Fan Fiction

Muquamal mohabbat ki adhuri dastan ab hogi puri!! ep 10

Hello friends!! So it’s a special episode as our love birds raglak would be bound in 7 promises!! And for swasan too a new part of journey will start!

Scene 1
Ragini’s room
She is crying with her family picture.just then janaki and jiten arrives
Janki- ragu why r u wasting these precious pearls..
Ragini- maa papa ……how would I live without you all
Jiten – my princess…. Don’t cry baby…..come here whenever u miss us…it’s a rule of society.
Ragini- why these rules are for girls only?
Janki- because only girls have capability to love two families unconditionally!!
Jiten- means I don’t take care of ur family janki?
Janki- o really do u remember how many brothers and sisters I have?
Jiten- 2 I think
Janki- idiot I don’t have any.
Jiten gets embarrassed.
Ragini smiles!

Both see her and smiles.
A voice came- oye hoye …..dramaqueen title was given to me and here my sis is flowing tears likeriver…not fair baby ur all facial will be wasted.
Ragini- shona…whn u came?
Swara- when u were crying …..yr if u will cry this much then laksh will get scared on seeing u.
Ragini gives her angry look and then smiles.
Swara- o madam I came here for u by taking off from hospital and u r giving me angry looks…..not done!
Ragini hugs her- OK madam let’s have dinner.
All have dinner.
At ragu’s room
Swara- so tomorrow u will be Mrs sejwal..cool!
Ragini- ya shona…..at last I m getting my laksh…means my all tears and my all miseries will end……afterall who knows more than u
Swara- I know my ragu…now don’t get emotional and ya must tell about ur first night in detail.
Ragini get shy…- shona u……o achcha u want training for urs….but babe sanky is really talented he would teach u…..and also ur dance ‘mujko barsat banalo’…
Swara turns red….ragu not fair
Both have pillow fight and laughs.

Scene shifted
Laksh was setting his room according to ragini’s choices.
Ap comes-
Omg am I in my son’s room ….so clean and neat…..any fairy came here?
Laksh- no mom she is coming tom. Thatswhy
Ap holds her ear – naughty!
Ap gives him lord krishna idol and says- this is our ancient idol which a husband gives to his wife …..ur dad gave it to me and u have to give it to ragini.
Laksh takes it and smiles.
At midnight
Laksh called ragini- come on ur terrace fast.
Ragini did so
On terrace-
Laksh was standing with a bouquet of orchids and chocolates..
Ragini was surprised
Laksh- tom is our marriage so we should celebrate it na.
They feed chocolates to each other .
Laksh- ragu I m sorry .
Ragini – what happened?
Laksh- ragu our child….
Ragini- laksh I never ever wanted to do that but Mumma ……I killed my child
Laksh- its my mistake…I left u alone.
Ragini- LTS mine too..I didn’t follow my responsibility
Laksh hugs her and it starts raining.
Hasi ban gye plays
They danced
Laksh pecked ragu’s lips first gently then passionately.
They hug each other.
Then janki arrives-
What’s going on here?

Raglak embarrassed.
Janki holding their ears Jo gya so ho gya now don’t dare to meet each other
Ragini- mom its paining..
Laksh- ya sasu mom …see ur son in law ..I m so innocent but ur daughter is really naughty.
Ragini angrily looks at him.
He gave her a naughty smile.
Janki – yaa I knw how much innocent u r ..now go otherwise I will call ap Ji.
And early morning is our flight to jaipur
Laksh touch her feet and gives a flying kiss to ragu and goes
Ragu smiles.

Next day-
At Jaipur ( in mansion of sejwal’s )
It was a beautiful mansion like that of kings and queens ……it was beautifully decorated like a bride itself.
Laksh’s room
Laksh was getting ready
Laksh- yr sanky help me I want to meet ragu …
Sanskar- u r talking about itself
…..bcoz of u I havnt met shona from 20 hrs….huh
Laksh- then do something …mom has restricted me to not meet ragu before marriage..
Sanky- OK…..let me think….he speaks something in laksh’s ears
In ragini’s room
Ragini was looking epitome of beauty in red and orange bridal lehenga chunri …with marwari jewellery and touch up.
Swara was also looking beautiful in navy blue and pink lehenga chunri with light makeup and simple diamond set.
Just then they heard a knock on door
Swara opens the door and get shocked to see sanskar and laksh
Sanskar was mesmerized to see her ……
Sanky- shona today is raglak marriage not ours …if u will look this much pretty then I won’t be able to control.
Swara gives him a light slap with love .
Laksh- ho gaya tumhara ….yr shadi meri h …muje bi Milne do.
Swara- oho Jiju so eager to meet my sis…but what I would get.
Laksh gives her a big dairy milk silk ..
This would work- he said

She smiles and swasan exits
Laksh enters .
Ragini keeps her hands on her face..
Laksh removes her hands and get lost in her sparkling beauty .
Laksh takes out a golden pearl kamar band and ties it on her waist- its my gift for my beautiful jaan
Ragini too takes out a beautiful golden kalgi and attach it on his sehra
Now laksh was looking too handsome that any girl would be jealous with ragini for marrying him
Laksh- ragu I want to talk something very imp.
Ragini- yaa ….kaho
Laksh- u knw my profession very well and also u knw that my life is wholesole dedicated to my motherland….I want a promise if something happened to me u would not become weak ……..
Ragini stops him- I knw and I m proud of ur job and knw wht nothing could happen u …raglak’s breathe is connected jb take mai hu tb tum ho air jb tk tum ho tb tk mai hu..
Both hug each other
After sometime marriage ceremony starts
Tare hai barati chandni hai ye barat plays
Raglak happily do Pooja and varmalas and take pheras and make promises to live together for 7 births .
Laksh wears her mangalsutra and puts vermilion in her hairline.
Marriage gets completed.
Both takes blessing of elders.
Janki- ragu beta kalire rasam….just fall kalire on swara and also give her ur kangan
Ragini makes her kalire fall in swara’s dupatta and wears her her bangle .
Ragu- shona now ur marriage will be preponed.
Swara smiles.
At bidai
Ragini cries too much as she was leaving .
At raglak’s room
Laksh enters in room …
Ragini was sitting on bed decorated with roses
Laksh comes near her and gives her lord Krishna idol …and tells about its history.
Laksh- mom wants a grandson/granddaughter
Ragini shies .
She remembers about lost child and gets her eyes moist
Laksh understands – ragu it was past …I won’t let u upset again …..he hugs her
Both kissed each other.

Baho k darmiyan plays-
He moves towards her and kissed her earlobe then both share a wild liplock for 10 mins . ragini shies and go .he pulls he and she falls on him.
Curtains fall
They consummate.
Scene shifted- swara was thinking about happy moments spent with ragu ..
She heard a knock on her window .she opens it and it was sanskar.
She was about to shout …but sanky holds her mouth.
Sanky comes inside and gives her a dress. And order her to wear it.
Swara- at midnight u here and where we r going?
Sanskar- u r my would be wife ….now don’t argue I have a surprise.
She wears it and comes out..
It was a white gown .she was looking really cute like a fairy.
He takes her to a lonely place.
It was a beautifully decorated place with swara’s fvt. Lights and flowers.
Sanskar gives him a large card and rose bouquet .
Then he gets music
Toota jo kabhi taara plays-
He throws rose petals on her and both danced beautifully.
Sanskar then makes her sit on table and
Serves her favourite rajma-chawal
Swara- u still remember.
Sanky- no its mine fvt.
Swara glares
He – sorry just kidding…I remember ur each and every choice.
Swara smiles.
Swara- thank you sanskar..u don’t knw how much this means to me.
Sanskar- this is just trailer darling….whole movie is left.
Swara- I love u
Sanskar- I love u too
Swara- I love u three
Sanskar- I love u too infinity.
Both smiles
Friends I have to go somewhere so next part I would upload after 25….remember and keep reading and keep smiling????
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Abhilasha

I m a crazy person...wants to become a doctor ...love my parents My hobby writing!! My love Kanchi!!! Swaragini.......and the diva Shraddha Kapoor!!

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