Meri Zindhagi (AvNeil – Naamkaran Fan Fiction) (Episode 14)

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Hi friends.I hope you all liked the 13th episode . And yeah I can’t be regular so after the episode I’ll tell when will I update the next episode . I can only give short updates but I’ll try to give big episodes . if there’s any grammatical errors I’m sorry .Please bear with me as this is my first Fan Fiction . And I might be adding some AvNeil scenes from the serial but it will be a bit different. Hope you all will like it.

And I’ll mainly focus on AvNeil

If you have missed the 13th episode here’s the link

Episode 13

Enjoy the episode



Scene 1:
Wankhede Stadium and Khanna mansion , Neil’s room

In Neil’s place

Neil and Neeraj are watching match

The chennai Super Kings takes a wicket and ishaan kishan is out

Neeraj and Neil : oh my god ! Ishaan kishan is out !

CSK song plays and Tv shows Shweta and Avni dancing .

Neeraj takes a pizza slice and keeps it in his mouth . Neil takes the juice and starts drinking

He sees the Tv showing Shweta and Avni dancing .

Neeraj and Neil sees this and get shocked .

Neeraj : (pizza falls from his mouth) (shocked) WHAT !!!!! I WAS RIGHT ! THEN THAT LADY IS NONE OTHER THAN ……

Neil : (spits the juice) (shocked) WHAT DID I JUST SEE IN TV !

Neeraj and Neil see each other and they stare at the tv

Neil & Neeraj : (facing each other ) THAT’S MOM !!

Neil : when did she start watching cricket !

Neeraj : Mom !!!! That too cricket and dance !


Neil and Neeraj and shocked .

Neeraj : (confused) And yeah what’s mom doing with that girl .. what’s her name Ahanaa no … anya no….

Neil : (stares at the Tv) Avni !

Neeraj : Hmm Yeah ! What are they doing together ! Anyways let’s watch the match .

Neil and Neeraj watch the match but Neil keeps thinking about Shweta and Avni .

In the stadium

After 20 overs Mumbai Indians Score is 165 – 4 . To win the match Chennai Super Kings Need 166 runs

Now CSK are batting

After 3 overs the score is 16-0

Now Hardik Pandya bowls to Shane Watson but he gets bowled . First wicket falls


Avni : What the hell ! Watson is out !

Shweta : no worries no worries . Today CSK will win . I’m with you Avni beta . We’ll support CSK.

Avni : you are the best Aunty

Shweta and Avni hug

Vidyut : I can see who’s gonna win . And it’s going to be Mumbai .

Avni : (stares at vidyut)

Vidyut : (laughs) What ?

Avni : Whatever ! CSK will only win

CSK is playing they score runs but still Many wickets keep falling .

In Neil’s place

Neeraj enjoys the match seeing Mumbai Indians playing well . Neil is lost in thoughts .

Neeraj : woah woah woaaah ! It’s damn sure that Mumbai is going to win bhai

Neil keeps thinking about Shweta and Avni .

Neeraj : bhai ?

Neil : (keeps thinking)

Neeraj : BHAI ?

Neil : (sees Neeraj) Huh ? What ? Mumbai are batting right ?

Neeraj : bhai now they’re bowling .

Neil : huh (sees the Tv) Oh yeah . What’s the target ?

Neeraj : 166 is the target .

Neil : oh … And seems like CSK are doing a good job . They’re bowling well now . Hardik Pandya is bowling well

Neeraj : bhai ! Now Mumbai Indians are bowling and they’re playing well . And Hardik is in Mumbai team not CSK !

Neil : (sees the Tv) huh ? Oh yeah . I forgot

Neeraj : bhai What happened ?

Neil : Umm nothing . Let’s watch the match .

Neeraj : Yeah .

Neeraj enjoys the match .

Neil thinks about Shweta dancing with Avni

Neil : (thinks) After a long time Today I saw mom enjoying a lot . I guess I did a mistake by ignoring her and leaving her alone .

Neil feels bad

In stadium

Avni : (tensed) (makes a sad face) Seems like chennai will lose today

Vidyut : that’s what even I said ! You start supporting Mumbai . Today Mumbai will only win

Avni : but I still have hope that bravo will do something

Now CSK are playing well . It’s the last over . CSK is about to win .

Avni , Shweta & kids : (fingers crossed)

Vidyut : Oh god ! Mumbai should win today

Suddenly bravo gets out .

Vidyut : Yay !

Avni & Kids : oh no !

Shweta : No worries kids . We still have a chance to win .

Avni : I hope so

At last Kedar jhadav comes and hits six . CSK wins the match

Vidyut : oh no ! Mumbai lost ! How !

Avni , Shweta & kids : YAYYYYYY !!! CSK won !

Avni , Shweta and kids hug . Tv shows them again .

In Neil’s house

Neil is sitting on the sofa . Neil is still thinking about Shweta and Avni . Both Neil and Neeraj are watching the match .

Mumbai Indians loses the match .

Neeraj : oh god ! CSK won ! That was unexpected ! I thought Mumbai Indians would win

They again see Shweta and Avni hugging in tv .

Neeraj : (smiles) Bhai … see na … after a long time I’m seeing ma like this .

Neil too sees the tv

Neil : hmm ….yes Neeraj .

Neil takes the Tv remote and switches off the Tv and goes to his room

Neeraj : What happened to bhai now ?

Neeraj too follows Neil and goes to his room .

Neil goes to room and sits in his bed and he’s sad. Neeraj enters Neil’s room

Neeraj : bhai What happened ? Why did you switch off the Tv?

Neil : we did a mistake Neeraj .

Neeraj : (sits on Neil’s bed) What mistake did we commit ?

Neil : we thought if we leave mom alone she’ll be fine but no . We were ignoring her . We did a mistake by leaving her alone . We were wrong . We didn’t care about mom .

Neil goes out from his room leaving Neeraj confused .

Scene 2:
Out of the stadium , road and Khanna mansion

After the match Vidyut takes Avni , Shweta and kids in car .

Samrat : great that CSK won today . This is my best birthday ever .

Avni : yeah . I’m so happy now .

Vidyut : they won because of bravo !

Avni : No ! Because of the team work !

Vidyut : no use of explaining this to you . Next match they’ll definitely loose .

Avni : Let’s see . Now we should drop Shweta Aunty in her house .

Vidyut : yeah . Shweta Aunty where should we drop you ? Where do you stay

Shweta : Khanna mansion . Leave me in Road Number 4 Prarthana Society, Motilal Nagar I, Goregaon West .

Avni : that’s very near to shastri Nagar too. just 5 minutes away .

Shweta smiles seeing Avni . Kids feel sleepy . Mowgli sleeps in saisha’s lap

After sometime they reach Khanna mansion .

Shweta comes out of the car .

Shweta : (to Avni) thanks beta . Why don’t you come to our house now ?

Avni : now ! (Sees her watch) Aunty it’s already late and your sons might feel …..

Shweta : no worries beta . And you even said shastri Nagar is very near right ?

Avni : but ..

Shweta : please ? At least for sometime ? Few minutes at least ?

Avni : (smiles) ok Aunty . But kids are tired ….

Vidyut : no worries . We’ll wait .

Avni : no . Take them to Sukoon house vidyut . (Gives the Sukoon house key to Vidyut) I’ll come soon .

Vidyut : ugh okay . And what about you ? Kids will go and sleep inside then how’ll you enter the house ?

Avni : I have another key . Don’t worry . I’ll come soon

Vidyut : Ok .

Vidyut takes kids to Sukoon house .

Kids get down from Vidyut’s car .

Samrat : Vidyut Bhaiya you go to your home . I and saisha will take care .

Vidyut : you sure ?

Saisha : yes .

Vidyut : (smiles) you kids have become more responsible . Here take the key and be careful .

Vidyut gives the key to saisha

Vidyut : Bye kids

Kids : Bye Vidyut Bhaiya !

Vidyut leaves .

Samrat : (to kids) Now See we enjoyed a lot Now we need to go straight to bed and sleep . okay ?

Kids : okay !

Saisha opens the door and all go inside .

In Khanna mansion .

Shweta and Avni enter Khanna house .

Neeraj and Neil see Avni and Shweta entering the house

Shweta : Hey Neil , Neeraj

Neeraj : hi mom (to Avni ) hi Avni

Avni : Hi

Shweta : Avni (points towards Neil) he’s my son Neil and (points towards Neeraj) and that’s my son Neeraj , Neil’s younger brother .

Avni : oh .

Neil stares at Avni . Avni too sees neil .

Neil : mom where were you ? You didn’t tell us you were going to cricket match !

Shweta : Avni and I met in a shop and she requested me a lot to come with her . And I was fine with that so I went to watch the match .

Neeraj : and mom when did you start going to cricket matches ?

Neil : and Do you like cricket ?

Avni : What ! You both don’t know that Aunty is a crazy fan of cricket !

Neil & Neeraj : (confused) oh really ?

Neeraj : we even saw you in Tv .

Shweta : really ! You know what Neil , Neeraj ? I enjoyed a lot today ! After a long time I watched cricket that to in Wankhede Stadium . I’m so happy now ! All thanks to Avni .

Shweta hugs Avni .

Neeraj and Neil smile seeing Shweta a lot

Avni breaks the hug

Avni : (smiles) we did enjoyed a lot . (To shweta) and Aunty it’s already late . I’ll come some other day .

Shweta : no problem beta . You are always welcome here . I’m so glad that you came to our house for sometime on my request . Because of you I enjoyed a lot after a long time .

Avni : Ok Aunty . Bye . See you soon .

Avni is about to go but Neil stops her .

Neil : Stop .

Avni : (turns around and sees neil) Yes ?

Neil : it’s too late and too dark . I’ll drop you .

Avni : Umm Actually no thanks . I can go by myself . Shastri Nagar is just 5 minutes away from this place .

Neil : but still . I’ll drop you .

Avni : I said na . I’ll go by myself .

Shweta : (to Avni) beta actually it’s indeed dark . So please ?

Avni : Aunty …

Neil : (takes the car key) I’m waiting out .

Neil goes out .

Shweta : please beta . I want you to go home safe .

Avni : (smiles) fine Aunty . Bye .

Neeraj & Shweta : Bye Avni .

Shweta : take care beta . Bye .

Avni goes out the house and sees Neil standing near the car .

Avni goes near the car and stares at Neil .

Neil : Sit inside the car .

Avni : (in an angry tone) I Know !

Avni opens the car door . She sits inside and she slams the car door .

Neil gets angry

He opens the car door he sits in the driving seat and he closes the door .

Neil : Don’t break the door . And yeah where do you want to go ?

Avni : Sukoon ghar , shastri Nagar .

Neil : fine .

Neil starts driving the car .

Both stay silent and they don’t talk to each other .

They reach Sukoon ghar .

Avni gets out of the car . Neil too gets out of the car .

Neil stops Avni

Neil : Avni .

Avni : (stops and rolls her eyes) Now what do you want ACP Neil Khanna ?

Neil : Listen our meeting didn’t go well . And I , you and your brother had an argument too . I just want to tell …

Avni : (cuts Neil in between) please stop it . I don’t feel like talking to you . You were framing my brother knowing that he’s innocent .


Avni : If you say that again I’ll ….

Neil : You’ll What ? What will you do ? Avni try to understand . Trust me I’m saying the truth !

Avni : why should I trust you ? And yeah instead of trusting you I’ll trust my bhai because I know he won’t do such things .

Neil : (in an angry tone ) You are doing a big mistake by trusting your brother . Why don’t you get that Your brother is lying ! He’s involved in this case …

Avni : oh really ? How can I believe you ? Do you have any proof against him ?

Neil : We got information ….

Avni : (cuts Neil in between ) Neil Khanna please don’t say this again and again that our department got this and that information . I’m asking about the proof . Do you have any proof to prove that my bhai is involved in this illegal business ?

Neil stays silent

Avni : I know you won’t answer . And I even know my brother won’t do such things . Now don’t trouble me and my brother again for god sake ! Now I’m going .

Neil : fine then . Go . You know what When you come to know about this or anything happens you’ll definitely come to me .

Avni stares angrily at Neil and she goes inside Sukoon house

Neil : She trusts her brother Aman a lot but he’s lying to her . I’ll expose that Aman Mehta in front of you one day .

Neil sits inside his car and he leaves

Scene 3:
Sukoon ghar

It’s dark and no one are in the road .

2 unknown people who are wearing black dress and their faces are covered .

They silently enter Sukoon ghar and go to the garden and see samrat’s bike .

They go near

Person 1 : I can’t do this . I just can’t . Not this at least.

Person 2 : Hey you know what will happen with us if we don’t do this right .

Person 1 : but I just can’t .

Person 2 : look … we have to do . Even I’m helpless as you are . If we don’t do this you know what will K.K do .

Person 1 : (stands helplessly )

Person 2 : now let’s take this bike

Person 2 takes a bunch of keys and tries it on bike to open the lock . After many attempts he managed to open the lock using one key from the bunch .

Person 2 sits on the bike and he starts the vehicle

Person 2: hey come on let’s go before anyone sees

Person 1 : (stands there)

Person 2 : Arey Come na ! Let’s go

Person 1 sits on samrat’s bike behind person 2 and person 2 drives the bike and they leave .

Scene 4 :
Sukoon house

Next morning .

Avni is in kitchen . She’s searching something and she’s talking to Asha in phone

Asha : (in call) Avni , yesterday morning you came home and left soon . After that you didn’t even come home even for dinner . are you going to come home or not ?

Avni : ma see yesterday it was samrat’s birthday and we all went to stadium to watch IPL match .

Asha : okay . But I want you to come home by afternoon .

Avni : ok bye mom .

Asha : Bye .

Avni cuts the call .

Avni : Oh My god . There’s no milk .

Samrat comes inside the kitchen

Samrat : what happened Jaan Didi ?

Saisha and other kids too come there

Avni : milk is over .

Samrat : that’s it ? I’ll go and get it from the market .

Avni : Will you ?

Samrat : of course . And yeah now I have my own bike . I can go by bike and get milk from the market .

Avni : (smiles) ok but come soon .

Samrat : ok Jaan Didi .

Samrat goes to the garden . He’s surprised to See that his bike is not there .

Samrat : where’s the bike ?

He searches in the nearby places

Samrat : it’s not there ….I’ll go and ask Jaan Didi .

Samrat goes inside Sukoon ghar again

Avni sees samrat

Avni : (sees samrat) what ? You came so soon ? And where’s the milk ?

Samrat : Didi where’s my bike ?

Avni : (confused) huh ? Bike ? It’s in garden ?

Samrat : no didi it’s not there .

Avni : What ! What do you mean by it’s not there ?

Saisha comes there

Saisha : What happened ? And what’s not there ?

Avni : Samrat is saying that his bike is not there in garden .

Saisha : Huh ? Then where’s the bike ? It was in the garden right ?

Samrat : saisha you said you wanted to drive the bike right ? Did you take it somewhere ?

Saisha : Huh ? Why would I take it ? And at last even I saw that in the garden .

Avni : let’s go and check

Avni , saisha , samrat go out and search for the bike but they’re not able to find it .

Avni : i searched . But I couldn’t find it

Samrat : oh god then where’s my bike !

Saisha : Seems like someone stole it .

Avni , samrat get shocked

Avni : WHAT !

Saisha : seems like that Jaan Didi . Some one stole samrat’s bike .

Samrat feels bad

Samrat : I lost my birthday gift .

Avni : don’t worry samrat we’ll find it .

Samrat is sad and goes inside the Sukoon house .

Saisha : Jaan Didi . Samrat is feeling very bad . Now what can we do ?

Avni : We need to find his bike saisha .

Saisha : But how !

Avni thinks of Neil .

Avni : Now we can only do one thing .

Saisha : What’s That ?

Avni : We need to go to police station and file a complaint regarding this .

Saisha : yeah Jaan Didi . You’re right . now let’s go . I’ll ask samrat to come .

Avni : Hmm Ok .

Saisha goes in .

Avni : (thinks) now I need to take ACP Neil’s help to find samrat’s bike . He’s the one who can help me now

Episode ends

Precap : Neil and Neeraj apologise to Shweta . Avni comes to police station to meet Neil and file a complaint . Neil gets surprised seeing Avni in police station .

I’ll post the Next episode on 14th April

Sorry for the late update . i have one more exam on 13th April . I was busy reading and my schedule And I was not in a mood to write ??? . If the episode is bad and boring I’m sorry for that . I hope you all liked this episode and yeah silent readers do read , like and comment if you like the episode .

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  1. Awesome episode but update soon please

  2. Priyu

    Hope Avni will understand that Aman is a lier. Neil and neeraj is great. Thank God they understood their mistake. Shweta is liking avni now. Nice one. ?

  3. Avni doent trusts neil at all instead she trusting Aman . Nice episode

  4. Pavithra1616

    Superb episode! Loved it totally! Update soon…

  5. nice episode.
    avni will now take neil’s help.waiting to see his reaction
    update soon ayesha.

  6. Great episode

  7. Superb episode

  8. Alia123

    Nice episode and best of luck for ur exam????

  9. ayesha it is an awsum update and hope avni will trust nel

  10. neeil will catch aman and avni will beilieve neil from now on very nice ayesha …. please upadte aasp

  11. Awesome and it is not boring I lobe this ff

  12. Nice episode… And best of luck for your exam..

  13. ImRagela

    Superb episode akka…I am just loving it ..Waiting for the next u ????❤❤❤

  14. Interesting episode

  15. Sana.

    interesting episode. fingers crossed for next episode.

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