Hii my lovely readers, Niyu is back with another OS . Many of u want second part of my previous one . I promise i planned it later when any idea popped in my little brain. This one OS is dedicated to My bestie Sana & Kashu, u guys know them . Hope u guys like it. If i do any mistake , then forgive me.
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Sanchi is lost in her thought. She smile like a maniac.Suddenly, She collide with Pragya.
Pragya : Abe o aankhein kaha hai tumhari . Kahe har kisi se takraati phir rahi ho , Khamba samjha hai ka humko.(You have no eyes. Why u colliding with everyone . Am I loking pillar to u ).
Isha : Where are u lost Sanchi ?
Pragya : Tum na ekdum dambo ho , Ye maharani toh bas Dr . Kabir ke hi sapne dekhti rehti hai.(Isha you are fool . She is always lost in Dr. Kabir’s thought).
Sanchi : Shut up Pragya. Nothing is like that.
Isha : Don’t tell a lie . We already know that.
Sanchi : I am going to my patients . I have no time to do arguments with u both.
Pragya : Bas dekh li tumhari dosti……
She nods her head in disbelief & move toward ward. She start treating her patients while Veer enter in same time.
Veer : Sanchi, U know Dr. Kabir has girlfriend .
Her pink glowing face become pale after listening this. She drag veer into corner.
Sanchi : Are u gone mad? Why u start infront of everyone . Don’t make me fool. Your stupid pranks never worked on me .
Veer : It’s not a prank.I listen from my these ears( holding his ears from hand) that he say I love u to anyone on his phone.
Sanchi : I think u become deaf . Your ears were damaged.
Isha : He is right sanchi.
Pragya : Itna bada kaand ho gaya aur tum ab bata rahe ho nalayak.
Veer : We want to know her name…
Sanchi P.O.V
They all busy in discussion while my heartbeat become faster like that my heart is runnig any marathon. I don’t want to believe that he has girlfriend or u can say my heart is not accepted that. I have feeings for him from the first day when I join savitri devi for internship.If he like anyone, then my happiness is also in his happiness as I love him so much.
P.O.V ends.
Pragya : Abe o tum baar baar kon si duniya main chali jaati ho.
Veer : We discuss important matter here & u lost in your dreamland.
Sanchi : There is no need to do this as I am happy in his happiness .
Isha : What ! our all efforts on mission kanchi go in vain.
Pragya : Wah devi ji aapko pranam. Bas kar di na tumne paglet waali baat. Tum kahe apna khoon jala rahi ho,Us ladki ko toh hum log do thappad maarke bhaga denge.
Isha : Exactly…..we solved this matter.
Sanchi : No way …..you guys solved like this.
Veer : We want his mobile for that…
Pragya : That’s ok but who is go in that danger zone.
All look toward Sanchi….
Sanchi : Nooo…. I don’t do that.
Pragya : You don’t do this much for ur love . Are pyaar main toh log jaan dete hai.
Veer : Ye bhi jaan dene se kam kaha hai.
(It’s not at all less than that)
Isha & Pragya gave deadly glare to shut his mouth.
Isha : Ha yaar sanchi……. Plzzz…
Sanchi : Ok stopped but if it created any mess then it’s your responsibility .
Veer : Responsibility, wo kis chidiya ka naam hai . I don’t take responsibility of my doings, then why I do that for u . This word is not made for me.
Pragya : Chup ho ja nalayak. Sanchi u only concentrate on our mission.
She nod her head.
Kabir P.O.V
I was going upstairs for surgery . My eyes falls on her who is busy in talking with her friends. I lost in her & totally forget about surgery. This is happen with me everytime , when she is infront of me . She is different from others. She have something which attract me.
P.O.V ends
Miss Fernandez : Dr . Kabir,we are getting late.
Kabir : Ya, I am coming.
On other side –
Veer : Dr. Kabir is busy in surgery. This is the right time.
Isha : Go jhansi ki rani.
They move toward his cabin . Sanchi enter while they three peeping from outside.
Sanchi : There is no one . Come inside I get it .
Pragya : Gajab tum toh bullet train se bhi tez nikili.( You are fast than bullet train)
They all busy in guessing the password.
Isha : What is the password?
Veer : You asked me like that Dr. Kabir personally told his password to me.
Pragya : Chodo tum logon se na kuch nahi hoga. Hume hi kuch karna padega.
(You guys are useless. I only do something).
Kabir : Oh shit ! I forgot my phone in my cabin.I will be back here in just five minutes.
He move toward his cabin. He enter & saw them stand making group.
Kabir : What happen here ?
Pragya : Lag gayi lanka …..Ab toh hum gaye.
She hide the phone & pass it to isha.
Isha : Why u give me this?
She pass that to Veer.
Veer : I already say that i don’t take any responsibility .
Veer give it to Sanchi.
Veer : Ab kisi aur ko nahi dena kyunki koi nahi hai.(Don’t pass it to next as there is no one)
Kabir : Anyone tell me & Why u all standing like this ?
Pragya : Ask to Sanchi…
They three devils fled from there & peeping from window.
Kabir saw his phone.
Kabir : What is this? What are u doing in my cabin.
Sanchi : I don’t know…
Kabir : What…..Agar tumhe nahi pata hoga toh mujhe pate hoga.
Sanchi : Why u don’t tell me that u have girlfriend.
Kabir : Who told u this ?
Sanchi (Tears in her eyes): It matter to u who told this but my feelings didn’t matter to u . You broke my heart . I never forgive u
You don’t want to understand anything . You are selfish just selfish…
She continuously speaking & now kabir burst out. He placed his hand on her mouth.
Kabir (while swiped away her tears) : I mean that who told u that i have a girlfriend . I have no girlfriend . There is no one in my heart except you.
Sanchi : Veer told me…….wait a sec….
Kabir : It’s Veer plan.
Veer(while enter) : Pragya & Isha is also with me.
Pragya & Isha nods their heads in disbelief.
Isha : We do for our mission kanchi.
Pragya : Exactly…..
Kabir : This is for us , so i don’t give any punishment.
Pragya : What is the password. We go crazy while trying.
Kabir : Sanchi….
Sanchi look at her & they both share a eyelock.
The End
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Hope u guys like it . This useless idea from my chotu sa brain. Kindly ignore grammatical & spelling errors. Do comnents & keep smiling . Be happy & stay safe.
With lots of kove & wishes to my kanchi family –
Niyu (Dramaqueen)
34 Comments
amazing ff
Thanks di for ur comment . Glad that u like this one.
Wow my Lil sis ……. Amazing idea was came in you chotu SAA Brain …… He he thnkx for shared with us….
Aww , thank u so much di for ur comment. Glad that u like this one . It really means a lot to me.
Don’t say useless… U r an excellent writer… I loved the dialogues of pragya” kya khamba samjha hai kya humko “..all the dialogues were very cool…. I m your crazy fan n please don’t say that your ideas were useless
Aww, thank u so much my lovely friend for ur lovely comment. Glad that u like this one. It really means a lot to me sweetie. I am also ur fan.Your ff is too amazing.
Ab Kya tareef karu mei Teri……..kahi lafse na padjaye kam
Aww, thank u so much bestie for ur so much praise though i am not a very good writer. Glad that u like this. It really means a lot to me.I am still dreaming.
Hey niyu amaz so sweet os yaar superb gang dialogue especially pragya yaar…… sweetie it is just like chota packet bada dhamaka awsome keep it up and post nxt one
Aww , thank u so much di for ur comment . I also miss ur sweet comment. Glad that u like the dialogues. Ya,will post next one soon di.
Wow Niyu di…it was such a sweet OS…i loved it….i am so happy you were back with An OS and I wish you keep on writing and writing……i loved it….love you loads and keep up the good work ???
Thank u so much moonie for ur comment. Glad that u enjoy this one & I too miss ur comment.It really means a lot to me . Ya, will keep writing & post next one soon.
Wow yaar.. Such a cute os it was.. Loved it a lot.. And ishu, pragya, veer and Saanchi share such a great bond… Awesome work dear.. And its so sweet of u to dedicate this os to me… Love u dear????
Aww, thank u so much sweetie for ur comment . Glad that u like this one .It really means a lot to me as this one os is dedicated to u.Luv u too dear.
Awesome awesome awesome…
Thanks dear for ur comment. Glad that u like this one.
Hi niyati.. i first tym read ur article and first tym too i m commenting .. this OS is short but not incomplete.. i loved it very much. Amazing writing skill u have.. u take inspiration from others and i take it from u. U r fab writer dear.
Hii dear….Glad that u like this one . Thanks for ur lovely comment.It really means a lot to me that i am ur inspiration as I am not a very good writer. I am fan of ur too.
Niyati it is damn superb yr don’t dare to say it boring …I loved it soon much!!
Aww , thank u so much di for ur comment. Glad that u like this one. I never say this boring di.
Awesome os dear ??? this is the perfect example for ‘short & sweet’ all the parts were perfectly combined. Totally loved it ???
Aww , thank u so much for ur comment dear. Glad that u like this one . It really means a lot to me.
OMG sweetie it’s outstanding amazing superb mindblowing awesome lovely khidki tod fabulous fantastic and many more
Aww , thank u so much for ur lovely comment dear. Glad that u like this. Thanks for ur kind words.
Wow awesome fabulous mind blowing
Thank u so much dear for ur comment. Glad that u like this.
Amazing
Thank u so much dear for ur comment. Glad that u found this amazing .
Useless idea??? Are u kidding me? This was a stupendous OS. Especially to see our trio play cupid iz super cute… And the concept about the password was also super creative!!! U definitely had such a sweet concept. Totally loved it!!! Keep coming with such wonderful OS’s like this. It was fantastic Niyati… And don’t criticize ur writing becoz it’s very good. I really enjoyed reading this cute OS..
Aww, thank u so much Annie for ur lovely comment. Glad that u like this one .It really means a lot to me as u are my inspiration . I am big fan of ur writings. Ya, will post next one soon when I get time . Ya, never criticize myself . Luv u dear.
Awww… This was so cute…..???…. Loved it… Amazing…. Itne piyare piyare ideas aate hain ap k chotu she brain me .. Hmm apka brain to bara kaam ka hai…??
Aww, thank u so much sweetie for your sweet comment. Today I know I also have some brain which had lovely ideas.It really means a lot to me. Gn & sweet dreamz.
Haye!!!!!!!!!mann karr raha tha bas padhte jaun, padhte jaun……….Niyu dear, main guchha hoon tumse……..inni jaldi kyu khatam kardi, bolo bolo…………haha……….U r a great writer dear, u just left me speechless……….luv u a lot sweetie………& a big waala teddy hug from my side for u………..
Aww di I miss your comment so much. Thank u for your lovely wala comment . Glad that u like this.Di, mujhse gussa na ho ,I will be back with another one when i got time. This much praise, it really means a lot to me.Di, u also a fantabulous writer.Luv u too di & a teddy hug to u. Gn & sweet dreamz.