.
Swara Peck her lips and join her forehead with his and said
Swara: I love you so much Mr Boring Maheshwari.
Sanskar: Love you more Mrs Naughty Maheshwari.
They smiles and soon their lips met into a soft kiss.

HAPPY ENDING

So how was it???? I tried to give my best and hope so I was able to fulfill your expections.
Now your turn to comment plzz don’t be silent and comment for the last time. Hope so all will comment???
And are u really waiting for season 2 then tell me I will give first shot in this week itself if you all want.
Thank you
Bye
Lots of love
Take care

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    97 Comments

    1. Bush1122 on September 18, 2017 10:06 am

      Ohhh so cute n lovely…
      Sanu is same like Swara… drama queen…
      Their bond is adorable…
      Crazy loving and sweet too…
      Will be missing this story alot di…
      Hats off to u di…
      Thank u so much for giving a chance to read a story like this

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 10:23 am

        Thank you so much dear glad you liked it tc???

    2. Jj on September 18, 2017 10:34 am

      Yes I want season 2

    3. Mars on September 18, 2017 10:47 am

      Will try to give soon season 2 thank you so much dear tc???

    4. Anu Rathore on September 18, 2017 11:01 am

      Awesome nd swara and sanu is too cute..loved it.. Nd waiting for season 2

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 11:06 am

        Thank you so much dear will give season 2 soon tc???

    5. Anjali on September 18, 2017 11:02 am

      Superb loved it nd will miss it

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 11:58 am

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    6. sakshi on September 18, 2017 11:07 am

      It’s a wonderful cute story I never get bored once also I usually wait for this story to post going to miss this

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 11:59 am

        Thank you so much dear glad you liked it will come with season 2 soon tc???

    7. Teja on September 18, 2017 11:10 am

      Really u r awesome

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 12:01 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    8. Parul on September 18, 2017 11:22 am

      I just lv ur ff cant believe it ended so soon if result of reading physics would be dis i m only going 2 study physics only such a wonderful journey of swasan n thank u 4 writing it

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 12:03 pm

        Yeahh keep reading physics bcoz it’s result is good???????
        Don’t worry will come with season 2 soon thank you so much dear tc???

    9. Rekha on September 18, 2017 11:32 am

      Woooowwwww………….. Awesome……….??
      Lovely……..??

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 12:04 pm

        Awww thank you so much dear tc???

    10. Aayesha on September 18, 2017 11:33 am

      Is this a thing to ask??obviously yes

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 12:05 pm

        ???? just thought to ask????
        Thank you so much dear will come with season 2 soon tc????

    11. independent on September 18, 2017 11:51 am

      Amazing loved it a lot

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 2:00 pm

        Thank you so much dii tc???

    12. Kashu on September 18, 2017 12:11 pm

      Awwwww…. Probably, the cutest chapter so far… All scenes were gracefully written.. Every bit was perfect… I would difinitely miss this story.. Plz post first part of next season soon.. And if u don’t mind can I ask u something?? What is ur age??

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 1:28 pm

        Thank you so much dear your words means a lot???? will give season 2 Soon☺☺☺ and I don’t mind dear u can ask anything and I m 18????
        Take care????

    13. harneet on September 18, 2017 12:22 pm

      AWWWWW …… so sweet …… sanu was so cute and adorable?? … swara is still same NAUGHTY BILLO ?⚘⚘ sanskar as usual object to thier prank ….. i loved it .. yes it may be possible that swara slept in washroom . damn good ….. keep it up …waiting for season 2 …. tc

      harneet ???

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 2:02 pm

        Awww thank you so much dear glad u liked will come with season 2 soon tc??????

    14. Tamil on September 18, 2017 12:23 pm

      Amazing dear…..Beautiful lovely…..loved it

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 2:03 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc?????

    15. sneha on September 18, 2017 12:37 pm

      Amazing epilogue dear. Waiting for next season

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 2:05 pm

        Thank you so much dear will come with season 2 soon tc???

    16. Nida on September 18, 2017 1:45 pm

      Superb as always

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 2:08 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    17. Febi on September 18, 2017 1:57 pm

      Awesome and excellent dear as always…… Eagerly waiting for the next season

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 2:09 pm

        Thank you so much dear will come with season 2 soon tc???

    18. Rockleon on September 18, 2017 2:25 pm

      SooO awesome yaarrmmarsuuuu………
      Loved it sooo much ……
      No words to describe it…..
      Will miss nb sooo very much!!!!!
      Love u Loads!
      Take care!

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 4:20 pm

        Awwww thank you so much dear your words means alot and don’t worry will come with season 2 soon?????
        Love youuuuu?????
        Take care???????

    19. AbrahamEzra on September 18, 2017 2:32 pm

      Both swara and sanyara are total drama queens. And bechara sanskar phas gaya na in donom ke beech.
      I’ll miss this story yaar.
      I want season 2

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 4:26 pm

        Yuppp sanskar has to handle his both kiddos swara and sanuu???
        Thank you so much dear?? will come with season 2 soon tc?????

    20. NDSG on September 18, 2017 2:55 pm

      Mars it’s awesome superbbbbb part…?????????? as like mother as like daughter… Same pinch my poor Sanskaar. What to do poor boy…

      Kiddo Swara, who tells her daughter about the kiss. But how can we forget she is kiddo??????????????

      Sanya have BF???????? tooo fast girl. Damm funny, swara is like friend to her daughter ?????????????? . And only Sanskaar Maheshwari can handle two kiddos…

      Loved it to the core of my heart…???????????????? and cheery on the cake was physics ne bana di jodi

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 4:31 pm

        Thank you so much depuuu dear and swara has made her daughter also like her only kiddooo and naughty and sanskar has to handle them????
        Thank you so much dear tc???????

      • NDSG on September 18, 2017 8:11 pm

        U know I imagine this kiddo Swara????????? my ? favorite one?????

      • Mars on September 19, 2017 8:34 am

        Mine toooo I love her kiddo antics????????????

    21. Bella on September 18, 2017 3:03 pm

      Beyond awesome

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 4:32 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc?????

    22. nabamita on September 18, 2017 3:31 pm

      Awesome ending….waiting for season 2

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 4:34 pm

        Thank you so much dear will give season 2 soon tc????

    23. anu on September 18, 2017 3:31 pm

      awesome loved it swara and sanu both are cute…. sanksar managing these two devils… loved it

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 4:37 pm

        Yuppp swara and sanuu are cutiepies???? thank you so much dear tc???

    24. Divz on September 18, 2017 3:41 pm

      hayeeeeee sachiii physics ne
      bana di Jodi…..
      lovely
      awesome
      amazing
      beautiful
      every thing

      I was thinking how You r going to end the story and it is surely one of the best ending…. marsuuu

      love it soooooo much…..

      will miss our naughty billos very much with their physics mastarji….
      haha

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 4:40 pm

        Awwww thank you so much for your beautiful comment???? i m glad u liked it will come with season 2 soon take care??????

    25. japnaaz_gill on September 18, 2017 3:43 pm

      Aww..superb epilogue….u nailed it ripu darling…seriously physics ne bna di swasan ki jodi…i like naughty sanu in this part…Swaad e aa gea!!!!

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 4:42 pm

        Awww thank you so much diiii and i m happy ki tuhanu pasand aya tc??????

    26. Chaitu on September 18, 2017 3:48 pm

      Awesome swara and sanu is so cute both are pranksters bechara sanskar loved it dear and waiting for season 2

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 4:43 pm

        Awww thank you so much dear will come with season 2 soon tc??????

    27. mica on September 18, 2017 4:34 pm

      huh! i read it over and over again šŸ˜€ :D.. can’t stop laughing and bang my head

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 4:57 pm

        Feeling pity for your head?????
        Thank you so much dear and keep laughing????? take care specially of your head?????
        ??????

    28. Tweety_SwaSan on September 18, 2017 5:10 pm

      Mars dear it was hilarious…??? I can’t stop laughing… Swara and Sanu both are very naughty and drama queen…? Like mother like daughter… I really enjoyed reading this update… SwaSan with their Sanu…? Cute naughty family…? Thank you so much for this amazing FF…? Please come up with season 2 very soon… And please don’t show Swara’s pregnancy at the end like this…please… ?

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 5:28 pm

        Awww thank you so much dear and in season 2 will give everything in detail as here I didn’t planned for it. Will come with season 2 very soon glad you liked it. Take care??????

    29. Priya on September 18, 2017 6:17 pm

      Awesome dear I loved it sweet family and yes want season 2

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 8:33 pm

        Thank you so much dear will come with season 2 soon tc???

    30. Stg on September 18, 2017 6:23 pm

      Awesome ??? I don’t know how to write long comments but mast thi story and yes come soon with season 2..

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 8:36 pm

        ??? its okay dear and thank you so much dear will come with season 2 soon tc???

    31. Neptune on September 18, 2017 6:37 pm

      Marsuuuuuuuuu… oh god these both nother-daughter duo are really devils.. my poor sanku became a sandwich between both of them…. but really shona is such a cutie pie.. falling more n more for her…

      Of course I want season 2…. post soon dear…. ????????

      • Mars on September 19, 2017 8:38 am

        ?????? poor sanskar jaisi wife vaisi daughter? yuppp swara is a cutiepie love her to the core????? thank you so much dear will come with season 2 soon tc????????

    32. rini on September 18, 2017 7:22 pm

      aww superb… cute.. epilogue

      • Mars on September 19, 2017 8:40 am

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    33. Harshita on September 18, 2017 7:50 pm

      Hey dude……..remember me…..

      Actually i was busy so didn’t commented……

      Read all remaining parts today…..

      Awsm one……loved cute sanu…..

      I also read your other stories……..i will not be able to comment regularly but i love your stories………

      Update uncontrollable feelings soon…..

      and han want season 2 of naghty billo……..eagerly waiting for it

      Bye bye

      • Mars on September 19, 2017 8:44 am

        Ommggg harshu after long time and how can I forget you??? I m happy to see your comment and thank you so much dear and no problem u can comment when u get time and i will post uncontrollable feelings soon
        Season 2 also coming soon take care????????????

    34. neeti on September 18, 2017 8:06 pm

      perfect

      • Mars on September 19, 2017 8:48 am

        Thank you so much dii tc????

    35. Kumu on September 18, 2017 8:28 pm

      Awesome??
      Both swara and her daughter r same??
      Two naughty billos??
      Poor sanskar Nw he has to handle both of them??
      Loved it ā¤ā¤
      Gonna miss this ff so much ☺☺
      I love reading all ur stories but this one is special as u swasan fans got an amazing friend and writer through this ff??
      Ur stories r 1 of the reasons
      I visit TU everyday ☺☺
      This naughty billo always
      makes me smile ??
      U even made the kidnapping scene
      so much funny ??
      Waiting for the new season of
      naughty billo ??
      Love you ????
      Tc..

      • Kumu on September 18, 2017 8:30 pm

        *we

      • Mars on September 19, 2017 8:54 am

        To be honest kumu dear your comment made my day I was little upset due to some reason but after reading your comment I really felt happy. Thank you so much for your beautiful comment naughty Billo is my fav also as through this my journey as writer started once again thanks????? will come with season 2 very soon????? take care?????

      • Mars on September 19, 2017 8:54 am

        To be honest kumu dear your comment made my day I was little upset due to some reason but after reading your comment I really felt happy. Thank you so much for your beautiful comment naughty Billo is my fav also as through this my journey as writer started once again thanks????? will come with season 2 very soon????? take care?????
        Love you took???

    36. Romaisa on September 18, 2017 8:33 pm

      Wow loved it gonna miss this plz come with seoson 2 soon and sanuu is soo cute ā¤ļøā¤ļø

      • Mars on September 19, 2017 8:56 am

        Thank you so much dear will come with season 2 soon tc?????

    37. veenaq on September 18, 2017 8:37 pm

      Amazing dear…will miss this ff?

      • Mars on September 19, 2017 9:08 am

        Thank you so much dear and soon will come with season 2 tc???

    38. Mona on September 18, 2017 9:00 pm

      I am silent reader of your FF. I love your writings. And no other writer gives fast updates as you give. I love you Mars ? But one thing I don’t like in your writing is you won’t give enough revenge . You will make each other forget easily what ever mistake they do. Please don’t it take it in negative way. I just felt like to say. Please don’t take me wrong .
      Sayonara

      • Mars on September 19, 2017 9:16 am

        First of all thank you so much for commenting dear. I m glad u like my writing and I won’t take you in wrong way in fact I m thankful to you that u told me my lackness it will really help me to improve and surely I will be careful next time.
        Thanks
        Take care??????

    39. hellyfan on September 19, 2017 1:41 am

      this time i don’t have long comment
      i just wanna say that IT’S JUST PERFECT

      I LOVE THIS STORY AND WILL ALWAYS LOVE
      bye.. take care ..love u diii

      • Mars on September 19, 2017 9:19 am

        ???? it’s okay few words are enough thank you so much dear love u too????? take care????

    40. Ashwini on September 19, 2017 1:44 am

      Super awesome ???ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø…. Yes plz give us session 2

      • Mars on September 19, 2017 9:21 am

        Thank you so much dear will give season 2 soon tc????

    41. yamee on September 19, 2017 12:49 pm

      It was really amazing ending dear….loved it so sooooooo much.eagerly waiting for season 2 post soon.

      • Mars on September 19, 2017 2:18 pm

        Thank you so much dear will come with season 2 soon tc???

    42. vyshu10 on September 19, 2017 8:13 pm

      Aww…so cute. Superb ff…waiting for S2

      • Mars on September 20, 2017 8:30 am

        Thank you so much dear will give season 2 soon tc???

    43. prashasti7 on September 19, 2017 8:21 pm

      awwww marsuuu it was really awsm cute lovely n what not
      perfect family swara z still the same
      awsm n yaa plzz post season 2 m very eager
      love u tc

      • Mars on September 20, 2017 8:35 am

        Awww thank you so much dear??? will come with season 2 soon
        Hellu is looking so beautiful in your dp???????
        Love you??????
        Take care????

    44. Rp on September 19, 2017 9:44 pm

      Superb ending dear

      • Mars on September 20, 2017 8:36 am

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    45. Shibil on September 19, 2017 11:21 pm

      lovely part .. cute swasan sanu family …sanu is same as swara..waiting for next season dr

      • Mars on September 20, 2017 8:38 am

        Thank you so much dear will give season 2 very soon tc????

    46. Milestone on September 20, 2017 7:27 am

      Awesome dear……..

      • Mars on September 20, 2017 8:40 am

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    47. Nisha on September 21, 2017 11:52 pm

      Awwwwww… This beautiful story has come to an end… ???.. I will miss the naughty and sweet updates of this beautiful and an awesome story ya.. Really.. ????.. The epilogue was sooooo amazing and mindblowing.. Swasan happy in their life with their Sanu.. Awwwww… ??… Just beautiful.. ??????.. Just can’t wait to see a second season to this story.. Heheheheh.. Swara in her naughty avtar all thru the story was just a delight to read.. ???.. Super awesome and lovely story… Sanskaar changing to a naughty and lovely character was a treat to read.. ??.. And little sanu just made this epilogue even more beautiful… ???.. Just can’t express how happy I feel reading this… ????????.. Thankkkk youuu for this one.. ???

      • Mars on September 22, 2017 10:31 am

        Awwww thank you so much dear glad u liked it????? I will come with season 2 soon tc????????

    48. gayathri.visu on September 27, 2017 8:02 pm

      Wow…….fantastic epilogue yaar. Lovely n cuteeeeeeeeee…..loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much dear.

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