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Home»Fan Fiction»MY MR. WHATEVER-SWASAN FF(segment-4)
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MY MR. WHATEVER-SWASAN FF(segment-4)

savanshi27By savanshi27June 11, 201710 Comments5 Mins Read
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Helloo sweeties!!! This is Savanshi back with the next part… thank you everyone for ur heart warming appreciation and
special regards to all the silent readers and if possible plz make ur presence visible…
Sweethearts I know that I bored u all in the last part but that part was something very close to me… orphan children
and disowned elders owe a special place in my heart.. in my real life ppl call me stoneheart(sorry sweetheart to steal ur
title) but yet these two ppl can melt to a greater extent… it’s my biggest dream to make a joint orphanage and old age
home so as both of them can get each others love… the children won’t be without parents and the parents will also
Now lets begin with the next part..
Hope u all like it!!!
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The door of the car opened.. everyone was eagerly waiting to know about the unexpected vistor.The car door opned and steped down a
gorgeous girl in her late teens along with her came an lady in her late forties.I was gobsmacked seeing them.

“Mom..Doll”.. I muttered.

The girl saw me and came running to me.She engulfed me into a bone crushing hug which was reciprocated by me equally.I
turned around to hug mom who has reached near us by now.I greeted her and took her blessing.She cupped my face and
started asking about my well being.”MOMS WILL BE MOMS”
Shanti maa too came near us and got indulgedin talks with mom.Now Doll took me aside and started staring me.

“What”???
“Are u angry from Bhai”????
“Doll; have u come here to meet me or defend ur bhai”????
“Haww!!! Bebo u r pointing on my loyality???? Do you think I will defend him?? He is idiot who doesn’t has enough wit;
otherwise who will hurt such a cutie pie like u”???
I twisted her ears and smacked her playfully.Such a drama queen she is.I just wonder what mom must have eaten during her
pregnancy that she got such wonderful kids.
“Accha tell me what happened”??
“Don’t ask me… ur brother is dumbo,idiot,duffer,donkey,arrgghh!!!! I just hate him.”
“Really”????
“U just go away… i won’t talk to anyone.Huh!!! Bhai ki chamchi!!!!”

I stamped my foot and went to meet my mom.Huh!!! No one loves me except her.
“Moomaa!!!!!” I shouted.
“What happened to my baccha”??
(see I told u she only loves me)
I made a grumpy face and laid down in her lap.
“Mom no one loves me”.
“Now what that idiot did”???
“Not that idiot moomaa ur Doll too.I told u she is bhai’s chamchii.They alwaz irritate me and that dumbo.. he will die
from my hands someday”.
“Uff!!! My shona is very angry.Don’t leave him this time”.
“Yes mumma I’ll kill him”.

Like this we talked for sometime with me relishig my mumma’s lap and care while Doll was busy playing with minions.Mom
made me sleep in Shanti maa’s room.I woke up and looked at time.It was only half an hour passed up till the time I
slept.I stood up rubbing my eyes and stared walking towards the garden since all will be there.I was totally awoken
from my sleep when someone pulled me inside a vacant room and locked it.I was shaken up.My voice too betrayed me.I was
brought back into the earth when someone’s lips crashed onto mine.It took me sometime to grab ith it but I finally
reciprocated.We were fighting for dominance;we kept devouring the feel of passion amongst us.At the very last moment
when we were really out of breath i bit his lips hard.
He shrieked loudly while I smirked.He pulled me closer by my waist and raised his brow.I shrugged myself to get out of
his grip.Once I was free I started beating him with my fist.
But it was of no use… he was standing there unaffected.Is he made of iron? My stupid mind questioned out of nowhere.
Cut this crap off… we’ll discuss it later;first let me deal with him.

I glared at him only to receive a peck.”O GOD!!!! This guy… I’ll kill him”.

“What if mom or doll saw u??? U idiot..”
“She didn’t see me nor did doll and i was missing u so i just couldn’t control myself but now I’m going since no one
wants me to be here”.

Me being innocent soul melted like ice cream.
“Well I’m having an urge to kiss someone badly but if u want u can go,I’ll give this kiss to someone else”.
In a blink I was pinned to wall and was made indulged into a fierce;passionate kiss.It was an escastic moment to relish
those lips after such a long time.We were kissing each other very hard.. making up for all the time we were apart.
We broke up when we were about to die coz of lack of breath.

“Don’t u dare think about this again.Just fit it in ur heart that U ARE MINE”… He said pantingly.
“Is it soo”???
“Yup sweetheart”… he pecked my forhead.
“I LOVE U”.
“I LOVE U TOO”.

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Another mystrey… well its ur homework…
Let ur brain work.. so any idea pooping in anyone’s mind about the plot?????
Think dear.. Think…
Till then alvida…
And haa keep smiling and if I made u smile then let me know through ur comments…

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    10 Comments

    1. Sus on June 11, 2017 9:06 am

      well its nyc

    2. phoniex on June 11, 2017 10:54 am

      Who is he now. ?

    3. Shiksha on June 11, 2017 10:58 am

      Nice..

    4. anu on June 11, 2017 2:59 pm

      nice

    5. Seebu_s on June 11, 2017 3:38 pm

      Loved it

    6. gayathri.visu on June 11, 2017 11:34 pm

      Awesome dear…

    7. Simi on June 11, 2017 11:53 pm

      Loved it… It must be sanskar

    8. Arshaanya on June 12, 2017 3:58 pm

      M scrtchng my head nw ??
      M confused ?????

    9. scooby on June 12, 2017 10:20 pm

      Superb… Some one but not sanskar

    10. vyshu10 on June 14, 2017 10:23 pm

      Superb ep

      May ur wish of merging oldage home and orphanage come true

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