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Home»Fan Fiction»You are mine to hurt (Kaanchi) OS
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You are mine to hurt (Kaanchi) OS

Neha7873By Neha7873September 19, 201712 Comments4 Mins Read
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A fog of smoke filled the atmosphere, as Sanchi walked in to the kitchen, with the intention of quickly getting some water to drink. As much as she tried not to Sanchi inhaled some of the smoke. Once it was in her system she fell unconscious. The last thing she had remembered was Kabir calling out to her.

Beads of sweat made their way up to his forehead, as he tried to shake the life back in to her.

“Sanchi get up!”

Despite all his pleads and calls Sanchi would not wake up, much to the worry of Kabir. Desperate Kabir picked up Sanchi in his strong arms; whilst both Pragya and Isha went to tell everyone else about what happened.

“Somebody call the Damn doctor!”

**Author’s note : Here, Kabir is not a doctor but a arrogant person .**

Kabir’s voice echoed around the silent Kapoor mansion, making Kusum jump and quickly call their personal family doctor.  Gently Kabir put Sanchi down on his bed to rest. Priya and Veer immediately sat beside her and rubbed her freezing cold hands and feet.

**Author’s note : Veer ,Priya and the gang came for a visit .**

A herd of emotions were playing on Kabir’s face: worry, anger, pain and grief. Kusum noticed this and gave Kabir a reassuring hug, whispering in to his ears.

“Don’t worry Kabir , I know how you are feeling. Even though you haven’t told me, I have seen your care for Sanchi. You care for her like your best friend, and believe me that will be the thing that wakes Sanchi up.”

After a few minutes the doctor came, and gave Sanchi a check up. When he saw that she wasn’t responding to anything he gave Kabir a nervous glance. At that moment in time, Kabir’s eyes were clear saying that “If you don’t cure my Sanchi, I will kill you”…

“She is not responding Mr Kapoor, nothing will work as far as I know. Only a miracle can wake her up.”

And with that the doctor hurried out of the room not wanting to face Kabir’s wrath.  Every one started to cry after hearing that, except Kabir, who hurried off.

A couple of minutes later Kabir returned with a bowl of water. Without hesitating he tipped the contents on to Sanchi’s face. Almost immediately Sanchi’s eyes slowly opened only to see a smiling Kbir. As her eyes searched for clues as to what happened, she realised that she was in his room and that she had obviously fainted, making everyone so worried.

Trying to inject a little humour, in to the situation, Sanchi finally spoke.

“Why did you throw water on me?”

A huge smile adorned Kabir’s face as he heard his Sanchi speak.

“Well you went to the kitchen to drink water ,so I gave you .”

Came the reply from a frowning Kabir. The expression on his face made everyone shocked especially Sanchi

In Sanchi’s thoughts
Hmm what’s the matter with Mr . Kapoor  today? Just a second ago he was smiling and now he’s frowning. Honestly I don’t understand this man.

His abrupt voice brought Sanchi out of her thoughts and all of her attention went to him.

“How dare you let that smoke hurt you! Don’t you know that only I, Kabir Kapoor can hurt you? Listen! You are only mine to hurt! Sirf aur sirf meri!

Furious Shivaay raged out of the room leaving a confused atmosphere and Sanchi. The only four people, who were smiling, were Isha, Pragya, Veer and Kusum…

~The End~

Hey guys ! I know you are pretty diappointed with me and you are free to give me any punishment. I promise to comeback soon . Coming to my previous OS , yes It was a bit way too much sensuous for me too but I had to fulfill some of my reader’s wishes ,so wrote that but personally I like light nok jhok romance ..I will return soon on 26th Sep and will many thing for you all .. You can give me any punishment you want ….sorry

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    12 Comments

    1. swetha on September 19, 2017 12:29 pm

      loved it dear

    2. Ashnita on September 19, 2017 1:50 pm

      amazing

    3. Abhilasha on September 19, 2017 2:19 pm

      Fabulous as always dear loved it!

    4. Trisha139 on September 19, 2017 2:52 pm

      Shivaay ? Ur os are always fabulous

      • Neha7873 on September 19, 2017 3:46 pm

        Actually , I was watching Ishqbaaz and writing at he same time ,so wrote shivaay by mistake

    5. riyarocks on September 19, 2017 2:56 pm

      hey Neha dear……..good to see u with another os………..loved it a lot…….

    6. anu on September 19, 2017 3:14 pm

      Nice story ………

    7. RuCh23 on September 19, 2017 4:40 pm

      Neha di (can I call you di?) it was an awesome os ??? that “if you don’t cure my Sanchi I’ll kill you” expression is great ???

    8. Jessicca on September 19, 2017 4:58 pm

      Nice one neha.. Awesome..Keep it up …

    9. Khamoshi on September 19, 2017 5:21 pm

      Neha… it was amazing.. the one who loves someone can do anything which u showed in this OS brilliantly.. no words..

      SHIVAAY SHIVAAY… OM NAMAH SHIVAAY ?? i thought Kabir went from there in RUDRA avatar of Shivaay ??

    10. Kashu on September 19, 2017 7:42 pm

      Awesome one yaar.. Loved it!!

    11. Dhruti on September 19, 2017 9:47 pm

      superb

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