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Mrs.Khadoos v/s Mrs.Malhotra ( Episode 2 )

Hi guys! I am sooooo happy with ur feedback. Ur comments are the real motivators and the exact push I needed for the updates!?? Thnq so much for ur love! Also to make it easier to find parts of the story who have joined late I will be posting the links of episodes on my wall.

And the chapters will get longer as the story progresses as right now many characters are yet to make their entries. As i told before since this story is going to have suspense as well…you won’t get only Kaanchi scenes…They will be there of course but story won’t be focused completely on them. So please be patient. There are many surprises and twists to come.??

Now here we go with the 2nd chapter.

———- Episode 2 ———-

“Saanchi!”

Here Jaya wakes up at night due to her nightmare and is disturbed throughout night. In her dream she saw Dr.Anand Malhotra cancelling Saanchi’s name from the list because she was Sunil’s daughter. Though it was just a dream she knew it is not far from reality since Anand hated her husband with a passion especially after that incident.

To distract herself, next day she goes for grocery shopping. And as fated she hears a familiar voice calling her.

“Jaya!”

“Kusum?! Tum yahaan?”

“We need to talk par yahaan nahi …”

After reaching Kusum’s home they chitchatted a bit and then came to centres of their world- Saanchi, Sunny and Kabir.
Jaya was relieved to talk to someone who knew Anand’s other face. Kusum too shared her worries regarding her son.

“He won’t believe me Jaya. He practically worships the ground Anand walks on. Though he doesn’t like Gayatri much but tolerates her just becaude she is Anand’s wife.”

“If Savitri were here….”

“I know…I miss her as well. Frankly speaking I wanted to run away from those bitter memories. The ghosts of the past haunt me even today. But I waited just for the sake of Savitri’s kids. Also I can’t deny, however bad Anand might be he sees kabir like his own son.”

“You have a point. Even I am worried about Saanchi. ”

Jaya tells about her dream. She also tells how she wants Saanchi to study only in SDCH since it is the top most medical college in India.

And suddenly Kusum is struck with an idea.

” Your problem is that she would get recognised by her name and you don’t want her to do something illegal just for the sake of her admission right?”

“Yes.Why? You have anything in mind? Please tell me.”

“Actually I do. Though I admit I am being selfish as well, for my son. I am worried that he may get trapped by Gayatri into marrying her daughter Riya. She’s not a bad girl but just not the right one for my son. So would you give me a chance to become your daughter’s second mom? I would like her to be my daughter-in-law. She would get Kabir’s name and will learn under his careful watch and protection in SDCH and she will do what I couldn’t-Show him Anand’s real face.”

” I don’t mind but don’t you want to meet her first?”

“She is your and Sunil bhai’s daughter
Jaya and that’s enough for me.”

And the two mothers parted ways smiling after so many years.

Later that evening Kabir returned home. Seeing the constant smile on his mother’s face he knew something fishy was going on. As she gave him tea and sat near him, he asked her,
” Kya hua Maa? Why are you so happy? ”

“Woh toh mai hu~! Meri sabse badi chinta jo dur ho gayi beta!”

“Maa~! Aap toh aise bol rahi ho jaise apko apni serial wali aurton ki tarah koi bahu mil gayi ho!”????

“Bilkul sahi jawaab!”??

“What?!Maa!??”

And just like that Kabir choked on his tea!

———- PRECAP———-

Jaya informs Saanchi about her upcoming marriage. Kaanchi get ready for future challenges.

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So what do you guys think about this episode? What do you think will be kabir’s reaction? Are you ready for our favourite Kaanchi’s wedding? Will Jaya and Kusum’s dreams finally turn into reality?

To find out more wait for the next episode!
And don’t forget to review and share ur ideas!

And I need you guys’ help on one important thing…

~~~~PLEASE SUGGEST SOME SURNAMES FOR KABIR!~~~~

Also those who liked my way of writing, please checkout my story on wattpad-“Being his second wife”.
Here’s the link:
http://my.w.tt/UiNb/3UNNHy9GcF

The next update will be on thursday!

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I ship Samud & Dasum(Saraswatichandra) Zain & aliya(Beintehaa) Vaiki(Mukti Bandhan) Kaanchi(Savitri Devi)

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