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Home»Fan Fiction»It was a mistake to love you.. Chapter 7
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It was a mistake to love you.. Chapter 7

Pavithra1616By Pavithra1616January 9, 2018Updated:January 10, 201827 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hey guys, this is Pavithra here. I am back with my ff. Now with its 7th chapter. A big thanks to those who commented on my previous chapter and thanks to silent readers too. I dedicate this chapter to my dearest friend Athira chechi (ahk26barbie). I met her in TU. She is from my state,Kerala. That’s why I call her chechi. I lost touch with her. And even now I don’t have talked to her for the past 1 month. Hope she will be reading this. Hope you guys like this one too.
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Recap:- Keerthi sees Madhav at temple…
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Next day,she goes to school. She didn’t know that this day would be the worst day in her life.

She reaches class and this day she was happy. When Mishal saw her, she went to Keerthi at once.

Mishal: I couldn’t digest what you said yesterday.

Keerthi: You are still stuck there? Time passed yaar. Its next day na!

They smiles. Suddenly Sera comes.

Mishal to Keerthi: Why are you not telling this to Sera?

Keerthi: I don’t know why, I wanted to say that to you only. Not to anyone else.

Mishal: As you wish….

Sera sees them whispering to each other.

Sera: Hello,mere jaan? What are you whispering dear?

Mishal looks at keerthi desperately.

Keerthi goes to Sera and puts her hand around Sera and says..

Keerthi: Vo Kuch nahi hai, mere Jaan!

They laugh!!!

Mishal feels relieved….

Mishal: (in mind) Keerthi, how can you be so lovely yaar. I hope you will be happy as you are now. I hope you will be able to get your love. You are really sweet…. Love you yaar..

*****

Classes starts………

Teacher was teaching – Growing As Girls And Boys….
Something the students didn’t like at all because it was all pointing to them!

Teacher: Hmmmm, I can understand how irritating it mist be for you all! So, I am giving you a task. This is in the next class. Every boy should say the things of each girl. This is the task only for boys and we can have girl’s task in the next chapter which is related to the same thing.. Girls will have another task… OK…

Everyone agrees.

Madhav and friend, Rupesh was talking about the task.

Madhav: Madam’s was a good idea,na?

Rupesh: Hmmmm, ya.

Madhav: I will prepare as we have many things to say about them!

Rupesh: ha ha , that’s true….

Madhav: But there is nothing to say about Keerthi as….
(He stopped, those words slipped from his mouth)

Rupesh: Kya? Tumne kya kaha, Madhav?

Madhav: I said she doesn’t have any thing to say as she has all kinds of problems. That means,we can say that she has no problems or good things to say as she is full of those things….

Rupesh: oh, OK! I thought something else, Madhav! I can see these days you have a soft corner for that Keerthi…

Madhav: oh! This must be your misunderstanding…

Rupesh and Madhav smiles…

Madhav: ( in mind ) so, I should clear this doubt very soon yaar. Hmmmm

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Next day, in class.

Teacher came into class.

Teacher: So, children, ready for the task?

Students: Ready hai, madam

It started. And later it came Madhav’s chance to say….

He started with Neha…

Madhav: Firstly Neha – She is like a child. The whole class believes so. But its good to hear it. I hadn’t any problems with her yet.

Kalyani was now jealous of her best friend Neha.

Kalyani: (in mind) so, Madhav doesn’t hate Neha like does with every girl. Oh! So he may love her. Then what shall I do.

Someone comes and asks the teacher to go and meet the principal.. So teacher excuse from class and goes..

Madhav continues… And at last it was Keerthi’s things to things to say.

Madhav: So next is Keerthi – and she is the last one. So Keerthi, I have nothing to say about her as she has all kinds of problems…. (Everyone laughs)

( Keerthi’s expression cannot be expressed by writings )

He continues….

Madhav: She always argues with me… Not only me but the whole boys. She dosent know how to like someone. She has just hatred towards the whole boys and especially me…..( he raises his voice) Keerthi, you and your gang had insulted and challenged us a lot. (He points his finger to her and raises his voice more)
You are gonna pay for this, Keerthi. You are surely gonna pay. We will teach you we are.

Madhav finishes and excuses from class.

Keerthi had a paper in her hand and when she heard all this, she crushed the paper so badly. She had tearsin her eyes.

Madhav goes straight to a private area- toilet!! He locks himself and he stands against the wall with hands on his face. Madhav takes a deeps breath and he simply cries…

He was whispering Sorry continuously…

Keerthi was still at the class controlling her tears.

Mishal: Keerthi, its okay! Come on yaar. Be strong like you always are. Don’t be another Keerthi for him…

Keerthi: No, mishal. Don’t worry. I am alright. And I won’t be another Keerthi for him. I promise….

They smiles….

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Keerthi reaches home.

She sits in her chair and thinks what all he had said.

A tear rolls from her eyes. She wipes it away.

Keerthi: So, today proves that he hates me as much as I love him. The why should I love him this much? I am being a fool now. I will pay back for this atittude he had shown today. I say,Madhav you wait and watch. But, what about my love for him? What will happen to my love? Why did I love him? It was a mistake to love you, !Madhav. It really was. I promise myself, today onwards I will try to hate and forget you…. (She started crying)
And one day, I will hate you and there will not remain any relation between us. I will hate you. But its truly difficult for me, but I have to hate you for my sake…..
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PRECAP:- Keerthi dreams of Madhav and Madhav too dreams of Keerthi…
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Hope you guys enjoyed this. Ignore the spelling or grammatical mistakes. Ignore the short forms, of any…

I will try to update as soon as possible. Do let me know what you think of the story by dripping in a comment. Don’t forget to hit the like button. I want all your love and support… Thanks for reading…

By,
Pavithra?

 

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    27 Comments

    1. fenil on January 9, 2018 9:40 am

      Amazing

      • Pavithra1616 on January 13, 2018 9:14 am

        Thanks bhai

    2. Niyati on January 9, 2018 12:53 pm

      Amazing….Loved it dear…Do update soon & lots of love to my lil sis

      • Pavithra1616 on January 13, 2018 9:15 am

        Thanks di..glad you loved it.. Love you too.will update soon. When will update Dastaan?

    3. riyarocks on January 9, 2018 5:36 pm

      this was really very very emotional epi dear……….I hope everything gets sorted out between keerthi & madhav soon……….luv u a lot sweety pie……….bye…….tc

      • Pavithra1616 on January 13, 2018 9:16 am

        Thanks di.. Thanks a lot… Luv u too…

    4. ShonaLaado on January 9, 2018 6:13 pm

      I hope all goes right soon dear in story. And it was amazing. Do post soon. Hope your friend comes to know soon. All the best dear.

      • Pavithra1616 on January 13, 2018 9:17 am

        Thanks hemi.. Thanks a lot… Thanks for ur support and love?

    5. Muskaan on January 9, 2018 8:05 pm

      Madhav!!! Why? He repents for his mistake but humiliated Keerti just to clear a misunderstanding! ?
      Poor Keerti! She’ll start hating Madhav now! ?
      Post as soon as you can!
      Loads of love,
      M Di
      ???

      • Pavithra1616 on January 13, 2018 9:18 am

        Thanks M di?? thanks a lot for commenting.. Will update soon!

    6. Anuradha123 on January 9, 2018 8:17 pm

      Awesome dear as always… What to say no words are left to describe how much beautiful your story is… Wonderful, great job.. Keep writing

      • Pavithra1616 on January 13, 2018 9:19 am

        Thanks anu… Thanks a lot.. Thanks for ur love and support..

    7. Mansi on January 10, 2018 12:06 am

      Amazinggggggg update????Wishing everything gets sorted out soon between KeerDhav?Precap????Update ASAP?

      • Pavithra1616 on January 13, 2018 9:21 am

        Thanks di… Thanks a lot. Will update soon…

    8. Cgegeg on January 10, 2018 12:41 pm

      Why did he even do that..i mean abko mana kr ke khud ne itna humiliate kra keerthi ko …and then he went to the washroom n started crying…every chapter of ur story makes me curious to read the another …update soon..

    9. Aadila on January 10, 2018 5:02 pm

      hey it’s amazing yaar!!!! I like it so much I lost my mind now…… seriously….??

      • Pavithra1616 on January 13, 2018 9:21 am

        Thanks aadu dear.. Thanks a lot..

    10. ShebaRS on January 10, 2018 7:06 pm

      I love this chapter very much …..Pavii?????

      • Pavithra1616 on January 13, 2018 9:22 am

        Thanks Sheba…

    11. ShebaRS on January 11, 2018 7:57 pm

      I love this chapter very much…?? …I am waiting for the next chapter ??

      • Pavithra1616 on January 13, 2018 9:23 am

        Thanks di.. Oh really, so will update soon…. Luv u???

    12. Shreya on January 12, 2018 3:03 pm

      This was so saddening… Why is Madhav hitting Keerthi to clear misunderstanding… That’s not fair…. Anyway, I loved this chapter very much! I had commented on your previous chapter.. And I am following this.. Update soon…

      • Pavithra1616 on January 13, 2018 9:24 am

        Thanks shreys.. Thanks for your supporting…. Will update soon!

    13. qwerty123 on January 12, 2018 4:55 pm

      Hey it is so nice … like love turns into hate ?????… love such stories

      • Pavithra1616 on January 13, 2018 9:25 am

        Thanks a lot aysha di?? glad u love such stories…

    14. arshiya_princess on January 13, 2018 5:16 pm

      Amazing dear ?

    15. Ghvpriya on January 18, 2018 2:23 pm

      Wonderful part dear!!! ????. Eagerly waiting for the next one

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