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Home»Fan Fiction»YoU aRe MiNE SuKoR – part 12
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YoU aRe MiNE SuKoR – part 12

LiyaBy LiyaMay 20, 201723 Comments5 Mins Read
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In previous chapter there was no sukor scene,hope I was able to compensate it today : ) and sorry for the short update.

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“How much they fight or how much they say they hate each other the truth is they can’t live without each other and even a one day separation have made them desperate to see at least glimpse of the other to make sure that your partner is fine. At that moment nothing matters to them even their previous fights,the only thing that matters is each others presence but they won’t show their happiness exploding inside them  because of their ego”
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The night was getting creepier ,whole haveli was in deep Slumber but sleep was far away from chakor..there is no news of suraj till now ,many bad thoughts were coming to her mind .chakor is feeling scared of loosing suraj. Its that feelings are not born  to die …they can’t neither be created or destroyed…like energy..it just happens and when it happens there is no way to wash it out…that’s what happening to chakor now…how much she try to ignore,resist or control her feelings, one day it has to come out some way or other!

Chakor being stressed decided to take a walk to cool her mind…the whole haveli is invaded with darkness as everyone’s sleeping and all lights are off…chakor was climbing down the stairs carefully, but suddenly  she bumped into someone and in no time they  both find them self’s  on ground lying one over the other.

Ouchhh!!!he screamed ,chakor realizing the owner of the voice beamed in happiness.
Chakor : suraj is that you ?
Suraj : How much I wish its not me …ouchhh…get off me you motti.
Chakor : you stop calling me that okay .
Suraj : you stop eating so much okay.
Chakor : what’s your problem?
Suraj : you are my problem!
Chakor : and mine is you !
Suraj : My problem is bigger he said while chuckling.
Chakor : you idiot how dare you call me big ! I will kill you one day she said irritated.
Suraj : I think that day is today..he said sarcastically ..get off me or else I will be R.I.P soon.
Chakor : Then get ready to die you monkey ,cause I am not going to get up.

Suraj : you heartless women get off naa .

Suraj tried pushing her but chakor being arrogant clinged  to him.

At the end of this pushing and pulling process they were lying in a very close position on the floor….chakor could hear his heart beat and suraj could feel her hot breath on his chest..they were feeling awkward realizing their position, due to darkness they could’nt see each other but is able to realize what the other is feeling. Suraj  then gently   travelled his hand around her waist making her spines shiver,he pulled her more closer ,she was enjoying his warmth and clutched his shirt more harder…he gently moved his head towards her ear and said you are getting naughtier now a days wild cat .

Chakor : huh ? She said in confusion .
Suraj : Don’t be so innocent naughty,I know I am so hot and happening that you are desperately falling on me he said with a smrik yet again to irritate her.

Chakor’s mouth was wide open hearing this : my foot ,not even in my wildest dream I will drool over you..have you seen your face buffmonkey,I am not interested in an idiot like you, She said proudly.

Suraj : Really ? ,so why are you still over me get off na motti

Chakor : excuse me,you were the one who pulled me okay?

Suraj : ohho ,you could have pushed me away right? Why you did’nt do so..he said with a naughty smrik on his face.

Chakor : I…. actually…. I… Chakor was feeling embarrassed,she was searching for words and blushing hardly

Suraj could sense her shyness which was driving him more crazy “What I?? I?? “he said with a chuckle ..he then again pulled her more closer to him ,squeezing her over him giving her shock…he then rubbed his cheeks on hers making her shiver.

Suraj : Get one thing straight into your head wild cat neither you can push me away from Yourself nor from your life…..because

Before he could complete the lights were on and sukor could see vimli standing infornt with their mouths open seeing the scene infront of them…soon their shock turn in to a smrik..which scared sukor..you know sibling are sibling…teasing is in their blood..sukor cursed themselves for fighting and vimli was getting ready to have fun .

Thankyou soo much everyone for your support and love 🙂

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    23 Comments

    1. Nemo on May 20, 2017 12:34 am

      Amazing update! both nok jhok and romance. I hope vimli will tease them a lot about this. Looking forward to the next update.

      • Liya on May 21, 2017 10:04 pm

        Thankyouu so much nemo?? I will make sure that vimli tease hell out of them???

    2. ankur on May 20, 2017 1:48 am

      After so many days liya.But I am happy u came back

      • Liya on May 21, 2017 10:06 pm

        Ankur so long dude , hope you are doing well??I am also happy to be back .thankyou so much buddy for the constant love and support ???take care .

    3. Tippu on May 20, 2017 2:32 am

      Lovethis ff so much

    4. Tippu on May 20, 2017 6:18 am

      Wow liya ur ffs are so good and amazing iv just read all of them i love ur ideas they are soo good hope u update soon

      • Liya on May 21, 2017 10:08 pm

        Thankyou tippu for such a lovely comment its really encouraging, I am happy that you liked the ff??will try to update soon take care dear : )

    5. sukorlover on May 20, 2017 8:19 am

      Awesome, loved sukor nok jhok & romance

      • Liya on May 21, 2017 10:09 pm

        Thankyou so much sukor lover?? Happy that you liked their romance ?take care lol

    6. Shanaya on May 20, 2017 3:57 pm

      Awesome. Sukor scene was amazing. Waiting for the next.

      • Liya on May 21, 2017 10:13 pm

        Thankyou so much dear??

    7. Shreya. on May 20, 2017 5:57 pm

      Awesome ff dr…just loved it…tdy only I read all d parts of ur ff….I really loved all d parts.. dis is one of my fav ff nwonwards…nd dis part also simply superb…eagerly waiting for d next part dr…if u hv time in-between ur busy schedule kindly post ur next part liya…

      • Liya on May 21, 2017 10:44 pm

        Thankyou so much shreya ??I am happy this is one of your fav ff??I will try to post dear??

    8. Zoya on May 20, 2017 6:32 pm

      Just loved it….nd the way u wrote it…ur dialogues….were very nce…liya…

      • Liya on May 21, 2017 10:45 pm

        Thankyou soo much zoya ?? I have spend a lot time in that dialogues lol??thankyou for mentioning …it means a lot??

    9. Tarn ? on May 20, 2017 11:54 pm

      Liya!!! I missed your fanfic so much. I’m so glad to see you back. An amazing update a per usual ??

      • Liya on May 21, 2017 10:47 pm

        Tarn??I love reading your comments??hope you are doing good ?thankyou so much

    10. sukorFan on May 22, 2017 2:38 pm

      Wonderful fiction. Full of varied emotions !!
      After sooo long… !!! I thought you have discontinued writing . Keep it up . <3

      • Liya on June 1, 2017 10:22 pm

        Thankyou so much dear?? happy that you likes it?

    11. CrazygirlS.P on June 1, 2017 10:07 pm

      Superb jaana, I love it a lot❤️❤️❤️???

      • Liya on June 1, 2017 10:28 pm

        Janneman..??thankuu buddy??

    12. Sonia Banga on June 1, 2017 10:43 pm

      Best update ever, and great sukor romance. Hope it lasts forever.

      • Liya on June 1, 2017 11:15 pm

        Thankyou so much dear? ya this time things will go good I guess

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