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Home»Fan Fiction»Mile ho tum humko bade naseebo se… TS
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Mile ho tum humko bade naseebo se… TS

PramitaBy PramitaJune 7, 201811 Comments5 Mins Read
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Soo new ts …
Guys if you like the story please vote and comment. It means a lot to us..
Not only to my story others stories also..
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In this story there no character sketch.
Characters name

Swara

Laksh

Sanskar

Ragini

Dr. gulati

Sweet girl daughter of sanskar hellu (helly)
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Story start with a girl falling in river .
(note this place is in kullu)

After sometime we see a handsome + cute boy on sea as we move towards him we see

He is talking to someone but we can’t  see anyone near him .

When we see from front a cute angel is in her hand he is talking to her .
No talking complaining.

That boy is non other than sankar and his princess helly..

Sanskar :- hellu see your mumma left us and living peacefully there pointing upward .

That he see a girl near the sea shore people are gathered near her. He goes toward her and ask people
They say we don’t how she came her. He say call the ambulance they say we have call . that ambulance came they take that girl with them.

She is going to hospital
Other side we see a boy in hospital on streacher is taken to ot..

After some day he come in sense. And his friends tell him that she is no more thinking you died..

She jump from the cliff . but till now her body is not found.

Friend :- laksh what are you thinking

Laksh :- you she is alive somewhere on this earth because I am breathing that means she is also
Breathing.

Friend:- ok. As you say but now you have recover fast then only we can find her.

Saying this he leave from their .

Laksh goes to FLASHBACK

Where we see a boy and girl confessing their love to eachother than girl say , laksh you know bhai will never agree for our marriage . we should run from here .

Laksh :- but how we will face them .

Girl :- we will leave this city and go far from here . you have my swear . tomorrow is our marriage
Then we will leave this city .

Laksh :- ok

Next day

Both are in front of god idol going to start the marriage

But some one from back hit laksh . he falls down when they see here come the girl brother which some mens .

they baccha how can you marry this man he is not from our caste also.
Girl :- but bhai I love him . please let me marry him I will never come in front of you. Pakka

Girl’s brother :- no. never in this  birth you both can’t meet. Saying this he stab laksh several times. He fall on the ground lifelessly.

Girl:- you killed my laksh now what the foe me to live I will also to him saying this shr run and she jump from the cliff.

Flashback over..

Her girl reached hospital
Where a doctor is treating her.
Nurse :- handsome what happen to this girl.

Doctor :- let me check yaar. Stop disturbing me . in home also don’t let me live in peace and here also Mrs.Gulati.

Nurse (Mrs.Gulati):- what to do Mr. gulati when your have such dumb husband .

How can I let him live in peace.

Now stop blabbering and check her
After some time he say ,”nothing to worry she had a head injury which I have cure. Rest we will come to know when she will gain her sense.

After 3 hours we see

A girl is moving her hand and legs as if she is seeing something bad..
She get up with a jerk and see here there

But she was not able to recoganise anything or anybody. She shouts.

listening her scream everyone come near her room that time Dr. gulati enter her room and ask her
what happen why you scream .

girl :- who are you . who I am . where I am . she start panicing . doctor give her sleeping injection and she sleep .

doctor:- I think she has lost her memory.

Nurse :- now what we will do we don’t even know where is she from.

Doctor :- let see what god has save in her future.

Other side

Sanskar enter the same hospital to collect the reports of his princess.

He have to go home fast if his princess wake up and doesn’t find him than she will eat her dadi head.

He goes to reception collect the reports and was going then only he heard some scream he go towards the source he see a girl asking her name and all.

Seeing this he is able to conclude that she has lost her memory .

When he was about to move Dr. came out he see doctor and remember something and get teary eyes .

He was going when doctor says sanskar can you do me a favour

Sanskar :- yes . doctor I will do. If it is in my favor then only.

Doctor :- but you have your daughter swear you will say yes whatever I say infront of that girl .

Sankar was going to deany but he left inside .

After sometime she gain her sense doctor call me inside he say to her that
She is my wife..

I was shocked . shocked will be small word for my current emotion .

Same emotion I was seeing on her face.

She was seeing me like I am some alien . but what can I but I smart handsome man yaar

Every girls dream boy but my dream girl left me..
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So how is the epi .
If you want next part then like and comment both are necessary .

Thank you
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Pramita

    I m 19teen.. Persuing engineering in computers.. Frm city of lakes bhopal.. Love writing ... Much more cant tell in words???

    11 Comments

    1. pravee on June 7, 2018 8:15 am

      awesome

      • Pramita on June 7, 2018 2:25 pm

        Thank u☺

    2. anu on June 7, 2018 9:11 am

      nice
      update next part of your ts

      • Pramita on June 7, 2018 2:27 pm

        Thanks .. very soon

    3. Mystique on June 7, 2018 9:32 am

      This story looks similar to the Anil Kapoor movie “ Mr Bechara”…..is it the same plot?

      • Pramita on June 7, 2018 2:23 pm

        Yaa. Plot is same but story will be little different..

    4. Sanu on June 7, 2018 11:37 am

      Nice plot quite intersting hope its swasan and raglak

      • Pramita on June 7, 2018 2:28 pm

        Let see it will be or not

    5. parulkashyap on June 7, 2018 12:00 pm

      awsm n funny one

      • Pramita on June 7, 2018 2:24 pm

        Tq..☺☺☺

    6. Rehna on June 10, 2018 10:56 am

      Superb dear

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