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Misunderstanding Makes them Close (part-1)

b.k.mahaBy b.k.mahaApril 16, 201752 Comments9 Mins Read
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Hello everyone today I try to give a two shots about rikara… If u liked this pls try to comment it… Pls say ur opinion upon this two shots… Let’s get into the story…. Happy reading…☺?☺?
I will start this one shot in the middle of the story that the after marriage of Rikara, I am the start the scene where the marriage takes place…

After that marriage Omkara leaves that place Gauri also follows him… After sometimes Omkara stops and looks around and says,
Om: now u can go…
Gauri: where…
Om: whatever u want and now all the goons are gone so u can go…
Gauri: but this marriage…
Om: what u also believe this marriage… I think u can marry anyone for money only not by meaning of this marriage… Hearing this Gauri cries and tries to say something but stops by Om,
Om: pls don’t speak anything.. I think to save ur life that I did.. Now u will go ur way and I will go my way… And this is not a marriage so don’t speak like wife..did u get that and get out of my sight and don’t try to see me again…. But Gauri goes near him and touches his arm and tries to speak but Om pushed his hand and she goes to fell down but two strong arms’ catches her… Gauri looks at the person… Om turns and sees and says bhabhi… Yes this was Anika… Not only Anika Sivaye and Rudy also comes there…
Anika: Om what u are did to her… Now she is ur wife…
Om: bhabhi this is not at all marriage then how she became my wife… And I did for save her..
Anika: then what is the mean by that sindoor and seven pheras…this is a ritual Om we should respect it…
Om: but bhabhi u don’t know about her that’s why u speak like that… She is just a characterless girl… Hearing this word from Omkara’s mouth Gauri cries a lot and looses her balance… Rudy supports her and says stop it bhai don’t speak anything about her like that… She is not that type of girl as u think… Sivaye also support her…
Om surprisingly looks at his family and says, why u all are believe her like that she is not worth for ur believes and she can do anything for money…

Sivaye shouts just stop it Om… If u accept this marriage or not but we all are accept her as a Gauri omkara singh oberoi… From now she will stay in our house with us… Om didn’t understand anything… He get more confused because this is their first meet with Gauri but don’t know why they are support her this much…
All are leaves to Mumbai…. In Oberoi mansion, jhanvi did aarthi to them and Gauri did all the ritual and come inside… All the family members are talk to her like they are knows her very well…. Seeing this Om gets more suspicious and shouted can anyone tell me who is this girl why u all are treat her like this house own daughter….

That time one Anika shouts she is my sister, Om gets shocked…. Anika continues she is my choty.. In the small age we missed her in a train… Then we searched her anywhere but we didn’t find her… We all are think she will be dead but god saves her…
Om: how u get to know she is your sister…
Anika: at the time she speak to me through the phone make me to feel some connection between our so I decided to came there….
Rudy: me and Sivaye bhai also accompanied her… We reached there but we don’t want to disturbed u that’s why we didn’t informed u… We collect the information about Gauri that time we came to know Gauri is orphan… Then we reached her house and meets her and asked about Gauri…..

Sivaye: she says Gauri is not her child she takes her near a railway station… And also she gives a chain which was placed Gauri’s neck at first time after seeing that chain Anika conforms she is her own sister…
Then they explained everything about Gauri and Kaali Thakur… Hearing this Om get more guilty… He can’t see Gauri so he leaves to his room… But Gauri misunderstood him and says, didi when anyone says me orphan I am feeling so bad but now no one can say me like that because I got a big family… Its only because Omkaraji..he gave me a new life with full of happiness but I can’t give him such a life… Omkara deserve a good and beautiful and brilliant girl better than me… I am not suitable for him so pls don’t tries to compel him to accept this marriage…. If u did this then I will leave this place… Anika slaps her and says if u say it again then I will surely kill u… In crying tone Anika speaks u know how our family get suffer after missing…. Gauri hugs her and says no didi I will not leave u… Seeing this all family get emotional..
Then Anika takes Gauri to opposite room of Omkara…
Anika: now this room is yours… And she dressing Gauri’s wound and says you take rest I will come after sometime… She leaves…

Screen shift to Omkara’s room, he recalls how he scold Gauri and says I didn’t to it any intensely Gauri… U know from the first meet I start to feel for u.. I am seeing myself when u hits my car I loved ur boldness… I am seeing u with Kaali that time I am angry at u… After that all scenes make me to hurt u because u are with that kaali… But now after knowing the truth I am really happy I don’t know what make me to feel like that…. My heart say to me to ask sry to u but I don’t have any guts to face u that’s why I leave that without looking u…
Then Gauri helps Om to reveal the truth of Shwettlana (like chulbul but as a Gauri)

After that all likes Gauri so much… Omkara also having a strong feeling towards Gauri.. He knows he loves her Gauri but till now he don’t have guts to say it…
One fine morning,
In kitchen, Anika prepared a coffee for all at the time Gauri comes and takes the trey and tries to give all but Anika stops her and says,
Anika: I give it to all, u take one coffee mug…
Gauri takes it and tries to drink but Anika stopes it and says this is for Om, so u go to give him…
Gauri without thinking says ok but after realizing what she says….
Gauri: no didi I will give it to all.. U go and give it Omkaraji…
Sivaye: Anika is right u only goto give him…
Gauri: but jiju.. How can I…
Anika: if u not go then I will call shwettlana to give it…

Gauri shockingly what how that Shwettlana gives coffee to my Omkaraji…
Anika and Sivaye says at the same time Awwww… Gauri gets shy and leaves that place… Anika smiles at her antics seeing this Sivaye moves towards her… Anika gets shivers… And says Sivaye I have to go and give that coffee to all…. But Sivaye didn’t heard it he moves even more close… This time Anika stops by the wall Sivaye comes near her and touches her face and rubs the lips and says, I want my mng energy drink na… This time there is no gap between them… Anika closes her eyes Sivaye bends to her lips and kisses her… Then he leaves her due to air…. Anika gets shy and leveas that place…

Screen shift to Rumya’s room… Rudy and all the families are accepted their marriage… Now Rudy also loves her… They started their lovely life…
Rudy did a exercise but Sowmya sleeps like a cute baby… Rudy says when this Sowmya tries to loose her weight… Whenever I tries to carry her I looses my strength…
Sowmya: then why u tries to carry me… Rudy goes near her and asked u are acted like sleeping…
Sowmya: no till now I didn’t wake up…
Rudy: then carrion ur sleep and I will go to see pinky… Sowmya gets up shockingly and says no.. Rudy smiles at her… Sowmya starts to beat him with pillows… Rudy stops him with forcefully that time they get a sweet eye lock…. Rudy tries to kiss her but that time Anika enters with coffee… Then they get apart… Anika says I think I come at a wrong time… They gets shy… Anika smiles and gives the coffee to them and now u can continue ur romance saying this she leaves… They get embarrassed…

Screen shift to Gauri,
She stands outside of Om’s room and think how go inside, then she says to herself Gauri u can do it… Then she knock the doors and says Omkaraji may I come in…
Hearing this Om gets angry ( why he get angry he also loves Gauri.. Let’s see) Om to himself, if any wife ask permission to get into their room but this Gauri na always like this… Then he angrily goes to opens the door but after seeing her his anger are gone… Gauri hives him a coffee in that place seeing this he gets more angry so he goes inside without speaking anything… But Gauri didn’t understand she think now also Omkaraji angry at me that’s why he didn’t takes that coffee… Then she leaves that place with cryingly… But Omkara thinks she will come inside then he turns that place but didn’t find Gauri there… He thinks now also she didn’t forgive me that’s why she didn’t come inside… He also cries…

I will stop here guys…if any mistake is there pls forgive me… I think to write a one shot only but it takes another one… In next shot I will post how they express their feelings to each other… If u think its boreing pls say it guys i will stop it…Your comments only made me to wright another… Pls give ur valuable comments… Till then bye this is from ur Maha… Take care and love u all…

By,
B.K.Maha…

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    52 Comments

    1. Rasika on April 16, 2017 5:21 pm

      awsmmmmmmm , love the story dont stop this ff , waiting for gaurika reunion , eagerly waiting for next episode

      • b.k.maha on April 16, 2017 6:35 pm

        Thank u Rasika… But this is two shots only… In next part it will be finished… Keep reading….

    2. Dhar on April 16, 2017 5:23 pm

      It’s amazing maha …….I’m waiting for ur next update……Oms guilt is portrayed very nicely. Plzzz post the next update asap

      • b.k.maha on April 16, 2017 6:36 pm

        Thank u Dhar… Keep reading… I will try my best dr…

    3. Charitha on April 16, 2017 5:31 pm

      Amazing

      • b.k.maha on April 16, 2017 6:37 pm

        Thank u Charitha… Keep reading…

    4. Sugantha on April 16, 2017 6:06 pm

      Lovely story akka…continue writing!!!

      • b.k.maha on April 16, 2017 6:37 pm

        Thank u Sugantha… Keep reading…

    5. Deepika Edward on April 16, 2017 6:22 pm

      ? Wahhhh!! Awesome ❤ #GauriKa Chemistry ??* Superb ❤ Keep going ?

      • b.k.maha on April 16, 2017 6:38 pm

        Thank u Deepika Edward… Keep reading…

    6. Adhya on April 16, 2017 7:09 pm

      Superb..loved it…super chemistry of Gaukara❤❤❤

      • b.k.maha on April 16, 2017 7:48 pm

        Thank u Adhya.. Keep reading… I really missed ur comments dr…

    7. Lilly on April 16, 2017 8:43 pm

      Awesome… just superb…

      • b.k.maha on April 17, 2017 1:25 am

        Thank u Lilly… Keep reading…

    8. nikitajai on April 16, 2017 8:43 pm

      It is awesome dear

      • b.k.maha on April 17, 2017 1:25 am

        Thank u nikitajai…. Keep reading….

    9. gowsi on April 16, 2017 8:49 pm

      Wow….its really awesome….loved the story….post nxt soon

      • b.k.maha on April 17, 2017 1:26 am

        Thank u Gowsi… Keep reading…. Ya I am sure….

    10. Zerahmalik on April 16, 2017 9:17 pm

      Superb episode.. Waiting for next one…

      • b.k.maha on April 17, 2017 1:27 am

        Thank u Zarahmalik…. Keep reading….

    11. ash on April 16, 2017 10:08 pm

      Amazing story next episode soon

      • b.k.maha on April 17, 2017 1:28 am

        Thank u ash…. Keep reading….

    12. Suhana on April 16, 2017 10:16 pm

      It’s wonderful plot..I really like ua stories yaar.. they r perfect..

      • b.k.maha on April 17, 2017 1:29 am

        Thank u Suhana…. Keep reading….

    13. Ayissha on April 16, 2017 10:17 pm

      Awwwww….So sweet? Very nice….Keep going…..???

      • b.k.maha on April 17, 2017 1:30 am

        Thank u Ayissha…. Keep reading…

    14. silverfish_trex on April 16, 2017 10:29 pm

      Suoerrrrbb.. next part soon?????

      • b.k.maha on April 17, 2017 1:31 am

        Thank u Silverfish_trex… Keep reading….

    15. Arpita on April 16, 2017 11:28 pm

      B.K dear ,it is amazing post next part ASAP.

      • b.k.maha on April 17, 2017 1:32 am

        Thank u Arpita… Keep reading….

    16. Saku on April 16, 2017 11:39 pm

      Superbbbbbb….fantastic….i hope we get such scenes in dbo also….anywaus keep writing…post nxt part soon..

      • b.k.maha on April 17, 2017 1:32 am

        Thank u Saku… Keep reading……

    17. Meena on April 17, 2017 6:18 am

      This story was awesome i just love it and iwant more rikara scenes pls dont stop this.
      And iam also from tamil nadu and i have one doubt in hindi pls help me what is the tamil meaning of jatathari hippi

    18. Aamina on April 17, 2017 6:51 am

      This story was awesome i just love it and iwant more rikara scenes pls dont stop this.
      And iam also from tamil nadu and i have one doubt in hindi pls help me what is the tamil meaning of jatathari hippi

    19. Aamina on April 17, 2017 7:10 am

      Wow??☺ i just love it. Pls dont stop it.keep writing. And iam also from tamil nadu .nice meeting u with the website maha. And i have one doubt in hindi pls help me what is the tamil meaning of jatathari hippi

      • b.k.maha on April 17, 2017 2:22 pm

        Thank u Aamina…. Keep reading… Jatathari means lord name of Shiva but don’t know about hippi….. I am sry for this… I think u and Meena are same because her comments also same like urs… If it was wrong pls say me dr… Pls reply me fast…

    20. Niriha on April 17, 2017 7:29 am

      Awesome..its wonderfull story loved it waiting for next update soon

      • b.k.maha on April 17, 2017 2:23 pm

        Thank u Niriha… Keep reading….

    21. CHANDNI on April 17, 2017 11:26 am

      Its amazing….. I liked the plot very much…

      • b.k.maha on April 17, 2017 2:24 pm

        Thank u Chandni… Keep reading….

    22. priya07 on April 17, 2017 12:18 pm

      Maha,superrrrrrrr…yeapdi maha ungalamatum epadi semaya elutha mudithu.i really loved ur stories.different ah think panni different ah story eluthuringa.Awesome…Keep writing like tis.

      • b.k.maha on April 17, 2017 2:25 pm

        Thank u soooo much priya07…. Keep reading and also support me…

    23. shuklarashi on April 17, 2017 12:29 pm

      Awesome

      • b.k.maha on April 17, 2017 2:26 pm

        Thank u Shuklarashi… Keep reading…

    24. Aamina on April 17, 2017 3:14 pm

      iam sorry Aamina and meena is same . Sorry its my mistake but my real name Amina so you dont worry na thappa meenankura perula anipiten iam extremly sorry pls dont mine

      • b.k.maha on April 17, 2017 5:10 pm

        Its ok dr… I can understand it… U don’t worry dr…

    25. RIKARA on April 18, 2017 1:51 am

      It was awesome
      waiting for next part

      • b.k.maha on April 18, 2017 5:23 am

        Thank u Rikara…. Keep reading….

    26. ash on April 18, 2017 2:58 pm

      Wonderful story update next shot soon plz

      • b.k.maha on April 18, 2017 8:42 pm

        Thank u ash… Keep reading… I will try my best…

    27. Khyana on April 18, 2017 10:32 pm

      Nice update. Pls update the next part soon.

      • b.k.maha on April 19, 2017 8:01 pm

        Thank u Khyana… Keep reading…. I will try my best…

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