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na jaana dil se door pt 14

Hey guys its sobia back with part 14…thank you so much for all the comments. I was overwhelmed now let’s get started

Recap: swasanraglaksahutt re-unite
@storeroom in MM
They all break the hug and swara says I think we should tell both families as soon as possible…they all agree…laksh says swara how about we invite the godadia’s at our house tonight for dinner and we can tell them than….all agree and uttara is so happy she says I’ve been waiting for this moment for a long time and finally it’s happening….swasanraglak look at her in a teasing way and sahil puts his face in his palm and thinks aaj yeh ladki marwaygi mujhe and uttara realizes what she says so she feels embarrassed and says I meant….BEFORE SHE COULD COMPLETE SWALAK SAY YES WE ALL KNOW WHAT YOU MEANT AND THEY BOTH WINK AT HER WHILE SHE BLUSHES
@night in MM

Godadia’s come and ap and dp welcome them….they all chit chat for some time and then go for dinner….all are enjoying the dinner when ragini says maa don’t you think we should find a girl for sahil…sahutt cough and she giggles…swasanlak get she is teasing them so they play along and say ya aunty even I was thinking to find a guy for uttara what do you all think? All say yeah that is a good thought…sahutt angrily look at them and they smirk…dp says let me call the pandit and ask him to come and bring pics of guys and girls…all say yeah great thought…swasanraglak are talking more and more about them when uttara says I know a girl who can marry sahil…ji….sahil looks at her in shock and thinks ji? When did she start calling me ji?
And swasanraglak see her determined face and gesture each other what she is about to do…all ask who? She says swara…di of course and swasansah cough and raglakswasansah say what….she smiles and says of course…I’ve seen how close sahswa are…sanskar says nothing like that I love swara a lot and I know she loves me too…everyone laugh and he realizes what he says…swara says no I think she is right sanskar and winks at him…I think uttara loves you too…uttara’s eyes widen while raglaksah look at them in shock…uttara says no di I love sahil…and everyone look at her…she realizes what she said and looks down…everyone laugh and says ohhh so this is the matter…sahil beta do you like uttara? He says no maa…all are shocked…I don’t like her…I love her…all laugh….
okay so it’s decided swasanraglaksahutt will get married on the same day….all sit down and get back to eating when ragini thinks of something naughty….she smirks….she takes off her shoes under the table and thinks you just wait what I do Mr. Laksh Maheswari…..she touches his feet with her bare feet and laksh starts coughing….she giggles while ap asks beta are you okay….he nods yes….he looks at ragini naughtily and thinks oh so you want to play like this huh? Now you watch….he takes his feet and touches her feet….she doesn’t react but sahil does….ragsah were sitting near each other so he mistakes ragini’s foot and did it to sahil….sahil thinks uttara did it so he does it to her….but actually swara smiled….she thinks sanskar did it so she does it but it touches uttara…..all 6 have an huge misunderstanding and uttara thinks sahil did it so she goes to do it but her feet touch ap’s feet….she thinks what is it tickling me….she looks under the desk and sees all 6 touching different foots….
She laughs so hard…..swasanraglaksahutt look at her in confusion and dp says what’s wrong ap…..

She signals him and he purposely drops an spoon on the floor….he sees and he too finds it funny…..all 6 look at them in confusion…..slowly ap and dp all signal all the adults and they all one by one look down by some excuse…all this while swasanraglaksahutt were still touching different partners feet….all adults started laughing and ragini couldn’t take it anymore so she shouts WHAT IS SO FUNNY? EVEN I WANT TO KNOW….
she does it in a cute way and swara also plays along and shekar says beta if you all look down you will know…..they all are shocked and think how did they know we were touching our finance’s feet….they all feel embarrassed…..dp says I know you all are embarrassed but if you all look down then you all would be more embarrassed…..sahutt say to swasanraglak if they know what can be more embarrassing then them knowing what we were doing….they all nod in I don’t know so they decide to look down….all 6 look down together and see their feet’s were touching other people’s feet…..
Ragini is touching laksh’s feet
Laksh is touching sahil’s feet
Sahil is touching swara’s feet
Swara is touching uttara’s feet
Uttara’s feet were touching sanskar’s feet
All 6 look to each other in shock and get up….
Raglak says actually we just remembered a work bye
Swasan get up and say oh I forgot I had to take sanskar for the house tour bye
Sahutt get up and says I have to go to bhai/di bye
All of them leave and all the adults start laughing
All 6 are in the garden and are playing the blaming game….
Swara: sanskar because of you I got so embarrassed do you know?
Sanskar: oh hello it wasn’t my fault
Swara: oh really then who was it huh
Ragini looks down
Sanskar: excuse me Mrs. Swara Godadia I’m not like those type of guys
Swara in a cute way says: not Swara Godadia…I am still a Maheswari
Sanskar says yeah whatever…just because we ae getting married again doesn’t mean your last name changes back to maheswari…he says it in a fake anger way
Swara pouts and says ughhh
Uttara: di you probably started it…you know how naughty you are getting
Sanskar: oh so swara is getting naughty huh and looks at her with one eyebrow up
Sahil: bhai I think it was you
Sanskar: me? Oh hello sahil don’t blame me…I am a decent guy
Sahil huffs and says oh decent haha nice joke
Sanskar gives him a cute angry face and says no you are actually right it was a nice joke….monkey
Uttara: hawww jiju don’t call MY sahil a monkey
Sahil: see uttara darling is right
Sanskar: haha of course she will after all a monkey will be her future husband
Laksh laughs and says oh so now sahil is uttara’s MY now huh
Swara teases uttara
Swara: aww sahutt will have monkey babies and makes a fake anger face
Uttara says di shut up
Laksh: no I think sahil started it….he is a donkey who likes to flirt with his donkey mate flirt too you know
Ragini: sounding nervous says yeah laksh you are right
Laksh: see ragini darling is on my side and all tease laksh now
Sahil fake smiles and says haha very funny while uttara says hawww bhai you called me a donkey

Swara: bhai why is ragini s quiet…not even blaming anyone…just said that one line
All are fighting amongst themselves but in a nok-jhok way when swara says wait a minute….ragini you said just one line and then nothing….I have a feeling it was you who started all this

All look at her and sanskar says di it was you right? She says maybe in a low voice….sahutt scream yeah it was definitely her….all look at her in a “I’ll kill you way” she looks for an opportunity to run away so she says ahhhh cockroach…all jump on the sofa while ragini runs away…..all ask where? Where did it go….they look and find ragini missing….swasanlaksahutt says yup it was her…they all get down and sahutt say we need to plan something….she embarrassed us na now we will take our revenge….all laugh and they all say what….

Sanskar says something and all are like yes let’s do it
Ragini goes in a room and thinks oh my god I am gone today….she thinks yes I will fall asleep so no one can say anything….she sleeps….at midnight swasanlaksahutt come in her room….they have 5 boxes filled with something…..all wink and start their plan….after they finish they all come out and say now we only have to wait for the morning…..all laugh and sit outside her room…..it’s morning…..ragini wakes up….she feels something around her…..she gets up and now she is wide awake and screams so loudly…..AHHHHHHH WHAT THE HELL….swasanlaksahutt wake up hearing her scream and they hi-fi saying yes our plan worked…..she wakes up and finds fake cockroaches, lizards, spiders and worms around her in her bed and the ground and bird poop (real) stuck on her hair….
She screams SWARA!! LAKSH!!! UTTARA!!! SAHIL!!!! SANSKAR!!!!

ALL OF THEM RUN TO LAKSH’S ROOM AND QUICKLY TAKE OUT ALL THE GAMES AND SPEARD THEM EVERYWHERE AND PRETEND TO BE SLEEPING LIKE THEY FELL ASLEEP AFTER A LONG TIME OF PLAYING GAMES….RAGINI COMES OUT OF HER ROOM AND MURMURS TO HERSELF TODAY YOU ALL ARE GONE…SHE GOES AND FINDS THEM ALL SLEEPING…SHE THINKS TO WAKE THEM BUT THEN STOPS….SHE THINKS THEY DID THIS TO ME NOW YOU ALL WATCH WHAT RAGINI GODADIA DOES….SHE RUNS OUTSIDE AND SWASANLAKSAHUTT WAKE UP….ALL SAY THANK GOD THAN HI-FI….THEY HEAR FOOTSTEPS SO FALL BACK ASLEEP (PRETENDING)

SHE SMILES AND SAYS NOW WAIT AND WATCH…SHE TAKES THE BUCKET SHE BOUGHT AND SPLATTERS IT ALL OVER SWASANLAKSAHUTT….THEY ALL TRY NOT TO WAKE UP BUT DUE TO THE SMELL HAVE TO….SANSKAR SAYS DI WHAT THE HELL IS THIS….SHE SMILINGLY SAYS REVENGE…..ALL LOOK ON SHOCKED AND SAY WHAT? SHE SAYS YES I KNOW YOU ALL PUT THOSE FAKE INSECTS AND BIRD POOP ON ME….ALL LAUGH….SHE SAYS SHUT UP….THEY STILL GIGGLE….AFTER SOMETIME SAHIL ASKS BUT DI WHAT IS THIS….SHE REMEMBERS EVERYTHING AND TELLS THEM ARE YOU SURE YOU WILL BE ABLE TO HEAR….THEY ALL ARE SCARED TO KNOW BUT COMPLY….SHE SAYS SO THIS BUCKET HAD COW DUNG, KETCHUP, LEMON JUICE, MILK, CHUNKY MILK, YOUGURT, AND MOST IMPORTANTLY BIRD POOP….
EVERYONE’S FACES CHANGE AND ALL AT ONCE SAY EWWWWW WHAT THE HELL RAGINI….SHE SAYS THIS IS THE RAGINI GODADIA’S REVENGE WAY…..ENJOY AND SHE LEAVES….ALL GET SO MAD AND SAY WE WON’T LEAVE HER SO SOON….
SCREEN FREEZES ON SWASANLAKSAHUTT EVIL PLOTTING FACES AND RAGINI’S DETERMINED FACE
IT’S NOW A COMPETITION BETWEEN RAGINI AND SWASANLAKSAHUTT….LET’S SEE WHO WILL WIN??

Precap: more revengeful ideas….fun at beachhouse….

GUYS IF I OVER DID THE NOK-JHOK OR PLAYFUL REVENGE IDEAS THEN I’M SORRY….BUT ALL MY READERS PLEASE TELL ME HOW I DID AND SHOULD I CONTINUE…I AM SORRY IF I HURT ANYONE…SEE YOU ALL SOON

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