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Home»Fan Fiction»Miss perfectionist and mr flirty os by allesha
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Miss perfectionist and mr flirty os by allesha

AleeshaBy AleeshaFebruary 8, 201810 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hi… This is aleesha. I am here with an os on kriyam. Sorry for not updating as i am busy in my school. Ok stop of my blabbering.

So in my os krishna and saiyyam is in college in Mumbai. Krishna was a like a angel and the miss perfectionist.but Saiyyam is so fun loving flirting boy.

So lets start….

Krishna park her scooty in parking of her college. Just then saiyam came in his jeep with his friends. He hit her scooty and scooty fell down. Kriyam was angry and start convo with angry face.

Krishna :cant u see my scooty.

Saiyam:why r u shouting like this its a small thing.

Krishna :yeah… This is small matter for u but not for me. And stop thinking that i am that type of girl who fall in love with u  and u have to stand my scooty properly.

Ruchi came in between and say chill krishna its a small matter its ok.

Kriyam :yeah stop favoring him oh i am sry u will favour as u r his gf.

Ruchi:oh… God i am not his gf we r only friends.

Krishna :oh cut the crab.. And u mr anyone stand my scooty at place properly.

Saiyam stand her scooty and she left. He says ruchi the is so boring lets do some fun..

Ruchi:yeah i also thinking. Lets go to cafe. Kisi ko apna bakra banate hain.

Saiyam:hmm… Rlt lets go..

Saiyam and his friends went to cafe and start raking. He says that u have eat chillies or u have to suffer whole year. Thet start eating but one girl start coughing. Some of her friends said that she had allergy. Sir we complain abt u to principal.

Pricipal call saiyam and give him last warning and said to help in drama management.

He was so angry on his punishment but this is majboori to do this. He meet krishna at drama hall.

Saiyam:tum yaha…

Krishna :for ur kind information this is my drama and this is drama hall. So plz keep quit this is practice time.

Saiyam was very irritated but he was majboor.

Kuch din aise hi beet gai.

Drama teacher:guys there is a bad new tania who is playing jullite in oir drma is left uske father ka transfer ho gya hain.

Krishna :oh my god ab jullite kon banega.

All suggest krishna name as krishna knkows all dialongs. Saiyam start saying sir yeh nhi kr paigi.

Drama teac. Stop it krishna u do jullite role.

Siyam start laughing.

Kuch din or bieth gai.. Saiyam start liking krishna but krishna keep maintain distance betwwm then. On day day of drama… Saiyam offer krishna a coffee.

Krishna :coffee or date

Saiyam:jo tum samjo.

Krishna :saiyam tum kyo nii samjte i am not like i was playing in drama i am so different. I said tum mujse pyar mat kr baithna.

Saiyam:krishna plz and lets go.

They go to cafe and share some moments.

One day they collide at stairs. Saiyam lass ane laga krishna ke.

Krishna:i Don’t know yeh jo bhi ho rha hain vo shi hain ya galt but i like it.

They was just to kiss but krishna unconscious in saiyam arms.

Saiyam :krishna…. Krishna… Utho..

He take her to her home.

Krishna dad thanks him.

Saiyam:uncle krishna ko kya hua hain? Vo thik toh hain na.

Kri. Dad:nhi beta krishna ko cancer hainlast stage hain kuch dinno me abb kimotherpy start ho jaigi. Vo apni life apni tarike se jeena chahati thi isliye kisi ko nii bataya

Saiyam was so sad and heart broken to know this. He goes to kriahna and said u dont tell me bcaz u think that i don’t even love u. She has tears in her eyes.

Krish. No its nothing like that. Main like me bahut kuch krna chahati thi pr time ki limit hain.

Saiyam also had tears in his eyes.

Saiyam :chalu tum muje bato kya kya wishes hain tumhare.

Krihna ne almirah ki taraf ishara kia. Uss p| sari wishes likhi thi. Like dance with someone who love ne. Eat bucket of chocolate etc and someone whon i love.

Krishna :don’t take seriously these wishes tu apni lefe khrab nii kr sakte.

Krishna:chill krishna.

He fullfill all her wishes and also marry her she and her dad was not ready for this marrige but he was true lover so usne mana hi lia.

After some time krishna kemotherpy start.

After 4 months of marrige she passed away. He was so alone but happy to fulfill all his krishna wish.

He opnes care center for cancer patients.

Sometimes this is not necessary that ur lover or partner always with u.

So this is my os on kriyam. Plz guys cooment and like my os. And sry for mistakes. And i know that thus is sad but u know jo hum chahate hain har wakt aisa nahi hota. Actually this is true story and maine ise kriyam pr likha hain.

 

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    10 Comments

    1. Wd sravya on February 8, 2018 10:36 am

      So nice os

      • Aleesha on February 8, 2018 3:02 pm

        Yeah thanks like to see that u like os

    2. Harini on February 8, 2018 9:28 pm

      Loved the os ,keep continuing yaar dying to see kriyam fanfic or os

      • Aleesha on February 9, 2018 6:22 am

        Yeah i was trying to write os or ff but i dont have enough time as my exams r starting. And happy to see that u like my os

    3. muniya on February 9, 2018 9:50 am

      Such a beautiful message…
      Loved it dear…

      • Aleesha on February 9, 2018 3:24 pm

        Thanks

    4. Sanaa.khan on February 9, 2018 5:13 pm

      Mind-blowing start aleesha…loved it to the core

      • Aleesha on February 13, 2018 7:51 am

        Thanks sanaa khan

    5. Fidato on February 12, 2018 4:01 pm

      Nice one Aleesha… Good message though…. True story…

      • Aleesha on February 13, 2018 7:50 am

        Thanks fidato…

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