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MR PERFECT – SWASAN OR RAGSAN FF (chapter 1)

ALLU_JANVIBy 86 Comments4 Mins Read

Hi everyone first of all belated Eid Mubarak to all ….
It’s my first time that I am writing a ff on swaragini.. so pls support . .
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A VILLAGE WAS SHOWN THEN A PLAYGROUND..AND KIDS …ALSO TWO MEN SITTING N TALKING ….
MAN 1: DP JII WE SHOULD TAKE OUR FRNDSHIP TO NEXT LEVEL …
DP: WHAT U MEAN .. SHEKHAR JII
SHEKHAR : I MEAN THAT WE SHOULD DO THE ROKKA OF OUR SANSKAAR N RAGINI
DP: BUT THEY ARE JUST 8 YRS OLD KIDS ..
SHEKHAR: LOOK DO THE ROKKA NOW AS I IN 2 DAYS I WOULD BE LEAVING FOR DELHI AS I AM TRANSFERRED… WHEN THEY WILL BE MATURED ENOUGH… WE WILL MAKE THEM MARRY …
DP : GREAT IDEA…
THEY BOTH LOOK TOWARDS KIDS…
KIDS WERE DIVIDED IN TEAMS ….
THE TEAM WHO WAS FEILDING WAS SHOUTING SANSKAAR SANSKAAR SANSKAAR
THEN CAME A GIRL FROM BEHIND … ..
GIRL: PLS LET ME BALL
SANSKAAR: NOW WAY … IT’S THE LAST OVER N ONLY 10 RUNS ARE LEFT U CANT TAKE THE RISK RAGINI
AND PUSHES HER .

RAGINI STARTS CRYING …
SHEKHAR: LOOK YOUR SON PUSHED MY PRINCESS
DP CAME RUNNING TOWARDS SANSKAAR N TOOK HIM TO THE WATER MILL …
DP: SANSKAAR IF U WILL ADJUST WITH YOUR LOVED ONES THEN THEY WILL LOVE U BACK …
( HE PLACES WATER IN HIS HAND)
LOOK IF YOU WILL ADJUST YOUR HAND .. THE WATER WILL REMAIN WITH YOU …. IF YOU WILL NOT ADJUST YOUR HAND THEN THE WATER WILL FLOW OFF…. SAME WITH THE RELATIONS ALSO …. LET HER BOWL …
SANSKAAR NODDS IN YES WITH AN ANGRY FACE ….
RAGINI BOWLS N THEIR TEAM STARTS LOSING
SANSKAAR’S POV …
MY DAD NAA… WHO WILL MAKE THEM UNDERSTAND… IF I WILL ADJUST … I WILL ALWAYS LOOSE …. FROM NOW I WILL NOT AT ALL ADJUST IN SIMPLE THINGS TOO…. I WILL BE MINE WISH’ S MASTER …
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18 YEARS LEAP …
AUSTRALIA….
SOME GIRLS N BOYS WERE IN HOSPITAL …
G/B: SIR WHY THE RASCALS BEATEN US?
A OFFICER: YOU ARE INDIANS …. N EARNING MORE AUSTRALIAN DOLLERS THAN THEM …. SO THEY JUST GOT ANGRY …
BOY: NOW SEE WHAT SANSKAAR WILL DO WHEN HE WILL GET ANGRY ….
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A SWIMMING POOL IS SHOWN …AND THE BOYS
MAN: MAY I JOIN U
BOYS: SURE YOUNG MAN
AND THE MAN GETS IN THE POOL N STARTS BEATING THEM …..
ALL BOY RUN AWAY
MAN TO HIMSELF: ALLL SXARE FROM SANSKAR….. N LAUGHS …
HIS FRNDS COMES FROM BEHIND N THANKS HIM..
SANSKAAR GETS A CALL
SANSKAAR: HELLO ..
MAN: HELLO MR SANSKAR… WE ARE FROM MIND GAME COMPANY …. WE LOVED YOUR GAME … WE WOULD SOON LAUNCH IT…..
SANSKAAR: THANKS SIR …
CALL ENDS…
SANSKAAR: OUR GAME IS LAUNCHING …
LET’S CELEBRATE THIS MOMENT..
A BOY N GIRL: WE ARE GETTING MARRIED SANSKAAR
SANSKAAR : REALLY UTTRA N LAKSH ..
ÙTTLAK: YES …
SANSKAAR : BUT WHERE IN ST JOHN’S CHURCH TOMMOROW….
SANSKAAR: THAT’S AMAZING .. WE NEED BACHELORS PARTY NOW …
ALL LEAVE…

NEXT DAY ..
UTTLAKSH GET MARRIED…
TWO DAYS LATER
THE SERIOUS SANKY WAS SHOWN
LAKSH : SORRY ..SANKY BUT I WILL NOT WORK WITH YOU ANYMORE …UTTRA IS SAYING I SHOULD DO THE JOB …. BECUZ BUSINESS IS RISKY BUT JOB IS SAFE ..
SANKY : YOU KNOW WE CAN’T WORK WITHOUT U BECUZ YOU ARE THE EDITOR ..THATS WHY NA TU BHAAV KHA RAHA HAI….( U ARE ACTING NAA) THAT GIRL CAME IN YOUR LIFE YESTERDAY N YOU ARE LEAVING US N YOUR DREAMS TODAYY …. WOWWWWS …. ACTUALLY YOU ARE NOT THE MAN …. YOU ARE YOUR WIFE’S SERVANT …. .OKKK JUST GO N GET LOST…DARE U CALL ME FROM NOW … OUR FRND SHIP IS OVER NOW…
LAKSH : SANSKARR …. LISTEN
SANKY LEAVES….AND WEARS GOGGLES…
LAKSH : SANSKAAR SANSKAAR ….. LISTEN …

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EPI ENDS…
HOWWZZ IT…
SWASAN FANS U HAVE TO WAIT FOR 2 CHAPS FOR SHONA’ S ENTRY…
RAGSAN FANS DO COMMENT … I WILL NOT CONTINUE IF I WILL GET COMMENTS LESS THAN 5 …
OKK
LOVE U
Pls read my prabhas ff too
How many of you love prabhas …. I love him very much
http://www.tellyupdates.com/playboy-prabhas-ff-intro/
I have given the link … Pls read n comment…
Bye …
Ya ya ya need frnds too
Byee finally

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86 Comments

  1. Saima on

    Plzzzzzz make it swasan and the plot is nice but if its ragsan then I m not going to read further but my best wishes will be with u. And I m really sorry if u find my comment mean

  3. shrilatha on

    Sanskriti r u telugu because as this feels like Mr.perfect it’s already there dear on swa—–san…I am with u but this will create a war..love u sweetheart

    • SANS_SANSKRITI on

      I am not telugu …. iam I’m from Mumbai…yaa I am prabhas fan so thought to write it as ff … I don’t know whether it’s created or not I am a new COMER . .. but I am not cheating …. thanks for taking my side

  9. Lahari on

    Dear..choose one pair..hope have knwnabout swa____san nd RagSan fans war..nd fed of these fights..plz make it on ome pair..

  12. Rosey on

    Well first of all decide pair dear as some people write Swasan and then they show Rag_San…I’m not rude it’s just feel hurt after reading half story when writers change pair…I’m a Swasan fan so please make it Swasan

  13. Rehna on

    Plot is interesting dear, but make any one as pair you know na fight between swasan and Ragsan fans.please avoid that

  16. Jj on

    Please make it swasan,because it is sekhar is a greedy man so I am confirmed it is not ragsan. But please make swasan as a pair. First u have to declare the pair no one will not hurt for the feeling forfan.

  17. Neptune on

    well am a SWASAN fan so i wish the final pairs to be SWASAN only…..
    but its your wish please do decide the pairs as there are many ffs where the author makes it swasan at first and then changes it to rag————————————–san….
    and it hurts us soooooooooooooo much…

    am not bashing you just telling you to finalise a pair…
    will read it if its SWASAN if not then all the best for your story….

    • Neptune on

      there are wars due to many reasons but main reason is in the starting due to swalak marriage people thought that pairs would be rag————-###————-san but then the pairs in the show were SWASAN but they still love them…
      they don’t like swasan n thats the case with swasan fans too….

      so both the fandoms don’t like the other pair so please select a single pair as it hurts us… hope u understand…..

  21. Richa19 on

    The plot is interesting… N I’m in if it is RAGSAN!!!! !! No swa———–San pls ‘!!! Pls do confirm the pair in next chap to avoid any kind of war… Best wishes!! ?

  26. Kakali on

    Awesome! Loved it dear! My expression when I read about Laksh & Uttara’s pair ??.
    They are bro-sis in serial na, at least think about that! :O :O
    Anyway, Continue soon! Thnk u.. ;-*

  27. AnuAnn on

    Dear I think it is based on story Mr.perfect.. If so then for ur info it is alrdy wrote by 2 writers here one swasan as lead and other rag San.. As per promo I think 2nd pair is going to final.. If it is SWASAN I’ll there for you otherwise sorry.. Hope I don’t hurt you..

    • SANS_SANSKRITI on

      Areee I am gonna change the story …. the beginning only I took from mr perfect …..

  33. priyanka on

    Continue yaar I am also parabhas fan hope it’s will be both swasan ragsan but best is swasan

  38. anu on

    if its swasan i vl read further if rag san then im not going to read. clear one pair to avoid fan wars try to understand and avoid this.. but ya acrdng to story its pairing will be rag san as its based on mr perfect. then sorry .. i hope u wont show any bad things in swasan story plz its a request dont spoil swasan .. and for avoiding wars plz let ur readers which pair ur gng to use. dont say both and dont hurt others respect there views also. bye.

  39. Annie on

    Generally I not involve myself in these things but just wanted to tell you all the best ????? as here no one will accept swasan and so called bro sis rag ……………………… San together….
    By seeing my cmnt you also understand from which fandom I belong… Well if it’s only swasan then I going to read if not then sorry I can’t….
    Sorry if I hurt you but what to do i don’t like anyone with my swasan ????….

  40. kat on

    how many writers will write same story on swasan or rag____san..write some thing new rather than this…n never make this voting process…it will only create bashings…so decide n write rather than creating war…
    p.s-should i laugh at some ppl who is seperating name of swasan..lol…agree or not swasan r real in serial..!anyways decide pair n then write..

  41. Naymaz on

    Nice dearie but plzz make it RagSan
    Though my own mom and sissy are crazy Swa_San fans but I am not plzz dear make it ragsan
    and yes if u want luv triangle then keep either swalaksan or ragsanlak plzz no ragsan and swa______________________san together

    • Anjali on

      Lol you write swasan ffs too ?
      Hats off to you girl even not able to write swasan together you writing ffs on them.

  44. hemalattha on

    Amazing intro. Sorry for asking you this story seems like prabhas’s movie Mr. Perf