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Hi friends.I hope you all liked the 14th Episode . And yeah I can’t be regular so after the episode I’ll tell when will I update the next episode . I can only give short updates but I’ll try to give big episodes . if there’s any grammatical errors I’m sorry .Please bear with me as this is my first Fan Fiction . And I might be adding some AvNeil scenes from the serial but it will be a bit different. Hope you all will like it.
And I’ll mainly focus on AvNeil
This one is a very short update . Sorry for that .
If you have missed the 14th episode here’s the link
Enjoy the episode
Khanna mansion – kitchen , shweta’s room
In the morning
Neil is in the kitchen
He takes flour and starts kneading the Dough . But he’s not able to do .
Neil : I can’t just do this ! How on Earth mom does this everyday ! I don’t even know whether we should put water in flour or flour in water .
Neil Sees his hand
Neil : Damn ! Idiot ! Stupid Neil . You can handle a gun , solve a difficult case but you can not knead the dough and cook a paratha ? Damn .
Neil pours some more water in the Flour.
Neeraj comes there and sees Neil kneading dough.
Neeraj : (laughs seeing Neil) Neil bhai !
Neil : (stares at Neil) What ?
Neeraj : Bhai What happened to you and what are you doing ?
Neil : What do you mean by “what are you doing?” I’m preparing breakfast for mom .
Neeraj : breakfast ?
Neil : yes . Usually she prepares for us but now let’s prepare .
Neeraj : oh that’s great . I’ll help you too
Neil : now come and help me .
Neeraj : Ok fine
Neeraj helps Neil but they’re not able to do anything . They create a mess in the kitchen .
Neeraj : bhai you know to cook right then why are you creating a mess !
Neil : (rolls his eyes) I only know to cook maggi and sandwich . I don’t know to make paratha !
Neeraj : Then why are you cooking this paratha !
Neil : I thought mom likes paratha .
Neeraj : Oh … Is paratha mom’s favourite food ?
Neil : ugh….
Neeraj : I know that you don’t know what’s mom’s favourite food .
Neil : Actually … I don’t know . What about you ? Do you know what’s mom’s favourite food ?
Neeraj : bhai … actually even I don’t know .
Neil and Neeraj feel bad .
Neil : What kind of sons we are ? We don’t even know what mom likes and what she doesn’t like .
Neeraj : And we didn’t even try to get to know about what mom likes .
Neil : I feel so bad for leaving her alone all time . I only concentrated on work . I never spent time with her . Now I realise I was wrong .
Neeraj : me too bhai . We don’t even spend time with her . We made a big mistake .
Neil : Neeraj from now on we should spend most of our time with our mother and get to know about her likes and dislikes.
Neeraj : (smiles) yeah
Neil : now let’s prepare the breakfast .
Neeraj : bhai instead of this paratha let’s cook something else . Something easy .
Neil : hmm yeah .
Neeraj : Bhai do you remember ? Mom used to make poha during weekends when we were kids and she cooks so well and we love eating poha too .
Neil : yeah I do remember !
Neeraj : So can we make poha ? That’s easy to make
Neil : Yes ! I even know to make poha .
Neeraj : So let’s get started
Neil : yeah but before that I’ll wash my hands and come .
Neeraj : Ok
Neil goes and washes his hands .
Neil and Neeraj start making poha . They take the necessary ingredients and make poha . They see the recipe and cook poha .
In shweta’s room
Shweta is seen sleeping in her room . She wakes up and sees the alarm clock . The time is 8am .
Shweta : What ! 8am? It’s too late . Now I need to get ready and prepare breakfast .
Shweta gets up from the goes inside washroom to refresh .
Shweta comes out and gets ready .
Shweta : now it’s already late . I don’t know what Neil and Neeraj are doing . I guess they went for work .
Shweta leaves from her room
Neeraj and Neil finally cooks the poha
Neil : finally we did it
Neeraj : Hmm . It smells so good . Let me taste it
Neeraj is about to taste the poha but neil stops him
Neeraj : bhai why are you stopping me ?
Neil : let mom taste this poha first .
Neeraj : yeah you’re right . Now let’s arrange the plates in the table .
Neil : yes
Neeraj and Neil arrange the plates in the table
Shweta comes and sees neil and Neeraj arranging the plates in the table
Shweta : (surprised) What’s happening here ?
Neil & Neeraj : Hi Mom . Good morning .
She sees the kitchen and gets shocked as it is messed completely .
Shweta : (shocked) Oh god ! Neil , Neeraj , What did you both do in the kitchen ! Can anyone tell me what’s going on in this house !
Neeraj and Neil smile seeing each other
Shweta : can anyone tell me ! Why did you both mess the kitchen ? Now how will I prepare breakfast ?
Neil : Mom , no need to prepare breakfast
Shweta : (confused) huh ? What do you mean ?
Neeraj : mom we prepared the breakfast . I and Neil Bhai made poha for you .
Shweta gets surprised
Shweta : What ? Seriously ? You both made poha for me ?
Neeraj & Neil : (smiles) Yes Mom !
Shweta : (rolls her eyes) why are you doing this ? I would have prepared for ….
Neil : (cuts Shweta in between) Mom you’re asking too many questions .
Shweta : but …
Neeraj and Neil make Shweta
Shweta : Ok I’ll sit .
Shweta sits on the chair .
Neil takes a plate and keeps it on the table in front of Shweta and he serves poha on her plate
Neeraj : now taste the poha and tell whether it’s good or bad
Shweta : (smiles) Ok fine
Shweta tastes the poha . She keeps silent after tasing the poha
Neil : ma how’s it
Shweta : (keeps silent )
Neeraj : ma please tell whether it’s nice or not .
Shweta : Hmm …. I didn’t like it .
Neil and Neeraj get sad .
Shweta : (laughs) Hey I was joking loved it ! It’s very tasty.
Neil & Neeraj : (shocked) WHAT !
Shweta : (smiles) yes . It was amazing . It tastes so good . Well done my boys .
Neil and Neeraj smiles
Neeraj : Mom seriously ? It’s good right ?
Shweta : Yes !
Neeraj : really ?
Shweta : yes !
Neeraj : Seriously ?
Shweta : (rolls her eyes and takes a spoon of poha from the plate and feeds Neeraj ) now eat
Neeraj tastes the poha and smiles
Neeraj : (eats the poha and smiles) hmm yeah ! It’s good
Neil : (smiles) really ? Let me taste it (tastes the poha) not bad . Salt is less but it’s good .
Neeraj : Yeah ! I cooked it so well you know . Credit goes to me
Neil : oh hello Neeraj credit goes to me too because I was the one who planned to make breakfast for mom
Neeraj : but I was the one who gave this poha idea
Shweta : oh god ! Can you both stop it ? And now tell me why you both suddenly prepare breakfast for me ?
Neeraj & Neil : (see each other)
Shweta : tell ?
Neeraj & Neil : Mom , We are extremely Sorry
Shweta : (confused) huh ? Sorry ? For what ?
Neil : sorry for leaving you alone when you needed us the most .
Neeraj : we feel so bad for leaving you alone .
Shweta : alone ? But why are you both ….
Neil : (cuts Shweta in between ) No mom it’s our fault. We ignored you all time when you needed us the most
Shweta : (nods no) but …
Neeraj : (cuts Shweta in between ) Mom we don’t even spend time with you . Because of that we know nothing about your likes and dislikes . We hurt you a lot .
Shweta : nothing like that beta ….
Neil and Neeraj : (holds their years) Sorry Mom
Shweta gets surprised
Neil : From now on we’ll spend most of the time with you .
Neeraj : and that’s a promise .
Neil : Mom we realised our mistake now . Will you forgive us ?
Shweta : Arey What happened to you both ? And why would I be angry on you both ?
Neeraj : that’s because we thought you’ll feel ok if we leave you alone for sometime . But that’s the time you needed us the most and we left you alone .
Shweta : (rolls her eyes) (smiles) no beta . There’s nothing wrong in what you did. If you both are with me I’ll always feel happy .
Neil and Neeraj smile .
Neeraj : and yeah . I wanted to ask you something mom .
Shweta : ask ?
Neeraj : when did you start watching cricket ?
Neil : yes mom even I wanted to ask you . You like cricket ?
Shweta : (smiles) like ? I love cricket !
Neeraj : really ?
Shweta : I was the captain of my college cricket team .
Neil & Neeraj : WHAT !
Neeraj : Mom ? Cricket team captain ? Unbelievable !
Shweta : (smiles) I know . Wait I’ll show a pic .
Shweta goes to her room and brings a picture where she’s wearing a jersey and holding trophy in her hand .
Shweta : our cricket team won when we were in college and I was the captain at that time
Neil : (surprised ) that’s amazing mom . You’re very talented .
Shweta : (smiles) hmm … and now I guess you both are getting late for your work . You both need to start.
Neil : oh yeah ! Thanks for reminding mom . Today I have to investigate about an important case . I need to start now . I’ll come soon in the evening .
Shweta : (smiles) ok bye .
Neil changes his outfit and leaves the house .
Next morning .
Avni is in kitchen . She’s searching something and she’s talking to Asha in phone
Asha : (in call) Avni , yesterday morning you came home and left soon . After that you didn’t even come home even for dinner . are you going to come home or not ?
Avni : ma see yesterday it was samrat’s birthday and we all went to stadium to watch IPL match .
Asha : okay . But I want you to come home by afternoon .
Avni : ok bye mom .
Asha : Bye .
Avni cuts the call .
Avni : Oh My god . There’s no milk .
Samrat comes inside the kitchen
Samrat : what happened Jaan Didi ?
Saisha and other kids too come there
Avni : milk is over .
Samrat : that’s it ? I’ll go and get it from the market .
Avni : Will you ?
Samrat : of course . And yeah now I have my own bike . I can go by bike and get milk from the market .
Avni : (smiles) ok but come soon .
Samrat : ok Jaan Didi .
Samrat goes to the garden . He’s surprised to See that his bike is not there .
Samrat : where’s the bike ?
He searches in the nearby places
Samrat : it’s not there ….I’ll go and ask Jaan Didi .
Samrat goes inside Sukoon ghar again
Avni sees samrat
Avni : (sees samrat) what ? You came so soon ? And where’s the milk ?
Samrat : Didi where’s my bike ?
Avni : (confused) huh ? Bike ? It’s in garden ?
Samrat : no didi it’s not there .
Avni : What ! What do you mean by it’s not there ?
Saisha comes there
Saisha : What happened ? And what’s not there ?
Avni : Samrat is saying that his bike is not there in garden .
Saisha : Huh ? Then where’s the bike ? It was in the garden right ?
Samrat : saisha you said you wanted to drive the bike right ? Did you take it somewhere ?
Saisha : Huh ? Why would I take it ? And at last even I saw that in the garden .
Avni : let’s go and check
Avni , saisha , samrat go out and search for the bike but they’re not able to find it .
Avni : i searched . But I couldn’t find it
Samrat : oh god then where’s my bike !
Saisha : Seems like someone stole it .
Avni , samrat get shocked
Avni : WHAT !
Saisha : seems like that Jaan Didi . Some one stole samrat’s bike .
Samrat feels bad
Samrat : I lost my birthday gift .
Avni : don’t worry samrat we’ll find it .
Samrat is sad and goes inside the Sukoon house .
Saisha : Jaan Didi . Samrat is feeling very bad . Now what can we do ?
Avni : We need to find his bike saisha .
Saisha : But how !
Avni thinks of Neil .
Avni : Now we can only do one thing .
Saisha : What’s That ?
Avni : We need to go to police station and file a complaint regarding this .
Saisha : yeah Jaan Didi . You’re right . now let’s go . I’ll ask samrat to come .
Avni : Hmm Ok .
Saisha goes in .
Avni : (thinks) now I need to take ACP Neil’s help to find samrat’s bike . He’s the one who can help me now
Suddenly Avni hears saisha’s voice . Shes’s asking Avni to come inside .
Avni goes inside the Sukoon house .
Samrat is sitting in the hall . He’s very sad . Everyone are trying to console him
Mowgli : Samrat bhaiya don’t be sad . Jaan Didi will definitely find your bike .
Samrat : but I lost my birthday present which you all gave me …
Avni : (cuts in between ) Samrat . Don’t worry . We’ll definitely find your bike . Now come on . Let’s go to police station and file a complaint .
Samrat : no didi . I want to be alone for sometime .
Saisha : but ….
Samrat gets up and goes out
Saisha : Jaan Didi he’s not coming .
Avni : it’s ok . I’ll go to police station .
Saisha : I’ll come with you .
Avni : no saisha . Samrat is sad and Tara is also not here . Kids will be alone . You be here and take care of them . I’ll come soon
Saisha : Ok Jaan Didi .
Avni leaves the Sukoon house .
Avni is standing outside the police station .
Avni : (to herself) now again I have to meet that crack ACP Neil again . But what to do he’s the one who can help me now .
Inside the police station
DD , Jaspreet , kamal , nishant and suketu and other officers are working on a case
DD : we got many complaints . too many bikes are missing . That too very expensive bikes
Jaspreet : yes DD . Even today morning a person came and gave complaint that his bike also missing .
Suketu : We need to report this to neil sir when he comes we need to report that to him .
Nishant : I feel like that K.K’s gang is responsible for this .
Avni enters the police Station . DD sees avni
DD : Hey Miss Avni . You here ?
Avni : Hey Officer Darshan . Yeah . And I need your help .
DD : say .
Avni : I need to file a complaint . Our bike is missing
Jaspreet : bike again ?
DD : too many bikes are missing these days . Can you tell me when did you see your bike at last ?
Avni : actually we booked Royal Enfield bike to present to samrat , a kid in Sukoon ghar for his birthday . At last we saw it in Sukoon ghar garden at night . But we couldn’t find that in the morning .
DD : Did you check in nearby places ?
Avni : Yes we did but we couldn’t find the bike .
DD : this problem is increasing day by day . We need to inform Neil sir soon .
Avni : Please help me Officer Darshan .
DD : our team will definitely help you . Don’t worry . You please sit there .
Avni : Ok .
Avni sits on the bench .
Jaspreet and suketu see Avni
Jaspreet : (to suketu) hey do you remember this girl ?
Suketu : (to jaspreet) of course I do . That mall ice cream incident right ?
Jaspreet and suketu start laughing
DD comes there
DD : What happened ?
Suketu : DD she’s same girl who spread ice cream on Neil sir’s face right .
Other officers gets surprised after coming to know .
Officer 1 : What ! That madam who came now spread ice cream on Neil sir’s face !
Officer 2 : that’s unbelievable ! Is that true ?
DD : yeah ! I wish I could see Neil sir’s “Ice cream spread face” again
They all laugh
Neil enters the police station and see everyone laughing .
Neil : What’s happening here ?
Everyone see Neil and stop laughing
Neil : (confused) What ?
All officers see Neil and they’re trying to control their laughter .
Neil is confused
Jaspreet : sir that girl who spread ice cream on your face is here .
Neil : huh ? Excuse me ?
DD : sir miss. Avni is here to file a complaint
DD points towards Avni sitting on the chair .
Neil : (surprised) That girl ! Here ? (Sees Avni sitting on the chair) oh yeah she’s here… (to jaspreet ) and yeah stop laughing and stop telling about that ice cream incident to everyone .
Jaspreet : ugh ok sir.
Neil (To officers) and yeah everyone . now stop laughing and focus on work .
All officers : yes sir !
Neil : (to DD) and DD ask that girl to come to my desk now .
DD : Ok sir
Neil goes inside .
Other police officers start working .
DD goes near Avni
DD : Miss Avni
Avni : yes ?
DD : Neil sir is here . And he’s asking you to come in .
Avni : Umm fine.
Avni goes inside sees Neil . Neil stands and goes near Avni .
Neil : I’m surprised ! What made you come here ?
Avni : You know what Mr.Crack Khanna ….
Neil : (cuts Avni in between) Neil …. ACP Neil Khanna . And yeah this is police station and you can’t talk to me like this here .
Avni : (rolls her eyes) whatever but I just want to tell you that a bike which I purchased to gift someone is missing .
Neil : (shocked) WHAT ! A bike missing again ? Now I realise what made you come here . You want me to find it right ?
Avni : yes . Find it and hand it over to me as soon as possible .
Neil : Oh hello . I’m not your servant . Say politely .
Avni : (rolls her eyes) fine ! Officer Neil Please help me .
Neil : hmm … that’s good . Now tell all the details about the bike . About it’s colour and all and DD you take down everything .
DD : Ok sir .
DD starts noting everything .
Avni : okay . Royal Enfield bike classic 500 and the colour is stealth black .
DD : (notes everything) okay
Neil : what’s the registered number ?
Avni : number ?
Neil : (rolls his eyes) Do you know that every vehicle has a number ?
Avni : yes I know !
Neil : I’m asking about that ! Now tell !
Avni : actually it was delivered 2 days ago and we didn’t get the number for the vehicle yet
Neil and DD get shocked
Neil : what are you saying ! Then how can we find the vehicle ?
Avni gets tensed .
Precap : Neil says to Avni that Aman is the one who stole the bike . Avni gets angry on neil . Neil ask Avni to think and tell whether there’s something different in that bike or is there any mark with which they can find the bike .
I’m extremely sorry for updating late . That too a week late . Now I’m in 12th grade and I have too many work . I promise you all I’ll try to post the next episode soon . If the episode is bad and boring I’m sorry for that . I hope you all liked this episode and yeah silent readers do read , like and comment if you like the episode .