Raglak os
Mujhse Shaadi Karoge?
Hey guysss:) How r all of u? So last time I wrote a os Called “I Love You”. It was a Swasan os. This time I wanna write Raglak. Actually I don’t see that many Raglak stories so I’m gonna write one.
So I really didn’t like how Raglak shaadi happened. I feel Lucky shud have done something to propose to her. She shud have rejected him for hurting her and Laksh shud have worked hard to get her. Coz it’s always been Ragu who was waited for Laksh’s love and has done so much to get it. And if Laksh is also loving her then he shud work hard to get it rite? I’m not saying he shud shove Sanky in a river and marry Ragini by dhoka but he shud have worked to get her love. It’s what I feel. I know many of u might have other opinions and I respect ur opinions. This is my opinion and based on my opinion I’m writing a Raglak os. It’s a little different from serial coz here it includes love, relationship, break up, then love again and all that between these two from start itself. So I hope u guys enjoy it:)
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Raglak were just friends at start. But soon they started liking each other and decided to start dating. They dated for three months but later Ragini realised that Laksh was in a relationship with another girl. He had cheated on her. She was very upset. She loved him a lot. And he just played with her feelings. Ragini started ignoring Laksh. He didn’t realise that she knew about his other relationship. He confronted her one day in a park.
Laksh: Tum mujhe ignore Kyun kar rahe Ho?
Ragini: Hum Kyun ignore kar rahe hai? Aapko pata honi chaahiye!
Laksh: Tum Kabse itne formally baath karne lagi?
Ragini: Jabse humme Pata Chala ki Kavya aapki girlfriend hai!
She had tears in her eyes.
Laksh: Ragu-
Ragini: HUMME WOH MAT BULAYE! AAP PLS YAHA SE JAAYE! AAP JAISE INSAAN SE PYAAR KARKE HUMNE BAHOT BADI GALATI KI LAKSH! CHEE! AAP AISE KARENGE HUMME UMEED BHI NAHI THA! CHALE JAAYE YAHA SE! AUR AINDS HAMARE PAAS AANE KI KOSHISH MAT KIJIYE! VARNA MAAR DAALENGE AAP KO! GET LOST!
Laksh went. Ragu was upset. She decided to go back to Kolkata to her family. She was in Mumbai now for studies. She finished the year and left. Laksh searched for her but didn’t find her. For three years he looked. He had realised his mistake now. He knew what he did with Ragini was wrong. He broke up with Kavya also and looked and looked for Ragini. He didn’t find her. Kavya came to him one day.
Laksh: Pls YAHA SE jaao!
Kavya: Laksh, mein jaanti hu ki Meri Wajah Se Ragini chali gayi. Par mere saath bhi tumne dhoka kiya hai.
Laksh: Kav-
Kavya: Look Laksh. Mein Bahot open minded ladki hu par ground rules mere paas bhi hai. Tumne galati ki par tumhe ehsaas hai uska. So I forgive u and ur still my friend. But I can’t see u upset like this.
Laksh: Kya karu Kavya? Ragu Kahi mil nahi rahi hai! Bina kuch batake woh chali gayi!
Kavya: Actually woh apni family ke paas gayi hai aur Hamare Tarah woh apni education puri ki hai aur ab woh Ek successful doctor hai…
Laksh: Tumhe kaise Pata?
Kavya: Uske jaane ke baad Maine usse Facebook pe friends kiya aur misunderstandings clear ki. Tabse hum best friends hai. Usne bataya.
Laksh grabbed her shoulders: Kaha hai woh?
Kavya moved: Kolkata… Kaali Baadi mein reh thi hai…. Tumhare ghar ke paas.
Laksh: Perfect! Mein ghar bhi jaaunga aur usse maafi bhi maangunga.
Kavya: Aur usse Apna pyaar ka ehsaas bhi karao!
Laksh: Pyaar?
Kavya: Don’t deny. U love her!
Laksh thought: Haan. It’s true. I LOVE RAGINI!
Kavya laughed: Jaao ab!
time forward Laksh in Kolkata.
He meets his family- Maheshwaris. It turns out that they know Gadoddia’s. Ragini’s sister Swara is Laksh’s Bhabhi (I didn’t feel like keeping Swasan away from each other here).
Swara: Laksh, woh tumse Bahot pyaar karti hai aur Tumne yeh dhoka…. Usse akela choddo!
Laksh: Chodne ke liye Maine usse pyaar nahi kiya Bhabhi.
Sanskar: Swara, isse jo karna hai karne do. Iss baar woh galat nahi karega.. I know my bro.
Scene change.
All Maheshwaris are at Gadoddia house. Their cousin Kartik is gonna get married to Ragini but Laksh doesn’t know. Laksh came happily thinking that he’ll meet Ragini and express his love. Everyone sat and Kartik looked around happily. He wasn’t in love with Rags but he was happy to marry his parents’ and Chacha’s (DP’s) choice. Ragini came out holding tea for everyone. Laksh looked at her mesmerised. Ragini didn’t notice him. She gave tea to everyone and came to Laksh. She didn’t look at him. He took the tea.
Laksh: Thanks.
Ragini recognised the voice and looked up shocked. Laksh smiled at her.
Laksh: Hi Ragini:)
Ragini: L-Laksh?
Ragini ran from there. Laksh went behind her. She ran into the room. He went behind her and closed the door.
Ragini: Laksh, pls aap Yaha se jaaye!
Laksh: Nahi Ragini. Mein tumse kuch kehna chaahata hu…
Ragini put her hands on her ears.
Ragini: Humme kuch nahi Sunna. Aap jaaye!
Laksh moved her hands and tried talking. She didn’t listen. He got angry and pinned her to the wall.
Laksh: Mere baath sunlo Ragu. Maine tumhare saath jo kuch bhi kiya, Bahot galat tha, I know. Ehsaas hogaya mujhe. I shouldn’t have done what I did. Pichle theen saal se tumhe dhund raha hu. Kavya ne tumhari address Di. Hum dono ka bhi break up hogaya par woh mere acchi dost hai. Ragini, I’m sorry yaar. Pls mujhe maaf kar de!
Ragini got angry: Aap ko Kya lagta hai Laksh? Yeh sab aasan hai? Nahi Laksh Nahi! Humne aap se saccha pyaar kiya aur apne Kya kiya? Dhoka Diya. Laksh humne aap se jitna pyaar kiya usse Kahi zyada hum apne self respect se pyaar karte hai. Aapko agar maafi chaahiye toh FINE! Le lijiye! Par ainda kisi ladki ke saath aisa mat kijiye aur humse maafi se zyada kuch mat expect kijiye!
Laksh: Mein kisi bhi ladki ke saath aisa Nahi kar sakta. Kyunki Maine apna dil tumhe de Diya!
Ragini looked at him shocked.
Laksh: Haan Ragu. Tumhare jaane ke baad mujhe ehsaas hogaya. I Love You Ragu…
Ragini slapped him on the face and was very angry.
Ragini: AAP KE LIYE AASAN HAI NA KISI BHI LADKI KO JAAKE I LOVE YOU KEHNE KE LIYE?! WELL HAMARE LIYE AISA KOI BHI PROPOSAL ACCEPT KARNA AASAN NAHI HAI LAKSH MAHESHWARI! HUM AAP SE PYAAR NAHI KARTE! IN FACT HAMARE SHAADI HONE WALI HAI LAKSH! AAP JAANTE HAI AAP KE PARIVAAR YAHA KYUN AAYA? AAP KE COUSIN KARTIK MAHESHWARI KA RISHTA DENE KE LIYE! AND U KNOW WHAT? I AM GOING TO ACCEPT IT!
She stormed out of the room. Laksh was shocked. He followed her. They went to everyone.
Shekhar: Ragini beta, jaao Kartik Se baath karlo. Aur phir batao agar pasand aaya:)
Ragini wiped her tears: Baba, iski zaroorat Nahi hai. (Looks at Laksh) Humme iss rishta se koi aitraaz Nahi hai. Aap sab ne select kiya toh accha hi Hoga. (Looks at Shekhar) Humme yeh rishta Manzoor hai. Kartik se shaadi karenge hum!
They were all happy. Soon the went. Laksh cried on the way silently. Ragini broke down.
full week
All the functions of marriage happened. There was one day between b4 marriage and Laksh confronted Ragini. They had a painful talk and Ragini went away. All this was witnessed by Kartik and Sanskar. In the morning, KarSan came to Laksh’s room with the same dulha costume as Kartik. Laksh was shocked. Kartik told him that he saw everything and told him that he’ll unite Raglak. He told them a plan.
during wedding
Pandit: Ladka ko bulaye…
Sanskar got the dulha.
Pandit: Kanhya ko bulaye…
Swara got Ragini. They went on mandap. All rituals started. Soon Kanhyadaan happened. And soon they had to get up for pheres. Ragini had tears in her eyes.
Ragini thought: Laksh, hum Tum se Bahot pyaar karte hai. Par hum phir se dhoka Nahi seh sakte. Humme maaf kijiye…
Pandit: Pehle theen phero mein dulha aage rahega aur chaar phero mein Dulhan.
They started. Three pheres got over. Ragini came forward. Three more got over. Last one was happening when Kartik came out from behind a pillar and stood there and smiled at Ragini. Ragini saw this and was shocked.
Ragini: RUKH JAAYE!
Dulha stopped. Ragini was shocked.
Ragini: Yeh dulha Kartik Nahi hai! Kartik waha hai!
They all saw Kartik and was shocked. KarSan explained the situation.
Sujata: Toh sehra ke peeche kaun hai?
Dulha removed sehra. It was Laksh. They were shocked. Kartik told them everything.
Kartik: Ragini, mein toh yeh shaadi sirf parivaar ke Khushi ke liye kar raha tha aur mujhe koi bhi ladki mil sakta hai. Par Laksh. Laksh tumse saccha pyaar karta hai aur Tum bhi karte Ho. Pls na mat Kaho.
Laksh came to her: Ragu, I’m sorry Maine tumhare saath dhoka kiya. I’m really sorry. Tumhare jaane ke baad mujhe ehsaas hua ki mein saccha pyaar sirf tumse karta hu. I missed u a lot Ragu. Pls mujhse door mat Ho. I can’t live without you. Mar jaaunga tumhare Bina. Pls Haan keh do. I know that u love me and I love u too yaar. Mere dil pe raaj sirf Tum karti Ho. I want to spend my whole life with u. Mujhse shaadi Karoge?
Ragini had tears of joy in her eyes. Kartik took her hand and Laksh’s hand and joined it so that they were holding hands.
Kartik: Aise hi rehna. Ek saath. Pls?
Ragini composed herself.
Ragini: Hum bhi Tum se Bahot pyaar karte hai Laksh. I love you too❤️ Aur Haan:) Hum Tum se shaadi karenge:)
Everyone was happy. Raglak hugged they finished the last phera. Then Laksh put mangalsutra and sindoor and shaadi sampan hui. They took bado ka aashirvad. After that in their room on first night they were with each other.
Laksh: Hum dono hamesha ke liye Ek hogaye Ragu. Ragini and Laksh- Together forever. Infinite Love.
Ragini laughed and hugged Laksh.
Ragini: I Love You Laksh❤️?.
Laksh hugged back and sighed happily.
Laksh: I Love You Too Ragini❤️?.
Ending song- Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai
Jaane kya kar gaye
Jaise andhero mein tum
Chandani bhar gaye (x2)
Kare chaand taaron ko mash’hoor itna kyun
Kambakht inse bhi khoobsoorat hai tu
I Love you tu ru ru yeah….
Din bhar kare baatein hum
Phir bhi lage baatein adhoori aajkal
Mann ki dehleezon pe koi aaye na
Bas tum zaroori aajkal