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Home»Fan Fiction»Mohabbatein….Twinj ki (#49)
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Mohabbatein….Twinj ki (#49)

krutiBy krutiJune 6, 2017Updated:June 6, 201714 Comments11 Mins Read
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Hey guys I am back with d next part.

Thank you everyone for all d love nd support u have been giving thru your comments.

Here’s d nxt part

HAPPY READING

P.S – Ignore d errors as I havnt re- read it

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__Kunj’s POV__

We walked out of the court room after completing the proceedings of a mutual concent divorce…legally we arn’t a couple anymore but no one can take my Twinkle away from me.

As we walked out a black sedan car stoped right before us. A known figure stepped down the car. He walked straight towards Twinkle nd hugged her my anger knew no bounds all I could do was gulp it down my throat.

“Kunj this is Raghav my would be husband….We are getting married the next month” I could sense the fake smile when Twinkle spoke this….but seriously….Is it so easy for her to move on and get married to someone so easily….All I could do was to plaster a fake smile.

“Nice to meet u again after long time….I have organised a party tomorrow to officially announce our marriage….do attend it coz I dont want my old friend to be missed in my happiness” Raghav spilt these words from his mouth and In order to control my frustration I just walked away.

__Twinkle’s POV__

(The nxt day)

I was lost in the trail of my thoughts when the ring of my phone disturbed me. Its Kunj Why is he calling me now?

“Hello”

“Hi sweet heart, how are u? How is your Raghav?”

He asked stressing the words your Raghav.

“We are absolutely fine. But remeber you have no right on me to call me as sweet heart”I said seriously

“Shut up. I have every right to call you as sweet heart princess darling and whatever name I love. Because you are my love. Try to go how far you can from me But i will make sure you return to me. Dont forget you will get your punishment for every single words of yours once you return to me. Anyways lets meet in the party tonight. Take care about my wife. See you there” he said and disconnected the call.

After a while I went to meet my best friend in a restaurant. She isn’t just my best friend but a common friend of Kunj and me. She even works with Kunj.

“Hi Twinkle”

“Hi sweet heart”

We hugged eachother.

“How is everything going on?”I asked my friend

“Fine. Everything is going on as we planned. But may I know why are you doing all this? Do you really love Raghav?”

“Yes Alisha, I love him. I love him to d extent I can do anything to him”I said

“To him? or for him?”

“Whatever leave it”

“Why did you leave him Twinkle. As far as I know, you love him a lot”

“Who said I love him? I just acted as if I love him. I never loved him” I said

After a while I returned home. Evening I went to the party arranged by Raghav.

__Kunj’s POV__

I went to raghav’s party. I saw Twinkle with him. He held her by waist and she seems so happy with him. I went and gave a bouquet to her. I can notice her tension seeing me. Why is she scaring for me when she has no intenstion to continue a realtion with me?

The party started. Everyone started dancing. She was dancing with Raghav. I tried to dance with alisha. But I am not comfortable with her. We just acted dancing without touching eachother. I cane down and went to the bar counter.

I took a wine glass to drink and started gulping down don’t know how many glasses of it. I saw raghav touching her waist and doing something. She looked at me. I know she can notice my anger.

“Kunj you shouldn’t drink so much. It isnt good”Alisha said

But my eyes are talking to Twinkle. She is requesting me not to drink with her eyes. I looked at her waist where raghav placed his hand.

Twinkle sat down holding her feet stopping her dance. Good Actor

“What happened?” Raghav asked

“Sprained my feet” she said with tears.

“Oh please be careful” he said and was about to lift her in his arms but she stopped him. She slowly walked and came down.

After dinner she started to drive back. I stooped her car. She got down. I held her wrist pinning her to car.

“What are you doing with Raghav baby?” I asked seriously.

“You have no right to ask”

“Really”I smired

“Kunj if you do anything I wont leave you easily”

“Dont leave me baby. That’s what I want” I said

“Let me go” she said

I stood very close to her. She is looking at me with hidden pain in her eyes. Noticing that i left her. She reached home.

“What are you doing here?” she asked seeing me in didi’s home

“This is not only your home baby. Its mine too” I said with a wink

“From today he is going to stay with us” jiju said making her super angry.

I laughed seeing myy wife’s angry face. How can she imagine to go away from me?If She wont stay with me, no problem. I will stay with her.

She simply walked away to her room and locked it. She dint at all open d door. What will happen if she knew my nxt plan. Tomorrow for early flight didi and jiju are going to Delhi. We will be alone at home.

Nxt day she woke up and came to the hall.

“Is this the time to wake up?” I asked her in authoritative voice.

She looked at me.

“I…slept late at night” she answered.

I smiled inside. Why is she answering me when she has no love or respect towards me

“Bring a coffee” I ordered

“Wait. Where are bhai and bhabhi?Why am I talking to you?” she started shouting. I got up and went to her

“If you shout one more time like this, you will see the old kunj in me” I warned her seriously.

“Look Twinkle, within 2 days tell me the truth behind your acts. Dont think I can’t get to know if u hide and keep acting. Once I come to know the reason, no one can save you from me”I said and left to office.

__Twinkle’s POV__

Kunj left to office and I started crying. For the first time I feel like crying heartfully.

I know I am not right. If everything would be right, surely i wont behave this way. I am sorry Kunj. I am really sorry. I am breaking your heart with my words and acts.

You always stood as a support for me. But today I am making you suffer. I am not a good wife. I am not that fortunate to share my life with you.

I know my words are hurting u a lot but every harsh word I say hurts me more that you. Whenever you ask a reason for my behaviour, I feel like to hug you and cry telling everything to you. But i am controlling myself a lot. If i say the reason I dont know how will you react.

I love you. I love you so much. You are the only one whom I love. But now for my mistake, I cant be with you. I dint love Raghav but I am marrying him bcoz of my mistake. I have done a very big mistake for which you can never forgive me.

I cried for a long time as I was alone. But suddenly I heard d door opening. I was shocked to see Kunj there.Dint he go to office?

He came near me. He held my shoulder.

“I know you Twinkle. Now tell me why are you crying if you dont love me?” he asked seriously.

I know he loves me a lot but his anger scares me till death.

“Ku…nj” I stammered and tried to go away but he tightened his grip on my shoulder giving me pain.

“Kunj, its hurting leave me please”

“Tell me the truth Twinkle. Today I am not leaving you until you dont confess the truth. This little pain is better than the pain which you choose to bear lifelong by marrying raghav” he said.

“Kunj this is not the way to behave”

“Ohh so now you will teach me how to behave” he said in serious tone.

“I dint mean it Kunj” I said

He left the hold on me and hugged me

“Tell me Twinkle, what happened? what made you choose raghav over me? I promise I wont say anything to you whatever maybe the reason. I know you love me. I will set everything right. You are my wife forever. Just tell me everything” he said taking me into his arms securedly as if I am so precious.

As I am crying he gave small kisses on my forehead,cheeks,lips slowly to stop me from crying. I was totally lost in his love and care. Suddenly I heard the dorr knocking sound. I went to see who is that. Its Raghav

“Who is that?” Kunj asked

“Raghav”

He went from there to his room.

__Kunj’s POV__

I thought today I will make her confess the truth but unfortunately Raghav came now. Why is she doing all this?Is raghav blackmailing her? But I know well about him, he is not that type of person. I saw Twinkle getting ready and leaving with him. I decided to follow them.

They went to a restaurant. Twinkle is so happy with him. I sat on a table beside them and Raghav saw me.

“Hey Kunj, you here? Why cant you join us? He asked I nodded

Twinkle looked at me uncomfortably. We started having food. Raghav is feeding her by blowing air on the food as its hot.

Is she a kid? Cant she eat by herself? This is really too much. I too love her but I never did this overacting.

“Kunj are you free today? Can you join us for shopping?” Raghav asked me.

Ofcourse I will join them to make her more uncomfortable.

“Twinkle select any saree you like” he said to her

Maybe he dint know what she likes.

“You select for me” she asked Raghav

“No twinkle, its you who is going to waer it. So select by yourself. Select something in which you are comfortable” he said cupping he face.

I remembered a past incident when I took her for shopping.

–Flashback–

Twinkle and I went to the mall. She is seeing sarres

“Kunj, how is this? I liked this” she asked showing a saree.

“Hmm. i dont like. i will select for you. Throw that saree away” I said dominantly

I observed disappointment in her face but I ignored. I selected a saree which I liked.

“Kunj i dont like embroidery sarres. Please I dont feel comfortable” she said slowly

” if you start wearing them regularly you will feel comfortable” i said and brought that saree for her ignoring her words.

–Flashback ends–

I observed Raghav’s behaviour with her. Its quite polite and loving. I use to dominate her and make her calm by showing my authority on her Not only before marriage but from childhood I use to dominate her.

Raghav is different. He is respecting her, valuing her opinion and I dint find him showing any domination. Am I wrong? Is this the reason, she left me? If my behaviour hurt her so much she can directly talk to me rather than leaving me.

Do you really listen to her Kunj? No way, you would become more angry on her. Now you are saying like this because she left you.

My heart scolded me. Yes its true I never gave that much freedom to her to share her fears with me which were created by me.

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Hope u like it. Do share your views in d comment box

Will post d nxt one asap

Loads of Love.

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    14 Comments

    1. Presha on June 6, 2017 4:56 pm

      Hey kruti…..
      Hw 4 u…
      U know it just mind blowing….
      Loved it too much….
      Kunj is realising his mistake but eager to know what is it that is making twinkle do this….
      Well post soon…
      Love u…

    2. Nishuu on June 6, 2017 5:40 pm

      Awesome epi but felt sad for twinj
      Post soon

    3. Sohi on June 6, 2017 6:46 pm

      Very emotional yet amazing episode
      But what happened why they both got divorced
      And who is raghav?
      Which mistake twinkle make?

      I’m hell confused ? now
      Hope confusions will get cleared soon

      Do continue

    4. SidMin23 on June 6, 2017 7:23 pm

      Sad for twinj and want to know about twinkle what making her do this.

    5. Ritzi on June 6, 2017 8:05 pm

      Woooohoooo my dear kruti….thank u…thank u for posting yaar….just loveeeddddd today’s epi… To the death! Yaar…the butterflies never left my tummy! But I hv a complain to make??…u always say u will post soon…but u don’t! Pls na yaar post soon

    6. Idiot on June 6, 2017 8:27 pm

      Kuch na kahe bas chup rahe
      Khamoshiyaan hee keh jaaye
      Tham jaaye yeh jahan
      Aur pal bhi thaher jaaye
      Rahe na kuch bhi darmiya
      Meete yeh saari dooriyaan
      Milke bhi hai adhuri si
      Yeh daastan
      Rahe na kuch bhi darmiya
      Meete yeh saari dooriyaan
      Milke bhi hai adhuri si
      Yeh daastan…..

      Splendid amazing fabulous mind blowing…
      No words at all…
      I am impatiently waiting. And its quite true we should not dominate people with our views. Everyone has there like or dislikes. Caring and loving doesn’t mean without even thinking about the person feeling we have to gave them our decision. Quite appreciating. You’re fabulous mind blowing amazing writer.
      You’re ruling over my heart right now.
      Love you so much star
      Take Care.
      Good Bye.

    7. Ayesha51 on June 6, 2017 8:52 pm

      just loved it
      it is awesome
      amazing
      fabulous
      fantastic
      outstanding
      marvellous
      superb
      incredible splendid
      slightly sad
      perfectly portrayed emotions
      mind blowing
      post soonest
      can’t wait
      lots of love
      byee

    8. Cp on June 6, 2017 10:08 pm

      Fabulous????..abb pata chalega kunj maharaj ko ?…..But twinkle ka raaz kya hai???? Bata bhi doo…..post soon ??

    9. Purnima.agrawal30 on June 7, 2017 12:58 am

      AMAZING….

    10. maha on June 7, 2017 1:14 am

      awsm epi

    11. baby on June 7, 2017 2:49 am

      oh god kruti di……..♥
      do I have words to explain…..♥
      no not at all..♥
      oh god yeh kya hogya……♥
      srsly didu….cant wait……♥
      loved it……♥
      lods of love……♥
      muuhaahhh………♥
      post soon dii……♥
      plssshhhhhh….♥
      m dying wid suspense ae ho ki rha hai…..
      schiii love u dii……♥

    12. Twinj on June 7, 2017 8:30 am

      Oh god kruti
      U just nailed it girl……loved it….
      Seriously loved it…
      Muahhhhh?????…
      Left me spell bounded with ur writing…..
      Post asap…..

    13. Ramya on June 7, 2017 11:51 am

      Awesome kruti
      But kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai
      I’m fully confused
      Hope my doubts get clarifies soon
      But it’s amazing
      Love you keep smiling

    14. Shalini15 on June 7, 2017 10:27 pm

      Krutiiiiiii You are pakka EK… you are proving it in each episode… twinj ko separate kyun kiya? Pata hai kitna bad feel kar rahi hun ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? but mast episode tha emotions are beautifully described awesome mind blowing superb episode. Loved it sooooooo much ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? post next asap.
      Nd sorry for late comment ? ? ? ? ?

      Love you ? ? ? ? ? ?

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