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Home»Fan Fiction»Meri Manjil Maa ki Sapna Part-16 (Veer married Pragya)
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Meri Manjil Maa ki Sapna Part-16 (Veer married Pragya)

Sakash.By Sakash.September 27, 201734 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hi i am Sakash.Love u all.Thanks for ur comments.Thanks for ur Support and Love dear ones…

Amnaa,Anuradha123,Priyanshi,Abhilasha,
Niyaaa,Ashnitha,Riya,Alia,Anee,Ashwinee,
Tania,Divya & Dhruti…

The story starts :

Hostel room :

Veer ran to Hostel room…

Garav : What happened naughty boy?Why r u looking tensed?

Veer throw pillow on Garav and said,

Veer : Mera baap chup raho?Waha uska
Baap?

(Veer : My Dad just stay calm?There her Dad?)

Garav : Kiska Baap?

(Who’s Dad?)

Veer : Pragya ka Baap?Aur kaun?Mera yam raj bankar naach rahae hai merae sar pae?Baap aisi tho beti shaadi kae baadh.. Mein tho gayi seedha yam poori mae?

(Veer : Pragya’s Dad?Her Dad came like Yaam raj and dancing on my head…Her Dad like that means his Daughter after marriage?I am gone directly to yam poori…)

Garav : Kya?PRAGYA KAE SAATH SHAADI HAHAAA???Tum tho gayi…

(Garav : What?MARRIAGE WITH PRAGYA
HAHAAA???U r gone…)

Veer : Hai na?

(Veer : Yes na?)

Garav immitate Veer and said Hai na?

Garav : U asking like Baby boy?…Grow up
…

Just imagine,

Pragya kae saath shaadi kae baadh,Tum hara internship katam aur waha tumhara Yam mama tumhae”GUNDA VEER” bana yae ga!Uskae baadh tumhara baccha,Wo Pragya tumhari Ganga ram kardaegi…

(After marriage with Pragya,Ur internship here will be the end and Ur Yam mama will make u Gunda Veer!And after that ur kids,then Pragya will do ur Ganga ram…)

VEER IMAGINED…

Veer and Pragya’s Marriage…

Veer : Uncleji this is ur Daughter’s marriage then use some crackers…

Naveen Yadhav : Cakers matlab?

(Cakers means what?)

Veer laughs and said,it’s crackers not cakers uncleji!And it means Paatakae
???????

Naveen Yadhav : Wo Paatakha…I know crackers…Hahaaa???

    In Englipish…All of u listen my……,

        “Don-in-Law want crackers”?

Veer : What Englipish?Don-in-Law?

Pragya : Papa mean English…And Son-in-Law…

(Veer to himself : If he doesn’t know Englipish…Chi…What i am saying?Staying with this people i am too confusing!What i have learned?

I mean if he doesn’t know English,It’s totally fine…What’s the need to speak English…?And he is killing peple with his butler English???)

Panditji : Veer beta get up and now u must take seven rounds…(Vows)…

Veer ready to take 1st round…

Naveen Yadhav gave signal to his Goons.
He smiles evily…and give some signals to his Goons…They too smile evily…

They fired in sky…

Veer fall down on floor…listening Gun shots…He finally married Pragya…

Naveen Yadhav : Look all of u,He is my Don-in-Law…He will rule my Kung-Fu-dom…

Veer : kung-Fu-dom means Kingdom…
Oh God!

After some months,

Pragya is pregnant…

Pragya : Abhae…wo…Veer see this i made sweater for our baby…

Veer playing games…and said nice,

Pragya took his phone and said,

Pragya : This is not ur age to play games..U r going to become Father now..
Grow up..

Veer : ???

Pragya gave birth to Boy child…

Naveen Yadhav fired gun shots in sky…

Pragya passing the way,Veer hold her and pulled her into bed room and going to kiss her…

Just then,Praveer cries…

Pragya smiles…She took the baby and went out to calm him…

Veer : Before my Yam mama now my blood my son only torturing me…

VEER IMAGINATION ENDED…

Veer : Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo. I don’t want to do marriage?I will never do it?Even i will become Father in church but never will do marriage and he ran off…

Garav laughs???

Veer : ???

Veer : Noooooooooo….Mata Rani apna baccha veer ko bacchao…

(Veer : Noooooooo…Jai Mata Rani… Please save ur child Veer from that Yaam mama…)

Garav : Thadhastu putra Veer…

(Garav : U r blessed Son Veer…)

Precap : Days passing…Veer changed & he fall in love with Pragya…

I hope u all like it…

Please give ur valuable comments friends…

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    A Lovely Son of my Maa,Dad,Grand maa & paa. A lovely friend & bhaiyya.

    34 Comments

    1. Ashwinee on September 27, 2017 8:53 pm

      Lovely update Bhai ….

      • Sakash. on September 29, 2017 11:59 am

        Hi Ashwinee…I am glad u liked it dear…Thank u so much for commenting…

    2. Amnaa on September 27, 2017 8:53 pm

      Its nice

      • Sakash. on September 29, 2017 12:00 pm

        Hi Amnaa…Thank u so much dear…

    3. Tumpamoni on September 27, 2017 8:57 pm

      Veer’s imagination is very funny.. Nice episode but wanted 2 see kanchi romance.. Plz,…

      • Sakash. on September 29, 2017 12:05 pm

        Hi Tumpamoni…Glad meeting u dear…Thank u so much for commenting…A warm welcome to my FF…Ok dear from my next update u get to see Kaanchi scenes…No need to please me…U can order me dear as ur bhai…Ur request accepted dear…

    4. Anuradha123 on September 27, 2017 9:19 pm

      Wow wonderful amazing awesome mind-blowing ravishing fabulous story… Keep writing brother

      • Sakash. on September 29, 2017 12:08 pm

        Hi Anuradha…Being an amazing author,U r commenting on my FF…Thank u so much for such a lovely and beautiful words my dear sweet sissy…I am so glad…I got another sweet sister…I am glad u like my story dear…

      • Anuradha123 on September 29, 2017 12:16 pm

        most welcome bhai… can I call u bhai… I too got a lovely brother here… itni tarif mat karo bhai mera sar chakra raha hai… tumhari story ki khasiyat yeh hai ki itni ache se tum baato ko express karte ho…mujhe bohot jyada accha lagta hai… Great job bhai..

      • Sakash. on September 29, 2017 2:40 pm

        Of course dear u can call me bhai…It’s my pleasure…And i too got a lovely sister like u…U deserve it dear…(Tarif)…I am so glad dear…It means a lot to me…Ur comment made my day…☺☺☺

    5. Dhruti on September 27, 2017 9:21 pm

      superb imagination sakash mind blowing, amazing but miss kanchi please update next ff soon…

      • Sakash. on September 29, 2017 12:11 pm

        Hi Dhruti…Thank u so much for complementing on imagination part dear…I am so glad u liked it…Ok u missed Kaanchi scenes don’t worry dear!From next update u will get Kaanchi scenes…I hope u got what u want?…

    6. niyaaa on September 28, 2017 12:08 am

      Hey bro veer imagination is outstanding…or best dialogue veer said even i will become fathr in church but not gonna marry with pragya…hahaha…itna mat hasaoy ki haste haste lot pot ho jayein…mere khushi k aanshu nikal pade…koi tissue paper do bhai …khidkitod mujhe to sach kahun kanchi se bhi jyada praveer ki story me interest jyada aa raha h bura mat manna this is too funny and ravishing u nailed it …post nxt asap

      • Sakash. on September 29, 2017 12:20 pm

        Hi Niyaa dear…I am so glad u liked Veer’s imagination part…Oh i am glad u liked church and father joke…Ok…Sorry for hurting my sweet sister stomach…???…making her much to laugh…Aww khushi ki aansu…Here is tissue paper?Actually all my tissue papers r over…So i am giving my shirt as tissue for u…
        U like Praveer scenes more…It’s alright dear mein buraa nahi manna…Every individual has their own taste…Actually i want to balance both…Without them too story won’t work…
        I will post ASAP dear…

    7. Priyanshi on September 28, 2017 1:14 am

      Aaj to maza hi aa gya bhai. Aaj ja kar pta chala ki english ka murder aise bhi ho skta h.
      Englipish, don in law, kung-fu dom. ????? it was hilarious episode. Koi rashmi sharma tak ye story pahucha do. Agar aisa show me how jaye to definitely show dekhne me or maza aayega. Satish nd pragya koi match highlights nhi h dono ka.
      Bohot ho gya mera bakwas. Ek baat batao aaplog kaha se laate ho itne amazing ideas.
      Ye to mai apne sapne me v nhi soch skti. It was too good.
      “Kasam se keh rahe h aaj to maza hi aa gya or has has kar to hmari jaan hi nikal jayega. ”
      ?????????
      Thank you so much for bringing smileon my face coz I was so upset due to some reasons.
      One last thing jldi se in dono ki shaadi kara dijiye .coz m missing kaanchi scenes.
      Pls update soon whenever u get tym ??

      • Sakash. on September 29, 2017 12:35 pm

        Hi Priyanshi…I am so glad u liked it dear…Oh Yes..???Pragya’s father nae English ka murder?Oh dear i am not that much great to send my story to Rashmi sharma…That’s so sweet of u…Yes even i too didn’t like satish and Pragya’s pairing…I am so glad dear…Actually i want to give something new or best to my readers who give there valuable time for my FF…Thinking about all of u i will get good ideas…

        Kasam sae dear ur comment made my day…
        Ok no need to thank me…I am so glad for some time my FF worked out as a medicine to get out from ur upset mood… it brings a beautiful smile on ur face…

        Praveer ka shaadi will play key role in Kaanchi’s life…I will bring a big twist in story…
        So from my next update u will get Kaanchi scenes dear…Don’t worry…I hope u got what u want?And i will post ASAP…

    8. riyarocks on September 28, 2017 1:41 am

      So hilarious bhai……..omg full of hilarious parts…..like I will become Father in church but never will do marriage, Englipish, Don-in-Law, Kung-Fu-dom, Mata Rani apna baccha veer ko bacchao………haha….. too good………plz update nxt one asap……..

      • Sakash. on September 29, 2017 12:39 pm

        Hi Riya…I am so glad u liked it…Being an amazing sissy and author…U r commenting on my FF…Thank u so much dear…I am so glad u like all the funny words i used…I will post ASAP…

    9. Miss-golgappa on September 28, 2017 7:26 am

      Abhe Yar has haske Meri pet dukh rahi hai…… it’s​ just so funny?……but please bring some kanchi scenes too….. altogether your epi was just awesome

      • Sakash. on September 29, 2017 12:43 pm

        Hi Miss-Golgappa…Glad meeting u dear…And A warm welcome to my FF…Thank u so much dear…I am glad u liked it…Being an amazing author u commented on my FF it means a lot to me…No need to please me yaar u can order me dear…From my next update u will get Kaanchi scenes dear…

    10. Alia on September 28, 2017 7:28 am

      Nyc

      • Sakash. on September 29, 2017 12:44 pm

        Hi Alia…Thank u so much dear…

    11. Divya on September 28, 2017 10:47 am

      Bhaiyya ur back I am soo happy. And episode is awesome fabulous super fantastic mind blowing bhaiyya I can’t stop laughing at veer’s actions ???? my stomach is painning ????oh my god soo funny update soon can’t wait bhaiyya

      • Sakash. on September 29, 2017 12:47 pm

        Hi Divya…I am back dear…Thank u so much for such a beautiful words dear…It means a lot to me…I am so glad u like Veer’s action…So sorry i make u laugh more…I will post ASAP dear…

    12. Ashnita on September 28, 2017 2:41 pm

      Hi Saksh , u always nailed it killed it. It’s amazing mindblowing outstanding awesome superb fantastic fabulous marvelous khidki tod darvaza tod ravishing lovely historic unlimited package and beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond
      everything .Agar iss se upar aur kuch bhi toh woh bhi. Waiting for next part.

      • Sakash. on September 29, 2017 12:50 pm

        Hi Ashnita…Thank u so so much dear for such a beautiful words…Dear actually u killed me with ur words…Being an amazing author u commented on my FF…It means lot to me…Thank u so much for such a beautiful comment…

        Ur comment made my day…

    13. Moonlight25 on September 28, 2017 10:28 pm

      Sakash Bhayia…the epi was really funny…i just loved reading it…it was too funny…….amazing and excellent as well…too good..keep going…..waiting ASAP for the next part and I am so sorry for the late çomment ..just came from dance classes and am extremely tired..

      • Sakash. on September 29, 2017 12:54 pm

        Hi Tania dear…Thank u so much dear…I am so glad u liked it…And no need to say sorry dear u commented now it means a lot to me…Ok dear i can understand…First ur work is important…Comment whenever u r free…Feel free…And please take rest and take care dear…
        Being an amazing author u commented on my FF dear…It means a lot to me…Thank u so much dear…

    14. Abhilasha on September 28, 2017 10:49 pm

      Sakash bro I m laughing to hell means oh god…even kapil sharma can’t do that type comedy…..hehehehe…..really rofl ….loved it!!! Waiting for further!!

      • Sakash. on September 29, 2017 12:58 pm

        Hi Abhi dear…I am glad u liked it and enjoyed it more…
        Being an amazing author u commented on my FF…It means a lot to me dear…Thank u so much for commenting …I am so glad my FF brings a beautiful smile on my sissy’s face… Kapil sharma???
        I will post ASAP…

    15. Tumpamoni on September 29, 2017 1:11 pm

      Amazing,,episode..

      • Sakash. on September 29, 2017 2:41 pm

        Hi Tumpamoni…Thank u so much dear…

    16. Jessicca on September 30, 2017 3:37 am

      Rip yam raj’s English… ??.. This part was super duper amazing… Awesome… Loved it .. Keep going bro … You nailed it..

      • Sakash. on September 30, 2017 11:04 am

        Hi Jessica…Thank u so much dear…Thank u for giving ur valuable time and commenting dear. Being an amazing author u r commenting on my FF…I am so glad dear…

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