Hey guys!
I’m here with two shots on Twinj!
This is specially written for Anam, coz her birthday is near the date!
Love you chudail!
It is a birthday gift for you in advance!
This is just a prologue and the 1st shot would be posted after 16 Dec coz I’m too busy writing exams!
If That Mistake Didn’t Happened!
TWINKLE’S POV
“Love is unconditional. It is a spiritual state, not an emotion. It’s not a choice you pick at a fork in the road….it exists forever.” Is this just an ideal we strive for but can never attain or is it possible for a human to actually love someone unconditionally, love them even if they do something we hate or they decide to leave us!
But is it the same in my case!
Some MISTAKES,
Some Mistakes are not that big and can be forgiven!
But have you guys ever thought what if A mistake is so big that you can’t even regret it!
Same was the case with me, if I would have not done that mistake, he would be alive!
If I would not have done that mistake, I would have lived happily with my LOVE!
If I would have not trusted him, I would never had done that MISTAKE!
BUT only IF is what is left!
I cheated on him, I loved him still I cheated him!
I can’t bring him back!
I can’t ask forgiveness for the mistake I did!
I betrayed him, I betrayed the LOVE of my life!
I lost him forever and its impossible to get him back now!
It was only coz of my MISTAKE!
If I would have not gone away like that, He would have been here!
Between us, with me!
We would have been happy!
We.. Would.. Have.. Been.. Happy!
But now we are not,
Coz he is DEAD!
So what is the MISTAKE?
Whom did Twinkle trusted that led to such mistake?
Who is Dead?
To know all this stay tuned to If that mistake didn’t happened!
So guys I’m giving a try on this two shots!
Tell me through your comments should I continue or not?
I would love to hear from you guys!
18 Comments
Komal….!
Its seems different…n amazing….
M ery eager…
Do cont sooon
N wen is anam’s bday
Wonderful and full of suspense. And Wandering what kind of mistake did twinkle did. waiting for next update.
Hey komal awesome prologue loved it
Plss do continue
Loved it
Oh shitt r u serious??,this is so sweet of u komalee??
U know what? I was just thinking abt this shots, the way u were hinting me and making me curious by telling 2 lines and leaving it on the suspense??
Btw y twinkle ditch him,when she loves him more then her life??????
coming to u❤ I’m blessed to have u komal❤❤ u r the most cuttest and funniest girl I have talked with? I just love irritating you? (even u r irritating??) now I am just wishing to meet u❤❤
I Iove u so much small kid (i loved the way ur sister called u small kid?)????
You are still irritating dont think that tag will change!
And I’m no more a small kid!
I’m grown up
I love you too ?
Great
Looking forward ?
Holla komu????its awesome
Lovely. Its soo sweet. I wish the dead person in so kunj. Hope soo. Finger crossed.
Komu i know u dont know my bday date. My bday is on 6 December. Can u post ur ff or any os on my bday also if u r free plzzzzzz
Love u??❤️❤️??
Awesome.. seems interesting.. looking forward to read the first part ❤
Plot is very interesting but soo long time means after one month please try to post soon and I think twinkle is telling about her unborn baby and about trust she is telling about kunj
Komal di
Hiiii
Hayeeeee
Sooo cute…..
Loved it yrrr di…. continue the soonest…..woah….
Post fast sry soon….
Love u
Loved it the plot looks so interesting I just can’t wait 🙂 Try Posting soon 🙂 Love you 🙂
HI Komal (once again ?),
This was so interesting! I mean, what could that one mistake be? Why did that lead to his or shall I say kunj’s death? And that intro, dayum! You are a brilliant writer. I love your work! But the shittiest part is, you’ll post after 16th December? Are you kidding me? Such a long time! I hope you can write sooner …. Anyway, will be waiting for it, though!
Lovess! xx ?
Sorry but I’ve to write exams till 16!
So i would be very busy to write my stories
Wow….lovely prologue…..waiting to read further…..
Hey komal I do read ur ff bt it seems different yaar do continue bt do be frank I am hell jealous of u abt cmnts 70 ohmg…. I am really jealous of u yaar do continue ur ff I am waiting fr twinj union
Thanks for commenting girl!
Your ff is amazing and too believe me and do post soon!
Wow. U gave us such a tempting an d amazing intro then just leave it at that? ? But I can’t wait until dec 16 comes, not cause its my birthday…but because the first part will be uploaded. Good luck on ur exams!
Komal….plz do ctd soon
Lovely start
All the best