Mohabbat never remains incomplete (One shot )

In night???
A street is seen in which a boy is running and he is badly injured.His face is not clearly visible because there is not a single streetlight present there.Only because of moonlight he can be seen with his injuries.But the quesrion arises that why is he running???Oh god!! some goons r following him with weapons in their hands….???One of them shots on boy’s leg nd the boy fell down.

Goon1:U r responsible for ur death…u make us now,it’s paying time.

Goon2:I think government should honoured us with some awards for reducing population.

All of them starts laughing.???

Goon1:Now…brother’s it’s action time.
He cruely shots on his chest.

She opens her eyes nd finds that it was just a bad dream.She drinks water nd takes her mobile phone to call Abir but his phone is unreachable.She looks at clock nd it’s 5’o clock of morning.

Radhika:Bhagwanji!!I have heard that morning’s dream come true but plz yeh waala nahi.

In morning,
Radhika is getting ready for her college.She wear a pink churidaar salwar-kammej with light earrings.She is looking like a princess???.She comes across the hall where her politician father MR.PRITHVIRAJ KASHYAP CHAUHAN is reading newspaper.

Father:Radhika bitiya!!I hope u will never let down ur father.

Radhika(nervously):Ji papa ji!!
She exits from the mansion nd sits in her car.

Radhika’s pov:
I know papa ji..u luv ur rputation more than me.But if u get to know the truth that i love a musalman boy Abir..u will kill him.

She reaches the college and starts finding Abir suddenly Sehbaaj comes there nd informs her that on college road Abir met with an accident…
Without thinking anything she reaches there and finds that Abir is lying on the ground nd his head is bleeding.??Many students gather around the area.Radhika is screaming for help.Some staff members comes there nd call ambulance. They order students to give their exam.Radhika’s friend suggests her to giveexam.
Aditi:I think we should return to classroom.He will be alright…
Radhika(teary eyed):No…I can’t leave him alone.

Aditi:Don’t become selfish.Do u remember ur mother’s words when she was taking her last breath “Radhika beta i want u to become a succesful doctor because ur father never respected me because he thought that we ladies r only capable for household work.So,will u plz come ur maa’s dream come true”

Radhika:I don’t know what to do??Why always this kind of things happens with me.

She decides to give exam.But while giving exams…her hand are shivering but with a faith in god that everything will be alright she gives the exam.

After her exam,she goes to hospital with her friend but a bad news welcome her that Abir is no more.

She becomes freeze nd her whole world stops.She starts crying.???
Radhika:Abir u can’t leave me like this.


After 1yr
Radhika become a succesful doctor.But somewhere she was deeply affected by absence of Abir in her life.But there is a person in Radhika’s life whom she shares her every sorrow…and that guy is not her father…but is her chlidhood friend Ayushman.They r besties.

One day in sleeping the same dreams appears .But in this dream the boy is Ayushman.Radhika is now more tense because she can’t afford to loose a friend like him.

She decides to meet him in a restro.When Ayushman is crossing the road a truck is coming towards him with high speed.Ayushman doesn’t notice it as he is buy in a call.

Radhika watches it run towards him to save him.She save Ayushman from the accident but loses her own life.

When her father get to know about her daughter’s death he feels guilty becoz he was responsible was Abir’s nd Radhika’s death.He didn’t want Abir as his son in law bcoz he was a musalman.

He thought that at any moment Radhika’s friendship with Ayushman can turn into love.He don’t want any orphan to be his son in law.

I think that Radhika nd Abir’s mohabbat will surely complete in heaven.

“Love and death are 2 un-invited guests
When will they come nobody knows
But both have similar effects
One takes the heart & other takes its beats”

Thank u guys for reading this.It was my first attempt to write a humour.Sorry for grammatical mistakes???.Crirics nd suggstions r most welcome here.Don’t forget to give ur valuable comments.
Take care nd stay safe???

  1. AIHA19

    it`s awesome di pls don`t stop writing humor stories u write them very well. hope u will write the best humour story in future but this is too good

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u dear for commenting nd ur wishes.It really means a lot to me.???I’ll surely try to stand upto ur expectations.???Take care dear nd waiting for ur writings.

  2. Sakash.

    Hi Sanyukta.Simply superb and amazing one dear…
    I know it’s sad story.But still you managed every character very well.Nice attempt dear. The last few lines you added increased the beauty of story.Keep writing dead.Bye.Take care dear???

    1. Sakash.

      I am extremely so sorry dear.In the place of keep writing “dear” it printed as dead unexpectedly.So sorry dear…

    2. Negisanyukta

      It’s ok brother nd thank u sooooo much for commenting.It really means a lot to me.???Ur words r really encouraging.
      Take care u to bhaiya.???

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u MD sahab for commenting???

  3. Very nice story yrr but in the end they both was dired it is so saaaaaaad

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u sweetie for commenting???I know it has a sad ending but according to me every story doesn’t have a happy ending.
      Luv u dear???

  4. Misha

    This was a really good one ??
    The ending was kinda sad but good work???

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u dear for ur encouraging words.???Ur name is nice as u are.
      Keep reading dear.Take care.

  5. ImRagela

    Hey Sanyukta…Sorry for the late comment as i was suffering from fever..Such a superb story..Awesome work…Love u ??????

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u sooo much dear for ur boosting words.But that’s not fair …U were suffering from fever??? nd u didn’t inform me.But how r u now sweetie???

    2. ImRagela

      Now i am fine yaar..Just a little body and throat pain..Don’t worry now i am completely fine !!??

  6. TUFriendsForever

    This is justttt awesome but a sad story ??? there are people like this also but nice writing Dr keep writing

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u dear for commenting.So,basically we both r in same classes???That’s great.
      I’ll keep writing.

  7. Nice and emotional and very much heart touching story…. Awesome

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u sooooooo much for commenting.I am glad that u liked it.???
      Take care dear

  8. Anu88

    I don’t know sanyunkta what I am say about this story…….I am just speechless reading this story…….. reading this story tears came out from my eyes yaar…….. reading this story i feel in world true love is alive forever………I don’t know yaar what comments is suitable for this gorgeous par excellent story…….you are great …….. Thanks dear give us such a beautiful and nice and awesome and amazing and superb and outstanding humour……… u dear…….tc yaar…….. please yaar continue your humour……..

    1. Negisanyukta

      After reading ur comment……i am literary on cloud nine.Thank u soooooooooooo much sweetie for ur constant love nd support.???Really means a lot to me.But sorry dear for making u cry???
      But dear don’t be so emotional in life .Be positive nd happy.Nd u know my blood group is B+ve…..that’s why i am positive.I hope ur blood group is also positive na??that’s a bad joke.???
      Take care u to nd luv u loads???

  9. Anuradha123

    it’s tremendously outstanding story… really true love never remains incomplete… your story was awesome… what to say I have no words to describe your writing skills… keep writing dear… may God bless you

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u soooooo much for ur kind words.It really means a lot to me???ur comment made my day……nd thank u soo much for ur blessings.???
      Take care.

  10. I really am sorry for the late Comment. I read it 2 days ago but i was so caught up with activities that i couldn’t procrastinate. But, what a marvelous story you just wrote. Even though it didn’t have a happy ending you filled it with sentiment and a very pragmatic approach. Every story necessarily doesn’t have a happy ending. But you gave a vigorous plot line that kept me captivated all this time. True love remains triumphant and that’s a beautiful concept you delineated. Absolutely enjoyed reading this story. Do keep writing such exuberant stories with humor… Can’t wait for you to write another one!!!❤️

  11. Negisanyukta

    Thank u dear for such a motivating nd exuberant comment.Really means a lot to get such appreciation from my favorite author.???But i must ask one thing….or suggest one thing.U r urself a wonderful writer nd ur writing skills r extraordinary,so u should write a humour .???
    Thanks once again for ur kind words.Take care.
    Love u dear???

    1. Aww, thank you for all eulogizing. It really inspires me and encourages me further. I would like to write humor but firstly I don’t have time right now and also I don’t enjoy writing that much. But when summer break is on, I will definitely write something. Love loads too!!!!❤️

  12. Alishkamalhotra

    I am sorry dear i commented sooooo late maaf kar dena and kya creativity hai aapke paas so nice heart touching story???

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u didi…nd no need to say sorry….I am glad that u liked it.???
      Luv u dii???

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