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na jaana dil se door pt 15

Hey guys it’s sobia back with part 15…I am so happy receiving all of you guys feedbacks….thanks so much!!!! Now let’s get started…I am so sorry this posted so late…

Recap: nok-jhoks of swasanraglaksahutt
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Swalak are super mad because first swara keeps thinking she was embarrassed a lot and laksh is mad at ragini (fake anger). Swara says sanskar I won’t leave her…he says swara calm down and swara says no sanskar I know she is your sister and all but she put cow dung on us…what the hell yaar…sahil says yes bhai I agree with swara…please we need to do something…uttara says I have a great idea…laksh says I know let’s dump her in a well…..he laughs and everyone else gives him angry looks….sansah say aye laksh your talking about our sister….he pouts while swautt say yeah bhai that’s a bit too much….
Sahil says oh I have an idea….she put cow dung on us right…..so let’s put her in cow dung….everyone’s eyes widen and exclaim wow that’s so good…..laksh says now you wait and watch Mrs. Future Ragini Maheswari….all hi-fi and get their plan in action…..swara says everything is ready and now we just need to convince ragini to come outside…..sanskar says let’s apologize to her….all scream what? No way….sanskar says arrey I was saying let’s fake apologize and trap her into coming outside…..swara says oh yeah sweety let’s do that while she pulls both his cheeks and says this is why I love my teddy sanskar…..sanskar blushes and all tease him….swara gets shy……
@ragini’s room
Swasansahuttlak wink and one by one go inside…..uttara goes first and says bhabhi I am so sorry you know na we are kids so I didn’t want to hurt you….she smiles…..sahil comes and says di please I am sorry and I am your younger brother na so please I am sorry di……sanskar comes in and says diiii I am sorry…..he sobs harder and says diiiiii please forgive me….he fake blows his nose and a funny tune plays….swalak put their hands on their forehead and think gosh sanskar is over acting too much…..ragini feels bad and says sanskar I forgive you….sanskar still in character says diiii please forgive me….sahutt put their faces in their palm and think aaj toh hum gaye….ragini says I said na I forgive you…..sanskar says no di I know you’re still mad….please forgive me…..he falls to her feet and holds them and cries and says diiii please forgive me…..sahutt look at him angrily and sanskar winks…..ragini says I forgive you…..sanskar says you do na…..she nods…..he says okay and gets normal…..
Swara comes next and says ragini I am also sorry….she smiles and swara hugs ragini while giving a fake anger look to sanskar…..he thinks maine kuch galat kiya? (Did I do something wrong?) I only did what I was told na…..to ask forgiveness…..sahil looks at sanskar like he knows what sanskar said in his mind and pulls sanskar towards him and whispers in his ear “we said to ask for forgiveness…not to beg and fake sob making it seem like some whale is dying” sanskar pouts while sahutt give him angry glares….laksh comes and says yes darling I am so sorry for everything too….please forgive me too….ragini says okay while all show thumbs up……sahil says di can you come with us to the garden…we want to show you something….
Ragini says wait before you all leave I have a confession….all look confused and say what? Ragini says actually this morning the brown stuff I put on you guys wasn’t cow dung…..all look on shocked…..they say what? Then what was it? Ragini says it was just chocolate…..laksh says but that smell? Ragini says oh that cow dung smell….she laughs and says I looked up on the internet and it showed me home spices that we can mix to get the smell…..all are shocked and respectively think but we were going to actually put you in cow dung…all hide their faces in their palms while ragini says so guys what was it you wanted to show me in the garden? Sanskar says ga…gar…garden um nothing di….she says but didn’t you all say that… INTERUPTTED…laksh says leave it na darling…come let’s go to breakfast…..ragini sys no now I want to know what you all wanted to show me….all are scared…..swara gestures sanlaksah to go and take out cow dung….they comply
Sansahlak all run out while ragini asks why they did that. Uttara says woh bhabhi um yeah it’s a surprise na that’s why…..swautt laugh while ragini is confused…..15 minutes later all 3 come back and exclaim finally done….ragini says done with what…sanskar in panic mode says cow dung…..ragini yells cow dung!!! Swalaksahutt give him murderous looks…..ragini says what about cow dung? Laksh says woh darling the thing is that…swara continues the thing is that….sahil yells bhai told me he loves….uttara says jiju loves taking a shower in cow dung…uttara bites her tongue…..swasanraglaksah all shout WHAT?!!! Uttara says yeah bhabhi actually sahil told me so yeah….ragini says but sanskar you never told me…sahil covers up and says yeah it’s between brothers you know….bromance and all….
Laksh says okay leave all that now let’s go eat….all are leaving when ragini says wait…all close their eyes and think what now? Laksh turns and fearfully says yes jaano….any problem….ragini comes till the door while swasansahuttlak are behind her…ragini turns and says thank you for not putting me in the cow dung when I told you all that my cow dung was fake….everyone’s eyes widen in shock and in chorus says TUMHE KAISE PATA CHALA? (How did you find out)….ragini says aww my brothers…bhabhis….and hubby….ragini godadia has her ways…..
She smiles and leaves while swasansahuttlak are still standing there with their mouths wide open and their eyes wide open in shock….ragini comes back and says one more thing…all with their mouth and eyes wide open nod what? Ragini says close your mouths…mosquitos are wandering around you….she leaves and all realize what she said and start spitting….swara’s spitting on laksh, he is spitting on sahil, sahil is spitting on sanskar, sanskar is spitting on uttara, uttara is spitting everywhere…..
EWWWWW mosquitoes…. But how did ragini know…..they all are left speechless…..all clean themselves up and go down for breakfast….
@dining hall
All are eating when dp says okay everyone listen up I have called the pandit to find a good mahurat for sahutt engagement and after that we will ask for a good wedding day….all get excited and soon enough it’s afternoon…..the pandit comes and all discuss the dates….the pandit says four days from today will be the engagement of sahutt…..swalak say wow uttara/di it’s so early na…..uttara says no bhai it’s perfect the quicker I get engaged the quicker I will marry na….she realizes what she said and says woh and swalak laugh and say yeah we know…..everyone start laughing…..dp and shekar asks the pandit when will the marriage happen……pandit sees swasanraglaksahutt horoscopes and says 1 week later……all adults say great! While the couples shout what? One week!! How will I live without my love for a week!!! All laugh while they all look down embarrassed……
The pandit leaves and all say good the wedding is after a week….we have enough time to prepare everything…..ragini says guys I was thinking we should all go somewhere…you know like a family vacation before marriage…..everyone likes the idea so laksh says papa how about we go to our beach house in cape town….all get very excited and says yeah let’s go…..dp agrees…..all decide to leave tonight……it’s night and all left for the airport……they went in the plane and started fighting for seats…..
Swara says bhai please let me sit here…..you know na I love window seats…..laksh says no way swara…..I know you want to sit by jiju but no…..ragini says sanskar please let me sit here…..he says no di you hate window seats na then why do you want to sit here…..go sit with Uttara……uttara and sahil are already sitting together so uttara says no way jiju…..I will sit only with sahil…..sanskar pouts and says fine then di go sit with swara…..swara says bhai please let me sit before I tell ragini that….laksh’s eyes widen and says no okay fine sit here…..ragini says hawww laksh baby why did you stop swara bhabhi from saying something…..
Laksh says it’s nothing jaanuuu please let’s sit elsewhere…..ragini says no first tell me….laksh angrily stares at swara and she bites her tongue and says woh bhabhi laksh has INTERUPTTED laksh says I have a sweating problem…..ragini screams what? Everyone look at them and she says what…..swara is about to say when laksh says it doesn’t matter jaano…..come let’s sit….she smiles while laksh turns around and gives murderous looks to swara….she winks and sits by sanskar….
THEY FLY AND FLY AND FINALLY REACH THEIR BEACHHOUSE…..THEY ENTER AND IT IS SO DREAMY…..EVERYTHING MADE OF MARBLE AND GLASS…..IT’S JUST LIKE HEAVEN…..ALL SETTLE IN THEIR ROOMS AND SOON ENOUGH IT’S EVENING…..THEY HAVE THEIR DINNER AND ENJOY THE NIGHT….sahutt say guys let’s play an game….ragini says let’s do spin the bottle….all get excited and say yeah…..all elders say we will not play but swalak convince them….they agree for kids sayings and ask how we play…..ragini says so we will spin the bottle and whoever it lands on has to do something we tell you to do no exceptions…..they all nod okay…..sanskar says great so let’s start….swara says I’ll spin first…..she spins the bottle and it stops at sumi….she smiles…..ragsansah say ohooooo…..
Sumi says chup kar (be quiet)….sumi says okay tell me what I have to do….ragini says maa let me discuss with my people…..swasanraglaksahutt discuss and laksh says I have a great idea….all whisper what? Laksh says how about we make sumi maa flirt with my papa….all are shocked but think it’s a great plan….ragini says good plan hubby and winks at him….they break the discussion and ragini says maa you have to flirt with dp papa for at least 1 full minute….she says ragini…what are you saying….how can I…..shekar laughs and says sumi ji do it na…kids are saying…..sumi says okay…..she goes to dp while she says sorry ap and dp ji….these kids na….all laugh and say no issues…..sanskar says so maa start na…..she glares at them in anger and sumi starts….
Sumi says to dp hi handsome…all giggle so hard……sumi continues and says so darling what do you say? Take me to a movie tonight and I will give you my whole time…..dp looks on in utter shock and swasanraglaksahutt laugh loud so hard…..sumi winks at dp and says bye jaano and goes back to her seat…..all tell her good job while she feels so uncomfortable…..sumi says okay continue the game and the game continues when it finally lands on swara….she smiles and uttlak wink at each other…..ragini says hmmm what should we do with swara bhabhi….uttlak in unison say we know…they naughtily smile…..ragini says what……uttlak in unison say you have to dance seductively with sanskar jiju….all together say what??? While swasan eyes are wide open….swara says no bhai I will not do this….please tell me anything else but I won’t do this…..uttlak says sorry di/swara but you have to do it….it’s spin the bottle with no exceptions…..
She looks at everyone while swasan look at each other uncomfortable and shy…..swara says okay fine I’ll do it…..sanskar bursts out saying what? She angrily glares at him….he keeps his fingers on his lips and looks down silently…..laksh says hawww swara stop scaring my jiju with your looks…..uttara says di now start c’mon…..she shyly nods okay…..
She gets up and seductively walks to sanskar…..the song lahu munh lag gaya plays…..she goes on her knees and touches his shoulders seductively…..he feels so uncomfortable while all adults look down….she comes closer to him and runs her fingers down his face…..raglaksahutt smile and laugh really hard…..”lahu munh lag gaya, lahu munh lag gaya, soya tha nas nas mein, ab yeh jag gaya, aye lahu munh lag gaya” she slowly brings her hands down his neck and slowly slides her fingers down his neck to his chest…..he feels her touch and swara is now really getting into the mood….(by the way swasan were already married remember they were separated because dp hated Bengali people but now they are together)…..she continues when raglaksahutt cough and swasan come back to reality…..laksh says swara I only said be seductive with him not get into the mood…..this is not your room…..swara gets embarrassed and sanskar says shut up laksh…..he says jiju I was just…..swasan angrily stare at him so he hushes……they continue and after many turns its finally raglak’s turn…..
Swasan whisper something to each other and they tell so ragini now it’s your turn….she gets scared…..she knows they will make her do something she doesn’t want…..swasan wink and say ragini so you ready to do what we say….she is so scared but says yes…..swasan in unison say you have to kiss laksh in front of everyone…..raglak are shocked but she says okay no big deal I’ll kiss him on his cheek right away…..swasan smile and say no no ragini/di you have to kiss him but on his lips…..raglak are hell shocked…..both shout in unison what? Are you mad swara says laksh….swara says aww bhai you made me dance seductively with sanskar na now you have to do this with ragini…..and sanskar says yeah di even you were playing with lakutt na now do it….
Raglak are scared and mostly ragini but she still agrees….she looks at all adults….they all put their heads down so raglak are okay….ragini slowly walks to laksh and she is very nervous while laksh looks here and there in embarrassment…..ragini slowly sits on her knees and goes towards laksh….both their heartbeats get faster….the song hansi ban gaye plays….”main jaan ye vaar doon, har jeet bhi haar doon, keemat ho koi tujhe, beintehaa pyaar doon, saari hadein meri, ab maine tod di, dekar mujhe pataa awaargi ban gaye, haan hansi ban gaye, haan nami ban gaye, tum mere aasmaan, meri zameen ban gaye” she goes closer and closer and finally their lips touch…..
Ragini is holding laksh from his neck and laksh slowly moves his hands up her waist and clutches onto her tighter…..she pulls laksh closer to him from his neck and laksh holds onto ragini tighter and pulls her towards him…both their bodies are touching….at first both were uncomfortable but soon enough both were enjoying the moment…..they don’t even realize that all were still staring when swasansahutt cough and both get back to reality…..both get embarrassed and ragini runs inside beach house while laksh says I’ll go and see her and he also leaves with an excuse….
SCREEN FREEZES ON RAGLAK’S EMBARASSED FACES AND SWASANSAHUTT LAUGHING HARD

Precap: swasanraglaksahutt moments and moments

GUYS HOW WAS IT??? I KNOW IT’S LONG SORRY BUT I HAD SO MUCH TO COVER THIS EPISODE….BUT BE HONEST WITH ME…I’LL DO ACCORDING TO VOTES…..SHOULD I WRITE LONG EPISODES OR SHORT EPISODES?? THE MORE OF I GET I’LL DO…..THANK YOU ALL….YOU ALL REALLY MAKE MY DAY….

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