MMZ – A Challenge For Destiny and Love
Hi my dear fellow’s and sweethearts…. This is ur Carzy Girl or Sulbi…. Well thought to write a ff… I have this idea along before but am scared whether am I capable for that???? I really Dnt no about that yaar because this is my first ff… but I decided to have a try for it……. I need a support from all u people… I hope you will… and pls do comment for my ff and negative comments are also welcomed…
Guys am not gonna give any prologue…… directly will go for chapter…..
Ignore my typos and grammatical error……I am not that much good in vocabulary as others…. So Pls bear it….
Here we go………..
Chapter 1:
Mumbai
It’s a beautiful morning a girl is cuddling in to her bed so comfortably… she doesn’t wants to move out from the bed…… after all she is kumbakarna sister…. She loves sleeping and ofcrz foodie too…. In between her deep sleep she started to sweat very badly…. She screamed NOOOOOOOOO….. A lot of sorrows has been going through her mind… She keeps on thinking about her worst part of life…. She always wanna forget about that but to her bad luck she use to get a flash of it then and their in her dream…
Hearing the screaming sound her mom and dad rushed to her room… Betiya what happened? Why you have screamed? After hearing her mom’s voice she came back to sense… she relaxed in her mom’s shoulder a lone tear escaped from her eye… but soon she wiped it off without noticing it by anyone… her dad pat her shoulder nothing happened my baby… don’t be scared we are here…
Soon she comfort herself and said “nothing dad just a nightmare”
Her mom Mala said chalo Radhu…its late get ready for the office… its your first day right….. so don’t be late… she pecked her forehead and went out with her hubby Dilip Mishra…..
As soon as Radhika parents disappered she ran to washroom and got ready for the office with full excitement and joy and came to dinner table…
Radhu: Mom… Come soon it’s getting late…
Mala: Coming… dnt scream… u never gonna change ur habit… wanna sleep like kumbakarna at the edge of a min u want to rush… and make me crazy… bahawan ji… help me from this…
Dilip: Acha stop ur lecture now… serve the food my baby is getting late…
Radhu: that’s my papa… love you… You are the best papa in the world….
Dilip: Love You too my baby…
After finishing her breakfast she drove her scooty and went to her office with full happiness… But poor girl dnt no what destiny had decided for her and how her life is gonna change….
Precap: First day office… New friends… Few Past about Radhu…
Destiny: I have decided already… Gonna happened everything according to my wish….
Love: Till now you ruled her… But not till the end… Once she realised about me.. she will be in my path…
Destiny: will see……….
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So guys… I am done… I Know its short but wanna know about your views… Whether should I continue with it or shall I drop it??? I really don’t know guys.. I am totally confused… Pls help me…. Waiting for it… Pls drop your precious comment….. It meant a lot to me….
34 Comments
Sulbi.it is hell interesting.nowadays we are craving for manmarziyan ff.your title is awesome.keep on rocking
Thank you so much my dear chashni… u made my spirit up… tc…
Loved it
Thank you kavina dear…
Sulbi jaaan…….teddy hug….Asathita da kanna…!! Super….bring it on…why so much hesitancy….its so good….don’t worry of being short….don’t worry for vocabs I seriously tell you…write the way you love….it gives the lively feel for a reader…..we all have a unique way of conveying our story…so don’t go on that note…and next one…I want tomo….Demanding Jess!! Hard to control…
Ok…so Radz have some worrisome past…hmmm.. eager for her office days…and dilip and mala..cool…appa na appa than…hehe….now am so curious…TC and loads of love…Muaaah..
??????This is for you…endha oru nalla vishayatha arambikum podhum sweet sapidanum nu dairy milk ad le sonanga…???welcome to MMZ writers gang..lol…
Oh my jazz kutty… u r my darling dear… as u said i was hesistant to start… but not now… i was waiting for ur comment… now am jumping in kushi… ya rads have some bitter past… slowly will reveal it… am so glad u people are liking my ff…
Demand accepted… lol… thats so sweet welcome am over joyed… really am so happy my darling… hug u kutty…. love u more…. muuuuuuuaaaahh
Sulbi or My Crazy Girl or MY cute Humera Sissy…just loved it to the core. Great intro and i love the way she gets ready to office at the last minute…i could see myself there. LOL i always make my mom come till the door to give something or other. Cool dad wow…it is so lovely and lively dear.
No hesitant dear..even we all are still learning and improving our writings. U just started off with this right..don’t worry your first episode itself proves you are great writer. Keep continue your writing and rock the MMZ site. Soon post the next one ok va.
And i am gonna call you as Meera..i always love this name since yours is Humera..i thought of calling you like that..is it ok for you?
Love you 🙂
Mu cute sisy… am happy to see ur comment… i was waiting for ur comment sisy… so u too will be running to office like radhu… hehehe… even me will run in mrng… what to do sisy… we want that last 5 mins sleep but it never ends up… lol…
Nxt one i will post soon dear… and u can cal as ur wish… u dnt need to ask me.. bcz u are my cute n lovely sisy and i love that name too… thanks alot for encouraging me… love u aloads sisy… :-* :-*
Sulbi very nice yaar… But why so short yaar…. I loved it… Who was her past just clear is it saral or arjun…. If arjun then we need to see how radhika is going to react…. Excellent and marvelous episode sulbi darling.
Arti dear am glad u liked it… will reveal the past soon… till that have a patient my darling… ya i posted a short one.. bcz its my first ff as i said before i was little hesistant.. whether its gonna work it or not… so i uploaded it short one.. but am happy u people are liking my ff and giving me a such wonderful support… so i will try to post a long one frm nxt tym… happy to see ur comment… keep supporting me and do comment me dear… tc…
I will surely comment for ur writter….. I liked ur work….. So don’t be hesistate to write it….
Good start, I love it, please continue with this story. 🙂
Thank you so much Brin dear.. am happy to see ur comment… keep supporting me.. tc
It is amazing and interesting too..loved it
Thank u priti… am glad u liked it… keep supporting dear… tc…
Hey Sulbi!! It was as interesting start!! Happily continue with it!! Such a cool and breezy chapter that was!! Please post the next one soon!! Take care happie day!!
Hey viprida… am so happy by seeing ur comment… am glad u liked it… will post soon dear… stay blessed… tc…
interesting start. Want to read more.
Thank u moni dear… will post ASAP… keep supporting me… Tc…
Nice. Interesting. Waiting for next update.
Thank u so much Devika… will post soon dear… keep supporting me dear… tc…
Hey sulbi…
A good start Dr….
Keep going ……
Waiting fr the next one….
Thank u vasuraj… am gald to see ur comment dear… stay blessed..
It’s interesting Sulbi.post the next one soon.
Thank you sravya… am happy to see ur comment.. keep supporting dear…
Awesome start dear…intriguing story…dese days m missing mmz ffs….looking ahead for nxt…loads of love. 🙂
Thank you Ritu dear.. i hope will do the best… love you… stay blessed dear..
sulbi, it is really nice, post the next soon…. waiting for that…
Thank you so much Jewel.. am glad to see ur comment… stay blessed dear…
awesome update….
Thank you Subha dear… Stay blessed…
Good start sulbi ….pls continue
Thank you likii… glad to see your comment… stay blessed…