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Home»Fan Fiction»Mujhse Dosti Karoge! (Will you be my friend!)Subhan Mannat Ibadat TS Part 1
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Mujhse Dosti Karoge! (Will you be my friend!)Subhan Mannat Ibadat TS Part 1

JasminerahulBy JasminerahulSeptember 24, 20242 Comments9 Mins Read
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Mujhse Dosti Karoge! (Will you be my friend!) Part 1

This TS is my version of the movie Mujhse dosti karoge with a twist.

Subhan,

Ibadat

and Mannat

were best friends in childhood.Subhan was more closer to Mannat.

Subhan’s father got a job in America and they decided to shift there.Subhan was very sad to be away from Mannat,so as Mannat.

Subhan:I will miss you Mannat.

Mannat:I will also miss you Subhan.

Ibadat’s and Mannat’s mother Dua said:Don’t worry children.You both can chat online.

The kids were still not happy.

 

Mannat received Subhan’s mail.Mannat replied.

She kept getting Subhan’s mails.

But suddenly Mannat fell ill.She had pneumonia. She was not able to reply to Subhan.

Mannat was lying on the bed and weeping:Ibadat,I can’t reply to Subhan?What to do?

Ibadat:Don’t worry Mannat.I will reply to Subhan on your behalf.

Mannat was relieved:Thank you Ibadat.

Ibadat started messaging Subhan in Mannat’s name.That continued for years and now all are adults.

They are excited as Subhan is coming back to India.

Mannat:I am so happy Ibadat that Subhan is returning.

Ibadat:I am also very happy.

Suddenly Mannat became dull.

Mannat:But I am worried about Subhan’s reaction when he comes to know that it was not me,but you were the one who was chatting with me.Because though I could not continue chatting with him, I really love Subhan.

Ibadat:Don’t worry Mannat.I will not tell Subhan that I was the one who was chatting with him in your name.

Mannat:But I want him to know the truth.I don’t want to betray him.

Ibadat:You are right Mannat.We should not fool Subhan.

Ibadat said in her mind:How can I tell Mannat that I also fell in love with Subhan while chatting with him?

 

 

Subhan returned from America.

Both Ibadat and Mannat were excited to see him.

Dua:Subhan,can you recognize them?

Subhan:Sure.I remember their features very well.

He went near Mannat and said:You are Mannat.Right?

Mannat was surprised.

Mannat:You recognized me.I am so happy.

He smiled.

Subhan asked Ibadat:How are you Ibadat?

Ibadat:I am fine Subhan.How are you?

Subhan:I am fine as I got my friends back.

They smiled.

Subhan looked at Mannat:You look stylish like always Mannat.

Mannat blushed.

Ibadat thought:Why is Subhan calling Mannat by her name itself?He was calling me Gungun while chatting.

 

 

Subhan and Mannat were walking together.

Subhan:Will you be my friend Mannat?

Mannat:I will think about it.

Subhan:What?

They burst into laughter.

They sang and walked around having fun.

–MALE–

Hey, keh do ke tum mere dil mein rahoge

Keh do ke tum mujhse dosti karoge

Keh do ke tum mere dil mein rahoge

Keh do ke tum mujhse dosti karoge

 

–FEMALE 1–

Dekhoongi, sochoongi, kal parson kuch kahoongi

 

–MALE–

Hey hey hey hey, keh do ke tum mere dil mein rahoge

Keh do ke tum mujhse dosti karoge

 

–FEMALE 1–

O dekhoongi, sochoongi, kal parson kuch kahoongi

La la la la la, la la la, la la la la

La la la la la, la la la, la la la la la

 

–FEMALE 2–

Hum saathi kitne puraane, phir kyoon hai itne anjaane

 

–MALE–

Eh hey hey, hey hey, hey hey hey hey

 

–FEMALE 2–

Hum saathi kitne puraane, phir kyoon hai itne anjaane

Kya rang laaye na jaane bachpan ke yeh dostaane

 

–MALE–

Kab kahan kya khabar jaa ruke yeh nazar

 

–FEMALE 1–

Arre kya pata kaun hai kiska yahan hamsafar

 

–MALE–

Keh do ke tum mere dil mein rahoge

 

–FEMALE 1–

(La la la)

 

–MALE–

Keh do ke tum mujhse dosti karoge

 

–FEMALE 1–

O dekhoongi, sochoongi, kal parson kuch kahoongi

 

–MALE–

Arre keh do ke tum mere dil mein rahoge

 

–FEMALE 1–

(La la la)

 

–MALE–

Keh do ke tum mujhse dosti karoge

Tum bhi to ho dost meri, tum to mera saath de do

 

–FEMALE 1–

La la la, la la, la la la la la

 

–MALE–

Tum bhi to ho dost meri, tum to mera saath de do

Apni saheli ka mere haathon mein tum haath de do

 

–FEMALE 2–

Intezaar intezaar, aur kya hai yeh pyaar

 

–MALE–

Jhooth hi yeh sahi, keh de voh ek baar

 

–FEMALE 1–

Lo maine kaha tumse dosti karoongi

Tum bhi kaho mujhse dosti karoge

 

–MALE–

Dekhoonga

 

–FEMALE 1–

(Achha?)

 

–MALE–

Sochoonga

 

–FEMALE 1–

(O ho)

 

–MALE–

Kal parson kuch kahoonga

 

–FEMALE 1–

Ae, maine kaha tumse dosti karoongi

Tum bhi kaho mujhse dosti karoge

 

–MALE–

Dekhoonga, sochoonga, kal parson kuch kahoonga

(MDK).

Subhan:Mannat,say naa.Mujhse dosti karoge?

Mannat held his hand and said:I am already your friend Subhan.

They smiled.

 

Another day…

Mannat:Subhan,I need a favour from you.

Subhan:You called me your friend.Then how can it be a favour?

She smiled.

Mannat:In the colony function,I going to dance.But I need a partner.Will you be my dance partner?

Subhan :Sure Mannat.What is the need of asking me?

She smiled cheerfully.

Mannat:One more thing.You,me and Ibadat were close friends in childhood.Let us relive those days by going out and chilling together.

Subhan:Very nice idea.I am waiting.

She smiled.

 

 

Mannat and Subhan danced together at the colony function having a lot of fun with each other.

Aaj Ke Ladke I Tell You
Kitne Lallu What To Do
Aaj Ke Ladke I Tell You
Kitne Lallu What To Do
Koi Mujhe Pucche How Are
You Koi Mujhe Bole How Do You Do

Kabhi Koi Mujhse Na Kahe
Oh My Darling I Love You
Oh My Darling I Love You
Oh My Darling I Love You

Aaj Ki Ladki I Tell You
Nakhre Waali Sun Le Tu
Aaj Ki Ladki I Tell You
Nakhre Waali Sun Le Tu


Na Mein Pucho How Are
You Na Main Bolu How Do You Do
Abhi Yahin Main Kehta Hun
Oh My Darling I Love You
Oh My Darling I Love You
Oh My Darling I Love You

Aaj Ke Ladke I Tell You
Kitne Lallu What To Do
Roj Milo Chupke Chupke
Pyaar Kare Chupke Chupke
Hum Roj Mile Chupke Chupke
Pyaar Kare Chupke Chupke
Main Kab Kissi Se Darta Hun


Main To Tumpe Marta Hun
Main Kaise Yeh Maanon Chal
Mera Haath Pakad Le
Lo Haath Padkad Ke Main

Bolon

Oh My Darling I Love You
Oh My Darling I Love You
Oh My Darling I Love You
Aaj Ke Ladke I Tell You
Kitne Lallu What To Do

Achcha To Chalo Pyaar Kare
Saath Samundar Paar Kare
Achcha To Chalo Pyaar Kare
Saath Samundar Paar Kare
Tere Saath Na Aau Main Raaste
Mein Dub Na Jaaon Main
Pyaar Mein Jo Dub Gaye
Yaar Wohi To Paar Huve
Aisa Hai To Sun Soniya
Oh My Darling I Love You
Oh My Darling I Love You
Oh My Darling I Love You
Aaj Ke Ladke I Tell You
Aaj Ke Ladke I Tell You

Na Mein Pucho How Are
You Na Mein Bolo How Do You Do


Abhi Yahan Hum Kehte Hai
Oh My Darling I Love You
Oh My Darling I Love You
Come On Everybody Sing With Me
Oh My Darling I Love You
Oh My Darling I Love You
Oh My Darling I Love You
Oh My Darling I Love You.

(MDK).

 

 

Subhan,Ibadat and Mannat went outing and enjoyed.

 

Andekhi Anjaani Si Pagli Si Deewani Si

Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re

Andekhi Anjaani Si Pagli Si Deewani Si

Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re

Chori Se Chupke Chupke Baithi Hai Dil Mein Chupke

Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re

Andekha Anjaana Sa Pagla Sa Deewana Sa

Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re

Andekha Anjaana Sa Pagla Sa Deewana Sa

Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re

Chori Se Chupke Chupke Baitha Hai Dil Mein Chupke

Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re

Andekhi Anjaani Si Pagli Si Deewani Si

Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re

Mere Khayalon Mein Na Jaane Kitni Tasveeren Banne Lagi

Bas Aasmaanon Pe Do Dilo Ki Takdeere Banne Lagi

Bin Dekhe Hai Aisi Bechaini Tauba Oye Rabba Dekha To Jaane Kya Hoga

Sapno Mein Aane Wali Neende Churane Wali

Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re

Oh Palko Ke Upar Niche Dil Ke Dhadkan Ke Peeche

Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re

Andekhi Anjaani Si Pagli Si Deewani Si

Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re

Na Jaane Kya Hoga Na Kya Hoga

Pehli Mulakaat Mein

Kaise Chupaoongi Chand Ko Main Us Chaandni Raat Mein

Bas Ab To Main Uska Ghoonghat Kholoonga

Chupke Se Dekhonga Kuch Na Boloonga

Oye Oye Yeh Bechaini Oye Oye Yeh Betaabi

Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re

Jis Ko Dekha Na Barso Usko Dekhoonga KalParso

Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re

Andekha Anjaana Sa Pagla Sa Deewana Sa

Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re

Andekhi Anjaani Si Pagli Si Deewani Si

Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re….(x3)

(MDK).

 

 

Haider-Dua celebrated their wedding anniversary.

To their surprise,at the party Subhan proposed to Mannat taking out a ring.

Subhan:Mannat,as you know in childhood itself I liked you very much.When I became a teenager,you became my crush.In adulthood I began to love you.After spending time with you,I started loving you like crazy.Your childish crazy bubbly chirpy nature is what made me love you.

Mannat was surprised and happy.

Ibadat thought:Why is Subhan behaving strangely?While chatting with me,he told me that he loved my serious mature nature.But now he is saying that it’s Mannat’s childish crazy nature which captured his heart.

Mannat:I also love you Subhan.Since childhood I have been liking you.

Subhan became so happy he put the ring on her finger.Ibadat became dull.

(Thank you Salley for the edit).

Subhan held Mannat closer to him.

Haider-Dua became very happy,so as Subhan’s parents.

They:Congrats Subhan and Mannat.

Subhan and Mannat smiled at them.

Ibadat smiled tearfully.She hid her tears.

Ibadat said in her mind:I never thought that losing Subhan will break my heart.

Suddenly Mannat remembered that she has not Subhan the truth that she was not the one who chatted with him.She became upset.

Ibadat and Mannat went to meet Subhan.

Subhan:Mannat,what’s the important matter that you want to tell me?

Mannat:Subhan,I hid a very important matter from you.I have not chatted with you Subhan.It was Ibadat who chatted with you.You love me because of the chat.Right?

Subhan was shocked.

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2 Comments

  1. Revu on September 25, 2024 6:23 pm

    Mujhse Dosti Karogi movie – I haven’t watched this movie fully just few clips only. But so happy that you are writing a story based on this movie. Surprised to see the show and actors you choose. I haven’t watched Rab se Dua show so I don’t know anything about it. Among all these the most familiar face for me is Yesha only whom I loved as Muskaan very much. Ibadat, Mannat and Subhan friendship from childhood is very nice. The childhood pics are so cute. Surprising that Ibaadat only chatted with Subhaan these much years online as Mannat. Subhaan used to address Ibaadat as Gungun while chatting then why he didn’t called Mannat by that name? Dance was lovely with song. Three friends enjoying together was good. Subhaan proposing Mannat all of a sudden was quite unexpected. Will Mannat tell truth to Subhaan. Eagerly waiting to read the update.

    • Jasminerahul on September 25, 2024 6:25 pm

      Thanks a lot

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