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Namkaran- AvNeil (just enjoy it) Chapter-11

Chinki riya avni were sitting and chatting-

Chinki- Wow avni u just rocked n when u entered the stage wearing the bright golden gown u were looking like an angel

Riya- Yes n u answered every question with such confident I am sure judges r impressed

Avni- C’mon guys u three r praising me from yesterday first let me go further. (Thinks what will I do I am not getting time only to see about Sarla maa’s matter)

Ali- U 3 r gossiping here n there that boy is impressing daya ji

Riya- Ali the reason behind this is u only

Chinki- Leave all this c’mon let’s go n see how riyas so called fiance looks like

Many people have gathered there, there r dayawanti n a boy taking blessings from her , avni chinki- ali were trying to see the face n after sometime that did see the face n both avni n chinki- were shocked the boy was non other then Neil

Avni- (shocked) This boy

Ali/riya-U know him?

Chinki- Of course he is the boy whom avni

Avni-Riya who is that person (points towards raj)

Riya- That person my so call father-in-law

Avni starts laughing like mad

Ali- What happened to avni

Chinki- I think she became mad seeing this boy as riyas fiance

Avni- No chinki I am not mad but this father-son jodi will surely be

Chinki- What do u mean

Avni-U remember he is the same man who took so much money from me for only a single scratch in his car’s headlight n that Master too pointed gun at me because of this person

Chinki- Yes So

Avni- So .. So I will now take my revenge first I had only one reason to break this marriage but now I have two

Ali- What r those two

Avni-No.1- for ali- riya to get married
No.2- He will loose a lots of money

Riya- OK so what first

A waiter was carrying curry but by mistake d curry fell all over avni’s dress

Avni- O god what d hell

Waiter-Sorry sorry ma’am I am really very sorry

Avni- What sorry

Waiter-Ma’am pls forgive me I did not do it intentionally

Avni- Its OK u leave… I will just change an come…

Kachara Bhai-U said that the girl is in Mumbai from so many days we r searching her but not getting only

Goonn1-Boss Mumbai is such a big city n u don’t know anything about her so it will surely take time

Kachara bhai-Shut up.. Searching her is not the problem staying in this hotel is problem what u said this hotel is cheap really u all find this hotel cheap cost of water also in this hotel is so high

Goon2-Sorry boss but we also sometimes feel to stay in good hotel n boss its OK we can go from here

Kachara bhai-No I won’t go n if it was only about me then it was OK but u fools not of any use only eating 24 hours because of u all so long bill is been made

He suddenly hits someone

Kachara-Sorry

Avni- What sorry all the people today they got me only or what someone throwing curry someone pushing

Kachara-(thinks-I think I know this girl)

Avni- (thinks-why I feel like I know him)

Kachara-This girl the fraud girl… Catch her idiots

Avni- Oh shit

Avni runs the goons follows her

Kachara-Wait wait u fraud I won’t spare u from the time people got to know a single girl fooled me my name in the market has drown .. I will kill u

Avni- Oh god! I don’t think he is in a mood to listen any explanations

She continue running n they chasing.. She suddenly sees an open door she goes inside the room but forgets to close d door

Avni- Oh god! chinki was right he reached Mumbai searching me

Kachara-Where is that girl.. I am damm sure she is in a room of this floor only

Goon3-Boss this door is open

Avni gets shocked she tries to get under the bed

Avni- Is this a bed no place only to get inside..

She then hides inside the cupboard…

Goon1-But boss I don’t think that the girl will go inside n leave the door open let’s search somewhere else

Suddenly a boy comes out of d washroom it was Neil he had worn clothes but in upper part he hadn’t… He opens the cupboard

Avni- Aaaahhhhhhhh!!

Neil- U .. What r u doing here .. U r d same hospital girl right.. What is ur problem miss

Avni- What my problem! just listen u Mr. dustbin I don’t have any interest coming here n what do u think of urself that u r very handsome, charming, big Bollywood celebrity, girls r made behind u that they will follow u specially me .. U think I will follow u .. keep dreaming Mr. dustbin

Neil- Really

Avni- (Avni nodded yes with attitude)

Neil- (Shouts)Then what r u doing in my room that too inside the cupboard..

Avni- Because of kachara…….Listen u Mr. Dustbin if I knew earlier that this room belong to u then I hadn’t even stepped in this room got it n…
Suddenly she slips n falls on the bed along with Neil.
Both share an eylock (Dil diyan gallan- TZH plays)

Shewta-Tillu r u ready many more guest r there whom u need to meet… (Shocked) What d hell is happening tillu what r u doing..

Avni-Tillu??

Neil-Mom … (Shouts at avni) Will u please get up

Avni- (thinks -This is a very good chance to break there marriage).. Why tilli before ur mother came u were so happy lying in d bed with me n now u r behaving this way why tilli

Neil-(confused…thinks-why I feel like again she will do some drama)

Shewta-Oye does he look like girl its tillu OK n only I call him with that name who r u

Avni- U call him tillu but not me for me its tilli .. Right jaanu (winks at Neil)

Neil starts coughing….

Shewta-Oye what drama is going on here tillu what u r coughing answer me what is she saying

Neil-Mom I don’t know from where she came n.. O miss what is ur problem miss why ur always behind me

Avni- I am behind u why r u lying tilli u were the one who proposed me n said on d marriage night I will escape with u

Shewta-What!!! Tillu what is she saying

Neil- Hello! When did I say all this to u

Avni- Baby u forgot try to recall that purnimaa night when snake bit u n I took out d poison then u promised me that u will marry only me n no one else .. Try to recall baby pls

Shewta-Tillu is she saying truth .. Why r u silent tillu say something..

Avni- Baby say no that u n I r lovers baby pls say

Shewta-Tillu say its all lie .. Tillu

Avni- Baby say its all true n u

Neil- (shouts) enough… He goes n brings his gun points towards avni

Avni gets shocked..

Avni- (frightened) Are.. Are u a don

Neil- ACP Neil Khanna

Avni- (frightened) What!! I mean Wow
Avni starts coughing..

Neil- What happen aren’t u happy

Avni- Why should I be happy

Neil- Whenever I meet u something or d other happens with me sometime coffee falls on my face other time someone comes n congratulates me on having a goddess wife etc etc n all this happens because of u

Avni- (think- why people say that overacting is dangerous for health I got to know today.. Earlier if I knew that he is ACP I would have thought of some other way) MUMMY

Shewta-Wow. From baby u went to mummy.. Impressive

Avni-No no .. I m not baby only I was just remembering the mummy.. Italy one..

Neil- So what were u saying

Ali- Avni

Precap-Avni goes to Sarla n gets shocked….

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