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Home»Fan Fiction»Mohabbatein….Twinj ki (#18)
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Mohabbatein….Twinj ki (#18)

krutiBy krutiSeptember 5, 201619 Comments4 Mins Read
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Bina zyada bak bak ke

Here’s d 18th part

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The doctor leaves

L- heey vaheguru…….what kind of test is this? meri bacchi ko theek kardo…..don’t let anything happen to Twinkle
U- vaise how did all this happen?
Kunj explains everything about the incidents that happened in the godown how twinkle came infront of Kunj…but he dint reveal abt Aarav

S-who is this that is behind Uv Kunj Twinkle and us all
Kunj stands silent
Uv- Auntyji he’s no one but Aarav.
Everyone r shocked to hear this
L- Aarav…..but he’s Twinkle’s friend..why he would do this
Uv- don’t know why but it was Aarav only.

Just then d Doctor passes by Kunj goes to him

K- Dr can I see Twinkle….pls
Dr- but
K- Dr…pls for 5 mins only….pls
Dr-okk…we have shifted her to ICU, you can meet her, but don’t disturb or stress her about anything.
K- thank u Dr…thank u soo much

He enters d ICU…..he was just not able to see Twinkle in that condition Tears were just not stoping he goes and sits beside her .He takes her hand in his hand still crying….he speaks

K- Twinkle open your eyes once…..have to tell you many things to you……i know you must be enjoying to bother me but I cant bear all this yar…pls get up, I can’t see you like this…..open your eyes for once

A tear drop falls on Twinkle’s hand ……..after a few seconds of silence…….Twinkle starts breathing heavily
Kunj gets tensed he calls out for the doctor
The nurse and Doctor come in
Dr- Mr.Sarna aap pls bahar jayiye
K- par….twinkle
Dr- pls bahar jayiye

Kunj is sent out forcefully

After sometime d doctor comes out
L- Dr twinkle theek toh hai na
Dr- relax leelaji Twinkle aab bilkul theek hai her pulse rate is almost back to normal bas in a little more time she will be back to consious

All r delighted to hear this

L- Heey vaheguru…..tera lakh lakh sukar hai meri Twinkle theek hai
K-Aunty nothing can happen to Twinkle as long as I ……I mean we all are with her
K- Uv, take Aunty and maa home, I will stay here.
L- par kunj puttar ek baar twinkle ko hosh aajaye to
K- you don’t worry aunty, I will call you as soon as Twinkle regains consciousness.

But still Leela was not satisfied after all she is d mother
When everyone forces her she reluctantly agrees

All of them left……Kunj goes and sits beside Twinkle holding her hand (Twinkle is still Unconsious)

K- Thank god Twinkle you are okay……you scared me for little while……who told you to come in between…..Goli tujhe lagi aur jaan meri nikal gayi thi…..for moments I felt like I lost you…….but in all this..one good thing happened, finally my heart overpowered my brain…..everything I didn’t listen to my heart and listed to brain instead. But today seeing you go away from me, I realized that my brain was always wrong……..I realized how much I love this pagal and jhalli girl……Yes Twinkle…..I Love U a lot…..today I realized that I have fallen for the girl with whom I use to fight like cat’s and dogs……pls jaldi se poori tarah theek ho ja taki mai tujhse confess kar sakoon ki main tumse kitna pyaar karta hoon……jaldi theek ho ja yar tere bina aab nahi reh sakta mai

Suddenly the smile on his face fades away and he places twinkle’s hand back on d bed and speaks

K- I just hope ki mera pyar ek tarffa(one sided) na ho

saying this he turns to leave …….but there is a voice

“Nahi hai tumhara pyaar ek tarffa”……….

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Hope u liked d epi
Ok so be frank and tell me how many of u guys expected confession

Did u like d way Kunj confessed his feelings????
Do tell me through ur comments
All d readers and specially silent readers pls comment guys……a request from my side…..pls

Love u all???

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    19 Comments

    1. Sameera on September 5, 2016 9:10 pm

      Wow ????????
      Awesome awesome awesome
      2 2 epi amazing yaar
      Kunj confession finally
      Omg is that twinkle voice
      All n all kaamal dhamaal wala epi tha
      Do cont asap

    2. Apoorvaa on September 5, 2016 9:26 pm

      Oh god…… bilkul expect nhi kiya tha k iss tarah confession hoga…??? but kya episode tha….very beautiful…… ekdum paisa vasool???? ?

      Vaise i m a silent reader but aaj rok nhi payi khud ko comment krne se?

    3. tahu on September 5, 2016 9:31 pm

      omg kruti amazing loved it in core….plzz post next soon❤❤❤❤

    4. baby on September 5, 2016 10:09 pm

      ohhh god kruti di
      r fabulousss.ss………..
      oh god truly i didnt expected d realisation n cnfsn bt di……..
      wowwwwwwww n amazing kya khun speechless or ending
      ye ldki kon haiiiiiiiiiiii………………..
      uggggggghhhhhhhhh…..cnt w8 di bilkul bhi nhi post nxt asap
      cnt w8 i wish its jst twinkle
      luvd d way kunj realised luv fr her osm di
      luv u pst asap
      n luvd d surprise 2 episode 2gtr

    5. rashiverma2199 on September 5, 2016 10:11 pm

      Wow….lruti episode was amazing….

    6. Alena on September 5, 2016 10:53 pm

      Wow…… what an episode

    7. Fan on September 5, 2016 10:56 pm

      Awesome epi kruti!!!.. i loved the way kunj confessed his feelings..

    8. Purnima.agrawal30 on September 5, 2016 10:59 pm

      awesome amazing fabulous cute emotional epi…..loved it

    9. SidVee on September 5, 2016 11:42 pm

      Awesome epi.. I just read both of ur epis now.. so commenting for both here.. I loved hw twinkle came in btn but bichari ko holi lag gayi?.. and kunj’s love realisation was totally unexpected.. his realisation was portrayed very well.. I loved it.. do cont soon ?

    10. SidVee on September 5, 2016 11:43 pm

      It’s goli*.. damn this autocorrect

    11. SIDMIN-daamini on September 6, 2016 12:26 am

      Again omg kruti……..kya khaati hai bhen …???
      N this was epic ..”goli tujhe laguna aur jaan meri nikal gayi “??????
      Kamaal kr diya behna…??
      Just waiting for r twinj moments
      Loved u ??

    12. Monica on September 6, 2016 8:04 am

      Oh shoot! Who is the one who spoke saying that it ain’t one sided love ? I am so legit excited to know … Please write the next part soon x and also, so happy to see you back ? love you and write soon x ?

    13. SidMin on September 6, 2016 9:18 am

      Wow Amazing Kruti back to back 2 episodes both of then Just Loved it and Kunj’s love confession so sweet and the voice is of Twinkle Right?
      Just loved it please post as soon as possible 🙂
      Love you 🙂

    14. shreya098 on September 6, 2016 1:05 pm

      Kruti awesome one..

      I just hope that voice to be of twinkle…
      Continue soon

    15. dreamer..arundhati on September 6, 2016 2:49 pm

      Kruti u nailed it…fab

    16. Jisha on September 6, 2016 3:00 pm

      oye..hoye…Back to back 2 episodes…Kunj’s love confession was so sweet and geniune…u portrayed his feelings very well…

    17. Shatakshi on September 6, 2016 7:14 pm

      ???????
      I m still shocked Kruti
      Omg the ending was Awesome
      I m dying to read more
      Thanks a lot for 2 episodes
      That dumb Aarav….I m gonna kill him???
      I really liked vatsals acting in ek hassina thi
      Love u loads dear??❤?

    18. Sana(sanu) on September 6, 2016 7:31 pm

      Awesome kruti…..
      Kunj caring fr twinkle that part was mind-blowing….:*:*:*:*:*:*:*:):):)

    19. sujina on September 6, 2016 10:40 pm

      kruti…loved d way kunj confessed his love…its so amazing…n post nxt asap…

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