Fan Fiction

na jaana dil se door pt 23

Hey guys its sobia back with part 23…let’s start….as I said in my last part that this fanfiction has lots of twists and turns and a big dhamaka is awaiting for you all hehe

Recap: ragini gives birth to a girl and dies saying to name her ragya
5 YEARS LATER
The camera rolls to the scene of the MM mansion…it takes us to a room….a lady shouts samar wake up beta it is time for school….he is around 4 shouts maa please 5 more minutes….the lady says no get up you always do this and then wake up 50 minutes later….samar wakes up and says papa see maa…..she doesn’t even let me sleep….his papa says swara you should let samar sleep for some time more….swara says please sanskar you already do this…I don’t want the same habit going on my son…sanskar and samar look at each other than pout cutely at swara
Sanskar laughs and says yeah yeah okay…samar beta hurry up….I will drop you to school today….yay my papa will drop me to school….swasan smile….
SCREEN SHIFTS TO ANOTHER ROOM

The camera rolls and it is shown a guy sleeping with a small cute baby around 5 in each other’s arms…..the alarm rings and the guy wakes up and smiles seeing the small baby…he goes in the washroom to get ready and comes out and says ragu…ragu wake up dear you have school….she immediately wakes up and says okay papa….he says beta you quickly go and get dressed then your papa will drop you okay….

She smiles and says okay papa….she goes in the washroom and outside the guy goes to his closet and gets a picture….he eyes the picture emotionally and says ragini see today I am taking care of our baby myself and she looks just like you….whenever I see our ragya I see your reflection in her….I miss you so much ragini….please come back….me and ragya need you….you know she always asks me papa where is my mamma….I don’t know what to tell her….i don’t want her to know that she doesn’t have a mom so I tell her that you were a business woman who travelled a lot….she is so small so she believes me….when ragya grows up she will be more mature and will keep asking me where you are….
I really miss you ragini….please come back….he hugs the pic and cries….it was laksh….after sometime ragya comes out and says papa I am ready….laksh quickly wipes his tears and keeps the picture back….laksh fakes a smile and says good girl….ragya is so tiny but she still understands her papa….ragya goes up to laksh and says papa were you crying? Laksh says no beta why will your papa cry? Ragya says don’t lie to me papa….

I know you were crying….laksh says really then my accha bacha tell me why papa was crying? Ragya says simple papa….you miss mamma right? Laksh is shocked and thinks wah ragini ki bachi bilkul ragini pe gi hai….kitna teez dimaak hai (wow ragini’s daughter is just like her. She has such a smart brain)….he laughs and says aww my bachaa you know everything about your papa….but today I was also crying because it is your first day of school….papa is sad that his ragya will be away from him for so long….
Ragya cutely laughs and says aww papa I love you so much….ragya and laksh hug and he says okay lets go have breakfast them I will take you to school….ragya smiles….ragya and laksh comes down and she firstly runs to samar and says good morning samar….he says good morning di….after sometime sahutt come downstairs….aryan is now 7 years old….ragya and samar in unison say good morning bhaiyya….aryan smiles and hugs both ragya and samar and says good morning my two little cuties….sansahlak together say okay baccha’s eat your breakfast then I will drop you to your school…all the kids scream and say okay papa….sanskar gets a call and he is asked to come to office with sahil….sanskar says laksh if you don’t mind can you please drop samar and aryan too…I got a call and me and sahil are called to the office….

Laksh says yeah jiju I’ll drop them….sanskar says thanks and he leaves with sahil….saaya (samar, aryan, and ragya) in unison say papa/bade papa we finished….laksh says good….laksh says bye to his sisters and leaves with kids….laksh drops them and says make sure you three wait here after school ends…after office I will come pick u guys up…they all say okay then go to their friends….
Sahsan come to office and they meet shekar….sahil says papa you called us….shekar says yes….actually our client can’t make it here because he has faced an injury…but this deal is important so I was wondering if you both can go to London for a month and finish the deal….sanskar says but papa what about our kids…shekar says leave them here with swara and uttara….sahil says but can’t we take them? Shekar says they have school and all….shekar says and laksh is there too na….they will handle….if ragini was here today then she would have gone….sansah get sad hearing ragini’s name…sanskar says okay papa we will go…

After sometime laksh comes…he goes in his cabin….he calls annie his PA for Kapoor and sons files….she brings them…laksh sees the file and gets mad….he says miss annie I said Kapoor and sons file not birla and sons….he scolds her so much…sansah hear laksh screaming and think oh no! they go and try stopping laksh…sahil says you go to annie….she was scared already so she leaves….sanskar says jiju why are you always so rude to people outside….laksh says please jiju I don’t want to talk about it….sahil says no at home your so chill and outside you are so mad….sanskar says you weren’t like this before….

Laksh says but things have changed now….sansah understand what he means….laksh says I don’t get anyone get close to me….I don’t care if that is my employee or anyone….the only people who are close to me are my family….everyone else are just outsiders….sanskar says I understand but you should control your anger with others….not everyone are the same….I know after rag…INTERUPTTED BY LAKSH…please jiju I don’t want to hear anything about ragini….she left me…she left her laksh….I don’t believe anyone now….we promised to be together for eternity but she left me with my daughter….he asks sansah to leave him alone for some time….they nod and leave
After they left laksh breakdown…he says no one is trustworthy anymore…ragini promised to be by my side forever….but she broke her promise and left me all alone….I try to be strong in front of my family but I know sooner or later they will know I am completely broken….I just want my ragini back….ragya needs her mamma back….please come back….
SCREEN SHIFTS TO SCHOOL

Aryan and samar tell ragya to go find some friends…she nods and leaves….aryan and samar go to their friends….they talk when we hear a scream saying bhaiyya….please help me….aryan hears her and thinks ragya….he runs and samar follows….they reach the place and see ragya face have bruises and her school dress torn and mud on her….aryan screams ragya and samar says diii….they run to save her….aryan says leave her rahul and rinni….both are hitting her….aryan gets so mad and punches rahul back….samar helps ragya stand and says di are you okay….aryan comes back to ragya and says how did this happen? Ragya says bhaiyya I was talking with anji when rahul came and started calling me fat….me and anji told them to stop but then rinni started calling me a donkey…
Me and anji were mad but we just walked away…the guy from the back said oh look who is chicken…ragya says I stopped…I turned and told them to stop….rinni pushed ragya and they started hitting her….she cries and says please call papa I want to go home….samar calls the principal and says what rahul and rinni did to ragya and asks to call our bade papa….she nods….laksh is in his office working when he gets a call and says what? Okay I am coming….he tells sansah and they all go to their school….
SCREEN FREEZES ON LAKSH’S TENSED FACE AND RAGYA CRYING

PRECAP: LAKSH DECIDES SOMETHING…SWASANSAHUTT AGREE…SANSAHLAK GETS SHOCKED SEEING SOMEONE…..WHAT IS WRITTEN IN THIS NA JAANA DIL SE DOOR??

GUYS HOW WAS IT? I HOPE PEOPLE DON’T LOSE INTEREST…SHOULD I CONTINUE?
OKAY SO YOU CAN IMAGINE RAGYA, SAMAR, AND ARYAN LIKE THIS
ARYAN: VISHESH BANSAL
SAMAR: ROHAN MEHRA
RAGYA: RUHANIKA DHAWAN

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