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Home»Fan Fiction»MY MR. WHATEVER- SWASAN FF (segment 1)
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MY MR. WHATEVER- SWASAN FF (segment 1)

savanshi27By savanshi27June 5, 201731 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hellooo sweeties!!!! This is Savanshi back as promised…
I’m really glad that u all liked the concept…
So here presenting the first chapter…
Hope u all like it??….
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I was all ready for my college… but my stupid friend… Oh sorry I didn’t introduce her.. she is my jaan… my PIC (partner in crime).. my saviour… my tough tym strength… my crying pillow when I m upset… well tis much praise for my Nikku… I just luv her?
Oh I forget what I was telling… ya.. she had already left as she had classes early….

And now I left with no option… is going alone… huh quite boring isn’t it???

And here is where d tragedy begins… as I was passing through d convent school admiring d best and d most cute creation of God… Oh!! U dirty minds I m talking about sweet children…??

I saw a lil cutie pie crossing d road alone and a car racing towards her… I was shocked… I just ran to save her at d nick of d tym… I rolled over but hush!!! D cutie was safe…

And now…. wat else the sinner to b punished… but to my surprise he started shouting at me… nd I was lyk… WAT D HELL!!!
It was enough for me to lose my temper(oh!! Sorry I forgot to mention tat I m quite short tempered)…

I took a look at d cutie… asked if she is fun… to which she cutely replied… YES!! and kissed my cheek… I handed her to her teacher who by now has reached there…

Now I turned to… yes off course… MR. ARROGANTLY STUPID… (nyc name na!!!???)
But I think by now he understood who was at mistake… so now…. wat????
Sorry tym!!! He just murmured a SORRY.. in such a inaudible voice that for once I got doubt on him??? (hehe my dirty mind)

But I just said, “It’s Ohk… Be careful next tym.. while driving and while yelling at others b4 inquiring”….

Now

Wat Now… we went our ways…????
Do u want to know my succchhh a long love story in one day….
Have patience dear….
Keep reading to know about… MY MR. WHATEVER….
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Hmmm… so how was tis… quite boring… Oh I know tat!!! any more comment making me realise how bad tis was will b heartily welcomed…
Till then b happy and keep smiling??????
A hearty promise that the next update will be a long one???

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    31 Comments

    1. phoniex on June 5, 2017 8:08 am

      Hahaha

      • savanshi27 on June 6, 2017 1:44 pm

        Thank you dear!!!

    2. seebu_s on June 5, 2017 9:11 am

      woh…so soon next chapter is there???loved it..and what u said???paitence to readers?it is impossible?continue so soon..and want soooo big long chapters?
      p.s-pls update in wattpad too and ofcourse want ur wattpad id?

      • savanshi27 on June 6, 2017 1:47 pm

        Hehe!!! Okkk sweetheart the 3rd segment will also soon be on display.. I have already replied to your query about watt pad on my 2nd segment…
        And hearty thanks for ur appreciation

    3. Suma on June 5, 2017 9:34 am

      Awesome

      • savanshi27 on June 6, 2017 1:52 pm

        Thank you soo much dear!!!

    4. Kumu on June 5, 2017 11:52 am

      Nice one..continue soon..

      • savanshi27 on June 6, 2017 1:53 pm

        I’m blessed…. thanks a lot

    5. anu on June 5, 2017 12:08 pm

      nice
      update soon

      • savanshi27 on June 6, 2017 1:53 pm

        thank you Anu dear!!!!

    6. Simi on June 5, 2017 12:45 pm

      Loved it

      • savanshi27 on June 6, 2017 1:54 pm

        Thank you dear!!!

    7. Sus on June 5, 2017 1:53 pm

      nyc

      • savanshi27 on June 6, 2017 1:54 pm

        Thanks sweetheart!!!

    8. gayathri.visu on June 5, 2017 2:38 pm

      Very nice

      • savanshi27 on June 6, 2017 1:56 pm

        Thanks dear!!!

    9. veena on June 5, 2017 2:44 pm

      loved it..but very short updates

      • savanshi27 on June 6, 2017 1:58 pm

        Thanks dear.. upcoming updates will be long one….

    10. maryum on June 5, 2017 3:16 pm

      Nice

      • savanshi27 on June 6, 2017 1:59 pm

        Thank you Maryam!!!

    11. scooby on June 5, 2017 7:54 pm

      Hey savanshii ?
      Ur back….
      Superb ? do post nxt part soon..

      • savanshi27 on June 6, 2017 2:01 pm

        Yup sweetheart!!! It feels great to be back here.. Thanks and yaa next part is already up for u all.. do let me know how it is??

    12. sneha on June 5, 2017 8:30 pm

      Loved it

      • savanshi27 on June 6, 2017 2:02 pm

        Thank you dear

    13. a on June 5, 2017 9:02 pm

      nice

      • savanshi27 on June 6, 2017 2:02 pm

        Thanks dear!!!

    14. Arshaanya on June 6, 2017 4:59 pm

      Nyc

      • savanshi27 on June 6, 2017 10:29 pm

        Thanks dear was eagerly waiting for Ur comment…

    15. Ekani on June 6, 2017 7:19 pm

      this epidode was indeed a good one…love u

      • savanshi27 on June 6, 2017 10:30 pm

        Thanks a lot dear!!!
        I’m blessed to have a reader like u

    16. vyshu10 on June 9, 2017 2:20 pm

      nice

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