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na jaana dil se door pt 33

Hey guys its sobia back with part 33….thank you so much for encouraging me….it’s only because of you all I am still writing thank you!!! Now let’s start

Recap: swasanraglaksahutt find out about their kids being dead….samrat is shown doing all the evil acts while kabir was sent to jail….
8 YEARS LATER…..
The camera rolls and it shows a big mansion….we go inside and it shows the wall with three big sized picture frames….it has garlands on it….a couple comes and stands in front of the picture…the lady moves her hand around a little girl’s picture….it is show the girl is ragya and the lady is ragini having a lot of tears in her eyes…..laksh is next to her and has one hand around ragini’s shoulders and the other hand holding a small boy….he must be around 3…..
The little boy has a play toy and is chewing on it….his little hands are entangled with laksh’s hands….raglak are looking at the picture crying and the little boy has absolutely no idea what is going on…raglak then look at samar and aryan and cry….the little boy starts crying….raglak wipe their tears and ragini picks up the little boy…she says aww aayush what happened my baby…laksh says maybe he is hungry…ragini says maybe let’s go

SCREEN SHIFTS TO A ROOM
Swara wakes up and says sanskar go wake up raina…he says swara you go na….swara says sanskar please go….he nods and leaves….swara goes inside the washroom and gets ready….she comes out and finds raina and sanskar both sitting on the bed ready and smiling…swara pouts and says huh so father-daughter got ready before mamma….raina giggles while sanskar sys aww darling….raina says awhhh papa shame don’t call mamma darling in front of me….swasan feel embarrassed and raina runs out….she must me around 6….she goes to raglak’s room to play with aayush….
In sahutt they both wake up a little girl…sahil says mahi…beta wake up we have to do breakfast na…mahi wakes up and immediately says food!! Wow papa you know I love food so much!!! Sahil laughs aloud and says haha that’s why you are so moti just like your mamma…uttara hits sahil on his shoulder playfully and says shut up sahil….he looks down and winks at mahi….she must be around 7…
THE SCREEN SHIFTS AND IT SHOWS ANOTHER BIG MANSION….THE CAMERA ROLLS INSIDE AND IT SHOWS SO MANY SERVANTS GOING FROM PLACE TO PLACE…A OLD AGED GUY COMES OUT AND SAYS KABIR….THE GUY COMES AND HIS FACE REVEALS IT IS SAMRAT….KABIR COMES OUT AND SAYS YES PAPA…SAMRAT SAYS DID YOU WAKE UP THE KIDS? KABIR SAYS NO PAPA I AM TRYING BUT THEY WON’T WAKE UP AND ESPECIALLY THE GIRL…SHE IS JUST LIKE RAGINI…LAZY TO GET OUT OF BED….SAMRAT LAUGHS AND SAYS IT’S OKAY I’LL WAKE THEM….

SAMRAT GOES INTO THE KIDS ROOM….IT’S ONE BIG ROOM….ON ONE SIDE THE WALL IS COLORED PINK…THE OTHER SIDE THE WALL IS COLORED BLUE…IN THE MIDDLE THE BACK WALL IS COLORED ORANGE….SAMARAT SAYS KIDS WAKE UP YOU HAVE SCHOOL….C’MON HURRY NOW….ALL THE KIDS ARE SCARED OF SAMRAT SO THEY ALL GET UP IN ONE CALL….SAMRAT SAYS RAGYA BETA WHY DO YOU TAKE SO LONG TO GET UP?? KABIR UNCLE WAS TRYING TO WAKE YOU ALL UP NA….RAGYA SAYS SORRY BADKY PAPA….SAMARAT LAUGHS AND SAYS NO PROBLEM…SAMRAT THEN LOOKS AT ARYAN AND SAMAR AND SAYS YOU TWO WHY DIDN’T YOU BOTH WAKE UP HUH?
ARYAN YOU ARE OLDER THEN THESE TWO THEN? ARYAN SAYS SORRY BADKY PAPA….HE SAYS OKAY NO PROBLEM NOW HURRY UP AND FINISH GETTING DRESSED….SAMRAT COME SOUTSIDE AND KABIR SAYS DAD DID THEY WAKE UP? SAMRAT LAUGHS AND SAYS YES….KABIR SMILES AND SAYS FINALLY…THEY GO TO THE BREAKFAST AREA AND EAT THEIR BREAKFAST….IN THE ROOM SARYA COME OUT…THEY SPOT 6 PICTURE FRAMES….IT HAS GARLANDS ON ALL OF THEM…SARYA WALK UP TO THEM AND GIVE ANGRY LOOKS AT THE PICTURE….ARYAN SAYS MAMA PAPA YOU BOTH WERE THE WORST PARENTS I HAD….I’M GLAD I KNEW THE TRUTH BEFOREHAND…THE FRAME REVEALS AND IT IS SAHUTT….
SAMAR LOOKS AT ANOTHER PICTURE AND SAYS MAMMA PAPA I AM SO HAPPY I AM NOT WITH YOU TWO TODAY OR ELSE I DON’T KNOW WHAT WOULD HAVE HAPPENED….THE FRAME REVEALS AND IT IS OF SWASAN….FINALLY RAGYA LOOKS AT ANOTHER PICTURE…SHE HAS A LOT OF TEARS IN HER EYES….SHE SAYS MAMMA PAPA YOU BOTH LIED TO ME SO MANY TIMES…PAPA KEPT SAYING YOUR MAMMA IS OUT OF TOWN SO SHE ISN’T EVER HERE BUT THE TRUTH WAS MAMMA JUST DIDN’T WANT TO LIVE WITH ME….

MAMA PAPA YOU BOTH TREATED ME LIKE OUTISDERS…YOU SHOWED FAKE CONCERN BUT IT WAS NEVER TRUE….I HATE YOU BOTH SO MUCH…..SARYA TOGETHER SAY I HATE MAMMA PAPA BADE PAPA BADI MAMMA….ON THE OTHERSIDE SWASANRAGLAKSAHUTT FEEL LIKE THEIR OWN CALLED THEM….THEY FEEL SOMETHING IN THEIR HEART…..THE IN HOUSE TEMPLE CANDLE BLOWS OFF AND SWASANRAGLAKSAHUTT FEEL TENSED…..SARYA GO DOWN AND EAT THEIR BREAKFAST
Kabir says okay bachos lets go to school….they study in the toppest Mumbai school….ragya is 13 now…samar is 12…and aryan is 15….kabir drops them to school and says I will come here to pick you three up so make sure you are here when I come….sarya nod and leave for their class…on the other side sanlaksah come to drop raina and mahi to school and they drop aayush to preschool in raina and mahi’s school….
Sansahlak leave and reach the office and they find swaragutt already their working…sanlaksah go to laksh cabin and sahil says I’m glad our wives work with us or how would they be able to forget sarya….sanlak nod….they remember 8 years before swaragutt were so engrossed in sarya that they could have got into depression so they forcefully told swaragutt to come with them to office and help them out so they can forget sarya….all three guys hug and think I hope this helps them…it has shown little change in them but not much….
ON THE OTHERSIDE SARYA ARE IN THEIR LUNCH CANTEEN WHEN MAHI AND RAINA COME….THEY WERE TOO SHORT FOR THE COUNTER TO ORDER FOOD SO MAHI RUNS TO ARYAN AND SAYS BHAIYYA CAN YOU PLEASE ORDER FOR ME….ARYAN GETS ON HIS KNEES AND SAYS SURE WHAT DO YOU WANT…MAHI SAYS SHE WANTS ONE BLUEBERRY MUFFIN AND 2 CHOCOLATE MILK…ARYAN THINKS THESE BOTH ARE MY FAVORITE THINGS….ARYAN SMILES AND SAYS OKAY HOLD ON…THE PERSON GIVES HIM THE FOOD AND HE GIVES IT TO MAHI…

ARYAN SAYS WHAT’S YOUR FULL NAME? MAHI SAYS MY NAME IS MAHI SA..INTERUPPTED….RAINA SAYS DI COME HERE PLEASE…..MAHI RUNS AND SAYS THANKS TO ARYAN….HE SMILES AND THINKS WHY DID I FEEL LIKE I HAVE A STONG CONNECION WITH THAT GIRL…HE SAYS WHATEVER AND GOES TO RAGYA AND SAMAR..RAGYA FINDS ARYAN TENSED AND SAYS BHAIYYA WHAT HAPPENED??? ARYAN TELLS SAMAR AND RAGYA ABOUT MAHI AND HOW HER CHOICES MATCH WITH HIM….SAMAR AND RAGYA LAUGH AND SAY BHAIYYA IT’S ONLY FOOD…OTHERS CAN HAVE THE SAME TASTE TOO NA…ARYAN SAYS NO GUYS I SERIOUSLY FELT DIFFERENT WITH HER…IT FELT LIKE SHE WAS SOMEONE I KNOW….I FELT SO CLOSE WITH HER….SAMAR AND ARYAN SAY CHILL BHAI NOW LETS GO….

KABIR UNCLE MIGHT HAVE COME….THEY LEAVE….THEY WAIT FOR KABIR WHEN SANLAKSAH COME TO PICK UP AAYUSH, MAHI, AND RAINA….AS SOON AS LAKSH GETS AAYUSH HE STOPS WHEN STRONG WINDS COME…HE THINKS RAGYA? HE LOOKS AROUND AND FINDS NO ONE….HE IS ABOUT TO LOOK WHERE SARYA ARE STANDING BUT KABIR COMES AND THEY QUICKLY SIT AND LEAVE….HE THINKS WAS THAT RAGYA? SANSKAR SAYS JIJU COME INSIDE IT LOOKS LIKE IT WILL RAIN…LAKSH NODS AND GOES INSIDE…SANLAKSAH GET HOME AND KABIR BRINGS SARYA HOME….

KABIR GOES TO SAMRAT AND SAYS PAPA YOU WON’T BELIVE WHAT I SAW TODAY….SAMRAT SAYS WHAT? KABIR SAYS I SAW SANLAKSAH AT SARYA’S SCHOOL….SAMRAT QUICKLY GETS UP AND SAYS WHAT? BUT WHY WERE THEY THERE? KABIR SAYS THEIR KIDS STUDY IN THE SAME SCHOOL….SAMRAT SAYS OH SO THEY GOT NEW KIDS….KABIR SAYS WHEN I WENT TO PICK UP SARYA THEY WERE IN FRONT OF ME…LAKSH WAS LOOKING AROUND SO I TOLD THE KIDS TO QUICKLY SIT AND WE LEFT…SAMRAT SAYS GOOD AND SWASANRAGLAKSAHUTT’S NEW KIDS CAN BE TRUMP CARDS FOR US…SAMARAT AND KABIR SMILE EVILLY
SCREEN FREEZES ON SARYA….SANLAKSAH WITH KIDS…..SAMRAT/KABIR

PRECAP: FLASHBACK OF WHY SARYA HATE THEIR PARENTS SO MUCH….WHY DID SAMRAT AND KABIR TAKE SARYA AND GIVE THEM THIS MUCH LOVE? WHAT PLAN IS BREWING IN THEIR EVIL MINDS??? WHY DO THE KIDS LOVE SAMRAT AND KABIR SO MUCH??? WHY DID THE KIDS HAVE GARLANDS AROUND THEIR PARENTS PICTURES?? WHY SO MUCH HATRED???? WHAT WILL WIN LOVE OR HATE??
GUYS WAS IS GOOD EPISODE??? LIKING THE TWISTS AND TURNS….YES I KNOW THERE IS A LOT OF SUSPENSE BUT THIS IS NA JAANA DIL SE DOOR TELL ME HOW I DID….OH AND YES LOVELY DEAR I WILL TRY MY BEST TO PUT RAGLAK SCENES…RIGHT NOW IT WILL BE EMOTIOANL BUT I WILL TRY PUTTING HAPPY MOMENTS BETWEEN THEM

OKAY SO YOU GUYS CAN IMAGINE THESE PEOPLE FOR SARYA AND AAYUSH, RAINA, AND MAHI
RAGYA IS 13: WAS PLAYED BY RUHANIKA DHAWAN BUT NOW IS PLAYED BY GRACY GOSWAMI
SAMAR IS 12: WAS PLAYED BY ROHAN MEHRA BUT NOW IS PLAYED BY SHIVANSH KOTIA
ARYAN IS 15: WAS PLAYED BY VISHESH BANSAL BUT NOW IS PLAYED BY BHAVESH BALCHANDANI
AAYUSH IS 3: PLAYED BY RICKY PATEL
RAINA IS 6: PLAYED BY SPANDAN CHATURVEDI
MAHI IS 7: PLAYED BY SALONI DAINI

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