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Home»Fan Fiction»Mohabbatein….Twinj ki (#1)
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Mohabbatein….Twinj ki (#1)

krutiBy krutiJuly 21, 201620 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hey lovely ppl ……thank u mayatwinj.fan, zaku ,angita ,Monica ,Shonaa.. , Jisha ,Purnima.agrawal30 , sameera , sidmin , sayeeda , shreya098, sidhantfan ,shatakshi , fan, shreya , baby , manu for all ur lovely comments

So here I’m with the first epi…..So let’s begin……

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A huge college campus completely decorated all the students heading outwards with their luggage after convocation
And in one corner there’s a grp of six ppl standing with their baggage and having a pre goodbye talk …..so let’s listen to them

T- I’m gonna miss all of u guys and this beautiful campus
M- Seriously guys we r gonna miss all the fun we had in past 3yrs
K- to chalo yahin par baas jate hain( so let’s stay back)
Uv- Princi se kehte hain hume demote kar de aur uske baad har saal humein fail karta rahe ……(lets tell princi to demote usand then we will fail every yr so we can stay here always)
T-(irritated) tum donnon ki nautanki fir se shuru ho gayi na(u both started with ur drama again)
N- guys stop it tum logon ka peet nahi bhara 3saal se jhagda kar ke ki ab phir shuru ho gaye ( aren’t u all statisfied with d fights u had from past three yrs that u again started)……let’s enjoy these last few moments together
R- to chal beta selfie le le re
All of them laugh at this and click some selfie’s and leave for the station

@station
K- yaar Rohan tu humen apni shaadi par to bulayega na( Rohan u will call us to ur marriage ???)
R- yeh bhi koi puchne wali baat hai ……tum logon ki wajhe se toh him donno aaj ek saath hain nahi toh kab ke toot gaye hote (is this a thing to b asked…..only bcoz of u ppl we both r together)
N- Just forget it guys raat gayi so baat gayi………aur tum logon ko pehle hi keh rahi hun shaadi ke ek mahine pehle hi Jaipur aana padega koi bahane bazi nahi chalegi( I’m telling u guys now only u have to come to Jaipur before 1month of marriage no excuses)
T- han kyun nahi aayenge akhir humen bhi to Jaipur dekna hai( y won’t we come even we have to see Jaipur)

Just then there’s an announcement of d trains .All of them bid bye. Roina entered the Jaipur train and the the other’s in Amritsar train

Nxt mrng
Yuhi Twinj reach Amritsar……their families r waiting to receive them
Twinkle is super excited….. first Kunj gets down
Twinkle while getting down in excitement screams Maaa……..and suddenly she trips and is abt to fall when our saviour our hero kunj hold her and says
K- Dehradun mein toh tere syappon ki kitaben(books) hain …..yahan toh apne syappe kam karde ……Syappa Queen

Twinkle gets irked she stands properly pushes kunj and runs to leela and hugs her
T- maa maine aap ko kitna miss kiya (maa I missed u sooo much)
L-kitna (how much)
T- widens her arms and says itna
She then hugs her dad

Kunj takes blessings from his parents [u know typical sanskari Indian guy]
U-kaisa hai kunj(hw r u kunj)
K-ek dum changgaa bhala khada hun aapke samne(standing perfectly fine in front of u)

Mahi and Uv greet their Moms [guys their dads rn’t alive]
All of them leave for home

@taneja’s

Twinkle reaches home and finds all her favourite dishes prepared by her mom
T- Maa aapko pata hai maine aap se bhi zyada aapke iss yummy yummy food ko miss kiya (maa I missed ur yummy yummy food even more than u)
L- aachaji (is it)
T-saachi mein (really)
they start giggling and after some time
T- Maa…
L-hmmm
T- Love u
L-Love u too meri jhalli kudi

They have some happy happy family times

@night
Twinkle enters her room picks up a pink cute as teddy and says missed u sooooo much

She’s off to bed when she recieve’s Mahi’s message stating let’s meet tmrw at Coffee Corner
She replies a okk and sleeps peacefully

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Precap – twinj ki nok jhok

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Hope u liked the epi and are u all satisfied with its length …..surely comment below ↓ and let me know about u views

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    20 Comments

    1. Vaishali on July 21, 2016 12:13 pm

      Loved the begining…
      Espically vo kunj ka dialog” dehradun me to tere siyappon ki kitaab hai” ??

      Plz try to write a bit longer

    2. Monica on July 21, 2016 12:58 pm

      This was amazing …. continue asap 🙂 Waitimg for twinj’s nok-jhoks ….. and please try to make it a bit longer …. (maza lena chalu hi kiya tha aur pata chala khatam bhi ho gya ?)

    3. shreya098 on July 21, 2016 12:59 pm

      cute epi…?
      loved it

    4. Mayatwinj.fan on July 21, 2016 1:17 pm

      Loved it and can’t wait for twinj nok jhok but can u add a romantic twinj scene in next episode ??

    5. Sameera on July 21, 2016 1:50 pm

      Hahaha loved it kruti twinj ki nok jhok n kunj k dialogues hahah ???

    6. Angita on July 21, 2016 2:25 pm

      Wow superb episode

    7. Sidhantfan on July 21, 2016 2:28 pm

      Hahaha loved it…especially kunj’s dialogue “dehradun mein toh tere siyappon ki kitaab hain”…..post next one asap

    8. S.F.A on July 21, 2016 2:49 pm

      Superb,fabolous,just it should be a bit longer then much fun

    9. Jisha on July 21, 2016 3:02 pm

      Loved beginning… awesome…waiting 4 twinj nok jhok…

    10. Purnima.agrawal30 on July 21, 2016 3:10 pm

      awesome epi…

    11. Maggi on July 21, 2016 3:33 pm

      It wz Awsmmmm…. very good… keep writing… ctd soon

    12. Sayeeda on July 21, 2016 5:40 pm

      Amazing ….Kruti …loved it …
      I’m OK with the length ….
      Ur dialouges were so good..

    13. Shonaa... on July 21, 2016 7:19 pm

      D dialogueZ…. tooo goood….
      Loved it dear….
      aawesome episode….

    14. Fan on July 21, 2016 7:49 pm

      Awesome epi kruti..

    15. Shatakshi on July 21, 2016 8:05 pm

      Hey kruti
      It is really very interesting
      Loved it❤❤

    16. baby on July 21, 2016 9:47 pm

      hey kruti amazing yr srsly luvd d episode osm really acha pls cn u tell me sidmin ka houses tumari ff mein bhi vaise hi hain kya jaise asli tei mein?

    17. SidMin on July 21, 2016 10:50 pm

      Kruti sorry for commenting late Loved it waiting for Twinj Ki nok jhok 🙂 waiting for the next pls post asap

    18. sujina on July 22, 2016 11:20 am

      loved d beginning…
      dialouge siyappa wale…..wow
      amazing…post nxt epi asap….

      • kruti on July 22, 2016 11:47 am

        Already posted it

    19. Zaku on July 22, 2016 2:16 pm

      Sorry for commenting late
      Epi was amazing
      Post asap

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