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Home»Fan Fiction»THE MISTAKE WHICH CHANGED OUR LIVES (3)
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THE MISTAKE WHICH CHANGED OUR LIVES (3)

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hey guys!! kritika here!! first of all, sorry for the mess in last episode..!! now forget it! this episode is small, as i am damn sleepy, still wrote it somehow. i am thinking to extend this ss a bit more. i thought it to be of 5 parts. now gonna extend it to 6-7 or may be if possible 8..thank you for ur comments and all the silent readers. n howzz the cover guys? i made it!!
link for prev epis and do check your replies..

http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=THE+MISTAKE+WHICH+CHANGED+OUR+LIVES

so here we go..!!
Episode 3

“marry me” he said

“I can raise my child by my own mr.maheswari..i don’t need you sympathy or pity” she offended him.

He tried to make her understand “swara,..a child needs a father and mother both and moreover, it was OUR mistake, EQUALLY…so why don’t you understand..!!?”

Swara still opposed him “no sanskar. I wont. why to waste my life by marrying a jerk like you”

There was deep silence for a few minutes. But then sanskar, with a smirk, broke the silence. “marry me swara”

Swara replied without looking at him “not even in my dreams”

Sanskar smirked more widely “u sure?”

Swara’s gaze now met his “damn sure”

“soch lo swara”

“soch liya hai”

“ohkay! So if you don’t marry me, then I will tell your parents that you are pregnant..! an unmarried girl, pregnant, that too before marriage..! how embarrassed your parents will be?
It will be fun seeing that nah! And our parents are out for a tour with our business people for next 3 months right!? and..”

She didn’t allow him to complete his sentence and scremed “sanskar”

“tch..tch…tch baby..!! don’t scream it’s a hospital.!!tell me are u ready to marry me? I will never let you down..i will give all the happiness to our child..!! so now tell me ur decision.”
His voice suddenly sofetened after 2 lines..

Her eyes were filled with tears. Looking towards her belly, she nodded with heavy heart..

******************

“vivaah sampan hua. Aaj se aap dono pati patni hai” the pandit declared.

2 weeks have passed since they came to know about swara’s pregnancy. Sanskar first made sure swara is stable, then finding the closest date of marriage, they are in mandir,
marrying, taking 7 vows, pheras, together, filling her maang with vermilion, in a holy place, in a temple.

“you must be tired. Take rest, I am sending something to eat.” Sanskar said with concerned voice, as he made swara comfortable in their room.

“how much will I eat.!? I had lunch just before 2 hours” swara said irritatingly.

“its 2 hours swara. And a pregnant woman should eat something every hour. Please eat it” sanskar said again in a concerned voice.

Swara with a pout “ okay”

He made her eat and then made her lie down carefully on the bed.

As he was about to go, he felt a grip on his wrist.

“I don’t have my favourite pillow to which I can hold and sleep. If you are free, then can u lie beside me?” she asked with those sweet, innocent eyes.

The music of song ‘Yeh ishq hai’ (the bg music in beintehaa serial) plays.

Sanskar nods surprisingly and lies beside her. As soon as he lies, she puts her head on his chest.

“do you have any problem if I sleep like this?”

In answer he just gladly wrapped his hand around her.

She got her answer. Hence, she just smiled and closed her eyes, waiting for sleep to take over her.

He kept staring her face.

“Holding her in his arms, is the best feeling” he thinks.

The sunrays hit her face. She gets up slowly, takes her clothes, and goes to washroom.

As soon as she enters the washroom, she sees sanskar removing his t shirt and she screams a little turning her face.

“urrghhh. Can’t you close the door while changing!?”

“I have the habit to do so. Now can you please get out?”

She tried to open the door knob. All in vain, they were stuck.

“its stuck” she whined.

“wait. I will do it.”

He also tries. All in vain again.

She laughs “are you any superman?”

Sanskar smirks and moves forwards, towards her “am I any joker at whom you are laughing?”

Her laugh fades and she starts moving back. But atlast, her back hits the wall. Sanskar again goes close to her. Now their bodies are touching each other lightly. Mistakenly, swara
hits her hand to the shower knob and water starts to fall on them.

Swara closes her eyes. They both are not in there senses. Sanskar touches her cheeks with his and rubs it back and fourth a few times. Then he moves his face closer to her and kisses her softly. She responds him gladly.

Then he breaks the kiss and sees her. She has closed her eyes.

“swara” he called

She came back to her senses and was shocked ‘why did they kiss?’

“this was the punishment of not knocking and coming inside the bathroom.”

Swara’s mouth hangs open and she widen her eyes and keeps her hands on the either sides of her waist.

“acha ji! So now you will give punishment to your pregnant wife” she mocked him.

He smirked “my dear wifey, thanks for giving me respect but you don’t need to call me ‘ji’ n all”

The screen freezes at swara’s shocking face.

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ohkk!! till then bye..!! and do check your replies

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42 Comments

  1. Gayathri on May 13, 2016 6:54 pm

    So cute

    • Kritika on May 13, 2016 9:09 pm

      Thanks

  2. sanskriti ? die hard fan of swasan ? on May 13, 2016 6:56 pm

    Kritika it was just awsm incredible fabulous no words to express your writing loved today’s epi luv u loads ?

    • Kritika on May 13, 2016 9:10 pm

      Thanks solo much yr…love uh too!! ????

  3. L Khan on May 13, 2016 6:58 pm

    Superb yaar….waiting for next nd plzz upload longer parts plzz

    • Kritika on May 13, 2016 9:11 pm

      Thanks dear!! Today I was damn sleepy..hence, couldn’t concentrate much…I will try to make it longer..!! ?
      Love ya!!????

  4. Tvisha on May 13, 2016 7:08 pm

    awsm…upload soon I can’t wait!!!!!

    • Kritika on May 13, 2016 9:12 pm

      Thanks dear!! Will try to upload tmrw
      Luv u loads
      ???

  5. Dharsha on May 13, 2016 7:22 pm

    Just superb?….. Don’t worry about stupid bathers who don’t even have a common sense…… Even last chappy was good…

    • Kritika on May 13, 2016 9:12 pm

      Aww,,thanks soo much dharsha!! Love u??

  6. mou on May 13, 2016 7:30 pm

    superb

    • Kritika on May 13, 2016 9:13 pm

      Thanks..
      Love uh..???

  7. anu on May 13, 2016 7:42 pm

    awesome.

    • Kritika on May 13, 2016 9:13 pm

      Thanks a lot Sam!! Its uh only nah!?? If not sry..
      Anyways, love uh!! ???

  8. Rosey on May 13, 2016 7:54 pm

    its fabouls i cant explain in word n funny too

    • Kritika on May 13, 2016 9:14 pm

      Thanks a lot rosey!! Are u rosey bloom? If not sry!!
      Love uh!!????

  9. kumu. on May 13, 2016 8:37 pm

    nice

    • Kritika on May 13, 2016 9:15 pm

      Thanks
      Love uh????

  10. Neha on May 13, 2016 8:58 pm

    Haha Kritika this awesome loved it so finally this mistake lead to swasan wow…. N I’m waiting for next part really wonderful ss….. Lovely ??

    • Kritika on May 14, 2016 11:11 am

      Thanks lot neha!!
      ????love uh

  11. Priya on May 13, 2016 9:03 pm

    Very nice ma

    • Kritika on May 13, 2016 9:15 pm

      Tysm Priya!!?
      Love uh????

  12. Rachana on May 13, 2016 9:16 pm

    Too good yaar waiting for the next update

    • Kritika on May 14, 2016 11:12 am

      Thanks rachana
      ????love uh

  13. kaynat khan on May 13, 2016 9:18 pm

    seriously it was amazing waiting for next

    • Kritika on May 14, 2016 11:15 am

      Thanks yr!!
      Love ya!??

  14. maya on May 13, 2016 9:22 pm

    super and nice update daily…..

    • Kritika on May 14, 2016 11:16 am

      Thanks Maya!??love uh

  15. shan on May 13, 2016 10:46 pm

    awesome kritika loved it….

    • Kritika on May 14, 2016 11:16 am

      Thanks shan!!

  16. ruhi on May 13, 2016 11:29 pm

    Awsm

    • Kritika on May 14, 2016 11:16 am

      Thanks ruhi!!
      Love uh???

  17. tani on May 14, 2016 12:03 am

    awsm incredible fabulous
    fantastic story

    • Kritika on May 14, 2016 11:17 am

      Thanks a lot tani!!
      Love uh!??

  18. B on May 14, 2016 12:23 am

    Awesome. It makes me smile.

    • Kritika on May 14, 2016 11:18 am

      Thanks !! Aww! Its made uh smile! Then let me make u smile more!

      Love you??

  19. Kavya on May 14, 2016 10:01 am

    Awesome yaar

    • Kritika on May 14, 2016 11:18 am

      Ty yr
      Love uh???

  20. Jyotii on May 14, 2016 12:25 pm

    super duper epi!!
    so cute swasan!! I loved it yaar!!

    • Kritika on May 16, 2016 3:55 pm

      Thanks di!!
      Luv u????

  21. Shagun on May 14, 2016 3:33 pm

    Awesome ep

    • Kritika on May 16, 2016 3:55 pm

      Ty!!
      Love you??

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