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You are Mine Ch. 30

administratorBy administratorMarch 15, 201620 Comments5 Mins Read
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We r here, in Nivin’s home to celebrate onam.onam is after 10days so I got so much time to spend with my family. Eva was with us.Nivin introduced Eva to his and my family. Eva was really happy that she could celebrate onam with our family we made pookkalam (rangoli with flowers).celebrating onam, vishu and two eids with our family is one of my favorite. After few days Amma started to like Eva. Eva was polite to everyone. We even went watch our ‘old men’s’ football. It was so funny. We all return with stomach pain.when we report the match to our mothers, they both started laughing till stomach paining.but the two old men was so serious. πŸ˜‰
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“Eva..” Amma called Eva. Eva and I were gossiping. She went to Amma. Amma strokes her hair. “We r thinking about ur and kannan’s mrg” Amma said.Eva blushes.I hited on her upper arm playfully.
Amma continues “we want to talk to ur parents, mole (daughter)” Eva’s face got pale.only I, Zayn and Nivin know about her parents separation.
“Amma, actually her parents got seperated 4 years before. She is living alone” I put my hand on Eva’s shoulder. I don’t like when Eva get hurt coz she became mybest friend too.
“I am so sorry mole.I didn’t know about this” Amma gave her a hug.Eva’s eyes filled with water. Amma brushed her tears away.

“Don’t cry for someone who didn’t care about u..u have two family now not one like everyone” Amma slapped slightly on her face.Eva chuckled.
“Lakshmi said ryt” ummi kissed on Eva’s forehead.
“I am so so lucky. Coz I have two moms and pops…oh my god I will die coz of over love” she laughed in her tears.

“Never ev, if someone die coz of over love , then Aisha must die now” nivi said playfully and put an arm around my shoulder. I smacked on his head.”we r talking about ur mrg” I say
“Really, Amma!!! I am only 23!!” Nivin said as if he don’t want to marry now. πŸ˜‰

“But u said u will make our family to understand that we wabt to marry soon” Eva
said with a naughty smile.lol my best friend is dead now. .all eyes are on Nivin.there was our fathers, mothers, Nithya, my 3 siblings, Zayn, me and the love birds.
I and Eva looked at each other and burst out laughing followingby Zayn. Then it turned to a group laugh..

“You. ..” Nivin ran behind Eva. .
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After onam iyyer family take out a good day for Nivin-Eva marriage. We all went for shopping. We took hours to buy clothes, sandals and everything.

“Aisha..u r too busy in nivi’s mrg and totally forgot about me” Zayn made a pout expression. I put my hand around his neck and pressed my body to him.he put his hands on my waist and pulled me even more closer.he lean close to kiss me but someone knocked on the door. I pushed him away and went to open the door.day after tomorrow is Nivin-Eva mrg so it must be my girls.

I was wrong. It was my younger bro Ashin.
“I am out” he said while hugging me.
“What! !” I didn’t get him
“U r in ur room, abbu-ammi in their room, ashi itha (ashima) ashna itha in their room, in mine and ashima’s room zayra and nitu chechi (didi) in guest room jiju’s parents. Should I sleep with u? He asked. I looked at Zayn. But Zayn expression was saying no and now I am stuck in between my little bro and naughty husband.
“U can” I said and gave him space in our bed.I lay down beside Ashin.

Zayn’ s pov

Her annoying bro came to ruin our romantic moment and he is lying beside my wife! Where suppost to be me πŸ™ I lay beside my little annoying brother in law.he put his leg in Aisha’s waist and buried his face in her chest and started snoring. I looked at aisha she waa smiling. .”stop it aisha” I said annoyed.she laughed at me” u r cute when u act like angry”
“I am not acting. I am angry on ur annoying bro”
“Come with me” she took my hand in her’s and lead me to terrus.we stood under the sky holding our hands.Aisha’s head rest on my shoulder. I kissed on her head.”I love u ” she whispered. I twirled her around and my hands rested on her waist just like before. This time I am going to kiss her whatever happens.I took her face in my hand and pressed my lips against her lips.immediately she kissed me back.no annoying bro, just she and me.
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Aisha’s pov

Nivin-eva mrg.Nivin got ready in to a kerala groom and eva in to a kerala bride.both r looking awesome.

The rituals started. Marriage was in Brahmin style coz iyyer family is belongs to Tamil Brahmin. I really enjoyed the wedding. Zayn was with me all the time like we r the newly married couple. πŸ˜‰

Our dad gave something as their marriage gift to Nivin-Eva and he gave us the same cover.we both couples look at each other and opened the cover. It was our honeymoon tickets to Paris!!!
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it is honeymoon time…so let them enjoy their honeymoon. πŸ˜‰

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~~~THE END~~~

Finally completed my third story. I am so relieved.EMERALD was my third story but it still incompete. πŸ™
Now starts mission Emerald. I will complete it soon coz I want to focus more on She and Her kidnapper. Love u all..


My birthday girl LACHU, this cake is for u from me..enjoy it alone πŸ˜‰ but we will come and snatch every slice and will do ur make up with cake πŸ˜‰ …lv u and take care…

Credit to: Ruby

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20 Comments

  1. Hayathi on March 15, 2016 9:12 am

    It was ended noooo itni zaldi kyu

    • Ruby_Ryan on March 15, 2016 1:31 pm

      yehi tha plan dr

  2. Sindhu K S V on March 15, 2016 9:26 am

    Awesome sis…Perfect ending n awesome frndshp, love n family bonding.Thank u for wonderful story..

    • Ruby_Ryan on March 15, 2016 1:33 pm

      aww thnq so much dr

  3. rishi on March 15, 2016 10:14 am

    It’s completed na nice story yaar thanku so much

    • Ruby_Ryan on March 15, 2016 1:36 pm

      ya thnx dr

  4. Vivi on March 15, 2016 10:36 am

    Wow..i luv happy endings…..really i’m eagerly waiting 4 emerald…i want to knw hw em will get hr memory back…write soon..luv ya!!!

    • Ruby_Ryan on March 15, 2016 1:40 pm

      yep dr will write soon..lv u too

  5. Lakshmi on March 15, 2016 10:58 am

    Superb ending dear. Will miss zayn,aishu,nivi so much. Thanks for this amazing story. Thanks for the cake n wishes dear.luv u…tc…???

    • Ruby_Ryan on March 15, 2016 1:42 pm

      thnx dr…lv u tooo :*

  6. Ananya on March 15, 2016 2:51 pm

    Wow it was nic ending. Everyone one is happy happy… Will miss aishu zayn and nivi… Now will be waiting for emerald..

    • Ruby_Ryan on March 15, 2016 3:59 pm

      thnq anu

  7. suraj on March 15, 2016 4:39 pm

    wow…happy endng…just lyk i wanted…awesum ff…

    • Ruby_Ryan on March 15, 2016 5:06 pm

      thnx but I an angry with u.why did u left our group telly friends πŸ™

  8. faima on March 15, 2016 4:45 pm

    Happy ending……Spr…..

    • Ruby_Ryan on March 15, 2016 5:07 pm

      thnx dr

  9. zaimal on March 15, 2016 5:16 pm

    Nice but when will u update she and her kidnapper?

    • Ruby_Ryan on March 15, 2016 8:21 pm

      I will update it tomorrow dear

  10. Roma on March 18, 2016 7:45 pm

    Wowwww, wowwww wow, it’s an awesome ending….loved it to the core. …..i hope zaysha n niva r enjoying their honeymoon with lots of love…..you nailed it my honeyyy. …so lovelyyyyyy narration n awesoooooome plots. …keep it up. ..n never ever stop writing. ..will wait for your other updates. …love you soooooooo muchhhhhh, muaaaaahhhhhh

    • Ruby_Ryan on March 23, 2016 1:42 pm

      thnq so much dr…missed you so much

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