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Home»Fan Fiction»Mohabbatein….Twinj ki (#50)
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Mohabbatein….Twinj ki (#50)

krutiBy krutiJune 12, 201720 Comments10 Mins Read
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Hey guys I am back with d next part.

Thank you everyone for all d love nd support u have been giving thru your comments which made me reach 50 epi’s.

Surprise awaits in d epi.

Here’s d nxt part

HAPPY READING

P.S – Ignore d errors as I havnt re- read it

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__Kunj’s POV__

Once we reached back home after shopping we had our dinner. I got a call from Alisha Twinkle’s Best friend My employee but more than that a sort of support system to me when every I need it d most.

“Hello Alisha”

“Sir where are you, I needed some documents signed immediately” she said

“At didi’s home, you can come here” I said and Twinkle looked at me.

Alisha came and after signing the documents we sat chitchatting in the hall. We were laughing aloud coz of some jokes she posed. Twinkle came to the hall seriously.

“Cant you guys keep quite for sometime. You ppl are so annoying. I am on work, keep quiet” she said rudely.

“Twinkle, this is my home too and I have equal rights. You have no rights to insult my guest.Say sorry”

“I never do that. Ok, you guys carry on I will leave” she said shouting

“Shut up Twinkle. Stay here. Its too late Where will you go now” I said holding her wrist.

“To Raghav I cant live here anymore”

“Twinkle please. Ok i am sorry. please go to ur room. Its late” I requested

“You have no rights to command me. I am leaving”

“I will kill that bl**dy Raghav if you leave now” I said angrily but she left.

How can she go at this time to him she is really stupid.

__Twinkle’s POV__

I went to my personal room at office. I slept there at night. Morning when I checked my mobile I had many calls.

I saw Raghav’s calls many times. I called back

” Hello Twinkle mam. I am Raghav sir’s PA. Sir was found dead this morning” his PA said. I went to raghav’s home. Kunj too came there. Police arrived at the spot the enquiry was carried on.

I went home and rested in sofa. Hearing the door knock sound I opened the door. Police stood there.

“We came to arrest Mr. Kunj for killing Raghav” they said shocking me

“What proofs do you have to arrest Kunj” I asked

“Kunj himself accepted that he killed Raghav as you were going to marry him.” They said

Kunj came from his room and police arrested him.

“No its not True, you cant do this” I said with tears blocking the door not allowing them to take him.

He slowly moved me aside and went with them.

I called bhai and bhabhi. By evening they returned home. I ran to bhai and hugged him

” Bhai…Kunj….Kunj..Police Arrested” I said crying.

“Shhh…Dont cry baby. First I will bring him out on bail. I already spoke to the lawyer” Bhai said consoling me.

__Kunj’s POV__

I am in cell and constable took me to ASP’s cabin. I saw Adarsh there.

“Please take your seat Kunj” Adarsh said to me

“I am ASP Adarsh. I am Twinkle’s close friend”

I nodded. Adarsh closed his room door.

“So what Is all this Kunj”

“I killed Raghav as I cant see Twinkle marrying him” I said

” Kunj, I know you love her a lot. But never thought to the extent where you can take blame for her” he said shocking me.

“Adarsh”

” I already know who killed Raghav. And the reason too which you are unaware of. But please get away from this case. We planned something and you are destroying everything. Please stop it now and let us deal with the case. I assure you, Twinkle will be safe” he said

No i can’t leave. She is my life. How can I leave her now in this situation?

” I was the one who killed Raghav” I said and then I heard door knocking sound.

Twinkle came there. She sat beside me and he locked the door

“Adi, you know everything.These are the bail papers of Kunj. I sent you the proofs” she said and Adarsh took the bail Papers.

He checked them and released me. I went out

“Kunj bhai and bhabhi are waiting for you” she said

Oh so she is not waiting for me. She dropped me at home and started her car.

“Twinkle where are you going?” I asked

” I need to go” she said

” Get down now. I need to talk to you” I said very seriously

” Sorry Kunj I cant stop now” she said

she got a call

” Adi i am on the way. I am coming” she said.

I held her hand.

“Please Twinkle dont go I love you so much. I promise I will change I never say a word against you. Whatever you do I wont say anything. I love you so much.”I said crying

” Kunj, I am not suitable to you. The path on which I should move now is different. I dont know what happenes now. Please dont bind my legs with your love. Leave me please” she said

I looked into her eyes. She is confident. Though tears are there in her eyes, I recognised a spark of confidence in her. I think I should let her go now. I understood there is something more than what i am seeing now.

” I will be waiting for you Twinkle.” I said patting on her both hands with a kiss.

She left

__Twinkle’s POV__

I went from there to Aditya. I gave USB spy pen to him. He connected it to laptop to watch the clippings. There we saw Raghav’s real face. He is forcing a girl in his house. Few more videos where he blackmailed his PA and other girls in office and molesting them.

Aditya showed clips in his mobile where he personally recorded statements from those girls.

” So now before we take next step, I need to arrest you Twinkle”

” I know. I am not concerned about me. But please save those innocent girls. World should know another side of Raghav. Because of him today I am staying away fron Kunj. I hurt Kunj many times because of him.

I remembered my past

FLASHBACK:

Kunj gave courage and confidence to me Now I am driving car and giving presentations well. I took over branch of bhai’s company. Within 6months I earned good reputation and success in business.

Everything between me and Kunj is absolutely fine now. I am happy with him. I felt a bit dizzy and nausea these days. I went to hospital for checkup.

“Mrs. Sarna Congratulations. You have conceived” doctor said

I am so happy. I called Kunj after reaching home. He dint receive my call. I called him continuously and he recieved finally

“Kunj, I want to tell…..”

” Look Twinkle, I am busy now. If I dint recieve call It means I am busy with my work. I have no time to hear you blabbering now. Dont call me again. I have many important works than you” Kunj said and disconnected the call making me angry.

I got angry and decided to trouble him. I toom a paper and wrote a letter to him saying that I am leaving, to tease him. I am sure he will come to my maternal home to request me. I smiled devilishly thinking to play with him for sometime.

I took my cat and started driving towards my maternal home. But my car brokedown in the middle of the road. I stopped a car going on the way to take lift. Driver was driving the car and there is a person in the car. I asked for lift and sat in the car.

I woke up somewhere.

What happened to me. I looked around and it seems as a hotel room. My body started aching badly. I tried to get down and shouted at once seeing my self. I am na*ed under the blanket. I understood what happened to me.

Yesterday I took lift and unknowingly I fell unconsious. That means that jerk made me unconscious wantedly and……

I started crying.

That jerk r*p*d me. Just then I found my phone ringing. Its Kunj. He has called me many times and messaged me saying that he was so sorry and requesting me to come back. I heard his voice mail. His voice says he is crying.

Kunj…

I cried a lot. How can I show my face to Kunj?How will he react if he comes to know I was r*p*d by a j*rk?

I just thought to teasw him but because of that act today I ended up spoiling my life. I cant face my Kunj. I should die before I meet him. I am sorry Kunj, I am really sorry. I am not a good wife to you. I cant be with you for lifetime.

I wore my sari and came onto the road walking like a dead person. Walking is also very difficult for me. I saw a car coming with high speed. I walked towards it when its almost near. It hit me. I closed my eyes inviting death.

But unfortunately I woke up alive in hospital where bhai and bhabhi are with me. Bhabhi said I lost my baby in the accident. They said someone admitted me in the hospital, as it was bhai’s friend they recognised me and informed them. Kunj came to see me. I saw him from the glass door. I saw tears in his eyes. I refused to meet him blaming him for my situation to avoid him.

Bhabhi also thought I lost my baby because of him. However she dint say about the baby to Kunj. I asked for divorce as I dint deserve him anymore. Till now I am hiding my love on my husband and trying to break his heart because I am a r*pe victim. Not because he is a bad person

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How many of you thought Raghav is a good an sweet person by his words and behaviour??

So finally the reason for Twinkle leaving Kunj is revealed.

Girls in the country need to raise their voice for the injustice done. Blaming themselves for a mistake which wasn’t even their’s is seriously a very cowardly behaviour. They shouldn’t make their life’s hell by taking unnecesary blame. This was the soul reason I took this sensitive topic to write upon.

Hope you all like it. Do share your views in the comments.

One more thing. Ppl msg me on my Insta account questioning whether I am Fatima(probably another member on TU whom I dont know).

Many of you already know about me. My real name is Kaunain Fathima. Kruti is a sort of abbriviation of d names of spcl ppl of my life.
I couldn’t change my username so I updated my bio adding my insta Id beside so that ppl dont confuse me for someone else.

Will try to post the nxt one asap

Loads of Love

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    20 Comments

    1. baby on June 12, 2017 10:05 am

      OMG!!!!!?????
      Diiiii….u nailed it….i shaper mazak aagaya.. .?????
      Finally the suspense revealed…shitt twinkle rape victim n dose girls…..???????????????????????
      Soooo emotional sentimental sooo cute dat kunj luvs twinkle sooooooo much….
      Loved d episode….?????
      Lods of love….???????????????????????????post soon….???

    2. SiyappaQUEEN on June 12, 2017 10:27 am

      The episode is sad yet amazing. No words at all. Truly this is very sensitive matter for our society and most of the times girls are only blamed. Well written. Secondly I am already fan of your writing. A big Congratulations for your golden jubilee. Keep it love.
      Post asap.
      Love you to the eternity❤.

      • SiyappaQUEEN on June 12, 2017 11:01 am

        Keep it up*

    3. rashiverma2199 on June 12, 2017 11:15 am

      Wow…. Great twist…. Superb episode….

    4. Harshita on June 12, 2017 11:40 am

      Nice epi…….loved it very much

    5. Purnima.agrawal30 on June 12, 2017 12:51 pm

      Shocking emotional epi

    6. Sohi on June 12, 2017 2:28 pm

      It was very shocking revelation yaar ??
      I already thought that something had between raghav and twinkle but this

      I think twinkle was not raped and raghav did that to to take some revenge or anything
      Hey kruti please sought this out quickly, I want twinj unite again

      And assalamu alikum kaunain fatima
      Do continue

      • Sohi on June 12, 2017 2:29 pm

        And congratulations on your golden jubilee ????

    7. Presha on June 12, 2017 2:37 pm

      Hey di…
      Amazinggg..
      I cant believe twinkle is raped by raghav nd is a rape victim nd she even lost her baby….
      ?????
      Kunj loves her so much…????
      Love u diii…
      Post soon….
      ???????

    8. Ayesha51 on June 12, 2017 3:57 pm

      hilarious
      too emotional

    9. maha on June 12, 2017 4:19 pm

      awsm shocking epi
      post soon

    10. Ramya on June 12, 2017 7:51 pm

      Kruti
      Awesome Amazing
      I’m speechless
      I had never thought this is the reason
      It’s really shocking
      Poor kunj
      N twinkle of course she should fight
      It’s amazing superb
      Post soon
      Love you keep smiling

    11. SidhantJasmin28 on June 12, 2017 8:05 pm

      hey plss kruti can u give summary plsssssss. ….

    12. Cheena2001Cp on June 12, 2017 10:35 pm

      It brought tears in my eyes ?…..Ohh twinkle she ..,.created a siyappa by teasing Kunj and twisted thier lives….?…..Raghav that blo*dy jerk…thank God he died……it was a shocking and amazing episode.
      Your pov was ? correct
      Post soon ??

    13. Sameera on June 13, 2017 5:23 am

      Hey kruti amazing Episode yaar loveddddddd​ to the core ??????????????????????????….so this was twinkle reason bechare twinj …?????but the way twinkle showed courage was amazing just loved it sooo much …
      Congratulations for golden jubilee hoping a century from you ?????…
      Love you

    14. Anayaali on June 13, 2017 10:47 am

      Hey it was shocking….
      Superb…. Luvd it…. Feeling sad for twinj…..
      Hope everything get solved btw them soon….
      I think tw killed that raghav….
      And sorry for late cmnt…
      A bit bzy now a days…..
      Post nxt soooooooonnnnnn plzzzzzzzzzz…..
      Luv u …

    15. Shalini15 on June 13, 2017 3:56 pm

      Krutiiiiiii ye kya kar diya twinkle ke saath??? nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ye bahot bada anyay hai ?????????????? bechara kunj itna sab kuch ho gaya uski twinkle ke saath aur use kuch pata hi nahi nd this raghav?? achha hua mar gaya warna main hi maar deti.. waise mujhe pata tha ki he is devil… nahi kameena??.. bahot bad ho koi aisa karta hai kya? Batao bechare do love birds ko separate karne ki kasam khayi hai… alag karke hi rahegi… well mind blowing superb episode.. too emotional.. feeling very bad for twinj ????????

      Waise manna padega yaar you have very good of sense of humour.. matlab so understanding nd you portrayed everything very well.. loved it.. do continue soon…

      Love you ?????

    16. Tushi on June 13, 2017 4:56 pm

      Fabulous episode
      But felt sad for twinkle

    17. Aafi on June 13, 2017 4:57 pm

      Nice episode
      Twist was good
      Congratulations on your golden jubilee

    18. Nishuu on June 20, 2017 10:09 pm

      Nice episode

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