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My lovely yhm (Episode 17)

administratorBy administratorMay 28, 201610 Comments3 Mins Read
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Raman was sitting in the sofa…
Ishu came out and sat with him in the sofa…
Raman turned and sat facing Ishu…
He touched her tummy…

Raman : Yes Meri bachi… What do your mumma want?
Ishu : Raman! How you got that I need something….
Raman : I know your mumma… baby… ask her ro tell…
Ishu : Then tell him baby… I need to go for a trip…
Raman put his hand over Ishu’s shoulder and she sat close to him…
Raman : Baby! Travel in this time is not gud for you and your mumma…
Ishu : Yeah I know! But we can go by bus na!
Raman got memories of her abortion…

Ishu carressed his face..
Raman : Ishu.,.
Ishu : No Raman…. This time… Humara baby ll come… No one can separate us…
He hugged her…
Raman : OK! Where can we plan for a trip?
Ishu : South India… Kodaikanal…
Raman : That much long distance!
Ishu : Please Raman… This is the best time to unite everyone…
Raman thought for a while..

He then called everyone…
First everyone objected….
Shagun: No Raman…. I am not coming if Manoj comes…
Manoj to Ishu : No Ishitha… I m not willing…
Yash to Ishu : Picnic…. With That kaali devi…. No ways Ishu..
Aarthi to Raman : Are you stupid? I won’t come…
Simmi to Ishu : Sorry Ishitha…. I can’t…
Parmeet : Sorry Raman.. Simmi won’t like this…
Mihika: No Jiju…
Abhishek : No Ishitha ji…
Romi : Not interested Bhabhi…
Sarika : I m not coming…

Raman to everyone : See… Ishitha wants to go to this trip… For her sake.. pls come… despite ur quarrels…
They all agreed…

Next day… They got ready…
Yash to men folk : Guys… I think Ishra planning to unite us with those Devils…,
Aarthi to our girls : You guys should cooperate with me… Ok..
They made a deal…

When they were about to leave..
Raman arranged two cars…
Raman : Guys… U all come in one car… Let the girls come in another car… Me n Ishu ll be in any of these car… Bcoz you couples having fight right!

Saying this he secretly made hi fi with Ishu and got into the car..
Couples confused…

They were travelling…
Due to long travel.. they stopped the car frequently for refreshing Shagun n Ishu…
Finally they reached the hotel…
Raman booked 3 rooms….
Raman : Me n Ishu ll be in one room.,.. u guys stay in a room… ladies can take the other… Bcoz…
Yash : We couples are having fight!
Raman : Brilliant! Mr. Yash…
He went to his room.,,
Actually kids are with Vandu n bala in home… They didn’t came for picnic,,.. as Vandu is recovering just now….

After refreshment… Everyone went for sight seeing..
Their everyone shocked at a sight…

Guess what???
Will get it today at my last episode.

Comments please…

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10 Comments

  1. Sachie on May 28, 2016 9:01 am

    Please don’t end this, very interesting storyline, love it a lot.
    Thank you very much.

  2. joke on May 28, 2016 9:41 am

    Pls don’t end it

  3. Nivedha on May 28, 2016 9:59 am

    Guys…
    I am sorry for my irregularity..

    Here is my schedule….
    Tomorrow will be My lovely YHM ke last update…
    Then My lovely YHM will move on to current track to make it pleasant…

    Every Saturday,Tuesday—> My Lovely YHM

    Then Sunday,Thursday–> Shaadhi FF

    Then Monday,Wednesday,Friday–> Dosthi FF

    I am writing another FF too in another name..
    Hope you guys have guessed what was that…

    You ll get that FF along with Shaadhi…
    This schedule won’t change here after…
    You will get my FF’s daily…According to this schedule…

    Tomorrow Last update of My lovely YHM of previous track…
    Hope u ll enjoy my current track of YHM in My lovely YHM….

    Dosthi FF also changed to new topic na… Hope you ll like that as the old one…

    Shaadhi FF is waiting with many twists and turns…

    Sorry for my delay frns…
    I need my fans back… Don’t lose hope..
    And Chinnu you said you ll beat me if I again leave… This time for sure Chinnu… I won’t leave

    Thank you guys…

  4. chinnu on May 28, 2016 10:24 am

    actually nivi na sema kovama irunthean ………. u mentioned my name na so mannichitean……….come back to episode always u rock………..

    • Nivedha on May 28, 2016 4:53 pm

      Yeah jolly… Nee enna manichita….

  5. ude on May 28, 2016 10:25 am

    No nivu please don’t stop it dr……..

  6. kumud on May 28, 2016 12:30 pm

    Pls don’t end this its intresting

  7. Reshma Pradeep on May 28, 2016 1:47 pm

    Its okkk yaar…….. I hope u give a happy ending to this track………& Also I am waiting for ur Current track YHM story through this………Of Course gonna miss this track…..But everything needs an end na……& I am Badly missing ur other ffs also………I hope u Keep ur promise that Update ffs regularly on the basis of ur written Schedule……….. & Coming to this Episode, ISHRA is AWESOME…….. Loved it……Masthi & all……Extremely Beautiful………..

  8. bhavana on May 28, 2016 3:21 pm

    whats the new ff title ur going to write

  9. Dini on May 28, 2016 6:29 pm

    I witing for ur MY LOVELY YHM with current track. I’m sure ur going to rock in that ff too. Love u Nivi.

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