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My desire to make you mine Part 7
After a year…
A big cake was brought by Suman and Veena.
The cutest couple Rohit and Sonakshi arrived.
Everyone wished them:Happy wedding anniversary..
Rohit-Sonakshi smiled happily.
Rohit took the mike and said:On this occasion I want to thank my wife Sona.Only because of her we are together.If she was not adamant about winning my heart I would have suppressed my love for her forever like a fool.
Sonakshi:When there is a cute person like you how can I not be crazily in love with you?
Rohit-Sonakshi shared a sweet romantic eye lock.
They cut the cake together and fed each other.
Rohit-Sonakshi danced beautifully.
Chura Liya Hai Tumne Jo Dil Ko
Nazar Nahin Churaana Sanam
Badalke Meri Tum Zindagaani
Kahin Badal Na Jaana Sanam
Oh, Le Liya Dil, Oh Haai Mera Dil
Haai Dil Lekar Mujhko Na Behlaana
Chura Liya Hai Tumne Jo Dil Ko
Nazar Nahin Churaana Sanam
Badalke Meri Tum Zindagaani
Kahin Badal Na Jaana Sanam
( Bahaar Banke Aaoon Kabhi Tumhaari Duniya Mein
Guzar Na Jaaye Yeh Din Kahin Isi Tamanna Mein )… (2)
Tum Mere Ho, Ho Tum Mere Ho
Aaj Tum Itna Vaada Karte Jaana
Chura Liya
Chura Liya Hai Tumne Jo Dil Ko
Nazar Nahin Churaana Sanam
Badalke Meri Tum Zindagaani
Kahin Badal Na Jaana Sanam
Ho, Sajaaoonga Lutkar Bhi Tere Badan Ki Daali Ko
Lahoo Jigar Ka Doonga Haseen Labon Ki Laali Ko
Sajaaoonga Lutkar Bhi Tere Badan Ki Daali Ko
Lahoo Jigar Ka Doonga Haseen Labon Ki Laali Ko
Hai Vafa Kya Is Jahaan Ko
Ek Din Dikhla Doonga Main Deewana
Chura Liya
Chura Liya Hai Tumne Jo Dil Ko
Nazar Nahin Churaana Sanam
Badalke Meri Tum Zindagaani
Kahin Badal Na Jaana Sanam
Le Liya Dil, Haai Mera Dil
Haai Dil Lekar Mujhko Na Behlaana
Chura Liya Hai Tumne Jo Dil Ko
Nazar Nahin Churaana Sanam
Hm Hm Hm Hm, Hm Hm Hm Hm… (2)(Yaadon ki Baraat)
After the dance to her surprise Rohit made her wear a bracelet.
Rohit:This is my wedding anniversary gift.
She smiled happily and embraced him.
To everyone’s surprise Akhil took a ring and proposed Pari.
Akhil:Pari,to be frank I fell for you at first sight itself.
Pari was surprised.
Akhil:I love you madly Pari.Will you turn our friendship into love?
Pari:I won’t change our friendship into love.
Akhil became upset.
Pari:Because I want our friendship to be there always.But yes..I too love you Akhil.
Akhil was surprised.
Pari:I don’t know how I fell for you.All I know is I love you.
Akhil was very happy.
Akhil:Will you marry me?
Pari:Yes Akhil.
Akhil made her wear the ring.
Everyone clapped hands for them.
Rohit-Sona were in their room.
Sona:Rohit…you did’nt ask me for your wedding anniversary gift.Don’t you want any gift?
Rohit:You already gave me a gift.Your beautiful smile is the gift.
She smiled.
Sona:But I have a very special gift for you Rohit.
Rohit:Really?
Sonakshi sat closer to him:Yes.
Rohit:What’s that gift?
Sona:You are going to be a father.
Rohit was stunned:What?How I am going to be a father?
Sona:You are a brainless Doctor.I am pregnant.
He could not believe his ears.A smile appeared on his face.
Rohit:Really?
Sona:Yes.
Rohit:Thank you so much Sona.This is the best wedding anniversary gift.
He pecked her cheek in excitement.
Rohit:Now onwards you have to be more careful about your health.You have to take calcium and iron tablets.
He kept giving her instructions.
Sonakshi thought:Again typical doctor talk.
Rohit slept off on her shoulder while talking continuously.
Sonakshi smiled:Guess Rohit himself got bored of his non stop doctor talk and slept off.
After 2 months…
Sonakshi:Rohit…our baby is really hungry these days.
Rohit:You eat well Sona.Our baby needs more food.I will bring dinner again for you.
Sona:I don’t want dinner again.I already had it.The baby is hungry for icecream.
Rohit smiled:Naughty baby.No wonder..as the mother is naughty.
Sona kicked his shoulder:Rohit..
They giggled and got into an embrace.
They went out at night and found an icecream stall.They bought icecream from there.
Sona smiled at Rohit:We will share icecream.If I don’t share the icecream with it’s papa the baby will get angry.
Rohit smiled looking at her deeply.
They romanced feeding icecream to each other.
Chalte chalet raho pe naa jane kab
Hum dono ek huye…
Sehra tu samandar main phir yun
Hum kaise mil gaye
Ulje huye the ishq ke dhaage
Aabb se raah tumse jud gaya…
Rohit:I need more icecream from you.
Sona:But my icecream is over.
Rohit:No..
Sona:What are you saying Rohit?
Rohit held her hand and showed her finger to her.It had a drop of icecream on it.
Sona:You are so observant.
Rohit:I observe everything about you Sona.
She smiled.
Rohit brought her finger close to his lips and he sucked the icecream drop.She was blushing.
Kahan hum…
Kahan tum…
Raab se mangu
Tujhe haar dum
She embraced him shyly.
Kahan hum…
Kahan tum…
Raab se mangu
Tujhe haar dum(KHKT)
Months passed and Sonakshi gave birth to a sweet baby girl.
Rohit carried the baby in his arms.
Rohit:It’s name will be…
Sonakshi:Oh Rohit…don’t name her.You will name her Vitamin C ,Vitamin D or you will choose some medicine’s name for her.So I will name her.
Rohit:Ok baba…you name her.But what name?
Sonakshi took the baby in her arms and looked at her smiling.
Sona:Ronakshi…
Rohit smiled.
Sona:It’s the combination of Rohit Sonakshi.
Rohit smiled:Actually I also chose this name.
Sona was surprised:Really?
Rohit:Yes.Because it is the combination of our names.
They both held their baby together and called her cutely:Ronakshi!
Years passed…But Rohit-Sonakshi’s love remained the same.
Rohit-Sonakshi lived happily with Ronakshi.
The end
12 Comments
That was a very nice ff. Thank u 4 dedicating an ff 4 me. I wil always be grateful abt it. U give a proper ending to all of ur ff and doesnt end it apruptly, tat is wat i lyk in u. And u explain each and every scene so deeply tat we start imagining the exact scene. Tats a very nice trait of a writer. Keep it up nd continue to entertaing the readers lyk dis… My favourite character would be obviously sona bcuz she was very much straight forward which is wat i love to be.. And the favourite scene would be the love confession of sona. Though it was sudden she didnt hide her feelings.
Waiting eagerly 4 ur next ff
thanks a lot saniya.please comment on part6 also.please read n comment on saaya n beyhadh pyar also.if you are fine plz read rusha ff mpk also
Hey I wanted it to be long but anyways it was really cute one!!!
thank you
Oh, wow. Ro and So gave birth to Ronakshi. I really like the icecream scene very much with title track. And also, when she says baby is hunger for icecream and you are a brainless doctor, It is really funny. About Akhil and Pari, their scenes are also ok but you might have added a small romantic song for them. Leave it, afterall it’s about Ronakshi. The name coincidence is really nice.
My favourite scene in the entire ff is Ronakshi’s reunion at airport/Railway station (literally forgot the venue) with the help of
their moms. My favourite character is Sonakshi because she didn’t took much time to confess her love. Waiting for your new fan-fiction
thanks a lot for the long comment.I really love long comments.sorry for not adding a song for akhil pari.i didn’t get that idea at all.rohit n moms scene was in the airport but ronakshi reunion was in their house
Is this your ff…..I didn’t read it but… I’ll definitely will read all the parts and comment on it….
Coming to this part….it is extraordinary…all the characters are very well extended and their feelings are shown beautifully..Ronakshi scene and baby scene…all are applause deserving scenes…?
thanks a lot for commenting on my ff.feel very happy to see it.
i read this ff from the start till the end!! your ff was really great!! my favourite part was when rohit and sonakashi confessed their love after sumit left and i even liked the naming ceremony of ro amd so baby, ronakshi!!!! it was really a great work!!! the way sonakshi had developed feelings for rohit and understood her feelings was very impressive…
and one more thing today’s music ‘chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko’ song was very nice and there was a special reason for me likening that song, when i was in class 1, i took part in the “fancy dress competition, i decided to do the role of zenat amaan and had sung this song!!!
i read your saaya ff but didn’t get time to comment the whole of episode was a suspense and it will be very exciting to read the next episode i find something fishy about veer and maya!!
i am again sayin your khkt ff was really a fab!!!
Thank u very much.Surprised to know that chura liya is connected to your life.
Thank u.If u get time plz do comment on the Saaya page
Really good ending, keep writing
thanks