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mohabbat ki dastan (KRIYYAM) ss part 5

Hello guy’s mira is back with part 5…one more part remaining after this….i am so sorry for not posting like I usually do…an personal emergency came up so I had to urgently leave….sorry everyone….and coming to my comments….i saw in my last update not many people commented…it was very less compared to the very 1st and 2nd and 3rd and 4th parts I posted…..please guys do comment and leave your feedbacks….it really makes me happy and I feel like you all enjoy it now let us start with the 2nd to the last part of this ss
Recap: Krishna breaks the pillow wall between her and saiyyam…she continues burning in jealously…

Yuvaan and baby are talking in their room…she keeps telling yuvaan to do this and do that…he thinks I am fed up of all this…it would’ve been better if I never married baby…he shouts shut up…baby is shocked…he says I am tired of being used and you ordering me every time…baby says yuvaan what do you mean? He says I mean I regret marrying you…she is shocked…he says you are worse than krishna…she shouts yuvaan! He says don’t yell at me…
He asks her to leave…she says but yuvaan us? He says sorry baby but I can’t deal with you anymore…shopping and all congrats to you now get out of my life, my home, my everything…he says I’ll divorce you soon….baby in anger blurts out to yuvaan that they never were married., the priest was fake, she trapped him just so she can control his wealth….he is shocked….baby realizes what she said and tries explaining but yuvaan loses control and slaps baby….he asks her to leave….she angrily leaves….

He thinks how baby betrayed him…they weren’t even married….and then he remembers krishna…their friendship….her confession…kriyyam’s forced marriage….he thinks krishna really loved me…I think I loved her too but because of baby I didn’t really notice krishna…but now I will mend my relation with her and I will propose to her….because I love you krishna….i know it’s late but I love you….i know your marriage with saiyyam was forceful so we can get you out of the relationship….I’m coming for you krishna….
Outside Tanya says krishna me and saiyuu have known each other for a long time…krishna says so? I am his wife….she says oh really? What this forcefully married life is now your marriage? She says yes and I would say you leave this room now….she says saiyyam see krishna….look how she is talking…saiyyam says nothing but he wants to listen to what krishna says…tanya thinks my plan is working…let me add some more spice to make krishna blurt out her confession…she says me and saiyyam were supposed to get married before you even came in his life…this means that saiyyam was mine and is mine….

Krishna stops her and says wait a minute….whose husband is saiyyam? Mine or yours? Mine right? So that means it doesn’t matter if you were to marry saiyyam…now I am his wife…so this house, this room, this bed, saiyyam are all mine….saiyyam is happy from the inside that krishna said this…tanya says huh? Really? If you really wanted this marriage then why for 3 months did you keep yourself away from saiyyam? Because he forcefully married you? Krishna says this is between me and my husband….we will deal with it….tanya says no krishna this isn’t between you and your husband because first off you and saiyyam don’t even have a husband-wife relationship….

Krishna is silent…tanya says if you and saiyyam were husband-wife then all this time I was here why did I see you sleeping on the floor and saiyyam on the bed separately? Because you don’t even share that relation so why does it matter to you if me and saiyyam are close to each other…you said you wanted to be free from this marriage right? So be it….saiyyam has done it for you…krishna looks on shocked….she says what do you mean? Tanya is about to say when yuvaan comes running shouting krishna…..she sees yuvaan and tanya and saiyyam look at each other in confusion….
Yuvaan says krishna I have to tell you something…she says say….he says I found out that baby was just using me…you told me and I didn’t believe you…I am sorry krishna….she says it’s okay yuvaan…he says also when she left I remembered all our moments together….from childhood to now and I realized….i realized that i….i love you krishna!!!! Kriyyam and tanya are shell-shocked….krishna says yuv….he interrupts and says please krishna let me speak today….i am really sorry for how I behaved with you…I know I should’ve trusted you but I got carried away….i realized how much you mean to me krishna and I know that you also love me….you confessed your feelings that night and I rejected you for baby…kriyyam remember that moment….

Yuvaan says I am sorry krishna but now I realized I love you too so will you marry me krishna? She is hell-shocked….she looks at saiyyam while he looks at her teary eyed…she recalls her moments with saiyyam and thinks I love saiyyam….i never loved yuvaan…I was just attracted to him but in reality I love saiyyam now….she thinks I can’t lose saiyyam…yes I agree our marriage was forceful but I can’t break this relation…especially not with whom I really love…saiyyam thinks I knew it….i knew krishna still loved yuvaan…if she didn’t love him then by now she would’ve said no to him….
I was stupid to have got carried away with just last night’s happenings…..i know krishna would never love me after what I did to her…her wish was to be free of this relation anyways so I’ll do that for her….krishna I am setting you free he thinks….suddenly the doorbell rings…saiyyam goes and gets the door…the courier guy comes and gives him an envelope….he signs the paper and gives it back….he brings the envelope in….krishna says saiyyam what is that? Yuvaan says Krishna first answer me….will you marry me? Saiyyam says krishna this is what you always wanted….
She is confused….ever since our marriage you have been taunting me that I forcefully married you…I don’t deserve to be called a human…I’m worse than an animal…krishna recalls all this and cries thinking I hurt saiyyam a lot by my words….i knew krishna that you were unhappy with this marriage….i started loving you krishna hoping I would get the same love back but look…today you are in front of me but with whom? Yuvaan….the guy you always loved and see he also loves you now….so here is a small wedding gift from my side….he takes out the papers….he looks at krishna teary eyed….he takes a pen and signs the paper…

He gives it to Krishna asking her to see…she is shocked….divorce papers? Saiyyam says yes divorce papers….i am sorry krishna for forcefully marrying you…I shouldn’t have done that…please forgive me if you can and stay happy with yuvaan…congrats on your wedding krishna!!! I hope you liked my wedding gift for you…krishna stands there holding the divorce papers in shock…she sees saiyyam as he walks away and yuvaan sees krishna from back….song plays in BG
Na kuch poocha…na kuch manga…tune dil se diya jo diya…na kuch bola…na kuch tola…muskura ke diya jo diya…tu hi dhoop…tu hi chau…tu hi apna paraya…aur kuch na janu…bas itna hi janu…tujh mein rab dikhta hai yaara main kya karu…x2 rab ne bana di jodiiii……
Saiyyam is walking away with tears….krishna is crying holding divorce papers….yuvaan is somewhat happy that saiyyam at least gave divorce papers but he feels like krishna doesn’t want to come back to him…
SCREEN FREEZES ON KRIYYAM

PRECAP: WHAT WILL BE KRISHNA’S DECISION??? WILL SHE CHOOSE SAIYYAM OR WILL SHE RETURN BACK TO YUVAAN???? WHAT WILL SAIYYAM DO NOW????

GUYS NEXT PART IS MY LAST PART….THIS WAS A SIX SHOT….IT WILL BE VERY FUN AND MAZEDAAR…..THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORT YOU HAVE GIVEN ME UP TILL NOW AND I HOPE YOU WILL CONTINUE DOING SO….PLEASE DO LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS OR FEEDBACKS ON HOW YOU LIKE THIS EPISODE??? SHOCKING NA???

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