Close Menu
  • Submit Your Article
  • Featured
  • Activity
  • Members
  • Spoilers
  • News
  • Reviews
  • Poll Zone
  • Fan Fiction
  • Episodic Analysis
  • Humour
Facebook X (Twitter) Instagram
  • Home
  • Contact Us
  • Submit Article
  • Activity
  • Register
  • Login
  • Members
  • Logout, {username}
Facebook X (Twitter) Instagram
Telly UpdatesTelly Updates
  • Home
  • Featured
  • Spoilers
  • News
  • Reviews
  • Poll Zone
  • Fan Fiction
  • Episodic Analysis
  • Humour
Telly UpdatesTelly Updates
Home»Fan Fiction»MY MAFIA KING – AN UNTOLD STORY OF UNDYING LOVE….#CURTAIN RAISER…..(FEW SHOTS)…..#MANMARZIYAAN
Fan Fiction Manmarziyan

MY MAFIA KING – AN UNTOLD STORY OF UNDYING LOVE….#CURTAIN RAISER…..(FEW SHOTS)…..#MANMARZIYAAN

MeenBy MeenJune 25, 20184 Comments3 Mins Read
Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn Tumblr Email
Share
Facebook Twitter LinkedIn Pinterest Email

RADHIKA’S POV

The moment those deep dark eyes met mine…..my heart lept to my throat….his eyes….they didn’t just bore in mine like before…..this time…it was so different…as if they saw straight…straight through my very soul…..there was this fiercly desperate madness in them….causing goosebumps all over my body…..my heart was beating at inhumane speed…..there was silence all around…..except for the sound of my heavy laboured breathing…..a sudden panic filled my heart….….all i could see and feel was….his eyes….his dark black eyes…..which doesn’t left mine even for a sec….as if they were claiming my soul….something stirred deep within me….causing me to fist the bed sheet tightly almost tearing it apart…..unable to look at his eyes anymore….i turned my face aside…..but before i can even breathe….his hand tightened more around my waist if thats even possible….and in a blink his body covered mine completely……a shocked gasp escaped my lips…..my eyes widened….& in a hitch i turned my face to him…..as soon as his eyes again met mine….a content feeling flashed across his eyes…..as if this is all he ever wanted….to look at my eyes…it felt as if his eyes were challenging mine to look away…..slowly almost painfully his eyes moved down….to my nose….to my cheeks….and then to my lips….it stayed there for a while….but when it again trailed back to mine…it darkened to a shade darker even if thats possible……my breath hitched in my chest…….he looked like a hungry lion on a hunt….. a shiver ran down my spine seeing him close…..this close….i could feel his warm breath on my nose…..unconsciously my whole body trembled beneath him……my heart went mad…..nervously i again tried to avert my gaze from his …..when he leaned all his body weight on mine…..crushing me in the bed as if to stop all of my movements….I laid there frozen like a deer caught in day light……suddenly it felt difficult to even breathe…..

##############################
So…….this was just a sneak peak….to let u guyz know….that I’m writing….and will update shortly….to all those who comment and like thanks a billion tonns ….
I know I don’t reply back much but that doesn’t mean I don’t cherish and value ur votes and comments…. believe me when I say this….every single time i see a vote or even a small….very small comment a smile graces my lips. …..a hearty thanks to all of u….

& Yup for those who are uncomfortable with all this romantic scenes,dark story line and abusses know this …..even I’m not sure what to write in concern with all this….& Surely uncomfortable to write up to a level….but that is what this story demands….& I’ll write it no matter what….so read on ur own risk….

& Yes to let u all know currently weather in Pune is beyond awesome….it feels almost Devine?

Share. Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn Tumblr Email
Previous Articlemeri aashiqui ##KANCHI ff season 2 – epi 4
Next Article Dil se dil ka rishta (C 2) Pt 1
Meen

    4 Comments

    1. AAYU on June 25, 2018 7:07 pm

      Hey Meen,
      I have just read all your updates and they were awesome.
      Please be a bit regular on your updates because the wait really kills me.
      Anyways I am very excited for your update and the progress of the mysterious story.
      Please post soon.
      Take care

    2. Parul on June 25, 2018 11:32 pm

      After such a long time u r bck love it awsm excited to rd further actually all wroters of mmz left tu so noone writes mmz ff so thank u for writing n plz one request atleast post summary or short recap plz becoz ur bck from long gap, if u can write then only?? bye gud night

    3. muhania on June 26, 2018 2:30 am

      thanks for the updete. a you also on wattpad

    4. Ab on June 27, 2018 10:43 am

      After a long time i m waiting for so long thanks and please continue this story i love it .

    Sponsor
    Latest Posts

    Mangal Lakshmi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mangal Is Disqualified, Then Given a Tough Second Chance

    November 29, 2025

    Manpasand Ki Shaadi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Arohi Receives Love While Kanika Grows Jealous

    November 29, 2025

    Advocate Anjali Awasthi 27th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Anjali Accused of Theft While Padma Goes Missing

    November 29, 2025

    Shiv Shakti (Colors) 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mahadev Stops Ravan and Declares His Second Test Failed

    November 29, 2025

    Advocate Anjali Awasthi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Kavya Misuses Mehek’s Jewelry

    November 29, 2025
    Sponsor
    Latest Comments
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Anon on Mangal Lakshmi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mangal Is Disqualified, Then Given a Tough Second Chance
    • Anonymous on Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 27th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Intrigues and Secrets in Virani Family Wedding Plans
    • Yoni on Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai 22nd November 2025 Written Episode Update: Broken Circles
    • Enam on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Enam on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    © 2025 TellyUpdates - All Rights Reserved. Privacy Policy | Terms

    Type above and press Enter to search. Press Esc to cancel.