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Naughty billo (swasan ff) shot 24 by mars

MarsBy MarsJuly 10, 201791 Comments9 Mins Read
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Hloooo lovely readers!! Firstly big thanks to ndsg dear for making amazing edit on naughty billo. Thanks for the gift dear. Now my regular dialogue of sorry for being little late.
Thank you all those who commented without my pleadings on last shot. And those who comment when I plead them, then be ready to do as I will again plead u.hihihihi. No more faltu bakwas
Let’s begin

NAUGHTY BILLO(swasan ff)
SHOT 24:
In the street:
Person: hey! Shona don
Listening this name, Swara instantly turn to the person and jumped in excitement
Swara(happy): lucky bucky u here.
The person is laksh.
Laksh:yes.
Swara hugged him and he also hugged back in friendly way but someone is jealous like anything. If gaze can burn then till now laksh would be in flames.
After breaking hug.
Swara: what are u doing here?
Laksh: I m living here only as I m got job in Goa.
Swara: woww great it means u enjoy your honeymoon everyday.
Laksh(confused): means??
Swara: uffff how can I forget your upper part is empty (slightly hit his head and laughs)
Laksh(irritated): shona.

Then swara’s sight caught Sanskar. Finally she remembered her hubby.
Swara: sanskar meet him he is lucky means laksh my schoolmate.
Sanskar (with fake smile): hi laksh this is sanskar maheshwari and(wrap his hand on Swara’s waist and pull her closer) she is my wife Swara Sanskar Maheshwari(over possessive)
Laksh: ohhh hello.
Sanlak shake hand. Then only laksh realized what sanskar said
Laksh: wife means shona u got married.
Sanskar was getting irritated when laksh called Swara as shona.
Swara(smile shyly): yes I m married.
Sanskar skip his beat looking at her expressions.
Laksh: which idiot married such a crack piece.
Sanskar: its me only.
Swara giggles.
Laksh (stuck his tongue): opps sorry I didn’t mean that.Don’t mind.
Swara: don’t worry he is very nice.
Sanskar smiles.
Laksh: till when we will stand here. Let’s sit inside (he pointed to cafe)
Swara(excited): okay let’s go.come Sanskar.
Sanskar nodded.He cursed laksh under his breathe as he wants to spend time with Swara and here he came to disturb them.
Swara held Sanskar’s hand and drag him inside the cafe.

Cafe:
They get settle on one table and started talking
Laksh: so since when u r married?
Swara: from two years.
Laksh: u married so soon.
Swara: yuppp my dadi wanted that’s why otherwise u know I had allergy from marriage.
Swara and laksh laughs and give hifi.
Listening Swara’s words, only one thought came in Sanskar’s mind that she is not happy with this marriage (stupid)
Sanskar came to senses when laksh asked
Laksh: btw Sanskar she beats u?
Sanskar: no why she will beat me (thinks) huh!! Stupid question.
Laksh: ohh it means she improved. U know almost every boy of our class was beaten by her that’s why we name her shona don.
Swara(hit him): oyee shut up.
Swara and laksh keep on talking about their school days.They were enjoying and laughing. Sanskar was feeling to kick laksh.Swara unintentionally ignored Sanskar which was making him hyper.
Having enough of there stupidity, Sanskar said
Sanskar: Swara I think we should leave it’s late.
Swara: okay.
Laksh: bye shona I really enjoyed today.
Bidding bye they went.
Swara was speaking on the way but Sanskar was not answering just humming.

Swasan room:
Swasan had their dinner, still Sanskar’s behavior was same.Now swara started feeling that something is wrong with him.Swara came out from washroom after changing wearing light purple silky sleeveless frock above her knees.
She sit beside Sanskar and keep on staring him.Feeling her gaze, sanskar asked
Sanskar: u want something?
Swara: u r angry with me?
Sanskar: no
Swara(relief): ohh then okay. Today we had fun with laksh na. He is very good we used to fight a lot in school for benches that who will sit at first……..
She keep on speaking about laksh.
Sanskar got annoyed listening laksh laksh laksh from her mouth. He instantly turned and capture her lips shutting her mouth.Swara blink her eyes several times while he was lost in kiss. Soon he broke it and swara looked at him with open mouth.
Sanskar:dare u to say laksk again then I will show u.
Swara(confused): means?
Sanskar(thought): now this also I should tell that I m jealous.
Swara: tell?
Sanskar: I just don’t like(roll his eyes)
Swara understand that why he is saying this. She wrap her hands around his neck and teasingly said
Swara: u r getting jealous.
Sanskar(look at her): yes!! U know u ignored me in the evening.
Swara: no way
Sanskar: you got your friend and u forget me.
Swara: I didn’t knew I ignored you. I m sorry.
Sanskar: no need of sorry. Good night.
He lie on his side of the bed.
Swara pout seeing him sad so lie upon him.
Swara: plzz talk to me(pleading).
Sanskar: I m talking only. Now sleep.
Swara held his collar and kissed him.
Sanskar got numb that what she did.
Later, swara whispers slowly
Swara: I can never ignore u. Sorry seeing laksh after many years I got excited but it doesn’t mean I love him that u r getting jealous.
Sanskar smiles at her words. She roll her and took her petite figure beneath him and said
Sanskar: I love u.
Swara: I know.sooo
Sanskar: soo. Let me show u how much l love u.
Swara keep her hands on her eyes and blush profusely.
Sanskar smiles and gently kissed her.
Then……..(leave them alone yarrr).

Midnight:
Swara is lying on Sanskar’s bare chest and making patterns there. Sanskar’s hand was around her waist.
Sanskar: Swara u r not happy with this marriage.
Swara looked at him confusely that why he asked this question.
Swara: yes i m Happy but why u asked.
Sanskar: u were saying to laksh that u don’t like to marry and moreover u married me to clear physics so now u had done your graduation also.
Swara: I agree I married u for physics but now I love u then how can u say like this.
Tears welled up in her big eyes. Sanskar felt her voice getting heavy and hugged her tightly
Sanskar: I m sorry I will never say like this.
Swara: okay(smiles).
Then they were lying and were enjoying silence when Swara said
Swara: Sanskar…
Sanskar: hmm
Swara: I m scared.
Sanskar(confused): why???
Swara: mom and ma are again and again asking to give them good news but I m still not pregnant(pout)
Sanskar stare her for seconds then started laughing.
Swara got annoyed and hit his chest.
Swara: I m talking on serious matter and u r laughing.
Sanskar: yes very serious. They are just teasing don’t get tensed.
Swara: really
Sanskar: yes and we will give them good news it takes time.We just can’t download it from Google.
Swara(serious): yes.
Sanskar (signed): it was joke Swara.
Swara: ohhhhk then I should laugh.
Swara give him fake laugh.
Sanskar: swara u want to have our own baby??
Swara(excited):yes but I have only one fear.
Sanskar: what?
Swara: what if I give birth to 8-10 babies together(worried) how we will handle them.
Sanskar: seriously Swara I don’t know from where these thoughts come in your mind.
Swara: I had seen on YouTube where one Lady gives birth to many babies.
Sanskar: nothing like this will happen don’t think rubbish.
Swara: its true not rubbish I had seen many cases.
Sanskar: okay but for now sleep.
Swara: good night.have sweet dreams of my mine.
Sanskar (smiles): good night.
They slept in each other’s warm embrace.

Next day:
Shopping mall.
Swasan came for shopping.
Swara: we will first buy something for you.
Sanskar: okay let’s go.
They went to men section.
Later, Sanskar is silently standing in front of Swara and she is selecting shirts for him.
Sanskar: Swara plzz why u r being this much choosy.plzz select fast.
Even the girl showing shirts got tired bcoz from last half an hours Swara didn’t liked one shirt also.
Swara: u keep quite I m selecting.
Finally swara liked one shirt of black colour.
Swara: Sanskar black seems to be good.
Sales girl: yes mam sir will look handsome
Swara(thinks): yes Sanskar looks hot in black but how she knows.
Swara(to girl): who are u to say my husband handsome only I can say.
Sanskar give pity look to girl bcoz he knew she said as swara selected something after long time.
Girl: no no mam u are misunderstanding. I didn’t mean that.
Swara: I know what u mean. Show me other Shirt we won’t take black.
Sanskar: ufffff not again.
Again she started selecting.And after an hour she choosed few shirts.
They came out and Sanskar said
Sanskar: today I get to know why girls take so much time for shopping.
Swara: whatever.
Then Swara went to parlour for getting few girlish things. Sanskar was busy on call.
When she came out she saw wigs handing. She took one white colour wig with boy cut.
She bought it for Sanskar.

Then they went to girls dresses showroom. Swara bought many dresses some of her choice and some of Sanskar. They buy gifts for their mom dad and friends.
Finally after hours shopping they came out loaded with hand bags.
In car:
Sanskar was about to start the car when swara said
Swara:wait wait sanskar I had bought a gift for u.I can’t wait to show u.
Sanskar: okay show.
Swara:u close your eyes.Don’t move.
Sanskar:okay.
Sanskar closes his eyes.Swara set wig on his head and put mirror in front of him.
Swara:now slowly open your eyes.
Sanskar opened his eyes and shouted
Sanskar:ahhh my hairs.
Swara burst out laughing.
Swara:stupid it’s wig.
Sanskar:it was surprise or shock??
Swara:actually I wanted to see how u will look when u will be old.so bought it.
Sanskar: u never leave a chance to do idiotic things
Swara (laughs): neverrrr
Then he removed the wig and both went from there.
To be continued…..

Precap: swasan in club and last day in Goa.

Hope so u will like it.
Many have requested me to post my betterhalf then don’t be disappointed that also most probably I will post today. And those who ask for struggle that I will post tomorrow.

Plzzz leave your comments.
Humble request to all silent readers plzzz spare your few seconds and comment.
Waiting for your feedback.
Thank you
Bye
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    91 Comments

    1. Simi on July 10, 2017 9:24 am

      Amazing update dear..
      Good news wala scene was funny ?

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 3:57 am

        Thank you dear

    2. Suma on July 10, 2017 9:25 am

      Awesome

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 3:59 am

        Thank you dear

    3. Divz on July 10, 2017 9:32 am

      hahAaa…..thiz girl is the craziest creature on the earth yaaar…… all in one piece….. Mars such a beautiful character you have given us thanks so much….. dear…. really I am In love with this Swara….. and Sanskar soooooo sweet he is calm sensible….. matured but at times act like a kid….. love it just awesome …….

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 4:03 am

        Thank you dear for your beautiful comment.

    4. Rekha on July 10, 2017 10:09 am

      Awesome as always

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 4:05 am

        Thank you dear

    5. Anjali on July 10, 2017 10:14 am

      Superb loved it

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 4:06 am

        Thank you dear

    6. Stg on July 10, 2017 10:21 am

      Super amazing ??

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 4:08 am

        Thank you dear

    7. Neptune on July 10, 2017 10:21 am

      omg that wig part was soooooooooooooooooooooo funny…. am laughing till now…..
      swara is such a cutie pie yaar…
      i loved her in this ff….
      even sanku too is really good…..
      he takes care of shona sooooooooooooooooooooooo well like his own kid…

      awesome part marsuuuu…
      post the other ffs soon dear

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 4:12 am

        Thank you so much nepuuu will post my other ffs soon

    8. reethu on July 10, 2017 10:35 am

      awesome dear.loved it

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 4:48 am

        Thank you dear

    9. Sus on July 10, 2017 10:36 am

      hahaah swara is so awesome
      and with her Sanslar also become

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 4:51 am

        Thank you dear

    10. NDSG on July 10, 2017 10:39 am

      Thank u soooooooooooo much for keeping my editing as cover pic?????????????????

      Chappy was too hilarious… I’m laughing like mad seeing jealous Sanku???????? I reminded the time when nikhil hold Swara’s hand. Mr jealous Maheshwari’s expression ??????????
      And this naughty Billo dialogue 8-10babies ?????????and I’m here thinking, how one baby can handle another baby????
      Awesome chappy????

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 4:53 am

        Thank you dear and don’t be thankful your edit is amazing.

    11. Simin on July 10, 2017 10:49 am

      Seriously these two are the craziest couple
      Love them sooooo much

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:00 am

        Thank you dear

    12. raina on July 10, 2017 10:57 am

      aww!!!! this swara is just tooooo cute and adorable..
      seriously?? giving birth to tooo many babies… i just love this cute cute swara..

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:19 am

        Thank you dear

    13. SHAN on July 10, 2017 11:09 am

      Awesome loved it

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:21 am

        Thank you shan di

    14. Kumu on July 10, 2017 11:12 am

      It was so funny..I was laughing while reading the baby and wig part????
      Love swara’s dialogues..
      Cover pic is nice ??
      Tc..

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:23 am

        Thank you dear and cover pic credit goes to ndsg dear

    15. Rosey on July 10, 2017 12:21 pm

      Wow mars just too good amazing superbbb…Swar a is so naughty and Sanskaar so loving?????????????????????????and that last seen it’s hilarious?????????????????????now post struggle please when you get time

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:26 am

        Thank you dear will post struggle today.

    16. Parul on July 10, 2017 12:26 pm

      Awesome chappy lol really it was so entertaining one mostly wig one n also i wnt 2 say about ur another ff ie beasts soulmate i couldnt cmnt it is superb lvd it

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:28 am

        Thank you dear

    17. AnuAnn on July 10, 2017 12:36 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:30 am

        Thank you dear

    18. gayathri.visu on July 10, 2017 1:00 pm

      Awesome……veryyyyyy funny!! Giving birth to sooooo many baby……only this Swara can think like this!! Jealousy Maheshwari….Awwww!!! Both sooooooo cute. And the wig part……god, Marssuuu from where did u get idea like this????? Waiting for next part dear…..

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:32 am

        Thank you dear will post next part soon. Even I don’t know from where I get these stupid ideas hihi

    19. phoniex on July 10, 2017 1:02 pm

      Haha this was funny.

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:34 am

        Thank you dear

    20. Shibil on July 10, 2017 1:31 pm

      Marsu…chappy was too gud and funny ….Sanky’s jealousy …..Omg i can’t control my laugh in gud news part ….their dialogues….loved both swasan characters ….

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:37 am

        Thank you so much dear

    21. mica on July 10, 2017 2:03 pm

      ????? i feel sorry for this shopkeeper, gooosshhhhh !!!! this Swara na is too very much, imagining Laksh will burn to ash like phoenix by sanskar’s jealous eyes, omg!!!! it will be hilarious, love it soo much Mars, and their romance, i ‘m flying to sky, huh! i should read previous part naa…

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:39 am

        Thank you so much dear and give a try to previous shots also trust me u won’t regret reading them.

    22. yamee on July 10, 2017 2:29 pm

      Fabulous…Super amazing….and very funny epi dear…i was laughing like a mad.once again I’m fallen in love with them.post next part as soon as possible.

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:41 am

        Thank you so much dear

    23. Tamil on July 10, 2017 3:34 pm

      Awesome dear loved it

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:42 am

        Thank you dear

    24. Nida on July 10, 2017 3:38 pm

      Very nice episode

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:45 am

        Thank you dear

    25. Anu Rathore on July 10, 2017 3:39 pm

      Wow awesome part.. Swara is really naughty…..

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:47 am

        Thank you dear

    26. Nagamanasa on July 10, 2017 3:42 pm

      Awesome dear…

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:48 am

        Thank you dear

    27. scooby on July 10, 2017 4:18 pm

      Funny and awesome ?

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:50 am

        Thank you dear

    28. Jenny on July 10, 2017 4:23 pm

      It is awesome Mars ???tht 8 to 10 babies wala scene was ePic and when swara set tht white wig on sanskar head I was laughingg like hell???

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:52 am

        Thank you so much dear

    29. Vidhi on July 10, 2017 4:59 pm

      Yeh super se upar wala episode tha…
      Loved it… Swara is so cute.. N sanskar uff…
      N jealous like seriously…. Sanskar should think that no one like no one can handle swara expect for sanskar… Hehe…
      Update soon dear ❤❤❤❤❤
      N Ha.. That pregnancy wala part ???? n people have 10 babies at a time… ???

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:54 am

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon

    30. AbrahamEzra on July 10, 2017 5:12 pm

      It was so funny. I totally enjoyed it.

      Swara can’t never change yaar even after getting graduated her brain is still of baby. She is so so cute.
      Plss post next part soon.

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:56 am

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon

    31. pnap on July 10, 2017 5:29 pm

      its really tooooooo funny

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 5:59 am

        Thank you dear

    32. independent on July 10, 2017 5:32 pm

      OMG that was just hilarious and that good news part oh god I was laughing like mad she is really a kid nice dear

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 6:37 am

        Thank you so much dear

    33. anu on July 10, 2017 5:57 pm

      awesome loved it update next part soon…

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 6:40 am

        Thank you dear will post next part soon

    34. Priya on July 10, 2017 6:07 pm

      Awesome dear I loved it

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 6:41 am

        Thank you dear

    35. Kanha on July 10, 2017 6:50 pm

      OMG!!!!! It was really a funny episode yaar. Swasan really make a cute jodi???Main zindagi mein ek baar iss Naughty kiddo se milna chaahungi. For some tips you know???? Khud toh bacchhi hai lekin use apne bacchhon ki padi hai???? Pata nahi good news ke baad Sanskar apne kiddo family ko kaise sambhaalega???????? Anyways Thanks siso for one more memorable part. Waiting for the next. Loveeee yoooooouuuuuuuu???????

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 6:43 am

        Thank you so much sisooo will post soon love uuu

    36. sammykapoor on July 10, 2017 7:20 pm

      superb

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 6:45 am

        Thank you dear

    37. Romaisa on July 10, 2017 7:33 pm

      Wow loved it

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 6:46 am

        Thank you dear

    38. Darlzz002 on July 10, 2017 8:59 pm

      Awesome as usual….
      Thz Swara z really cute…
      Lovely update di

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 6:47 am

        Thank you so much dear

    39. kojagorimalik on July 10, 2017 9:04 pm

      I m too biased towards your this story mars…..swara reminds so much of me and my sisters…we love doing pranks annoying everyone……
      Bichara sanskar ………..kitna jhelta hai

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 6:49 am

        Thank you so much dear

    40. sneha on July 10, 2017 9:47 pm

      Excellent one. Swara is really a kid

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 6:50 am

        Thank you so much dear

    41. SNY on July 10, 2017 10:12 pm

      awesome

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 6:53 am

        Thank you dear

    42. vyshu10 on July 10, 2017 11:47 pm

      ??? superb

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 6:55 am

        Thank you dear

    43. Febi on July 10, 2017 11:59 pm

      Awesome dear……. Just loved it

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 6:56 am

        Thank you dear

    44. Prashasti7 on July 11, 2017 3:07 pm

      Heeheee she is soo crazy ?????
      Awsm chappy

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:16 am

        Thank you dear

    45. Jessicauio on July 11, 2017 4:36 pm

      Awsmmmm

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:17 am

        Thank you dear

    46. kat on July 17, 2017 2:49 pm

      amazing??

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