Meri Zindhagi (AvNeil – Naamkaran Fan Fiction) (Episode 15)

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Hi friends.I hope you all liked the 14th Episode . And yeah I can’t be regular so after the episode I’ll tell when will I update the next episode . I can only give short updates but I’ll try to give big episodes . if there’s any grammatical errors I’m sorry .Please bear with me as this is my first Fan Fiction . And I might be adding some AvNeil scenes from the serial but it will be a bit different. Hope you all will like it.

And I’ll mainly focus on AvNeil

This one is a very short update . Sorry for that .

If you have missed the 14th episode here’s the link

Episode 14

Enjoy the episode


Scene 1:
Khanna mansion – kitchen , shweta’s room

In the morning

Neil is in the kitchen

He takes flour and starts kneading the Dough . But he’s not able to do .

Neil : I can’t just do this ! How on Earth mom does this everyday ! I don’t even know whether we should put water in flour or flour in water .

Neil Sees his hand

Neil : Damn ! Idiot ! Stupid Neil . You can handle a gun , solve a difficult case but you can not knead the dough and cook a paratha ? Damn .

Neil pours some more water in the Flour.

Neeraj comes there and sees Neil kneading dough.

Neeraj : (laughs seeing Neil) Neil bhai !

Neil : (stares at Neil) What ?

Neeraj : Bhai What happened to you and what are you doing ?

Neil : What do you mean by “what are you doing?” I’m preparing breakfast for mom .

Neeraj : breakfast ?

Neil : yes . Usually she prepares for us but now let’s prepare .

Neeraj : oh that’s great . I’ll help you too

Neil : now come and help me .

Neeraj : Ok fine

Neeraj helps Neil but they’re not able to do anything . They create a mess in the kitchen .

Neeraj : bhai you know to cook right then why are you creating a mess !

Neil : (rolls his eyes) I only know to cook maggi and sandwich . I don’t know to make paratha !

Neeraj : Then why are you cooking this paratha !

Neil : I thought mom likes paratha .

Neeraj : Oh … Is paratha mom’s favourite food ?

Neil : ugh….

Neeraj : I know that you don’t know what’s mom’s favourite food .

Neil : Actually … I don’t know . What about you ? Do you know what’s mom’s favourite food ?

Neeraj : bhai … actually even I don’t know .

Neil and Neeraj feel bad .

Neil : What kind of sons we are ? We don’t even know what mom likes and what she doesn’t like .

Neeraj : And we didn’t even try to get to know about what mom likes .

Neil : I feel so bad for leaving her alone all time . I only concentrated on work . I never spent time with her . Now I realise I was wrong .

Neeraj : me too bhai . We don’t even spend time with her . We made a big mistake .

Neil : Neeraj from now on we should spend most of our time with our mother and get to know about her likes and dislikes.

Neeraj : (smiles) yeah

Neil : now let’s prepare the breakfast .

Neeraj : bhai instead of this paratha let’s cook something else . Something easy .

Neil : hmm yeah .

Neeraj : Bhai do you remember ? Mom used to make poha during weekends when we were kids and she cooks so well and we love eating poha too .

Neil : yeah I do remember !

Neeraj : So can we make poha ? That’s easy to make

Neil : Yes ! I even know to make poha .

Neeraj : So let’s get started

Neil : yeah but before that I’ll wash my hands and come .

Neeraj : Ok

Neil goes and washes his hands .

Neil and Neeraj start making poha . They take the necessary ingredients and make poha . They see the recipe and cook poha .

In shweta’s room

Shweta is seen sleeping in her room . She wakes up and sees the alarm clock . The time is 8am .

Shweta : What ! 8am? It’s too late . Now I need to get ready and prepare breakfast .

Shweta gets up from the goes inside washroom to refresh .

Shweta comes out and gets ready .

Shweta : now it’s already late . I don’t know what Neil and Neeraj are doing . I guess they went for work .

Shweta leaves from her room

In kitchen

Neeraj and Neil finally cooks the poha

Neil : finally we did it

Neeraj : Hmm . It smells so good . Let me taste it

Neeraj is about to taste the poha but neil stops him

Neeraj : bhai why are you stopping me ?

Neil : let mom taste this poha first .

Neeraj : yeah you’re right . Now let’s arrange the plates in the table .

Neil : yes

Neeraj and Neil arrange the plates in the table

Shweta comes and sees neil and Neeraj arranging the plates in the table

Shweta : (surprised) What’s happening here ?

Neil & Neeraj : Hi Mom . Good morning .

She sees the kitchen and gets shocked as it is messed completely .

Shweta : (shocked) Oh god ! Neil , Neeraj , What did you both do in the kitchen ! Can anyone tell me what’s going on in this house !

Neeraj and Neil smile seeing each other

Shweta : can anyone tell me ! Why did you both mess the kitchen ? Now how will I prepare breakfast ?

Neil : Mom , no need to prepare breakfast

Shweta : (confused) huh ? What do you mean ?

Neeraj : mom we prepared the breakfast . I and Neil Bhai made poha for you .

Shweta gets surprised

Shweta : What ? Seriously ? You both made poha for me ?

Neeraj & Neil : (smiles) Yes Mom !

Shweta : (rolls her eyes) why are you doing this ? I would have prepared for ….

Neil : (cuts Shweta in between) Mom you’re asking too many questions .

Shweta : but …

Neeraj and Neil make Shweta

Shweta : Ok I’ll sit .

Shweta sits on the chair .

Neil takes a plate and keeps it on the table in front of Shweta and he serves poha on her plate

Neeraj : now taste the poha and tell whether it’s good or bad

Shweta : (smiles) Ok fine

Shweta tastes the poha . She keeps silent after tasing the poha

Neil : ma how’s it

Shweta : (keeps silent )

Neeraj : ma please tell whether it’s nice or not .

Shweta : Hmm …. I didn’t like it .

Neil and Neeraj get sad .

Shweta : (laughs) Hey I was joking loved it ! It’s very tasty.

Neil & Neeraj : (shocked) WHAT !

Shweta : (smiles) yes . It was amazing . It tastes so good . Well done my boys .

Neil and Neeraj smiles

Neeraj : Mom seriously ? It’s good right ?

Shweta : Yes !

Neeraj : really ?

Shweta : yes !

Neeraj : Seriously ?

Shweta : (rolls her eyes and takes a spoon of poha from the plate and feeds Neeraj ) now eat

Neeraj tastes the poha and smiles

Neeraj : (eats the poha and smiles) hmm yeah ! It’s good

Neil : (smiles) really ? Let me taste it (tastes the poha) not bad . Salt is less but it’s good .

Neeraj : Yeah ! I cooked it so well you know . Credit goes to me

Neil : oh hello Neeraj credit goes to me too because I was the one who planned to make breakfast for mom

Neeraj : but I was the one who gave this poha idea

Shweta : oh god ! Can you both stop it ? And now tell me why you both suddenly prepare breakfast for me ?

Neeraj & Neil : (see each other)

Shweta : tell ?

Neeraj & Neil : Mom , We are extremely Sorry

Shweta : (confused) huh ? Sorry ? For what ?

Neil : sorry for leaving you alone when you needed us the most .

Neeraj : we feel so bad for leaving you alone .

Shweta : alone ? But why are you both ….

Neil : (cuts Shweta in between ) No mom it’s our fault. We ignored you all time when you needed us the most

Shweta : (nods no) but …

Neeraj : (cuts Shweta in between ) Mom we don’t even spend time with you . Because of that we know nothing about your likes and dislikes . We hurt you a lot .

Shweta : nothing like that beta ….

Neil and Neeraj : (holds their years) Sorry Mom

Shweta gets surprised

Neil : From now on we’ll spend most of the time with you .

Neeraj : and that’s a promise .

Shweta smiles

Neil : Mom we realised our mistake now . Will you forgive us ?

Shweta : Arey What happened to you both ? And why would I be angry on you both ?

Neeraj : that’s because we thought you’ll feel ok if we leave you alone for sometime . But that’s the time you needed us the most and we left you alone .

Shweta : (rolls her eyes) (smiles) no beta . There’s nothing wrong in what you did. If you both are with me I’ll always feel happy .

Neil and Neeraj smile .

Neeraj : and yeah . I wanted to ask you something mom .

Shweta : ask ?

Neeraj : when did you start watching cricket ?

Neil : yes mom even I wanted to ask you . You like cricket ?

Shweta : (smiles) like ? I love cricket !

Neeraj : really ?

Shweta : I was the captain of my college cricket team .

Neil & Neeraj : WHAT !

Neeraj : Mom ? Cricket team captain ? Unbelievable !

Shweta : (smiles) I know . Wait I’ll show a pic .

Shweta goes to her room and brings a picture where she’s wearing a jersey and holding trophy in her hand .

Shweta : our cricket team won when we were in college and I was the captain at that time

Neil : (surprised ) that’s amazing mom . You’re very talented .

Shweta : (smiles) hmm … and now I guess you both are getting late for your work . You both need to start.

Neil : oh yeah ! Thanks for reminding mom . Today I have to investigate about an important case . I need to start now . I’ll come soon in the evening .

Shweta : (smiles) ok bye .

Neil changes his outfit and leaves the house .

Scene 2:
Sukoon house

Next morning .

Avni is in kitchen . She’s searching something and she’s talking to Asha in phone

Asha : (in call) Avni , yesterday morning you came home and left soon . After that you didn’t even come home even for dinner . are you going to come home or not ?

Avni : ma see yesterday it was samrat’s birthday and we all went to stadium to watch IPL match .

Asha : okay . But I want you to come home by afternoon .

Avni : ok bye mom .

Asha : Bye .

Avni cuts the call .

Avni : Oh My god . There’s no milk .

Samrat comes inside the kitchen

Samrat : what happened Jaan Didi ?

Saisha and other kids too come there

Avni : milk is over .

Samrat : that’s it ? I’ll go and get it from the market .

Avni : Will you ?

Samrat : of course . And yeah now I have my own bike . I can go by bike and get milk from the market .

Avni : (smiles) ok but come soon .

Samrat : ok Jaan Didi .

Samrat goes to the garden . He’s surprised to See that his bike is not there .

Samrat : where’s the bike ?

He searches in the nearby places

Samrat : it’s not there ….I’ll go and ask Jaan Didi .

Samrat goes inside Sukoon ghar again

Avni sees samrat

Avni : (sees samrat) what ? You came so soon ? And where’s the milk ?

Samrat : Didi where’s my bike ?

Avni : (confused) huh ? Bike ? It’s in garden ?

Samrat : no didi it’s not there .

Avni : What ! What do you mean by it’s not there ?

Saisha comes there

Saisha : What happened ? And what’s not there ?

Avni : Samrat is saying that his bike is not there in garden .

Saisha : Huh ? Then where’s the bike ? It was in the garden right ?

Samrat : saisha you said you wanted to drive the bike right ? Did you take it somewhere ?

Saisha : Huh ? Why would I take it ? And at last even I saw that in the garden .

Avni : let’s go and check

Avni , saisha , samrat go out and search for the bike but they’re not able to find it .

Avni : i searched . But I couldn’t find it

Samrat : oh god then where’s my bike !

Saisha : Seems like someone stole it .

Avni , samrat get shocked

Avni : WHAT !

Saisha : seems like that Jaan Didi . Some one stole samrat’s bike .

Samrat feels bad

Samrat : I lost my birthday gift .

Avni : don’t worry samrat we’ll find it .

Samrat is sad and goes inside the Sukoon house .

Saisha : Jaan Didi . Samrat is feeling very bad . Now what can we do ?

Avni : We need to find his bike saisha .

Saisha : But how !

Avni thinks of Neil .

Avni : Now we can only do one thing .

Saisha : What’s That ?

Avni : We need to go to police station and file a complaint regarding this .

Saisha : yeah Jaan Didi . You’re right . now let’s go . I’ll ask samrat to come .

Avni : Hmm Ok .

Saisha goes in .

Avni : (thinks) now I need to take ACP Neil’s help to find samrat’s bike . He’s the one who can help me now

Suddenly Avni hears saisha’s voice . Shes’s asking Avni to come inside .

Avni goes inside the Sukoon house .

Samrat is sitting in the hall . He’s very sad . Everyone are trying to console him

Mowgli : Samrat bhaiya don’t be sad . Jaan Didi will definitely find your bike .

Samrat : but I lost my birthday present which you all gave me …

Avni : (cuts in between ) Samrat . Don’t worry . We’ll definitely find your bike . Now come on . Let’s go to police station and file a complaint .

Samrat : no didi . I want to be alone for sometime .

Saisha : but ….

Samrat gets up and goes out

Saisha : Jaan Didi he’s not coming .

Avni : it’s ok . I’ll go to police station .

Saisha : I’ll come with you .

Avni : no saisha . Samrat is sad and Tara is also not here . Kids will be alone . You be here and take care of them . I’ll come soon

Saisha : Ok Jaan Didi .

Avni leaves the Sukoon house .

Scene 3:
Police station

Avni is standing outside the police station .

Avni : (to herself) now again I have to meet that crack ACP Neil again . But what to do he’s the one who can help me now .

Inside the police station

DD , Jaspreet , kamal , nishant and suketu and other officers are working on a case

DD : we got many complaints . too many bikes are missing . That too very expensive bikes

Jaspreet : yes DD . Even today morning a person came and gave complaint that his bike also missing .

Suketu : We need to report this to neil sir when he comes we need to report that to him .

Nishant : I feel like that K.K’s gang is responsible for this .

Avni enters the police Station . DD sees avni

DD : Hey Miss Avni . You here ?

Avni : Hey Officer Darshan . Yeah . And I need your help .

DD : say .

Avni : I need to file a complaint . Our bike is missing

Jaspreet : bike again ?

DD : too many bikes are missing these days . Can you tell me when did you see your bike at last ?

Avni : actually we booked Royal Enfield bike to present to samrat , a kid in Sukoon ghar for his birthday . At last we saw it in Sukoon ghar garden at night . But we couldn’t find that in the morning .

DD : Did you check in nearby places ?

Avni : Yes we did but we couldn’t find the bike .

DD : this problem is increasing day by day . We need to inform Neil sir soon .

Avni : Please help me Officer Darshan .

DD : our team will definitely help you . Don’t worry . You please sit there .

Avni : Ok .

Avni sits on the bench .

Jaspreet and suketu see Avni

Jaspreet : (to suketu) hey do you remember this girl ?

Suketu : (to jaspreet) of course I do . That mall ice cream incident right ?

Jaspreet and suketu start laughing

DD comes there

DD : What happened ?

Suketu : DD she’s same girl who spread ice cream on Neil sir’s face right .

Other officers gets surprised after coming to know .

Officer 1 : What ! That madam who came now spread ice cream on Neil sir’s face !

Officer 2 : that’s unbelievable ! Is that true ?

DD : yeah ! I wish I could see Neil sir’s “Ice cream spread face” again

They all laugh

Neil enters the police station and see everyone laughing .

Neil : What’s happening here ?

Everyone see Neil and stop laughing

Neil : (confused) What ?

All officers see Neil and they’re trying to control their laughter .

Neil is confused

Jaspreet : sir that girl who spread ice cream on your face is here .

Neil : huh ? Excuse me ?

DD : sir miss. Avni is here to file a complaint

DD points towards Avni sitting on the chair .

Neil : (surprised) That girl ! Here ? (Sees Avni sitting on the chair) oh yeah she’s here… (to jaspreet ) and yeah stop laughing and stop telling about that ice cream incident to everyone .

Jaspreet : ugh ok sir.

Neil (To officers) and yeah everyone . now stop laughing and focus on work .

All officers : yes sir !

Neil : (to DD) and DD ask that girl to come to my desk now .

DD : Ok sir

Neil goes inside .

Other police officers start working .

DD goes near Avni

DD : Miss Avni

Avni : yes ?

DD : Neil sir is here . And he’s asking you to come in .

Avni : Umm fine.

Avni goes inside sees Neil . Neil stands and goes near Avni .

Neil : I’m surprised ! What made you come here ?

Avni : You know what Mr.Crack Khanna ….

Neil : (cuts Avni in between) Neil …. ACP Neil Khanna . And yeah this is police station and you can’t talk to me like this here .

Avni : (rolls her eyes) whatever but I just want to tell you that a bike which I purchased to gift someone is missing .

Neil : (shocked) WHAT ! A bike missing again ? Now I realise what made you come here . You want me to find it right ?

Avni : yes . Find it and hand it over to me as soon as possible .

Neil : Oh hello . I’m not your servant . Say politely .

Avni : (rolls her eyes) fine ! Officer Neil Please help me .

Neil : hmm … that’s good . Now tell all the details about the bike . About it’s colour and all and DD you take down everything .

DD : Ok sir .

DD starts noting everything .

Avni : okay . Royal Enfield bike classic 500 and the colour is stealth black .

DD : (notes everything) okay

Neil : what’s the registered number ?

Avni : number ?

Neil : (rolls his eyes) Do you know that every vehicle has a number ?

Avni : yes I know !

Neil : I’m asking about that ! Now tell !

Avni : actually it was delivered 2 days ago and we didn’t get the number for the vehicle yet

Neil and DD get shocked

Neil : what are you saying ! Then how can we find the vehicle ?

Avni gets tensed .

Episode ends

Precap : Neil says to Avni that Aman is the one who stole the bike . Avni gets angry on neil . Neil ask Avni to think and tell whether there’s something different in that bike or is there any mark with which they can find the bike .

I’m extremely sorry for updating late . That too a week late . Now I’m in 12th grade and I have too many work . I promise you all I’ll try to post the next episode soon . If the episode is bad and boring I’m sorry for that . I hope you all liked this episode and yeah silent readers do read , like and comment if you like the episode .

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  1. I loved today’s episode way too good.shwetha git happiness from her sons today.i also liked what neil nd neeraj did for shwetha aunty that was cute nd adorable of them.they tried very hard to make something for their mom nd also tried to know their mom.that is the best gift that a mom can get when children’s spent time with their parents.nd neil colleagues are too funny making fun of neil behind back nd in front of neil good episode.good job ayesha

  2. Priyu

    Loved Avneil scenes ?? how will they find the bike now… Waiting for the next part. Neil doesn’t know how to make parathas ? Funny. His dialogues are awesome. Bros love for mom is great!! Good luck.

  3. All Scnes were awesome but how wl they find the bike

  4. Gopika.S

    wow.. its fabulous dear… read all episodes in a go…
    avneil scenes was superb… loved it…
    eagerly waiting for the next…..
    love u loads dear… take care

  5. Loved mother son talks. Aman us behind the bike stealing. When avni will get to know… Waiting for her reaction.
    Thanks for the episode ayesha.
    Not boring at all.
    Update soon..

  6. Avanieil scene was so nice and scene one was too good vry nice episode

  7. Nice and can u tell me how to write stories and ff here !.?

  8. Sana.c

    I am eagerly waiting for nxt epsidoe nice

  9. Nila_27

    Lovely update??
    Loved the first part…Brothers making food for their mom…Awesome
    Mom and sons talk was nice
    AvNeil part was Superb…

  10. I was waiting for ur update for a long time plz update soon and the episode was awsum

  11. i ws a silent rder but i luv ur ff a lot plz write os on avneil plz plz its a reqst

  12. I read your episodes from first and its awesome plz dont say boeing its nice

  13. Pavithra1616

    Superb dear! Update soon! Avneil scene were really good.. Loved it??

  14. Crystal26899

    Keep it up girl❤ great going?

  15. Deeyaana

    Ice cream….. Neil has become a joker in police station …. Credit to Avni… Sorry for late comment.

    1. Ayesha_malhotra

      It’s ok deepshu . Thanks ?

  16. Lovely episode

  17. Hey ayesha…. It’s really nice dear… I’m visiting this site only for this story…. U r doing a gd job… Update when u r free do ping me whenever u update…nd u know where to text!!

  18. It’s nice and waiting for next episode.. do write regularly..and auron ki tarah beech me math chodna..kahani complete karna…All the best..?

    1. Ayesha_malhotra

      I’ll definitely try to be regular and complete this story . Thanks

  19. Avneil_adiza_fan

    a really amazing fan fiction and loved this episode especially avneil’s scene…update soon
    and yeah thanks for recommending your ff to me 🙂

  20. Lovely episode. Neil making food is awesome.

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