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Home»Fan Fiction»It was a mistake to love you.. Chapter 6
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It was a mistake to love you.. Chapter 6

Pavithra1616By Pavithra1616December 14, 2017Updated:December 14, 201735 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey guys,this is Pavithra here. I am back with my ff’s sixth chapter. A big thanks to those who commented on my previous chapter. Thanks to silent readers too. Hope you guys enjoy this one too..
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Recap:- KeerDhav talks to each other. Keerthi writes about her feelings for Madhav.
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Keerthi looked relieved after writing her feelings….

Keerthi:(in mind) thank god! I am so much relieved now.

Mishal came back to class

Mishal: oh! Keerthi,you are back?

Keerthi: yes, I am and I am very happy too

Mishal: why? And now who is that person you love?

Keerthi: I don’t want to say!

Mishal: no,you have to keerthi… By the way, why did Radhika ma’am call?

Keerthi: she called to tell us to tell that we got the same mark in total. I got 98.5%, Mishal! Can u think?

Mishal: what, 98.5%.. That means 99% when we round off! Oh my god! Who is this ‘we’?

Keerthi: oh that’s Madhav… ( with a little blushing )

Mishal: oh again that boy!

Keerthi and Mishal smiled at each other….

Mishal: keerthi, don’t try to change the subject. Today, you are gonna tell who is this person whom you love this much….

Keerthi looks at her eyes… They were alone in class. The sky was now filled with black clouds. The atmosphere was very dark except for the dim light in their class. Suddenly electricity went! The atmosphere was very dark and cloudy now….

Keerthi’s eyes filled with tears.. Mishal put her hands around Keerthi

Mishal: come on Keerthi.. Tell me please…

Keerthi had her head down to the table… Mishal in the same pose(hands still around Keerthi) did the same. Suddenly keerthi said…..

Keerthi: this love is very unique, Mishal…… Maybe you can’t understand this.

Mishal: no yaar… I will definelty understand you. I had known every secret of yours na?

Keerthi: I don’t know why I am loving him. (Tears began to flow down her rosy cheeks)

Mishal: we will solve everything. Just tell me who it is…

Keerthi wiped away her tears. But again tears began to roll down her cheeks when she thought of Madhav….

Keerthi: Mishal, promise me that you won’t tell anyone.

Mishal: Keerthi, you know that I won’t tell anyone even if anything happens.

Keerthi nods.

Keerthi hugs Mishal and says

Keerthi: I love……..

Mishal: you love??

Keerthi: Madhav ( almost like a whisper )

Mishal lost her grip on Keerthi. She was astonished,surprised etc and etc!!

Mishal: what? (Whispering)

Keerthi nods.

Mishal: Keerthi, you love Madhav? I can’t believe this.

Keerthi: yes, you should believe this, Mishal. You should!

Mishal: oh my god! This is double shock for me.. Hope I will not faint after hearing this!

Keerthi: don’t say jokes at this time.. OK

Mishal: sorry..wanna go yaar.. But don’t think I am leaving you OK! I came here just to here who it is and I am totally surprised…. Don’t tell anyone please!

Keerthi nods and smiles

Keerthi: hope she won’t tell anyone. No, she won’t…. She is my friend na.. My dearest friend!

Its evening and keerthi reaches home.

There was a special ritual at a near by temple. She goes there.
She remembers seeing madhav there when she was little….

She went inside the temple. She then thought ‘what if he comes this day too?’ She smiled hopefully

Then she went to Naagraj incarnation. She closes her eyes and prays. She opened her eyes and was about to turn when she noticed Madhav just near her. They were standing side to side….

Keerthi: Madhav?!? (Whispering)

Madhav was praying so he didn’t hear it and didn’t even see her!

When Madhav opened his eyes. Keerthi had ran from there.

Madhav: I had Keerthi’s presence here. Maybe it was all my imagination……

He goes.

Keerthi had ran away happily. She stands against a wall and keep her hands on her beating heart.

Keerthi: what? I just thought of seeing him and suddenly saw him!?

She goes home happily……

Now she was totally sure that one day she will get him. Even the god wants them together…….
( but they won’t unite )
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PRECAP:- Madhav insults Keerthi at their class. She was in tears and thinks that he surely hates her…… Then why she love him?

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Hope you guys enjoyed this. Ignore every spellings and grammatical mistake. Ignore the short forms if any!

I have been noticing many dislikes for my previous articles. Whoever is doing it please let me know what is the problem with this story. So that I could correct it and write better……

Sorry for the very late update…. And the next chapter I will try to update soon as possible..

Thanks for reading. I want all your love and support. Let me know what you think of the story by dropping in a comment… Don’t forget hit the like button too?
By,
Pavithra?

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    35 Comments

    1. fenil on December 14, 2017 3:42 pm

      Awesome chappy.
      Lived it.

      • Pavithra1616 on December 16, 2017 9:36 pm

        Thanks bhai…. Thanks a lot for commenting!

    2. ShonaLaado on December 14, 2017 5:03 pm

      Oh wow! You have nice writing skills.

      • Pavithra1616 on December 16, 2017 9:36 pm

        Thanks dear!

    3. ShonaLaado on December 14, 2017 5:04 pm

      I have to read the last chapters too now. So starting my journey of your f2f. Wish me luck.

      • Pavithra1616 on December 16, 2017 9:38 pm

        I am wishing u luck… Hope by now u have read those chapters.. How r they?? Do tell me!

      • ShonaLaado on December 17, 2017 10:41 am

        Asm! And can u pls send me links whenever u post new chapters.plsssss

    4. qwerty123 on December 14, 2017 5:34 pm

      Nice… wonderfull
      ?????

      • Pavithra1616 on December 16, 2017 9:39 pm

        Thanks bhai!??

    5. Naina0411 on December 14, 2017 6:25 pm

      Awesome! ?
      Keerti finally told Mishal who she loves! ?
      Precap is sad! ?
      Why would Madhav insult Keerti? ?
      Loads of love! ❤️❤️❤️
      ???

      • Pavithra1616 on December 16, 2017 9:41 pm

        Thanks di? thanks a lot! I should appreciate ur guess! Precap!! Wait and watch di.. Ones more thanks!

    6. Ghvpriya on December 14, 2017 7:05 pm

      Wonderful!!! Totally wonderful….. I am very impressed by your writings…. keep it up yar. Very very good job

      • Pavithra1616 on December 17, 2017 8:56 am

        Thanks priya di?? thanks a lot!

    7. Shreya on December 14, 2017 7:08 pm

      Wow! It was just superb… Loved it alot… Waiting for the next chapter…

      • Pavithra1616 on December 17, 2017 8:57 am

        Thanks a lot shreya.. I will try to update soon!

    8. arshiya_princess on December 14, 2017 8:01 pm

      Amazing dear ?

      • Pavithra1616 on December 17, 2017 8:56 am

        Thanks princess!

    9. Cgegeg on December 14, 2017 10:24 pm

      nice chappy …u penned down everything beautifully ….the precap though don’t know why will he insult her 🙁 anyways waiting for the next update…:)

      • Pavithra1616 on December 17, 2017 8:59 am

        Thanks charu! Thanks a lot ?? there is nothing to be sad in the precap.. Its all a suspense! I will try to update soon charu.. Love you and thanks again!

    10. Mansi on December 15, 2017 10:35 am

      WOW????Loved Keerti telling Mishal whom she loves❤❤❤❤Wondering why would Maddhav insult her??Precap??Update soon?

      • Pavithra1616 on December 17, 2017 9:01 am

        Thanks di?? thanks a lot???? wait and watch di! U will understand what I meant! I will try to update soon??

    11. niyati on December 15, 2017 1:00 pm

      Awesome chapter ……glad that keerti told her feelings to Mishal…..Precap is shocking….eagerly waiting for next part….update soon…..lots of love to u ? ?

      • Pavithra1616 on December 17, 2017 9:03 am

        Thanks a lot di??u will soon understand that precap is just nothing.. There is nothing iortant in the precap! Maybe a bit important! When r u coming up with another ff?? Another one like rahasya… I don’t know why I love it sooo much??
        I will try to update soon as possible! Love u too di??

      • niyati on December 17, 2017 10:44 am

        Aww….thank you lil sis….thinking about that…..whenever I get time, will definetely write that dear ? ? ….love u infinity times ?

    12. ShebaRS on December 16, 2017 8:27 pm

      Hai.. Pavi…..It’s me Sheba….. It was superb….
      I’m waiting for next chapter

      • Pavithra1616 on December 17, 2017 9:04 am

        Thanks ! Thanks a lot for commenting dear! I will try to update soon!

    13. ShebaRS on December 16, 2017 8:33 pm

      Hai…..Pavi It’s was superb… ??
      ..

      • Pavithra1616 on December 17, 2017 9:05 am

        Thanks dear… Thanks a lot… Hmmm pinnem endhinadi comment cheythe?? ??? chumma chodichatha.. Nallatha!

    14. ManyaPV5 on December 16, 2017 11:29 pm

      Awesome Devu! Update soon…story is getting interesting….

      • Pavithra1616 on December 17, 2017 9:07 am

        It was really sweet of u to comment di?? love u a lot! Good morning???

      • ManyaPV5 on December 17, 2017 8:42 pm

        love u too devu ??

    15. riyarocks on December 18, 2017 12:02 am

      Paviiiii……..too good dear, hats off to ur writing……..now I’m gonna break the face of the one hitting the dislike icon……..if u felt something wrong, then come to the front & speak up the reason……..sweetu, don’t get bothered by such people……u r doing a great job……..luv u sweetu…….keep rocking

      • Pavithra1616 on December 24, 2017 11:20 am

        Thanks alot di… Thanks for supporting me… I dont know who r hitting the disliike button… Thanks again…

    16. SNIGDA123 on December 18, 2017 5:12 pm

      Amazing dear.Loved the part and you too sweetie.???.Take care.Thank you.Have a nice time.

      • Pavithra1616 on December 24, 2017 11:21 am

        Thanks snigda di… Thanks alot… luv u too di..

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