When I met you, my world changed – A Shivika ff by Tanz (Part 4)

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Hello everyone, this is Tanz, back with part-4 of my ff. I am so glad to see your responses in the previous parts . That really really encourages me a lot and I hope to get your support like this only .So without further ado let’s start….
Annika is standing on the terrace , crying . Saahil comes running towards her.
Saahil : “Annika Didi what happened ? Did that lady again trouble you or shout on you ? Today I will tech her a very good lesson . She will remember that her whole life and will think 100 times without troubling you again……She……”
Annika cut him in between and said, wiping her tears “No Saahil . You will do nothing of the sort . See I am not crying , I am fine …..completely fine ….” She was trying hard to stop the tears from coming out . Saahil was vexed at his mother’s behavior . How can she do so bad with such an innocent girl, so pure at heart ,his Annika Didi.
Although he never went against his Annika Didi but today , his mother crossed all the limits . She called her an orphan in front of a whole lot of a people . She humiliated her only because the poor soul was unable to reach home at time to fix the TV and she missed her favourite serial . She never missed a chance to humiliate her . But now Saahil had enough . He could not see tears in his sister’s eyes . Ignoring whatever Annika had said, he stormed towards the stairs . And then there was a crashing sound Thuddd….

Annika woke up with a shout,”Saahil……..”.She rubbed her face in disbelief . It took her some time to understand that it was just a nightmare . A nightmare that has been haunting her from the last one and a half month. She was sweating heavily. She took a glass of water which was kept on a table , by the side of her bed . She gulped the water, still breathing heavily . It was 4 in the morning , that’s what her alarm clock displayed .She took in a deep breath, as if calming herself , and went straight to the bathroom. The day had just begun and it was going to be a tough one for her.

First , she completed her daily chores and then started preparing snacks for the kitty- party that was going to be held . She made tasty delecacies with whatever that was available in the kitchen . She covered the snacks and took off her apron. It was 8a.m. by then . She readied Saahil for his school . Although in this condition, he should not go out much but on his insistence , the doctor allowed him to go school . After sending Saahil to school , Annika left from home at her usual time so as to not arouse any doubt in Jaya’s mind.
Outside the house Annika remembers something and worries .

Flashback (of previous day): Annika is talking to Saahil’s doctor .
Annika : “Doctor , is Saahil’s condition improving ?”
Doctor : “Annika beta I’m sorry to say but it seems that to make Saahil being able to walk again , we have to go for the operation which I mentioned earlier . Since the day Saahil had fallen from those stairs , we are doing regular Physio sessions and that has been helping a bit but it won’t help Saahil to get up on his feet . If you don’t go for the operation in the next 2-3 months , the chances of Saahil walking without any support will be as bad as none.”
Annika(worried) :”but doctor that operation is really costly and I don’t have that much money now . Even if I take a loan, it’s processing may take more than 3 months and that will be late . Is there no other way?”
Doctor : “No beta, this operation is the only hope we have for Saahil.”
Saying this the doctor leaves from there.

After some time , Annika goes to her boss to ask for some financial help.
Annika : “ Sir, I want a six months’ salary in advance due to some family problem . I promise sir I’ll pay it all back .”
Boss(now ex-boss) : “ Annika , you’re one of my best employees . You are smart and beautiful too . I’ll give you the money but you have to a favor on me.”
Annika : “ What favor sir?”
Boss :” If you’ll spend a night with me , I’ll give you whatever you need….anything….mon…”
And he received the imprint of Annika’s new Chameli on his cheeks before he could finish speaking from his filthy mouth .
Annika : “ You cheapde , How dare you say that ? I thought you were a nice man but now I came to know your 2rs aukaat . Learn to respect a woman . If a girl asks for money , that dosen’t mean that you are free to do whatever you want . And always remember that all girls are not after riches. I am resigning from this job right now. ”
Saying this , An angry Annika leaves from her office and reaches the Juhu beach on her Champa . She breaks downs thinking about her problems , no job , not even a proper family except her brother , that brother who loved her more than his mother, much much more . But what kind of a sister she was , because of her ,he was suffering so much, once completely fit and fine , now he needed crutches to walk . She blamed herself for everything . How unfortunate she was . So, she decided to end this turmoil all at once . She chose the easy way, a cowardly way . She started walking towards the sea and soon was under water due to the huge sea wave when two strong hands pulled her out of the ice-cold water .
———–Flashback ends————

Annika thinks , “ That stranger saved me yesterday and I didn’t even thank him properly . Instead I was fighting with him . Annika you are really crazy . Now first I should go and get my Champa . I’m so intelligent that I had kept a duplicate key .Uske baad ye jo saara raita phaila hai use bhi to sametna hai.(After that I have to clean up this mess). I have to get a new job today only. Come on Annika you have no time to waste .”
She took a cab and left for juhu beach . Here at Oberoi Mansion, Shivaay was busy talking to someone on his phone.
Shivaay : “Yes Khanna send all her details on my phone. Okay. Do it fast.”
Shivaay was moving to and fro like a pendulum, which showed his restlessness. PINGG….Shivaay received the details messaged by Khannaji. He read each and every line very carefully . By its end, Shivaay had made up his mind that by hook or by crook, he will help Annika at any cost . But he couldn’t think of any concrete reason as why he wanted to help Annika . He made himself believe that he was just helping a woman in need as he had done earlier too . But deep within , he knew it was not the only reason . He never knew that his next step regarding this matter would change his world completely.

Precap : Shivaay offers Annika the job as an event organizer for OM for the Pooja that was going to be held in the evening .
I am so sorry for giving Shivaay a little part in this update but I am sure that now your confusions regarding Annika’s suicide attempt would have cleared . If still there is some confusion regarding the characters or the story , feel free to ask.
Please do comment if you can.

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  1. It is amazing superb yarr.post nextt part.

    1. Tanz

      Thank you so much Arpita . I’ll try tu update soon.

    1. Tanz

      Thanks a lot Setu

  2. Super nice

    1. Tanz

      Thank you so much Satyam

  3. Tanz…, It’s was an awesome and emotional episode. I feel bad for anika,the reason behind her decision of commit suicide make me crying. she is pure hearted who will love his /her step-sibiligs truly .her decision of commit suicide is failed by shivay. shivay become her Savior. on the other hand he try to help her ,he don’t about the reason for helping her. He think he help her like other women’s who he helped they need his help. Anika don’t know the fact that shivay will become her life Savior in future. And shivay don’t know the fact that destiny will make them together. I’m very excited to know further story. update soon……….

    1. Tanz

      Thank you so much Ahsana for such a lovely comment . It sure was an emotional part and yeah slowly and gradually I’m moving forward to Shivika love story . So glad you like it . I’ll try to update soon.

  4. Gayathri.visu

    Finally u revealed Anika’s life. Wow! AniHil bonding fantastic… Its just excellent!!! Waiting for next part Tanz.

    1. Tanz

      Thanks a lot Gayathri . I’ll try to update soon.

  5. Simrat_14

    Love it ?

    1. Tanz

      Thanks a lot Simrat

  6. Pooja26

    woah !!!!! loved it !!!!!!!
    post asap……

    1. Tanz

      thanks you so much Pooja . I’ll try to update soon.

  7. Awesome chapter…loved it a lot!!

    1. Tanz

      Thanks a lot Bhavana

  8. Akshaya

    Awesome and awesome. Please post the next asap

    1. Tanz

      Thank you and Thank you Akshaya….I’ll try to update soon.

  9. Fantastic….

    1. Tanz

      Thanks a lot zaveesha

  10. Neha_Pheonix

    Great Tanz….I read all your partz…amazing….. well all English teachers..give few marks..I used to manage respectable marks haha….and thank god I discovered this ff…Tanz..I remember you..you were a adorable supporter….love ya ..and if possible send me the links…??

    1. Tanz

      Thanks a lot Neha-17. I’m so glad that you liked my ff . And I still am an adorable supporter , i’m waiting for chapter-6……I’ll send you the link of the next part .
      Love you too..?

      1. Neha_Pheonix

        Thanks a lott…you made my day! 😀

  11. Diyaa

    Very interesting update Tanz. And you weaved very smoothly between present, flashback, and back to present. No confusions at all about characters or story. Keep it up ☺

    1. Tanz

      Oh thank you so much Diyaa . ?

  12. Amazing epi…..

    1. Tanz

      Thanks a lot Lilly.

  13. Vincy


    1. Tanz

      Thank you so much Vincy

  14. Lisaaa


    1. Tanz

      Thanks Lisaaa

  15. Awesome….
    Felt really sorry for Anika…
    Anihil bond is amazing…
    Shivaay is becoming her saviour…..
    waiting fr d nxt…. 🙂

    1. Tanz

      Thanks a lot Shivika . I’ll try to update soon.

  16. It is awesome dear…

    1. Tanz

      Thanks a lot nikitajai

  17. Awesome update dear ?. Eagerly waiting for the next episode ?. Post asap! ?

    1. Tanz

      Thank you so much Sofiya . I’ll try to update soon.?

  18. Awesome epi..waiting for next

    1. Tanz

      Thanks Niriha . I’ll try to update soon.

  19. Nice dr and next part soon.

    1. Tanz

      Thanks a lot Arthi . I’ll try to update soon

  20. beauiful creation
    u wove story nicely among flashback and present
    Anika’s sadness gave a feeling of despair
    the sibling bond is really amazing

    1. Tanz

      Thanks a lot Aashi . I’m glad that you’re liking the story and it’s characters .?

  21. beauiful creation
    u wove story nicely between flashback and present
    Anika’s sadness gave a feeling of despair
    the sibling bond is really amazing

  22. Sanskriti120

    Your update made me speechless yaar. All I could say is I’m eagerly waiting for next update. You have stole my words yaar. I’m unable to express it please help.me in finding some words??????

    1. Tanz

      Thank you so much Sanskriti . I’ll try to update soon . I don’t have a vocabulary good enough to help you, because you already have a better vocabulary than me.???

  23. Awesome superb just loved it so much

    1. Tanz

      Thanks a lot Ardana . i’ll try to update soon.

  24. Please update the next one asap please please please

  25. Alekhika20


    1. Tanz

      thanks a lot Alekhika

  26. OMG Tanz. …
    Sorry, couldn’t comment on the previous episode…
    But lemme say….U made me speechless!
    How do u write like this?
    The different shades u have given to the characters r awesome !
    Pls update ASAP!
    I am luvin’ it!????

    1. Tanz

      thanks a lot Vivikhta . it’s ok, I’m glad that you read it . I don’t know how I write like this, i just write what comes in my head . Even I’m surprised to discover this writer side of me and more that this that people are liking it.Well, I did some research…..just kidding i read in comment section of Sanskriti’s ff and I came to know you are younger than me, almost 3 years…So,now that i’m sure that i’m older than you, you can call me Di if you wish….but it’s better this way ….anyway it’s totally upto you what you wanna call me.
      I’ll try to post the next part by tomorrow.

  27. Superbb……!!! Tanz…. Luv Anihil bonding….. & sry 4 late commenting dear……

    1. Tanz

      Thanks a lot Banita and it’s okay don’t worry. 🙂

  28. Superb update…

    1. Tanz

      thanks a lot Ankita

  29. Jerry_36

    Tanz, really sorry for late comment. Its superb. I have no confusion☺ Excited for next one.

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