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Home»Fan Fiction»Naughty billo (swasan ff) shot 22 by mars Golden Night
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Naughty billo (swasan ff) shot 22 by mars Golden Night

MarsBy MarsJuly 2, 2017137 Comments10 Mins Read
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Hiii guys!!! I m back with next shot. Thank you for your super se upar vala response. Here comes the most awaited part.I had tried my best to make it romantic.Hope so I will be able to fulfill your expectations.
*Finger crossed*
Let’s begin

NAUGHTY BILLO(swasan ff)
SHOT 22—-GOLDEN NIGHT
Morning:
Sanskar opened his eyes only to see swara lying close to his chest.He checked her forehead.She seems to be fine now.Feeling moment swara also got up.She looked at sanskar and smiles.
Sanskar: good morning.
Swara: morning (hug him)
Sanskar: how r u feeling now?
Swara: fresh.
Sanskar: okay then its good.
Swara: where we will go today.

Sanskar: no where.
Swara(pout): why?
Sanskar: today we will take rest and u also recover then we will go tomorrow.
Swara: okay.
Later they had their breakfast after fresh up.

Afternoon:
Swasan are sitting on the bed. Sanskar is checking mails on laptop and Swara is sitting beside him reading newspaper.
Swara was giggling reading something. Sanskar looked at her and asked.
Sanskar: what makes u laugh swara.
Swara: see a very funny news is there.
A lady had beaten her husband in the street.
Sanskar: really??? But why?

Swara: he must not be listening to her.
Sanskar: ok
Swara: be careful Sanskar. Now a days girl power is in full swing.
Sanskar: it means u will also beat me.
Swara: possible if u will not listen to me.
Sanskar keep the laptop aside and tickles her.
Sanskar: tell me now
Swara:(laughs): Sanskar stop plzz I was kidding.

Sanskar: asha
Swara: yes
Then only Swara’s phone rings.Sanskar moved back.Swara picked the call and said
Swara: hiii ma how are u?
Shomi: I m fine u tell.
Swara: ma wait i m not able to listen your voice will go out.
Swara went to balcony and sanskar got busy in laptop.
Balcony:
Swara: yes now say ma
Shomi: I disturbed u and Sanskar??

Swara: no no we will playing and tickling each other.(laughs)
Shomi (signed): Swara u are still that childish. When u r going to give good news.
Swara(bite her nails): we had not done anything till now mumma.
Shomi: what swara its two years of your marriage and then what are u doing there.
Swara(excited): here we are enjoying alot we went out and saw different places.
Shomi: Swara listen carefully.
Swara: yes

Shomi: every man needs a wife who is mature and sensible not childish like u.
Swara (pout): but sanskar loves me.
Shomi:I know beta but only love is not important in relation other things also matter.
Swara: means.
Shomi: try to make him happy.Be completely his. Don’t do small mistakes which will stake your relation at last.
Swara: but he never asked me for anything.
Shomi: bcoz he is nice but its your responsibility to fulfil what he wants.
Swara(tensed): what should I do.
Shomi: give him surprise.
Swara: he will like it?

Shomi: Ofcouse he will
Swara: okay then today only I will surprise him.Then will tell u.
Shomi: okay and all the best.
Swara: thanks and bye.
Swara cut the call and remember how Sanskar give her space and never force her.she smiles and thinks how to surprise him.
She came inside and saw Sanskar on bed.She went and side hug him.
Sanskar: what happened?

Swara: Sanskar u will never leave me?
Sanskar: why are u asking this. And how can I leave u?
Swara: I love u.
Sanskar (kiss her head): love u too.
Then they spend some time with each other.

Evening:
Swara went down to meet staff member and ask them to decorate the room till night.Sanskar was in washroom so taking it as chance she went and explained everything.
Then she returned back and saw Sanskar looking at her interrogatedly .
Swara: wo I went to see hotel.
Sanskar:okay
Swara: sanskar let’s go out for a walk.

Sanskar: now?
Swara: yes evening walk.
Sanskar: ok .
Swasan went out for walk .Swara intentionally take more time till she got message from the member that it is completed.

Night (8pm)
Swasan came back inside the hotel when swara said
Swara: Sanskar u go and bring dinner.
Sanskar(confused): we will order from room.
Swara:no today u go and personally bring it.
Sanskar: but why?
Swara; bcoz I m saying plzzz
Sanskar(sign): okay
Swara: I m going to room.
Swara went to her room quickly and change her dress.

After 30 mins:
Sanskar opened the door and got surprised to see the whole room decorated. He entered inside, keep the food on table and looked around.
But swara was no where.Before he call her he felt two soft hands covering his eyes.He put his hand on hands on eyes and smiles as he very well know who the person is.
He turned only to see swara grinning and shouting
Swara: sanskar surprise.
Sanskar looked at her from top to bottom.She is wearing pure black saree with shinning black border. Her long hairs lying on her shoulders.She has pinned saree’s pallu at the shoulder displaying her waist.Sanskar thought is it true or just his dream while swara thought he didn’t like the surprise that’s why didn’t said anything.
Swara(disappointed)u didn’t liked it.
Sanskar came back to senses realizing that its reality.
Sanskar : no no swara I loved it.
Swara(happy): really??

Sanskar nodded.
Swara (hugged him): thank you.
Swara moved little back and show him her saree
Swara: Sanskar how I m looking.
Sanskar went closer and pull her wrapping his hands around her waist.
Sanskar: very beautiful.so u did all this?
Swara: no staff people did I just told them(giggles)
Sanskar: so idea was yours?
Swara: no it was of mumma.
Sanskar: then what u did?

Swara: I wore saree myself properly for the first time.
Sanskar: that’s why I was thinking who can wear saree like this.
Swara blushes.
Sanskar(lean and whisper in her ear): thanks for the surprise.
Swara: welcome.
Sanskar caress her waist looking deep inside her eyes then only swara said
Swara: let’s have dinner first.
Sanskar: okay.
Then both settle on chairs and Sanskar serve both of them.
Swara: today I will feed u with my hands.
Sanskar: ohh this much love all of sudden.
Swara: its always there.
Sanskar chuckles.

After dinner, swara is standing near the window fidgeting her fingers.Then only sanskar back hug her.Swara looked at him and smiles.
Sanskar removes her hairs aside displaying her bare back as she was wearing backless blouse. Sanskar lean and soon his lips touch her back. Swara clutched her saree. Unable to bear it she turns and hug him.
Sanskar smiles and tighten the hug.
Sanskar(whispers): swara u r ok?

Swara: hmm
Sanskar break the hug and said
Sanskar: so r u ready to do that jisse babies hote hai(with what babies are born)
Swara remembered how she said him this in garden. She blushes and sanskar chuckles.
Sanskar: so…
Swara slightly nodded.
Sanskar: ohh god Swara I never knew u can blush this much.
Swara: why?? I can also blush.

Sanskar(kiss her cheek): and I love your pink cheeks.
Swara was looking down. Sanskar placed his lips on her and softly kisses her.He broke the kiss after few seconds annoying Swara.Sanskar seeing him irritated said
Sanskar: this was just trailer tonight I will show u full movie.
Swara instantly put her hands on her heated cheeks.Sanskar laughed seeing her expressions.
Sanskar picked her in his arms and she wrap her hands around his neck.

Sanskar place her gently on bed not breaking the intense eye lock. He came on her top and kissed her eyes.Then all over again kissed on her lips.Both kisses each other passionately. Breaking the kiss, Sanskar buried his face in her neck and started giving wet kisses. Swara has tightly closed her eyes and was pulling him closer. Sanskar got irritated as Swara’s saree was disturbing him.He looked up and swara opened her eyes feeling loss of his touch.Sanskar was about to unpin her saree pallu when Swara said
Swara(pleading): Sanskar plzz don’t open my saree. I had tried it with great difficulty.
Sanskar looked at her like seriously.
Sanskar: but swara…

Swara: plzz u do without opening it.
Sanskar lean and kiss her earlobe and whispers
Sanskar:(huskily) I have to remove it plzz
Swara got lost in his touch And
Swara(whispers): okay.
Sanskar unpin her saree and letting the pallu to fall down.He kisses her shoulder moving down. He opened the knot of her blouse loosening it.Swara is blushing profusely. Sanskar got up and removed his shirt and came her top.
Swara put her palms on her eyes.

Sanskar: u won’t look at me.I m same hot and handsome what u say.
Swara: I m feeling shy.
Sanskar took her hand and rub on his chest.Soon he discarded their clothes and started loving her.Tears make their way through swara’s cheeks.Sanskar seeing her tears said
Sanskar: may I stop swara?
Swara shook her in no.Sanskar kisses her teary eyes. She hugged him tightly.
Sanskar was very gentle not harming her as he knew its new for her.
After getting all exhausted sanskar took her in his embrace and whispers

Sanskar: swara u are best thing that I got in my life.
Swara’s eyes were closed due to tirednesd but still she said
Swara: I love u Sanskar.(kiss his bare chest)
Sanskar: love u till infinity.
Soon sleep took over them.
Finally after two years of their marriage they completely become one.

Morning:
Swasan are sleeping hugging each other.Swara opened her eyes as sun rays strike her face.Sanskar didn’t felt them as he had buried his face in the crook of her neck.
Swara felt pain in her body.She lovingly stared sanskar and blushes remembering last night. Sanskar also opened his eyes and saw swara staring him. Swara smiles looking at him.
Sanskar pull her closer and asked.
Sanskar: so Mrs maheshwari how r u feeling?
Swara(make faces): weird.

Sanskar( laughs): ok
Swara: Sanskar
Sanskar: hmm
Swara; I m feeling pain in my body.
Sanskar(kiss her forehead): its your first time that’s why.
Swara: u r also feeling?
Sanskar: no

Swara(shocked): it means it was not your first time.
Sanskar: shut up. I m strong and u r weak by eating chocolates and fast food.
Swara(annoyed): I m not weak.btw I will be able to run na?
Sanskar: hmm don’t worry take some more rest then u can run, jump whatever u want to do.
Swara: pakka.
Sanskar: hmm.
Swara: when we will do it again?

Sanskar: if u want I can do now only.
Swara(instantly): no let me recover from first one.
Sanskar(chuckles): okay.
Sanskar hugged him and said.
Sanskar: sleep for some more time.
Swara bury her face in his chest avoiding Sunrays and slept.

To be continued….

Precap: swasan roaming in goa and Sanskar jealous.

Finally done with this part.I had tried to give my best.
Plzz leave your comments and let me know whether u liked it or not.
Silent readers plzzz at least now leave your feedback.

U can follow me on wattpad
My id is mars_111

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Bye
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    137 Comments

    1. Kashu on July 2, 2017 12:23 pm

      It was awesome..Beautifully written..
      Post next part soon!!

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 6:08 pm

        Thank you dear

    2. Mannu on July 2, 2017 12:25 pm

      Awesome umaaah??????? love you bahut sara

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:03 pm

        Thank you dear and love u too

    3. Rekha on July 2, 2017 12:36 pm

      Ahem Ahem…… Amazing…….??

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:04 pm

        Thank you dear

    4. Nidhi on July 2, 2017 12:42 pm

      ???? really Swara is so innocent

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:08 pm

        Thank you dear

    5. Rosey on July 2, 2017 12:47 pm

      wow so sweet and hot romance i just loved it yaar just superbbbbbbbbbbbb
      awwww i am feeling shy….

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:10 pm

        Thank you dear and even I was blushing while writing it.hihihi

    6. sonam on July 2, 2017 12:59 pm

      post next part soon plzzzz

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:11 pm

        Thank you dear And I will post next part soon

    7. Neptune on July 2, 2017 1:15 pm

      awww i am blushing i am blushing, i can’t speak anything i was just lost in my SWASAN….
      it was really cute romance…..
      lovely epi…
      i loved sanskaar’s care for swara soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much……

      post the next one soon plesae can’t wait for sanskaar’s jealousy…….

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:12 pm

        Thank you nepu even I was blushing and I will post next part soon

    8. sumayyah on July 2, 2017 1:20 pm

      Marsuuu!!!!!
      finally my cute friend become besharam too hihihi so sweet &hot
      loved it
      come soon
      tc

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:14 pm

        Thank you sumuu tuje nahi pta I had written this shot by closing my eyes.
        I m innocent. Hihihi.
        I will post next part soon

    9. Kakali on July 2, 2017 1:26 pm

      I duno why I got tears reading this! I miss SwaSan soo much!
      Beautiful part dear! Loved it! Continue soon! Thnk u.. ;-*

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:16 pm

        Thank you dear and even I miss swasan alot. Love them. Will post next part soon

    10. Niharika on July 2, 2017 1:35 pm

      Sooooooo cute romance. I never thought that romance can also be cute. But u proved it. And I love swasan in ur ff.

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:17 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    11. Divz on July 2, 2017 2:01 pm

      haha……swara will never change…. awesome epi…… how cute she is godd…. Sanskar is so caring….. love it…..

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:18 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    12. Xavantikax on July 2, 2017 2:06 pm

      It was sooooo awesome dear ? no words to describe. Loved seeing Swara childish behaviour ??? you were too good with this chapter ? continue soon
      Take care
      Thank you

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:20 pm

        Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon

    13. Tapasya on July 2, 2017 2:15 pm

      Choti si bacchi ko kya kya padna padtha hai ???

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:22 pm

        Thank you dear and sorry for over romance I should have given warning.
        Next time will be careful.

    14. NDSG on July 2, 2017 2:26 pm

      ??????????????? kiddo Shona bhi mature ho gai… It was so beautiful written. ????

      Love the part when Sanskar was very gentle for hus kiddo wife. This is what we called love…?????????? but morning part I like when Sanskar asked her to take rest… Aur kya bolu.???? mujeh yeh bahut acha laga ?????????

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:23 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    15. sammykapoor on July 2, 2017 2:32 pm

      awesome…………….cute………….dear

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:26 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    16. Jessica on July 2, 2017 2:55 pm

      Awsmmmm I loved all ur stories and one request plz post struggle soon I’m impatient ly waiting for it

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:29 pm

        Thank you so much dear and I will post struggle soon.sorry for the delay actually I really need to think about further story.

    17. SANS_SANSKRITI on July 2, 2017 3:17 pm

      Haayeeee….. ???????????? yrr why we all are here in swasan’ s room n watching them ??????? so nice update.. .. I JUST say HOTTTTT????

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:30 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    18. subham on July 2, 2017 3:18 pm

      sweet & hot

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:31 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    19. ritu on July 2, 2017 3:26 pm

      Haha…loved it so much

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:33 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    20. Suma on July 2, 2017 3:28 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:34 pm

        Thank you dear

    21. Rachna on July 2, 2017 3:37 pm

      Awsm Dr… Update soon next part

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:36 pm

        Thank you so much dear and I will post my next part soon.

    22. Chaitu on July 2, 2017 3:47 pm

      Cute and caring sanskar kiddo swara loved the part

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:37 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    23. Kumu on July 2, 2017 3:58 pm

      Awesome..loved it??
      Tc..

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:39 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    24. AbrahamEzra on July 2, 2017 4:01 pm

      A www so romantic. U had wrote it so amazingly. Finally they took their marriage to the next level. Eagerly waiting for sanskars jealousy part. Post soon

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:40 pm

        Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon

    25. SHAN on July 2, 2017 4:09 pm

      Awesome dr…. Loved it

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:43 pm

        Thank you so much shan di

    26. Priya on July 2, 2017 4:29 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:45 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    27. Ashwini on July 2, 2017 4:33 pm

      Much awaited part it’s Awesome yrr.. Beautiful golden SwaSan night ??? u write very ll only pure cute normal but magical love story of our SwaSan ❤❤
      Plzzzz post next part soon…

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 7:47 pm

        Thank you so much dear and i will post next part soon

    28. Romaisa on July 2, 2017 4:39 pm

      Wow loved it

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 8:00 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    29. Soujanya on July 2, 2017 5:04 pm

      Awesome…

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 8:02 pm

        Thank you dear

    30. Tamil on July 2, 2017 5:05 pm

      It’s really amazing dear ?????????loved it

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 8:04 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    31. pnap on July 2, 2017 5:10 pm

      it’s really tooooooooooooo awesome

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 8:06 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    32. pnap on July 2, 2017 5:11 pm

      it’s really toooooooooo awesome

    33. pnap on July 2, 2017 5:11 pm

      it’s really awesome

    34. Kanha on July 2, 2017 5:11 pm

      Swara is too much innocent yaar. Loved the part soo much. Waiting for jealousy track. Awesome sisoo. Love you sooooo muchhhhh 🙂

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 8:21 pm

        Thank you so much sisso will post next part soon loved u too

    35. ankita Gaude on July 2, 2017 5:59 pm

      I love this swara yaar pata nahi pregnant hoke kaya karegi haaha lol

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 8:25 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    36. Rockleon on July 2, 2017 6:14 pm

      Soooo.beautifully written !!!
      Sooo amazing!!!!

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 8:27 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    37. Kat on July 2, 2017 6:32 pm

      Amazing

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 8:29 pm

        Thank you dear

    38. Arshaanya on July 2, 2017 6:43 pm

      Much awaited chappy ?
      Loved it

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 8:31 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    39. Febi on July 2, 2017 6:59 pm

      Awesome and excellent dear

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 8:36 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    40. Simi on July 2, 2017 7:34 pm

      Beautiful update ????
      Sanskar’s care n Swara’s innocence ??

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 8:38 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    41. kojagorimalik on July 2, 2017 7:42 pm

      The awaited part swasan consummation..
      Yipeeee……
      Loved it….
      I was literally blushing

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 8:41 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    42. raina on July 2, 2017 8:11 pm

      yyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
      i am so so so so so so sooooooooooooooooooooooo happy!!!!!!!!!!!!
      wonderful epi..
      precap.. Sanskar jealous.. awwwww!!!!!!!!!! i can’t wait for it

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 3:39 am

        Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon

    43. scooby on July 2, 2017 8:12 pm

      Awesome mars?? romantic ?

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 3:44 am

        Thanks you so much dear

    44. mumpi on July 2, 2017 8:20 pm

      i loved it.

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 3:48 am

        Thank you dear

    45. Harshita on July 2, 2017 8:35 pm

      Sooooo gooooooooooooddddddd
      Maaaaarrrrrrrrsssssssuuuuuuuuu

      Loved it….

      Update next very very soon

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 3:49 am

        Thank you harshu I will post next part soon

    46. Areeba Moin on July 2, 2017 9:08 pm

      its really very hot dear…????????????

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 3:51 am

        Thank you so much dear

    47. AnuAnn on July 2, 2017 9:24 pm

      loved it dear… Innocent swara and caring sanskar

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 3:53 am

        Thank you so much dear

    48. Vidhi on July 2, 2017 9:24 pm

      Marshu…. Loved the episode…
      So hot ? OMG….
      N that convo.. Swara said that it was not ur first time… ???? o god…
      Sanskar jealous… Waiting ❤❤
      Update soon

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 3:55 am

        Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon

    49. sneha on July 2, 2017 9:43 pm

      Awesome one . Swara is really childish. Waiting for the sankar jealousy part

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 3:57 am

        Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon

    50. pnap on July 2, 2017 9:45 pm

      awesome

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 3:58 am

        Thank you dear

    51. mars fan on July 2, 2017 9:54 pm

      brilliant

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 3:59 am

        Thank you dear

    52. SNY on July 2, 2017 10:09 pm

      amazing ????????

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 4:01 am

        Thank you dear

    53. Stg on July 2, 2017 10:40 pm

      Awesome ??

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 4:03 am

        Thank you dear

    54. Pramudi on July 2, 2017 10:45 pm

      Aww.. So romantic.. ?

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 4:04 am

        Thank you dear

    55. abhilasha on July 2, 2017 11:04 pm

      O god …yr u have make me crazy for this ff…..loved it???

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 4:07 am

        Thank you dear

    56. Ricky on July 2, 2017 11:25 pm

      Awesome update totally loved it

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 4:08 am

        Thank you dear

    57. Ani on July 2, 2017 11:29 pm

      Really good

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 4:09 am

        Thank you dear

    58. Milestone on July 3, 2017 12:40 am

      Nice……

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 4:10 am

        Thank you dear

    59. Nagamanasa on July 3, 2017 6:13 am

      Awesome Chappy dear…

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 7:58 am

        Thank you dear

    60. yamee on July 3, 2017 8:46 am

      Awesome epi dear… Loved it so much.eagerly waiting for next part post soon.

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 9:13 am

        Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon

    61. Anjali on July 3, 2017 9:49 am

      Superb just loved it

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 10:50 am

        Thank you dear

    62. gayathri.visu on July 3, 2017 10:44 am

      Firstly I m very sorry Marssuuu….for not commenting on other ffs. I m not well dear. After 4-5days now only I m opening TU page. I m sooooo sorry dear.

      Amazing dear…Different romantic part, hot n bit funny romance! Loved it dear….

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 11:38 am

        Thank you so much dear and don’t be sorry its OK.
        Get well soon.May god bless you.

    63. anu on July 3, 2017 6:23 pm

      awesome

      • Mars on July 3, 2017 6:55 pm

        Thank you dear

    64. Ridziee on July 3, 2017 10:09 pm

      Hey Mars…was browsing through the page and came across this chapter and I was like how can I miss this superb ff❤❤…haven’t read previous parts but will surely read it when will get time. Coming to this part you just nailed it dear?? but want more swasan romance?

      • Mars on July 4, 2017 3:39 am

        Thank you so much dear I m glad u liked it.

    65. Shibil on July 3, 2017 11:46 pm

      Mars ….i read ur this ff in one go ..nd blaming myself how i missed ur story these many days ….both swasan character are different and i loved it ..while reading i couldn’t control my laugh..And really u had a special skill in writing ..do continue ….
      About today’s epi its lovely …..cute swasan moments & their conversation …..waiting for sanskar jealousy ….

      • Mars on July 4, 2017 3:45 am

        Thank you so much dear I will post next part soon

    66. swaragini on July 4, 2017 1:40 am

      she is such a kid…(even i m a kid)…haha nice part loved it

      • Mars on July 4, 2017 3:46 am

        Thank you so much dear

    67. veena on July 4, 2017 6:03 am

      after long time i’m back to tu☺have to read so many ffs…but i first read this..must say such an amazing n cute ff?loved it…will read other works also☺

      • Mars on July 4, 2017 8:22 am

        Thank you so much dear

    68. Nisha on July 4, 2017 11:06 am

      Hiiiii… Sorry for the late comment.. :).. Just read the update.. ❤️❤️.. It was beautiful.. Loved how you wrote that Swara planned surprise for Sanskaar and then made him happy.. ??.. She loves him too much and can actually do anything for him.. Too much love was there in the episode.. Their romance was written very subtly and cutely.. You can feel the cute Shona there as well.. ???.. Hehehehe.. Loveddd them too much.. Finally they moved ahead in their relationship.. Her questions is the end we’re so innocent.. Hahahaha.. ❤️❤️❤️.. Loving them.. Waiting for the next one..

      • Mars on July 4, 2017 12:07 pm

        Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. Don’t be sorry its ok.
        I will post next part soon

    69. Prashasti7 on July 4, 2017 3:01 pm

      Marssssss u r awsm I fly loved it………our swara is sooooo cute na n m very exited for next part love u

      • Mars on July 4, 2017 4:56 pm

        Thank you dear and will post soon love u too

    70. mica on July 11, 2017 9:29 am

      waaaaa…… soo beautiful written of first night, but still i can’t syop laughing, how can Swara asked him not to unpin her sareee 😀 😀 , god Swara!!!! you didn’t left your childish even for “something ” like this, and sanskar, just soooooooooooooooooooooo mature, he knows to handle this unique piece.

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