Fan Fiction

na jaana dil se door pt 34

Hey guys its sobia back with part 34….let’s start

Recap: 8 years leap….mahi (sahutt daughter) meets with aryan at school…aryan feels an connection with mahi….he tells ragya and samar about it….sarya hate their parents to the core of their heart….swasanraglaksahutt are blessed with their second child….aayush, raina, and mahi….samrat and kabir have taken sarya as their kids and kept them with them….

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Aayush is sleeping peacefully and raglak were getting dressed for office…ragini was lost in her thoughts when laksh notices her and thinks it’s been 8 years but ragini is still stuck where she was 8 years ago….after ragya died ragini is not the same ragini like she was…I remember the ragini who used to enjoy life but this ragini forgot how to do that….she even doesn’t remember what it is like to smile…laksh thinks of something and goes near ragini….

He has a naughty plan and he goes near ragini…her back is facing him….laksh slowly puts his hands around ragini’s waist and brings it to her belly….she notices but doesn’t react….laksh pulls ragini from her belly towards him…her back hits laksh’s chest…ragini says laksh I have to get ready…she says this without blushing or anything…just like a stranger….laksh doesn’t listen to her and moves her hair to one side….she kind of gets mad and says laksh I said stop…I have to get ready for office….laksh thinks not today ragini….
Whenever I try coming close to you then you always stop me…after aayush came you just don’t let me come near you….I agree your dadi wanted a child after ragya died….but you still can’t forget I am your husband….he thinks all this then says aloud no ragini…he goes down and sensuously kisses her neck….she gets mad and says laksh if I am saying to not touch me then why do you keep coming near me? Laksh thinks she is just saying this so laksh continues but she gets really mad and breaks away from laksh and slaps him….he is shocked and puts a hand on his cheek….
Ragini not in her senses scolds laksh and says I have told you so many times to not come near me….why do you keep coming close to me…have you forgotten that our ragya is dead….how can you think of romance…don’t you feel grief for ragya’s death? Laksh gets teary eyed….all that he thought in his mind comes out of his mind and on his tongue and says no ragini I haven’t forgotten my daughter’s death….ragini huffs and says really? Now she is your daughter…when you were romancing with me then you didn’t think of ragya?

Laksh says stop it ragini…she says when I am telling you to be away from me then why can’t you understand? If you can forget ragya then it doesn’t mean I can….laksh gets frustrated now and says enough ragini….he shouts so loud that swasansahutt come….laksh says I have had enough…in these 8 years you aren’t even the ragini I know…whenever I come closer to you then you always break away from me…ragini says maybe because it wasn’t your love. It was probably lust….laksh is shocked

Swasansahutt get shocked hearing ragini….laksh is teary eyed and says how can you even think this? I am you husband and I have full rights on you….in these 8 years you didn’t let me get close to you…I didn’t try getting close to you for my lust I did it to make you smile a bit…ragini says it doesn’t mean you come near me without my permission….laksh says I am your husband….in these 8 years I lost hope to live after ragya died but then aayush came…ragini says aayush came because of you na…laksh says well yes but who wanted a baby…don’t forget ragini that it was your dadi maa who asked for another child after ragya died….I lost all hope after ragya died but your dadi maa said to give her an grandchild….
Ragini says you could have said no….I wasn’t even ready for another child…laksh is shocked….ragini what are you saying? Ragini says I am saying right…I spent 5 years without my daughter and when I got her she died….you got all 5 years to spend with her….ragini was saying all this but wasn’t even in her senses…ragini said we got aayush because of your lust feeling not love feeling….laksh is shocked and teary eyed….he says I can’t believe you are saying this…..he leaves….he stops and sees swasansahutt…they have tears….ragini realizes what all she said and says lak..laksh….but laksh before leaving says you said to me to go away na….then think your wish is fulfilled….you can live here with swasansahutt….ragini is shocked

Laksh says you have really hurt me today with your words and when you know how to give the same love to aayush and me….when you can get over ragya and at least have time for me and aayush then you can come….goodbye ragini…..goodbye swasansahutt….ragini is shocked….laksh leaves….ragini sees him from the side and sees slap marks and thinks about the slap she gave to laksh…she puts her hand on her mouth and thinks what have I done….

Sansah get mad at ragini for saying and doing all that to laksh….sanskar comes and says ragini what did you do? You slapped laksh and insulted him? You said his meaning of coming close to you was his lust? Wow ragini I can’t believe you said that….sahil says I agree you lost ragya but even laksh lost his daughter….you know what ragini in all these years you only thought about ragya! Ragya! Ragya! That you forgot you have a husband who lost his daughter…and a son who lost his elder sister…
All you care about is ragya! Ragya! Ragya! That even laksh couldn’t help you….don’t you think even laksh is feeling bad for ragya’s death….I can’t believe that my sister would do this….I’m actually glad laksh left….if he stayed with an arrogant girl like you he would have also got fed up with your nonsense….swasansahutt leave while she remembers what all they just said and what she said to laksh….she falls on her knees and says oh god how could I say all this to laksh…where would he be? I lost my daughter now I don’t want to lose my husband and my son….She thinks no I have to stop him…..she runs out….

SCREEN SHIFTS TO SAMRAT AND KABIR MANSION
Kabir comes inside the kids’ room and says bachos who wants to go to the zoo? Everyone get excited but aryan says not today….kabir says c’mon aryan it’ll be fun and we can see lots of animals….aryan thinks….ragya and samar say yes bhaiyya come na….kabir uncle is taking us to the zoo but our parents didn’t even for once ask about us….kabir smiles evilly….sarya remember what happened 8 years ago…

FLASHBACK
Ragya was in the hospital bed….she woke up and said where are my mom and dad? The doctor said they left you….ragya says what? Doctor says yes beta they said when you gain conscious put you in an orphanage….ragya says this isn’t possible…my mamma papa loved me…doctor says I don’t know beta when suddenly kabir comes and says beta I’m your parents friend and I know that you are shocked hearing this too but trust me your parents told me that they don’t want you…they said they don’t care what happens to you…they said to drop you to an orphanage but I will take you and care for you….ragya is shocked….she was just 5 so she didn’t know the meaning of this….

On the other side samrat took samar and aryan with him and told them that their parents just let them die in the middle of the road….samar and aryan were shocked…kabir brought ragya and told all three of them how their parents didn’t care….they were hurt and from that moment hated their parents while kabir and samrat smiled evilly…
FLASHBACK ENDS

Kabir says so do you guys want to go to the zoo?? All agree and they say great lets go…
SCREEN FREEZES ON SARYA AND SWASANRAGLAKSAHUTT

PRECAP: WILL RAGINI FIND HER LAKSH BACK OR WILL HE LEAVE FOREVER??? WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN SARYA WILL MEET WITH THEIR PRESENT?? WILL SARYA EVER GET RID OF THEIR HATRED TOWARDS SWASANRAGLAKSAHUTT OR WILL IT STAY WITH THEM FOREVER?? WILL LOVE FIND A PLACE FOR SARYA OR WILL THEY LIVE WITH THE HATRED FOREVER….LET’S SEE WHERE DESTINY TAKES SARYA, SWASANRAGLAKSAHUTT, AAYHIRA (AAYUSH, MAHI, RAINA)…..WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO NA JAANA DIL SE DOOR??

THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH FOR ALL YOUR LOVE AND FEEDBACKS…PLEASE DO TELL ME HOW I DID?? SEE YOU ALL SOON

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