Fan Fiction

na jaana dil se door pt 46

Hey guys this is sobia back with part 46…I read everyone’s comments on the last one I posted with the poll and voting and I agree with all of you I have decided to post one today for the people who actually remembered me and especially my cutie yashuuu!!!! Wishing you a very happy early birthday!!! When is your birthday yashu!??? I will need to remember to post that day now let’s begin
THIS IS THE LINK FOR PREVIOUS PART IF ANYONE FORGOT HOW THE STORY ENDED LOL
https://www.tellyupdates.com/na-jaana-dil-se-door-pt-45/

Recap: 3 years leap….raglak seemed unhappy and sarya are shown tied against a pole for 3 years….aayhira hate their siblings for what they did….raglak had a fight regarding ragya and aayush….things are falling apart….
AGES FOR THE CHARACTERS AFTER 3 YEARS LEAP (if you forgot)
RAGYA: 17 YEARS OLD
SAMAR: 15 YEARS OLD
ARYAN: 18 YEARS OLD
AAYUSH: 6 YEARS OLD
MAHI: 10 YEARS OLD
RAINA: 9 YEARS OLD
YES THEY ARE VERY BIG KIDS NOW
AT MM

Swautt told ragini the flashback that happened 3 years ago when sarya decided to not listen to their parents and leave them….ragini was hell-shocked that she wasn’t the only one upset about ragya…in her grief she totally forgot about laksh and aayush….swara tells ragini that she wants her old bhai back and ragini promises to bring the old laksh back….she wipes her tears and runs to her room looking for laksh…..

@raglak room
Ragini rushes into the room shouting laksh! Laksh! Where are you? She is crying so much and looks for him everywhere…..she looks for him in the washroom….she doesn’t find him there…she runs to her room’s balcony and looks for him there but she has no clue…..she thinks what if laksh left? She cries and realizes something….she runs to her room and opens her cupboard….she is shocked seeing inside the cupboard…..she stands there shocked…..she shouts swara! Uttara! Sanskar! Sahil! Come here…..all of them hear ragini’s voice and rush to raglak’s room
Sanskar: di kya huwa? Why are you crying so much and screaming our names?? Sahil says di what’s wrong….ragini rushes to swara and holds her hand and drags her in front of the cupboard….swara gestures through her eyes like what’s wrong? Ragini slowly points to the cupboard….swara follows ragini’s hand and her eyes pop out seeing the cupboard….everyone else looks in that direction and are shell-shocked…..sanskar says blood!!!? The camera rolls and it shows blood all over the cupboard….sahil look around the room when he spots broken glass pieces near the dresser…..he says bhai…sanskar looks at sahil and he follows sahil’s eyes….
Sanskar says glass pieces….swara runs to the dresser and says it means bhai….bhai tried…..uttara says bhai tried hurting himself…ragini cups her mouth and says lakshhh……ragini looks back in the cupboard when she sees no clothes of laksh and aayush….she says sanskar where are laksh and aayush’s clothes? Sanskar says it must be in there….they look but don’t find it when uttara spots a note near the nightstand….she walks to it and takes it…..swara says uttara what is it? She says di it’s a note….ragini hearing note rushes to swautt and takes the note and reads it…..
It says…

I know you all will think I am stupid for doing this but I had to….swara and chutki I know I shouldn’t have run away from home but I had to….it was getting harder for me to live under one roof with ragini….(when ragini hears this…she is shocked) I thought I will give some time to ragini, but she was just too stubborn….each day was a new day for me and I would hope that one day…one day ragini will come to me and say laksh, I am sorry for my behavior in the past 3 years but I know how much you waited for me….every day I would hope for this from ragini’s mouth but she never did that…..she was too engrossed in ragya and all she could see was ragya…..(ragini feels so bad for hurting laksh this much) ragini if you are also reading this then get one thing straight….I loved you a lot but you pushed yourself away from me…..this is why I have decided to leave with aayush….you can keep thinking about ragya….the girl who never cared about us and very soon I will send the divorce papers…..(ragini breaks down and she cries a lot) everyone else is shocked……..
Swara says bhabhi see….I told you that one day you will lose everyone and this is exactly what happened…..now what bhabhi? How will I get my bhai back? Sanskar says di I support swara today….because of you laksh left home with aayush….now you will go and get him….ragini is just blank and lifeless….the camera rolls in circles and ragini is just still….she wipes her tears and quickly gets up and says I will bring my laksh back…..she runs out and leaves to find her husband and baby……swasansahutt are just crying at their home……
SCREEN SHIFTS TO A GO-DOWN

Sarya are shown tied against poles and unconscious…..after a few minutes Samar gains conscious….he looks around and says di! Bhaiyya!! Slowly ragya and aryan wake up and see where they are at….samar cries and says bhaiyya we are still here….aryan and ragya look around….suddenly they see a shadow coming towards them….ragya says samar/aryan bhaiyya look someone is coming….we can get help from them….sarya look very focused at the coming shadow….sarya see the person and are shocked….samar says kabir uncle? Ragya says uncle it’s good you came…please save us….I don’t know who brought us here but please…..aryan cries and says yes uncle please save us….kabir laughs and says awww sarya….what do you three think? That I have come here to save you? He laughs evilly while sarya look on confused…..kabir says I came here to finish my papa’s and I revenge…..
Sarya look on shocked….after sometime samrat enters….he says yes beta kabir is saying right….what did you three think? We love you…we care for you? No we don’t….we hatched this plan to get our revenge….sarya look on shell-shocked….samar says what are you trying to say? Kabir and samrat stop laughing and kabir says I’ll tell you….kabir tells sarya how sansahrag’s dad was responsible for them losing a really big deal 20 years ago….their dad was just a petty worker who had very less salary but he thought he was the boss and because of him we lost such an important deal….and not only that….ragini was equally responsible….I loved her during college days but what did she do? She rejected my love….again and again she kept saying no to my proposal….then she married laksh…I got so mad….I want my ragini and my revenge also my revenge for the loss our company had……
Sarya are shell-shocked….ragya yells how dare you? How can you think to hurt my mamma papa? We always thought you both were our well-wishers and you cared for us but you…you turned out to be a poisonous snake….kabir loses temper and slaps ragya….aryan yells KABIR BOSE!!! HOW DARE YOU HIT MY SISTER??? Kabir says shut up! All of you shut up! like your family….you are also like them…..samrat says kabir beta calm down…we have already separated sarya from their loved ones now we have just one more task to do….sarya look on confused….
Kabir smiles and says yes papa just a few more hours then they will be separated also…..sarya look on shocked…..
SCREEN SHIFTS TO ROAD

Ragini is seen running here and there looking desperately for laksh….she shows his picture to many people but no one saw them….finally she stops a taxi driver and asks him if he saw laksh….he looks at the picture and says no beta sorry….she loses hope but says it’s okay….but after some time the taxi driver stops ragini again….he says arrey beta ruko….he says show me the picture again…ragini having some hope shows him laksh’s picture….he says oh yeah I dropped him to the airport one hour back….ragini feels a little relieved and says uncle can you take me to the airport? Please uncle he is my husband…I need to stop him….
The uncle agrees and drives ragini to the airport
SCREEN SHIFTS TO AIRPORT

Here laksh is sitting with aayush in his lap and looking into his phone with tears….it shows him looking at ragini’s picture…he thinks ragini I loved you so much but in return what did you give me? 3 years ragini…3 years went by but you were still there where you left off 3 years ago…..he cries and sees aayush….he caresses aayush’s face and thinks now there is only one person who I live for, I care for, is my own and that is my son aayush…..laksh kisses aayush on his tiny hands and hugs him
SCREEN SHIFTS TO ROAD
The driver reaches the airport and ragini says thank you! She pays the driver and runs inside the airport….the watchman outside says ma’am ticket please? She says please sir let me go…I need to stop my husband from leaving….the watch man says sorry but ticket first….ragini sighs and runs to the ticket stall….she nervously and worriedly waits in line….she finally goes and the person asks ma’am what ticket? She says any…but hurry up….the man looks at her weirdly but gives her the ticket…she takes it and pays….she runs back and gives the ticket to watchman..
He lets her go inside…..she rushes inside….while on the speakers it says flight no 444 passengers….please proceed to the exit….laksh hears it and sighs…he sits there for a good 2 minutes thinking about all the moments ever since he and ragini married….all the moments rewind in his mind….he gets teary…he opens his eyes and looks around…he thinks I thought my ragini will come to stop me but she didn’t….he picks up his bag and carried aayush….they proceed to the exit…..ragini reaches the place where laksh was sitting….she asks everyone showing his pictures…one person sitting near laksh told her he just went towards exit…..

She gets shocked and thinks laksh…no I will not let you go….she says thanks to the person and runs towards the exit…..laksh is boarding the plane when ragini also gets there….she tries going inside but the security don’t let her….she says please sir let me go…I need to stop my husband…all of them are blocking her way….ragini gets fed up and determined…..she pushes all the securities and runs inside the plane shouting laksh!!!! He hears his name and thinks ragini? he teary eyed turns back to find ragini crying so much….he gets emotional….he slowly gets up and comes towards the middle of the plane….aayush is on the seat sitting playing with his cute baby toys….
Raglak look at one another emotionally….ragini thinks about all the moments she shared with laksh
Tu aata hai seene mein…jab jab saansein bharti hoon….tere dil ki galiyon se….main har roz guzarti hoon
Hawa ke jaise chalta hai tu…main ret jaisi udti hoon….kaun tujhe yun pyar karega….jaise main karti hoon….
Ho haaa ho…….
Meri nazar ka safar….tujhpe hi aake ruke…..kehne ko baaqi hai kya….kehna tha jo keh chuke….
Meri nigahein hain…teri nigahon ki tujhe…khabar kya be-khabar
Main tujhse hi chhup chhup kar
Teri aankhen padhti hoon
Kaun tujhe yoon pyaar karega
Jaise main karti hoon
Ho haaa ho…….

Laksh thinks about his moments spent with ragini and gets emotional and teary eyed
Dhadkan meri chalti hai…jab teri hawa se guzarta hoon
Khud ko main khali sa karke har pal tujhko bharta hoon
Ruk na jaaye saanse kahin ye kho jaane se darta hoon
Kaun tujhe yun pyaar karega jaise main karta hoon
Ho haaa ho……

Ragini can’t bear it anymore and she runs to laksh and hugs him very tightly…their bodies are against one another that no air can go through….laksh at first stays still but slowly he holds ragini and encircles her in a tight hug….he pulls her closer and she cries harder…..while hugging ragini sobbing says la…laksh how can you think about even leaving me? How can you leave your ragini? Am I nothing to you? Still hugging laksh says no ragini you know I love you very much…I can’t live a day without you….what day I can’t live even a second without…if my ragini leaves me them my breaths will stop, my heart will stop, I will be just a body with no feelings and emotions….
I am sorry ragini…I shouldn’t have left….ragini says it’s okay laksh (still hugging) I know you will always love me and I do to….finally she breaks the hug and cups his face….she gives him so many kisses on his whole face while laksh is holding her tightly from her waist…..she hugs him again and says never leave me again laksh….he smiles and says never and kisses her neck while hugging….she opens her eyes and looks around…she feels embarrassed seeing all the passengers staring at them….she hides her face in laksh’s chest and whispers laksh….look around…..he is confused but looks around and sees all staring at them while one small kid goes like awww and everyone laugh while raglak blush….laksh thinks no if I get shy then ragini will think I’m a coward…funny tune plays and he makes funny faces….

Laksh still hugging ragini says what? Have you guys never seen a husband and wife hug? He is super shy but determined….an lady says no beta nothing like that…you both are cute….laksh laughs and says after all laksh maheswari is her husband and ragini playfully hits him….he says today I will show you guys what a real mard would do to his lady love even if they are in public….ragini looks confused….he breaks the hug and says now you all will see but will start blushing…..he breaks the hug and holds ragini’s waist tighter…he pulls her and she bumps into his chest…..
He slowly moves his head and ragini follows his eyes…she sees him looking at her lips and gets hell shy….he comes down and kisses her lips so passionately…..she reciprocates…..everyone in the plane look down giving raglak some privacy and ragini’s face turns red as tomato…she is blushing so much…they kiss for about 3 minutes and breaks the kiss because of lack of oxygen….ragini is hella red and says laksh shyly….she goes to aayush and picks him up and says I’m waiting outside come soon….laksh moves his hand in his hair and also blushes…..he sees everyone and says what? Get ready for take-off and he takes his bags and leaves while others look down smilingly…..
SCREEN SHIFTS TO GO-DOWN

Kabir comes back and says 3 more hours and then you will never come back….so chat and talk as much as you want because after three hours you may never see each other again….he evilly laughs and goes away….sarya cry and remember how they treated swasanraglaksahutt…..they feel so guilty…samar thinks mamma papa please save us…we are really sorry…and on the other hand swasan feel something….swara says sanskar I feel…sanskar says I feel like someone is calling me….swara also says me too….both get into thinking while on the other hand sahutt think aryan is in some kind of trouble…they look worried and ragya…she cries silently and thinks how she was separated from ragini and when they got her she again was separated…..
SCREEN FREEZES ON SARYA’S BROKEN HEARTS, SWASANSAHUTT WORRIED, AND RAGLAK HAPPILY GOING HOME……

PRECAP: RAGLAK’S NIGHT AFTER THREE WHOLE YEARS…..A TRUTH UNFOLDS…..SARYA ARE HOPING THEIR PARENTS WILL COME TO SAVE THEM….WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW? WILL SARYA SEPARATE FORVER OR WOULD A MIRACLE SAVE THEM? WILL SWASANSAHUTTRAGLAK EVER FIND THEIR KIDS OR WOULD THEY BE GONE FOREVER?? WOULD THE HATRED BETWEEN AAYHIRA AND SARYA EVER REDUCE OR IT WILL BE SARYA VS. AAYHIRA???
I AM SO SORRY FOR THE REALLY LONGGGGGGG WAIT BUT HERE IT IS I HOPE YOU ENJOUED IT AND I WILL BE BACK SOON

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