hi guys sorry for the delay … i am writting living with my crush …this is my new story Mr DEVIL ..the stroy is about ragini . …a girl who lives in earth make up a deal with with a stranger who claims to be the devil ruling the hell …if you don’t like the plot you tell me .i. i will stop …but i request you to read it once ..this is quite a long chapter please don’t skip
this is based on ragini and sanskar
so lets start
a restaurant is shown . a table is shown ..a couple is sitting
voice:are you enjoying our date babe?
ragini:laksh off course am (she is our ragini as usual she is so pretty)
the voice is laksh
ragini:this fancy restaurant is amazing
laksh:if it wasn’t for you , i would be celebrating my 21st birthday at home
ragini: the truth is that if it wasn’t for me we would never go out(ragini lower her gaze while a sad expression dawns on her face)
laksh:does it bother you that i didn’t plan to go out with you on my birthday??
ragini look deep into laksh’s eyes and said yes , it does
ragini:i mean , how did i get stuck dating the leat romantic guy on the planet?… its your birthday and you didn’t even think about spending it with me
laksh:(angry tone)you know all this romantic crap isn’t for me. its just a day like any other . it doesn’t matter if i spend it with yu in this chic restaurant or with a beer in front of the tv
ragini sigh asking herself if laksh really just compared her to a beer..she rolls her eyes thinking that it would be nice if he took her out for once in a while…at that moment ragini phone rings ..it is a text from ratan ,one of her classmates at the college she attend
ragini she the text
text:hi ragini . i hope i am not bothering you but can you tell me which chapters we are supposed to read for tomorrows test?? plz plz reply i really need to pass..ragini start to reply
laksh:what are you doing
ragini:i just got a message from a classmate..let me send him what we need to study for the test.. i will be quick
laksh:who is it
ragini: its ratan
laksh’s eyes flash with fire . he knocks his chair backward when he stands and slams his fist on the table
laksh:i hate how that guy stares at you
ragini:babe calm down
he grabs her wrist , pulling her close to him
rahini:laksh please u are hurting me
laksh: he just wants to bang you damn it can’t u see that
he is screaming so hard ..so that you can see his veins in his neck sticking out
ragini:plz laksh everyone is staring at us . i just want to have some fun tonight
laksh:u want to have fun with mason not with me
he wists her wrist making her writhe in pain… ragini can hear the other diners i the restaurant murmuring ..ragini is tried of laksh ..the warm tears ruinning down her face are only warmth she receives
laksh:i will make you understand that you are mine
ragini closes her eyes and throw the drink on him
ragini: you know what laksh ?? i am not going to accept this again.mot tonight
laksh stares her with his mouth opn
ragini(in mind) i really feel good .. i can’t handle anymore …
the people around atart to laught .. a few even applaud ragini
laksh:thats enough
ragini stalk out leaving laksh speechless ..ragini comes out ..laksh follows ragini
laksh:look i didn’t want to get aggressive like that
ragini :its alwaya the same story with u .. i can’t handle you anymore
just then laksh hand flies to his chest . he’s trying to catch his breath. he falls dwon
ragini:laksh whats wrong
ragini calls the ambulance
the scene shifts
do:srry miss you have to be strong …he has advanced postate cancer..your boyfriend has only one month to live we are sorry
two weeks later
raginis phone rings
laksh:hey babe what are you doing
ragini:nothing much
laksh::i don’t care what the doctor says i want to see you now…come to the hospital plz
rsgini:ok am on my way
ragini opens her front door and almost stumble at the sight of the person she hate the most in the universe her half sister
ragini:swara what are doing here?
swara: i missed you monster
ragini:will you stop calling me that
swara:only if you stop looking like one . i think you going some where
ragini:offcourse am going ..
swara: isn’t your boyfriend like dying
ragini:swara whats wrong with you
swara:you what monster laksh is good looking and you are a ugly prude you can never be a match.. by the am taking your car
ragini: swara i need it i am on my way hospital
swara:you can walk
swara takes the key and leaves
ragini walks down a narrow path
ragini hears some footsteps and turns
ragini :is someone there ? hello?
ragini keeps walking .. she hears more foot steps.. this time it sounds as if someone is walking right behind her
ragini turns
ragini:am goin to call the police do you her me
she closes eyes taking deep breathe ..when she opens them a mysterious man stands a few inche from you
rahini:h h how is this possible there was no one here .. who ar you
mysterious man :am sanskar .nice to finally meet you princess
(so he is sanskar he so handsome and nice muscular body he is wearing a black t shirt and blue jeans .. his muscles are seen clearly )
ragini:i not your princess look……. i have to go now
ragini’s eyes meet sanskar and feel a instant connection .. logic tells to run ., but she remains motionless
sanskar:u say u want to go but your body is still here..u want to save your boyfriend right??
ragini:how do you know that?(she was shocked)
sanskar:i know everything ..even your…
ragini:stop it
sanskar:i know everything because am the devil
ragini laugh in his face
ragini:i don’t believe in devil ..and what about god is he too hanging out here
sanskar: laugh while you can ragini
ragini:is it a threat
sanskar: since you don’t believe my words i will show you my power
sanskar hold his hand out and turn it around so you can there’s nothing in it ..then he raises it to crate behind you .. he makes a gesture the crate catches fire
ragini jump backed, startled
ragini:oh my GOSH how did you do that
sanskar: i told you am devil
he smirks looking at her with amusement in his eyes
sanskar:do you want to save your boyfriend
he holds out his hand , which she notice his attached to a strong arm with perfectly sculpted biceps
sanskar: if yes take my hand and the deal will be sealed
ragini:i can save laksh with a handshakr?..is it really as simple as that?/
sanskar:it is princess but you know i am devil .. there a condition..if by chane you and your boyfreind break up
he takes a step forward bribging his mouth close to her ears
ragni:u are mine
she gasp,swallowing loudly
sansakar :deal
her trembling hand moves towards his…after a moment of hesitation her plam touches sanskar’s
rahini:deal
its as if an electric current courses through your arm ..then her whole body ..everything goes black for a second nut it feels like an eternity .. then she comes to senses ..the world reappears and shes alone
ragini:sanskar where did you goo ? ouch my hand is burning
she sees her hand there is a red pentagram emblazoned on her plam ..she rubs the mark ,trying to erase it to no avail… the more she realize that your seal with the devil is real ..her heat beats faster
precap:laksh cheating………ragini’s break up …….ragsan deal
so thats it if you like it tell me ….